MOTW #229

[Kailojado haddines]

also I cant wait to see the longplay!

[RedBaron.]

Extending the deadline cause 3 exams on tuesday and 2 on friday

Edited August 14, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG

[Kailojado haddines]

and also for TMX92?

[RedBaron.]

15 minutes ago, Kailojado haddines said:

and also for TMX92?

That too. The dude's practically a ghost, i haven't seen him online in quite a while.

[Kailojado haddines]

removed 

Edited August 16, 2023 by Kailojado haddines

[RedBaron.]

31 minutes ago, Kailojado haddines said:

oh nice, hes a ghost? lol

It's a metaphor, also, sorry for this but it's really starting to get off the rails!
Please refrain from cluttering the forums, if you wanna talk with me further, please use the DMs or type all you have to type at once and not at an interval of hours, got it?

[Berony]

I want to entry MOTW. My mission: https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/74984

[jayshizzo]

9 hours ago, Berony said:

I want to entry MOTW. My mission: https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/74984

label the mission as MOTW

[Kailojado haddines]

12 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

It's a metaphor, also, sorry for this but it's really starting to get off the rails!
Please refrain from cluttering the forums, if you wanna talk with me further, please use the DMs or type all you have to type at once and not at an interval of hours, got it?

aight i will

3 hours ago, Berony said:

I want to entry MOTW. My mission: https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/74984

i will try!

[Kailojado haddines]

On 8/15/2023 at 12:30 AM, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

It's a metaphor, also, sorry for this but it's really starting to get off the rails!
Please refrain from cluttering the forums, if you wanna talk with me further, please use the DMs or type all you have to type at once and not at an interval of hours, got it?

now its removed

[MelonDoge30]

There goes my entry. (This might be a short mission)

https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/74996

 

Spoiler

If your car gets stuck somewhere just wait patiently or restart the mission. Routepoint AI is messed up fr.

 

Edited August 16, 2023 by MelonDoge30

[RedBaron.]

On 8/15/2023 at 4:52 AM, Berony said:

I want to entry MOTW. My mission: https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/74984

Berony, I finally had the opportunity to play your entry and Jesus effing Christ... Did you seriously not once put a sequence where you are forced to use car combat?! You could have used a teleport objective with any uzi weapon on, then an teleport inside car objective with driveby on so that the auto-driveby feature would toggle on vanilla SA with DYOM! The 9mm is darned useless inside a vehicle without a manual driveby mod. (Of which you didn't even put a download of, if that was your intention).

The point is not about you focusing on all about the police work in general, the dudes have to fullfill on their shifts, (why did you put more on-foot combat than vehicular combat, you're missing out the theme's point entirely! If you are gonna include on-foot combat, make sure it's not the primary focus but rather something you have to work your way up towards to get to the car combat itself, for me, that's how it should've been done so and how i'm doing in my own mission) but rather the shootouts and chases you have to perform inside a patrol car to catch or eliminate the suspects, the action and thrill of it. Instead i get something extremely monotone, with barely any effort required to beat the mission on the first time, with no SD.

And even if you had nailed those things, the enemies being bulletsponges is super counterproductive and practically a cliche, one that doesn't even make any sense, given that not every hoodlum or gun carries Bullet-Proof Vests or Juggernaut Armors, as you take longer to kill them and it just makes the mission drag itself on a longer runtime than necessary. So, in conclusion, your mission is not in, make a new one or wait for the next one, because the deadline for mission-making is pretty short. If you want to try again, make a new mission that actually fits into the theme, friend, have a good day.

Edited August 17, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG

[CR4SHEIR94]

22 hours ago, MelonDoge30 said:

Lá vai a minha entrada. (Esta pode ser uma missão curta)

https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/74996

 

  Revele conteúdos ocultos

Se o seu carro ficar preso em algum lugar, espere pacientemente ou reinicie a missão. O Routepoint AI está bagunçado fr.

 

This mission is really amazing, well done and very good, this one will definitely win and mine will be last haha!

[MelonDoge30]

4 minutes ago, CR4SHEIR94 said:

This mission is really amazing, well done and very good, this one will definitely win and mine will be last haha!

Thanks buddy! Glad that you liked it! But hey let's just not assume the winner let's wait!  

[CR4SHEIR94]

4 minutes ago, MelonDoge30 said:

Thanks buddy! Glad that you liked it! But hey let's just not assume the winner let's wait!  

Really, But That's A Very Good Mission Haha

[Kailojado haddines]

Great good mission eh!

Edited August 17, 2023 by Kailojado haddines

[jayshizzo]

9 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

Berony, I finally had the opportunity to play your entry and Jesus effing Christ... Did you seriously not once put a sequence where you are forced to use car combat?! You could have used a teleport objective with any uzi weapon on, then an teleport inside car objective with driveby on so that the auto-driveby feature would toggle on vanilla SA with DYOM! The 9mm is darned useless inside a vehicle without a manual driveby mod. (Of which you didn't even put a download of, if that was your intention).

The point is not about you focusing on all about the police work in general, the dudes have to fullfill on their shifts, (why did you put more on-foot combat than vehicular combat, you're missing out the theme's point entirely! If you are gonna include on-foot combat, make sure it's not the primary focus but rather something you have to work your way up towards to get to the car combat itself, for me, that's how it should've been done so and how i'm doing in my own mission) but rather the shootouts and chases you have to perform inside a patrol car to catch or eliminate the suspects, the action and thrill of it. Instead i get something extremely monotone, with barely any effort required to beat the mission on the first time, with no SD.

And even if you had nailed those things, the enemies being bulletsponges is super counterproductive and practically a cliche, one that doesn't even make any sense, given that not every hoodlum or gun carries Bullet-Proof Vests or Juggernaut Armors, as you take longer to kill them and it just makes the mission drag itself on a longer runtime than necessary. So, in conclusion, your mission is not in, make a new one or wait for the next one, because the deadline for mission-making is pretty short. If you want to try again, make a new mission that actually fits into the theme, friend, have a good day.

and crashier too

[jayshizzo]

 

 

3.CR4SHEIR94Inferno Sabotage: It felt like a car chase more than a car combat.I am yet to play justice on wheels.

Edited August 17, 2023 by jayshizzo

[RedBaron.]

14 minutes ago, jayshizzo said:

I played all here is my take ;

1. Berony- san fierro police dept. - average. every environment you drive to you could  have make it a submission when driving through your checkpoint, there should be a part where you car combats another car. you didn't show that. check out https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/73983 to see what a car  combat looks like. score : 5/10

2.Kailojado haddines -Car Surgery: A brilliant car combat drive-by sequence  however it wasn't too difficult and challenging to play so it felt  more like a ride-along than it being immersive .Also the story line wasn't clear on the reason for invading an army camp(similar to my Indiana Jones mission) so I will give you a 6.5/10

3.CR4SHEIR94Inferno Sabotage: It felt like a car chase more than a car combat and there was no story or reason behind the reason for killing the cop. so my score is 2/10

I am yet to play justice on wheels.

You can't rate the missions yet! Only until the deadline for mission-making is up!

Edited August 17, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG

[jayshizzo]

7 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

You can't rate the missions yet! Only until the deadline for mission-making is up!

 

7 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

You can't rate the missions yet! Only until the deadline for mission-making is up!

ok let me delete the marks, you made a review on comment. delete the quote. I edited my comment. sorry

Edited August 17, 2023 by jayshizzo

[Kailojado haddines]

1 hour ago, jayshizzo said:

 

 

3.CR4SHEIR94Inferno Sabotage: It felt like a car chase more than a car combat.I am yet to play justice on wheels.

you forgot to remove the crashier's mission review

 

To someone else: I cant wait to see who wins!

Edited August 17, 2023 by Kailojado haddines
To let them know

[jayshizzo]

7 hours ago, Kailojado haddines said:

you forgot to remove the crashier's mission review

 

To someone else: I cant wait to see who wins!

he said I should remove the scores besides his mission missed the mark. he should be disqualified to be fair

[RedBaron.]

2 hours ago, jayshizzo said:

 

ok let me delete the marks, you made a review on comment. delete the quote. I edited my comment. sorry

To Jay...

First things first, a review?! WHAT?!  I didn't give it any actual damn scorings from 1 to 10 or 1 to 5! I just gave him a piece of my mind regarding his entry's grueling flaws, it's way different from reviewing all of it's aspects and giving it a score. I didn't give it any score, just explained his mission's errors. So no, I WON'T DELETE THE COMMENT, AS IT DOESN'T QUALIFY AS A REVIEW!

 I told him everything that was wrong just so he can avoid it next time.

Lastly, regarding your mistake... It's fine, just don't do it next time, be careful man, the rules aren't just for show.
 

3 hours ago, jayshizzo said:

and crashier too

Sorry for being the grammar police but it's "*it crashes too / the mission also crashes as well". However your issue seems to be one sided as the mission ran just fine on my end.
 

1 hour ago, Kailojado haddines said:

you forgot to remove the crashier's mission review

 

To someone else: I cant wait to see who wins!

To Kailojado...

Yeah, about that, on the DYOM Website, you can't delete accidental ratings, so yeah, oof.

1/2 (Post too long so i'm dividing it in parts)

Edited August 17, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG

[RedBaron.]

52 minutes ago, jayshizzo said:

he said I should remove the scores besides his mission missed the mark. he should be disqualified to be fair

Crashier still included a car combat segment on his mission, even if it was just a simple driveby, if you're shooting from inside a car, it's literally that. But i do agree that it should be preferential to be more Car to Car than just Car to Peds. About the mission "missing the mark", it wasn't that bad in my opinion, i was able to feel a small tadbit of fun, i just wish he had added something more to the end, a car boss, to be precise. Where you shoot him down until he explodes and dies and then the original mission ending.

2/2

Edited August 17, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG

[Kailojado haddines]

29 minutes ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said:

To Kailojado...

Yeah, about that, on the DYOM Website, you can't delete accidental ratings, so yeah, oof.

1/2 (Post too long so i'm dividing it in parts)

oh okay.

[CR4SHEIR94]

the context of my mission is two criminals who hit a police building, and then blow it up, simple, there is no exciting story behind it, at least I followed the theme, but in the next MOTW I would do more

and one more thing, red, you forgot to put the new entries, just to let you know

[CR4SHEIR94]

just a warning, I won't be there at 23:59 unfortunately, will I still be able to participate?

[RedBaron.]

30 minutes ago, CR4SHEIR94 said:

just a warning, I won't be there at 23:59 unfortunately, will I still be able to participate?

wdym? your mission is still on the roster, as i put it there. If you need to add anything else to your mission and perfect it, it's ok, do so, i'll extend the deadline to saturday.

[CR4SHEIR94]

Ah Ok, As you told me I'm going to put a final boss

oh sh*t, I lost the file to edit the mission, I don't think it will be possible to edit the mission unfortunately, unless there is a way

[RedBaron.]

20 minutes ago, CR4SHEIR94 said:

Ah Ok, As you told me I'm going to put a final boss

oh sh*t, I lost the file to edit the mission, I don't think it will be possible to edit the mission unfortunately, unless there is a way

Check your DMs i can help you! (Click on Messages icon, the letter close to your profile).

Edited August 18, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG