MOTW #191

[galic0]

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IMPORTANT DISCLAIMER

Posting reviews/feedback before the participation deadline is strictly NOT allowed. You may post reviews/feedback once voting starts.

 

 

 

Theme:

World War 2

Create the mission set during the World War 2. 

You can use "mods", as long as they are not required to complete the mission

(Clarification Down below)

 

IMPORTANT NOTE: Blatantly troll behavior will NOT be tolerated. 

 

Entries

@The Monster17
DYOM - "[MOTW# 191] Battle Of Death" by The Monster (gtagames.nl)

 

@Polski Oski

DYOM - "[MOTW #191] War Rat" by Polski Oski xD (gtagames.nl)

 

Deadlines

Participation: 11th of July 2021  - 18:00PM GMT

Voting: 13th of July 2021  - 18:00PM GMT

 

 

 

Credits

AnDReJ98 - Founder & Co-Leader

RithRake24 - Co-Leader (2019-present)

Target13 - Co-Leader (2014, 2018-2019)

Chips237 - Co-Leader (2013)

MOTW Council - Management Team

The Odyssey - Founder of the first MOTW Discussion Thread

Seygullinas Winner of MOTW #191 and Host

 

CLARIFICATION:

- As i said, i will clarify  "You can use "mods", as long as they are not required to complete the mission"

So, you can use "cosmetic mods", if i can say like that.

 

YOU CAN USE:

 

1.) Skins

2.) Vehicles

3.) Graphical Effects (Timecyc.dat)

4.) Weapons

5.) Retextured objects, and simular,

 

MODS YOU CAN'T USE ARE:

 

 

1.) CLEO Scripts

2.) Map Mods

3.) Total Conversion Mods

 

 

Edited July 11, 2021 by Galeb
Entry

[Horus Publishing]

On 7/6/2021 at 1:58 PM, Galeb said:

Deadlines

Participation: 1st of January 2021 - 00:00 PM/AM(Host's Time Zone)

Voting: 1st of January 2021 - 00:00 PM/ AM(Host's Time Zone)

 

Woops

[galic0]

On 7/6/2021 at 2:04 PM, Horus Publishing said:

 

Woops

lol just noiticed that, gonna fix it.

 

[Polski Oski]

Wow, someone actually did this MOTW Theme.

[abdo mot34]

World War 2 Oh My God! XD

[The Monster17]

What up Gamers? and I'm back with new Register and i put my mission here!

[The Monster17]

Here My Entry Guys:

 

https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/70222 

Edited July 8, 2021 by The Monster17

[Horus Publishing]

On 7/8/2021 at 3:19 PM, The Monster17 said:

Here My Entry Guys:

 

https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/70222 

 

Why did you put broken "Draw Distance Fix" mod, that after installing it i can't launch my game? If somebody can't launch the game after putting mods from the mission to "modloader" just delete Draw Distance Fix from it, and you all set.

 

Your mission is ready to publish, but it will be published and reviewed when deadline comes (it will be probably changed if there's only 1 participant) because of those "rules" unfourtanetly.

Edited July 9, 2021 by Horus Publishing

[abdo mot34]

If you have problem with Draw Distance!!!

 

put it on your own

 

https://www.gtainside.com/en/sanandreas/mods/129006-sa-draw-distance-changer-asi-plugin/

Edited July 9, 2021 by abdo mot34

[Polski Oski]

Here's my entry: War Rat

GL!

[galic0]

THE VOTING PHASE HAS BEGUN!

 

Good luck to our participants, let the better one win!

[galic0]

 

 

OK everyone, it's review time!!!

The 1st mission is: Battle of Death, by The Monster

Spoiler

MISSION: Battle Of Death
AUTHOR: The Monster

 

Review by sections:

 

1) Story - 2/10
The mission does a pretty bad job at explaining the story/lore of the mission. As far as i understood, you are a soldier in a unknown faction, fighting with Italians, unknown where. In fact, this mission has no story.

2) Action - 3/10
The action is "meeh" in this mission. You always fight static enemies, minimal diversity in weapons. No chalanges to overcome whatsoever.

3) Object placement - 8/10
Possibly the only good thing in this mission.

4) Grammar - 2/10
Grammar in this mission is pretty bad. Not some minor, almost unnoiticable errors, but just eyehurting ones. It's enough to understand what the charatcers are talking about.

5) Realism - 0/10
There's none. At one point I was thinking about not including this in the MOTW due to missed theme. Here's why:

•        Argentinian soldiers fighting "Italian" soliders. Italian forces DID NOT have blue camoflage uniforms.
•        Modern Day Weapons in World War 2 - AK's, M4's, and other weapons didn't exist back then.
•        Modern Day Vehicles in World War 2 - Like, seriously? Abraham and Humwee in WW2?
•        Convesations - Regular soldier isn't going to talk to general with "Hey...". Also, calling your fellow fighters "friends" is childish, non than less.

6.) Cutscenes - 5/10
There weren't any, but i liked the final cutscene.

7.) Bonus points - 0/10
I don't have any good points to give you. In fact, 1st part of the mission feels like total rip-off of Martin Strada's mission. Also, this mission was VERY short.

 

VERDICT: 2/10 - Very Bad

 

Our next mission is from Polski Oski XD, the War Rat

Spoiler

MISSION: War Rat
AUTHOR: Polski Oski XD

 

Review by sections:

 

1) Story - 8/10
This mission is about German soldier, who gets stuck in a US occupied base. The player's main goal is to escape the base. Pretty straight forward, simple story.

2) Action - 7/10
I would say "optional stealth mission" to some degree. Pretty fun.

3) Object placement - 9/10
As always, perfect!

4) Grammar - 10/10
Dialoges seemed realistic, with no gramatical errors. Thats the kind of missions i want to see!

5) Realism - 10/10
This mission is realistic as frick! C'mon, you got everything right! German weapons, uniforms, everything! 10/10

6.) Cutscenes - 8/10
Very good cutscenes, although there weren't a lot of them.

7.) Bonus points - 10/10
Bonus points for: Unique perspective of WW2, feelings of the Karl are pretty "realistic", attention to details!

 

VERDICT: 9/10 - Very good, almost perfect!

On 7/11/2021 at 9:25 PM, Galeb said:

 

 

OK everyone, it's review time!!!

The 1st mission is: Battle of Death, by The Monster

  Reveal hidden contents

MISSION: Battle Of Death
AUTHOR: The Monster

 

Review by sections:

 

1) Story - 2/10
The mission does a pretty bad job at explaining the story/lore of the mission. As far as i understood, you are a soldier in a unknown faction, fighting with Italians, unknown where. In fact, this mission has no story.

2) Action - 3/10
The action is "meeh" in this mission. You always fight static enemies, minimal diversity in weapons. No chalanges to overcome whatsoever.

3) Object placement - 8/10
Possibly the only good thing in this mission.

4) Grammar - 2/10
Grammar in this mission is pretty bad. Not some minor, almost unnoiticable errors, but just eyehurting ones. It's enough to understand what the charatcers are talking about.

5) Realism - 0/10
There's none. At one point I was thinking about not including this in the MOTW due to missed theme. Here's why:

•        Argentinian soldiers fighting "Italian" soliders. Italian forces DID NOT have blue camoflage uniforms.
•        Modern Day Weapons in World War 2 - AK's, M4's, and other weapons didn't exist back then.
•        Modern Day Vehicles in World War 2 - Like, seriously? Abraham and Humwee in WW2?
•        Convesations - Regular soldier isn't going to talk to general with "Hey...". Also, calling your fellow fighters "friends" is childish, non than less.

6.) Cutscenes - 5/10
There weren't any, but i liked the final cutscene.

7.) Bonus points - 0/10
I don't have any good points to give you. In fact, 1st part of the mission feels like total rip-off of Martin Strada's mission. Also, this mission was VERY short.

 

VERDICT: 2/10 - Very Bad

 

Our next mission is from Polski Oski XD, the War Rat

  Reveal hidden contents

MISSION: War Rat
AUTHOR: Polski Oski XD

 

Review by sections:

 

1) Story - 8/10
This mission is about German soldier, who gets stuck in a US occupied base. The player's main goal is to escape the base. Pretty straight forward, simple story.

2) Action - 7/10
I would say "optional stealth mission" to some degree. Pretty fun.

3) Object placement - 9/10
As always, perfect!

4) Grammar - 10/10
Dialoges seemed realistic, with no gramatical errors. Thats the kind of missions i want to see!

5) Realism - 10/10
This mission is realistic as frick! C'mon, you got everything right! German weapons, uniforms, everything! 10/10

6.) Cutscenes - 8/10
Very good cutscenes, although there weren't a lot of them.

7.) Bonus points - 10/10
Bonus points for: Unique perspective of WW2, feelings of the Karl are pretty "realistic", attention to details!

 

VERDICT: 9/10 - Very good, almost perfect!

Oh, forgot to say: My vote goes to...

 

Spoiler

Polski, of course

 

Edited July 11, 2021 by Galeb

[Horus Publishing]

Videos are up!

 

 

 

I'll post my review soon.

 

Reviews, first off: Oski

 

Pluses:

- Great story (the first cutscene reminds me of real times of WW2 actually)

- Many actors

- Not easy difficulty (especially if you would ignore stealth - i died one time while recording  )

- Objects

- Audio

- Skins, Mods

 

Minuses:

- You could make enemies more "dumb" - what i mean by that is that it would be easier to stealth

- Little bit short

 

Overall rating: 9.0/10

 

Monster

 

Pluses:

- Cool mods

- Great usage of audio (especially on cutscenes when weapons were shown)

- Objects

- Not everyone has headshot on

- Custom ammo

- Custom weather / time

 

Minuses:

- Terrible spelling (work at the dialogs)

- Kind of short mission

- Not that much explainable story

- TO VERIFY: If the 1st part of the mission is ripped off from Martin Strada's work, then i'm lowering the rating more

 

Overall rating: 8.5/10

 

Ratings might be edited because i'm still watching the videos to see new things.

 

By the ratings, i'm voting for Oski's work, great work as always, but if monster would make better dialogues, and more explain the story (and put right skins to right factions - but i'm not rating that) then it would be good as oski's - or from Galeb it would have atleast 7.0 or 8.0/10

 

Edited July 11, 2021 by Horus Publishing

[Horus Publishing]

On 7/11/2021 at 9:25 PM, Galeb said:

In fact, 1st part of the mission feels like total rip-off of Martin Strada's mission. Also, this mission was VERY short.

 

If that's true in Monster's mission, then rating of the mission goes very very down (-) If you talk about this first cutscene, with audio (that bazooka shot or idk what is it with audio, and then tower is bombed) - it's very similar but it could be just an inspiration. I do kind of see it, so it's kind of weird i might change the rating of the mission to be lower.

 

And @Galeb i think Abdo is the same person (Monster) - same country, same spelling and kind of same mission style, idk if you agree  

Edited July 11, 2021 by Horus Publishing

[Polski Oski]

On 7/11/2021 at 9:38 PM, Horus Publishing said:

Videos are up!

 

 

 

I'll post my review soon.

 

Reviews, first off: Oski

 

Pluses:

- Great story (the first cutscene reminds me of real times of WW2 actually)

- Many actors

- Not easy difficulty (especially if you would ignore stealth - i died one time while recording  )

- Objects

- Audio

- Skins, Mods

 

Minuses:

- You could make enemies more "dumb" - what i mean by that is that it would be easier to stealth

- Little bit short

 

Overall rating: 9.0/10

 

Monster

 

Pluses:

- Cool mods

- Great usage of audio (especially on cutscenes when weapons were shown)

- Objects

- Not everyone has headshot on

- Custom ammo

- Custom weather / time

 

Minuses:

- Terrible spelling (work at the dialogs)

- Kind of short mission

- Not that much explainable story

- TO VERIFY: If the 1st part of the mission is ripped off from Martin Strada's work, then i'm lowering the rating more

 

Overall rating: 8.5/10

 

Ratings might be edited because i'm still watching the videos to see new things.

 

By the ratings, i'm voting for Oski's work, great work as always, but if monster would make better dialogues, and more explain the story (and put right skins to right factions - but i'm not rating that) then it would be good as oski's - or from Galeb it would have atleast 7.0 or 8.0/10

 

My WW2 Missions are meant to portray WW2 as realistically as possible.

Uniforms, weapons, even special weapon modding.

For example, M1 Garand replaces Tec 9 but has 8 bullets in one mag and shoots like a rifle, not submachine gun. 

I put a lot of effort to that and to the opening cutscene, which portrayed WW2 perfectly. 

If not the fact, that I reached 100 objectives, mission would be a lot longer but eh. At least I pushed it to the limit.

[abdo mot34]

On 7/11/2021 at 9:38 PM, Horus Publishing said:

Videos are up!

 

 

 

I'll post my review soon.

 

Reviews, first off: Oski

 

Pluses:

- Great story (the first cutscene reminds me of real times of WW2 actually)

- Many actors

- Not easy difficulty (especially if you would ignore stealth - i died one time while recording  )

- Objects

- Audio

- Skins, Mods

 

Minuses:

- You could make enemies more "dumb" - what i mean by that is that it would be easier to stealth

- Little bit short

 

Overall rating: 9.0/10

 

Monster

 

Pluses:

- Cool mods

- Great usage of audio (especially on cutscenes when weapons were shown)

- Objects

- Not everyone has headshot on

- Custom ammo

- Custom weather / time

 

Minuses:

- Terrible spelling (work at the dialogs)

- Kind of short mission

- Not that much explainable story

- TO VERIFY: If the 1st part of the mission is ripped off from Martin Strada's work, then i'm lowering the rating more

 

Overall rating: 8.5/10

 

Ratings might be edited because i'm still watching the videos to see new things.

 

By the ratings, i'm voting for Oski's work, great work as always, but if monster would make better dialogues, and more explain the story (and put right skins to right factions - but i'm not rating that) then it would be good as oski's - or from Galeb it would have atleast 7.0 or 8.0/10

 

 

Thanks for Reviews! bro!

Edited July 11, 2021 by abdo mot34

[M316]

On 7/11/2021 at 9:49 PM, Horus Publishing said:

And @Galeb i think Abdo is the same person (Monster) - same country, same spelling and kind of same mission style, idk if you agree  

They are cousins, not the same person. Both admitted it

[ZeroRaxo]

what a very close intense fight between polski and monster in winning

[abdo mot34]

On 7/11/2021 at 9:49 PM, Horus Publishing said:

 

If that's true in Monster's mission, then rating of the mission goes very very down (-) If you talk about this first cutscene, with audio (that bazooka shot or idk what is it with audio, and then tower is bombed) - it's very similar but it could be just an inspiration. I do kind of see it, so it's kind of weird i might change the rating of the mission to be lower.

 

And @Galeb i think Abdo is the same person (Monster) - same country, same spelling and kind of same mission style, idk if you agree  

No i m not some person he my cousin.

[RithRake24]

Congratulations @Polski Oski on the win!

[Pilotoarg]

On 7/11/2021 at 5:12 PM, Polski Oski said:

My WW2 Missions are meant to portray WW2 as realistically as possible.

Uniforms, weapons, even special weapon modding.

For example, M1 Garand replaces Tec 9 but has 8 bullets in one mag and shoots like a rifle, not submachine gun. 

I put a lot of effort to that and to the opening cutscene, which portrayed WW2 perfectly. 

If not the fact, that I reached 100 objectives, mission would be a lot longer but eh. At least I pushed it to the limit.

I was watching your missions and some photos/videos, (like War Rat), maybe you know me (yes, i'm Ivan Yurov, the one who made part of the mods you use, mainly soldiers), and some of them are from my old packs wich were historically innacurate, now (with my project Berlin 1945) i'm making a lot of totally historical accurate models (weapons, vehicles, skins, maps, objects, textures, etc), if you want new ones, you're free to ask for them and can check my blog for more mods of WW2

[Polski Oski]

On 9/13/2021 at 11:29 PM, Pilotoarg said:

I was watching your missions and some photos/videos, (like War Rat), maybe you know me (yes, i'm Ivan Yurov, the one who made part of the mods you use, mainly soldiers), and some of them are from my old packs wich were historically innacurate, now (with my project Berlin 1945) i'm making a lot of totally historical accurate models (weapons, vehicles, skins, maps, objects, textures, etc), if you want new ones, you're free to ask for them and can check my blog for more mods of WW2

Yes, your mods are actually the only one which are actually interesting for ww2 missions.

If I need new ones, I will visit your blog again. I guess you came back to Berlin 1945, hah.

 

[Pilotoarg]

19 minutes ago, Polski Oski said:

Yes, your mods are actually the only one which are actually interesting for ww2 missions.

If I need new ones, I will visit your blog again. I guess you came back to Berlin 1945, hah.

 

yeah hahaha, i was a little busy lately but yes, i'm working on a lot of projects (only one is Berlin 1945, others are mod packs (ex: 1939 WH, 1940-42 WH, 1943-45 WH / Soviets, pre-1943 soviets, Polish soldiers, French soldiers, etc), vehicle mods (trains, planes, tanks, etc), and a large list)
So yes, you're welcome when you want to ask for some mods 

[Polski Oski]

On 9/20/2021 at 8:50 PM, Pilotoarg said:

yeah hahaha, i was a little busy lately but yes, i'm working on a lot of projects (only one is Berlin 1945, others are mod packs (ex: 1939 WH, 1940-42 WH, 1943-45 WH / Soviets, pre-1943 soviets, Polish soldiers, French soldiers, etc), vehicle mods (trains, planes, tanks, etc), and a large list)
So yes, you're welcome when you want to ask for some mods 

Polish soldiers? Damn, I smell September Campaign, haha