RedBaron. Posted July 16, 2023 Share Posted July 16, 2023 (edited) MOTW #227 For rules and guidelines, click here. IMPORTANT DISCLAIMER Posting reviews/feedback before the participation deadline is strictly NOT allowed. You may post reviews/feedback once voting starts. Theme: Psychological Horror Description of the theme Make a mission that fits into the genre of Psychological Horror, more information regarding such genre here. Examples of media that fits into the genre include: Silent Hill, The Suffering: Ties That Bind, Babadook, The Witch, Get Out!, etc... IMPORTANT NOTE: Blatant troll behavior will NOT be tolerated. Entries MonsterHG2 Only Cave - 69Cent Horrible Memories - RedBaron Manhunt - Aftermath Deadlines Participation: 25 / 07 / 2023 - 0:30 AM (GMT Timezone) Voting: 27 / 07 / 2023 - 0:30 AM (GMT Timezone) Countdown Timer Credits AnDReJ98 - Founder & Co-Leader RithRake24 - Co-Leader (2019-present) Target13 - Co-Leader (2014, 2018-2019) Chips237 - Co-Leader (2013) The Odyssey - Founder of the first MOTW Discussion Thread @RedBaronFromTheUG - Winner of MOTW #226 and host Edited July 27, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG fixing up embedding MonsterHG2 and Stardust101 2 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 16, 2023 Share Posted July 16, 2023 here is my entry. I am only interested in the review. on a scale on 1-10. how scary was it ? https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/74264 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072178483 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 16, 2023 Author Share Posted July 16, 2023 2 hours ago, jayshizzo said: here is my entry. I am only interested in the review. on a scale on 1-10. how scary was it ? https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/74264 This is not Psychological Horror, this is thriller horror but good attempt though, i love Friday the 13th. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072178513 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 16, 2023 Share Posted July 16, 2023 3 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said: This is not Psychological Horror, this is thriller horror but good attempt though, i love Friday the 13th What is the scary scale from 1-10? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072178563 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 17, 2023 Author Share Posted July 17, 2023 (edited) 12 hours ago, jayshizzo said: What is the scary scale from 1-10? 0 Beyond not only missing the point entirely of this MOTW's theme (I Clearly asked for Psychological Horror and you gave me a damn Thriller Horror!), you didn't even read what was required in the GTAForums post, you just glanced at horror and thought, "just horror? Easy". And this is not scary, more so, annoying, seriously shotgun? I had to literally run looking for a vehicle, just so he couldn't 4-shot me. If you want to make an entry for this, please read the damn link i put on the HERE at the thread. Only good points i can make regarding the entry is the good camera work and stunt work in the intro. Edited July 17, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072178818 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 17, 2023 Share Posted July 17, 2023 2 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said: 0 Beyond not only missing the point entirely of this MOTW's theme (I Clearly asked for Psychological Horror and you gave me a damn Thriller Horror!), you didn't even read what was required in the GTAForums post, you just glanced at horror and thought, "just horror? Easy". And this is not scary, more so, annoying, seriously shotgun? I had to literally run looking for a vehicle, just so he couldn't 4-shot me. If you want to make an entry for this, please read the damn link i put on the HERE at the thread. Only good points i can make regarding the entry is the good camera work and stunt work in the intro. nah.I am good. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072178866 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonsterHG2 Posted July 17, 2023 Share Posted July 17, 2023 Okay here is my Entry: Only Cave jayshizzo and RedBaron. 2 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179028 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 17, 2023 Author Share Posted July 17, 2023 8 hours ago, MonsterHG2 said: Okay here is my Entry: Only Cave Much better, you could learn a thing or two from him, Jay! 17 hours ago, jayshizzo said: nah.I am good. Then why did you purposefully make a thriller horror entry?! Just to irk me? MonsterHG2 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179246 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 9 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said: Much better, you could learn a thing or two from him, Jay! Then why did you purposefully make a thriller horror entry?! Just to irk me? I played the mission. There was no psychological or horror. it was action from the beginning and after the cave scene. I couldn't find the next objective. I was roaming around in my flash light till I gave up. the only scary thing was a creature scream. the soundtrack did have a horror theme but nothing more after that. for those who also played the mission share your thoughts. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179440 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonsterHG2 Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 5 hours ago, jayshizzo said: I played the mission. There was no psychological or horror. it was action from the beginning and after the cave scene. I couldn't find the next objective. I was roaming around in my flash light till I gave up. the only scary thing was a creature scream. the soundtrack did have a horror theme but nothing more after that. for those who also played the mission share your thoughts. Let RedBeron Decide Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179574 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 (edited) 1 hour ago, MonsterHG2 said: Let RedBeron Decide yea. I am waiting for him to comment also when you get out of the cave. the marker that shows does not take you anywhere when you follow it.Did you do a mission test ? Edited July 18, 2023 by jayshizzo Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179638 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MelonDoge30 Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 I am an old DYOM member but lost my GtaF and DYOM account, do I have to wait some time before I can participate in MOTW? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179683 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonsterHG2 Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 (edited) @MelonDoge30 yeah welcome! 11 minutes ago, jayshizzo said: yea. I am waiting for him to comment also when you get out of the cave. the marker that shows does not take you anywhere when you follow it.Did you do a mission test ? she will stay better than your mission Edited July 18, 2023 by MonsterHG2 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179684 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MelonDoge30 Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 3 minutes ago, MonsterHG2 said: @MelonDoge30 yeah welcome! Much thanks, by the way how much do I need to wait so I can start participating? (or is it like I have to upload N number of missions to start participating) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179689 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 18, 2023 Author Share Posted July 18, 2023 (edited) 5 hours ago, jayshizzo said: yea. I am waiting for him to comment also when you get out of the cave. the marker that shows does not take you anywhere when you follow it.Did you do a mission test ? 1. The psychological horror is in the protagonist's fear of the dark and psychological torment by his family. 2. Although the action sequences were unnecessary, they left a good breathing room for until the protagonist's breaking point. 3. The cave does have a marker that does something at the end! It led me to a cutscene, you probably glitched the mission on your end or something. 4 hours ago, MelonDoge30 said: I am an old DYOM member but lost my GtaF and DYOM account, do I have to wait some time before I can participate in MOTW? No, you can participate at will, feel free to make something as long as it fits into the theme's criteria (please read it thoroughly and click the Here), but please don't do it like Jay did, and make a thriller horror mission, THAT is NOT what i want, ok? Have a nice day. Edited July 18, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG MelonDoge30, Toriality and MonsterHG2 1 1 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072179928 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 2 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said: 1. The psychological horror is in the protagonist's fear of the dark and psychological torment by his family. 2. Although the action sequences were unnecessary, they left a good breathing room for until the protagonist's breaking point. 3. The cave does have a marker that does something at the end! It led me to a cutscene, you probably glitched the mission on your end or something. No, you can participate at will, feel free to make something as long as it fits into the theme's criteria (please read it thoroughly and click the Here), but please don't do it like Jay did, and make a thriller horror mission, THAT is NOT what i want, ok? Have a nice day. 1. The psychological horror is in the protagonist's fear of the dark and psychological torment by his family...did you come to that conclusion in the end because I didn't see that in the beginning. I want to hear feedback from other people who played the game to find out if they had the same experience. RedBaron. 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180016 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 18, 2023 Author Share Posted July 18, 2023 (edited) 16 minutes ago, jayshizzo said: 1. The psychological horror is in the protagonist's fear of the dark and psychological torment by his family...did you come to that conclusion in the end because I didn't see that in the beginning. I want to hear feedback from other people who played the game to find out if they had the same experience. Did you skip the first cutscene?! Because in it, it shows a flashback of Martin's early life and the bullying he suffered from his family, friends and how they always stuck him in dark places just to frighten him. In the ending, that same trauma gets brought up again. Edited July 18, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180022 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 11 minutes ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said: Did you skip the first cutscene?! Because in it, it shows a flashback of Martin's early life and the bullying he suffered from his family, friends and how they always stuck him in dark places just to frighten him. In the ending, that same trauma gets brought up again. the missing cutscene would make the difference and I didn't get to see it(for some unexplained reason) hope you will do a walkthrough after this so I get to see. That would be interesting. i didn't skip any cutscene from the beginning. the protagonist was in the area 51 base chatting with the officials there. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180025 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 18, 2023 Author Share Posted July 18, 2023 1 minute ago, jayshizzo said: the missing cutscene would make the difference and I didn't get to see it(for some unexplained reason) hope you will do a walkthrough after this so I get to see. That would be interesting. i didn't skip any cutscene from the beginning. the protagonist was in the area 51 base chatting with the officials there. That's the scene from the present day, after the flashback's over. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180027 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonsterHG2 Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 did i make mistake when it was my mission i feel like my mission caused a problem? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180043 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 19, 2023 Author Share Posted July 19, 2023 (edited) 55 minutes ago, MonsterHG2 said: did i make mistake when it was my mission i feel like my mission caused a problem? I'm not exactly sure, it only happened on Jayshizzo's end, not mine. In my playthrough, i didn't encounter any issues asides from the one that you get when you don't kill all the enemies outside the home and the ones inside too. Because if you do that, the cutscene doesn't play and if you leave the house, you end up on the other side of the map. (you forgot to hide actors outside the home, since you request not to kill them, you could've hid them after the checkpoint but that's the only issue i can remark on), otherwise, the mission's fine) It's still the participation date so you can update your mission if you'd like, many other MOTW contenders did it throughout the history of MOTW. Edited July 19, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180067 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonsterHG2 Posted July 19, 2023 Share Posted July 19, 2023 6 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said: I'm not exactly sure, it only happened on Jayshizzo's end, not mine. In my playthrough, i didn't encounter any issues asides from the one that you get when you don't kill all the enemies outside the home and the ones inside too. Because if you do that, the cutscene doesn't play and if you leave the house, you end up on the other side of the map. (you forgot to hide actors outside the home, since you request not to kill them, you could've hid them after the checkpoint but that's the only issue i can remark on), otherwise, the mission's fine) It's still the participation date so you can update your mission if you'd like, many other MOTW contenders did it throughout the history of MOTW. Okay i got my mistake thanks! RedBaron. 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180167 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 19, 2023 Share Posted July 19, 2023 12 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said: That's the scene from the present day, after the flashback's over. mind you on my part. the flashback screen was blank. did you see the visuals on your part? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180233 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 19, 2023 Author Share Posted July 19, 2023 9 hours ago, jayshizzo said: mind you on my part. the flashback screen was blank. did you see the visuals on your part? The dark background is intentional! The subtitles tell the story and dialogue. MonsterHG2 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180552 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 20, 2023 Share Posted July 20, 2023 16 hours ago, RedBaronFromTheUG said: The dark background is intentional! The subtitles tell the story and dialogue. well it does not create the horror effect especially when there is no sound dialogue. anyways....I personally feel it wasn't scary like how you make it to be. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180910 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 20, 2023 Author Share Posted July 20, 2023 2 hours ago, jayshizzo said: well it does not create the horror effect especially when there is no sound dialogue. anyways....I personally feel it wasn't scary like how you make it to be. Well luckily, i don't give a rat's ass about what you like or not, good for you. MonsterHG2 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072180991 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayshizzo Posted July 21, 2023 Share Posted July 21, 2023 On 7/19/2023 at 8:46 AM, MonsterHG2 said: Okay i got my mistake thanks! have you worked on the checkpoint issue ? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072181359 Share on other sites More sharing options...
69Cent Posted July 22, 2023 Share Posted July 22, 2023 Here is mine. [MOTW#227] Attacking the Mafia casino Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072182129 Share on other sites More sharing options...
69Cent Posted July 22, 2023 Share Posted July 22, 2023 Oh, srry I just realized I did not read the post very correctly, it has to be about "psychological horror", well I have made something about it here's the link MOTW#227 Xd RedBaron. and MonsterHG2 1 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072182170 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedBaron. Posted July 23, 2023 Author Share Posted July 23, 2023 (edited) I extended the deadline by the request of Rathard on discord, forgot to change it here. 21 hours ago, 69Cent said: Oh, srry I just realized I did not read the post very correctly, it has to be about "psychological horror", well I have made something about it here's the link MOTW#227 Xd Excellent, thank you for your entry. Edited July 23, 2023 by RedBaronFromTheUG MonsterHG2 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/991664-motw-227/#findComment-1072182586 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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