MOTW #229

[CR4SHEIR94]

my mission is better now

[RedBaronFromTheUG]

20 hours ago, CR4SHEIR94 said:

my mission is better now

Excellent.

[RedBaronFromTheUG]

I'm extending the deadline a few more minutes longer, i need to prep my mission's data and stuff, the mission's done though.

[RedBaronFromTheUG]

Published the thing on time, deadline over.

[jayshizzo]

15 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

Excellent.

how better ? what changes have you made ?

[Kailojado haddines]

9 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

Published the thing on time, deadline over.

I can't wait to see the next MOTW!

[galic0]

Make the polls public otherwise the MOTW is not valid.

 

[Stardust101]

33 minutes ago, galic0 said:

Make the polls public otherwise the MOTW is not valid.

 

No need for that. The votes can still be checked and invalidated if necessary.

[RedBaronFromTheUG]

5 hours ago, jayshizzo said:

how better ? what changes have you made ?

ask CR4SHEIR94, it's his mission not mine.

[RedBaronFromTheUG]

 

 

[jayshizzo]

3 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

 

 

where is the mission link? the game doesn't exsist anymore

[CR4SHEIR94]

3 minutes ago, jayshizzo said:

cadê o link da missão? o jogo não existe mais

like this? for me it's working

if that's what i'm thinking the link to the missions is on page 1 in the topic

 

[jayshizzo]

1 minute ago, CR4SHEIR94 said:

like this? for me it's working

On 8/18/2023 at 11:05 PM, CR4SHEIR94 said:

my mission is better now

click on it and see if it works https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SPo9o7BjbLOvuYuRuqDr-wYmPXdiehst/view .how is your mission better now ?

Edited August 20 by jayshizzo

[CR4SHEIR94]

26 minutes ago, jayshizzo said:

clique nele e veja se funciona  https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SPo9o7BjbLOvuYuRuqDr-wYmPXdiehst/view  .como sua missão está melhor agora?

https://drive.google.com/u/0/uc?id=1SPo9o7BjbLOvuYuRuqDr-wYmPXdiehst&export=download

[Kailojado haddines]

melondoge will win i think

[jayshizzo]

I played all. here is my take ;

1. Berony- san fierro police dept. - average. every environment you drive to you could  have make it a submission when driving through your checkpoint, there should be a part where you car combats another car. you didn't show that. check out https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/73983 to see what a car  combat looks like. score : 5/10

2.Kailojado haddines -Car Surgery: A brilliant car combat drive-by sequence  however it wasn't too difficult and challenging to play so it felt  more like a ride-along than it being immersive .Also the story line wasn't clear on the reason for invading an army camp(similar to my Indiana Jones mission) so I will give you a 6.5/10

3.CR4SHEIR94Inferno Sabotage: It felt like a car chase more than a car combat and there was no story or reason behind the reason for killing the cop. so my score is 2/10

4. MelonDoge30 Justice on Wheels: Solid game similar to car surgery. more challenging and great cutscenes. the only issue is that  it lacked sound so my score is 7//10

5.RedBaronTwisted Metal (P): EP0 - M4DN355 this one I have to break it down redbaron style

PROS 

1.Great object placement to give an illusion of a real jail cell both the interior and  exterior

2.Great soundtracks

3. The challenge mode was fun to play

CONS

1. no voice sounds(which you usually do, what happened here?)

2.lazy mission design. turning stars on instead of using actors(making it easy for people to cheat to win)

3. Missed the chance of making the twisted metal  a deathwatch mode as well (something like my hood Olympics dyom mission)

4. the guards in the prison were not challenging to fight.

5. Lack of character development

NITPICKS

1. The mod represented sweet tooth and the car pretty well

2. you mention different characters but no details for example ,who is  raven and Kelly? no background story  on what lead to the vengeance in the dyom.(Don't assume everyone has played twisted metal)

-my score is 7.5/10   you and melondoge are both equal in missionplay score to me on a 7  but you put more effort in object placement and sound so I give you a  point 5 however  my personal choice votes goes to melonDoge. It can go either way  between so i wish you all the best

Edited August 22 by jayshizzo

[RithRake24]

On 8/20/2023 at 11:43 PM, galic0 said:

Make the polls public otherwise the MOTW is not valid.

 

According to new MOTW rules (effective from last year), to prevent participants from campaigning to specific members for votes, we have made votes private after which a ledby (such as myself or @AnDReJ98) can check for the validity of votes.

 

Speaking of which: Now that the voting has ended, I have discovered some invalid votes (refer to MOTW rules) - 2 for RedBaron's mission and 1 for MelonDoge30's mission. This means both missions are tied with 5 votes each and @RedBaronFromTheUG will have to run a tiebreaker round.

 

For archival purposes, these are the results of the initial voting round:

Spoiler

 

 

(where the underlined usernames are invalid voters as per MOTW rules)

 

[jayshizzo]

11 hours ago, RithRake24 said:

According to new MOTW rules (effective from last year), to prevent participants from campaigning to specific members for votes, we have made votes private after which a ledby (such as myself or @AnDReJ98) can check for the validity of votes.

 

Speaking of which: Now that the voting has ended, I have discovered some invalid votes (refer to MOTW rules) - 2 for RedBaron's mission and 1 for MelonDoge30's mission. This means both missions are tied with 5 votes each and @RedBaronFromTheUG will have to run a tiebreaker round.

 

For archival purposes, these are the results of the initial voting round:

  Hide contents

 

 

(where the underlined usernames are invalid voters as per MOTW rules)

 

so how would you balance the votes ?

[Kailojado haddines]

no one won right?

[RithRake24]

It has been brought to my attention that @Slappy Bird is a genuine DYOM member who is active on the Discord server. Therefore I am willing to validate his vote to prevent extension of the voting deadline.

 

Congratulations to @RedBaronFromTheUG for another MOTW win! I extend my congratulations to @MelonDoge30 since he presented solid competition only to lose by a single vote.

[Kailojado haddines]

redbaron won wow!

 

[CR4SHEIR94]

see you at the next MOTW