MOTW #189

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/26/2021 at 2:08 PM, Horus Publishing said:

I have a problem playing your mission. When there's last bit - where you arrive at the Aldea Malvada and fight the "Ambush" - in the second pharse (wave) there's a one actor who turned into the "ball" glitch, and can't kill it. There's somehow a way to pass it?

Hmm.. pretty weird, because I never had the problem while trying out the mission aswell. As you can see I was using DYOM# to design this mission and I didn't notice any ball actors bug. Seems like the addon fixed everything to me, but if you can't progress further with DYOM#, then I don't know.

[Horus Publishing]

On 6/26/2021 at 1:12 PM, Martin_Strada said:

Hmm.. pretty weird, because I never had the problem while trying out the mission aswell. As you can see I was using DYOM# to design this mission and I didn't notice any ball actors bug. Seems like the addon fixed everything to me, but if you can't progress further with DYOM#, then I don't know.

 

The thing is - i want to upload it on YouTube - there was something after that particular glitch, or just end of the mission?

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/26/2021 at 2:15 PM, Horus Publishing said:

 

The thing is - i want to upload it on YouTube - there was something after that particular glitch, or just end of the mission?

I fixed it, ill edit a link hold on.

 

https://www.mediafire.com/file/hopt7c9nikpufb6/DYOM0.dat/file
 

Here you go. @Horus Publishing

Edited June 26, 2021 by Martin_Strada

[abdo mot34]

On 6/26/2021 at 12:35 PM, Horus Publishing said:

 

This mission is weird, and can't pass it. I was hoping to record all the missions, and upload them to the channel before the deadline ends (today) - seems like it's impossible to take down Hunter at the last part of the mission. Also, please correct your spelling mistakes in the future, it's chaotic sometimes to see some weird dialogue going on there. I'll check rest of the missions today and hope to record it!

What?

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/26/2021 at 4:06 PM, abdo mot34 said:

What?

He wrote you a review and some problems thag he couldn't progress further. Do you have any questions for the review?

[abdo mot34]

Yo What the hell?! Martin Win again? WTF

 

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/26/2021 at 4:11 PM, abdo mot34 said:

Yo What the hell?! Martin Win again? WTF

 

Not yet.

[abdo mot34]

2 Voting and after 2 hours he 10 voting and he win again what the hell?

 

The players love you martin not love your mission

they voting you for they love you you understand?

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/26/2021 at 4:13 PM, abdo mot34 said:

2 Voting and after 2 hours he 10 voting and he win again what the hell?

 

The players love you martin not love your mission

they voting you for they love you you understand?

So you're saying that my mission wasn't that good at all, that players voting for me because they know me well?

[abdo mot34]

On 6/20/2021 at 5:34 PM, abdo mot34 said:

And Guys Look what happens if me upload Mission!

Guys The Problem of DYOM Site not working!!

On 6/26/2021 at 3:19 PM, Martin_Strada said:

So you're saying that my mission wasn't that good at all, that players voting for me because they know me well?

Yeah there you are!

[Horus Publishing]

Missions will be aired on the YouTube channel at 19:00 and 19:15 CEST - first one being @Aymunz one and second one from @Martin_Strada. Both of them will be aired as premiere.

 

I'll link them up here. I voted for Martin's because it's amazing and well done as always. Second pick would be Aymunz mission. As I said I couldn't complete Abdo's mission, because:

- Tank health is low

- Hunter has high HP - therefore when i was shooting like 50 times it wouldn't go down. And if it hit me one time, my tank already caught on fire

 

Links: 

 

Martin entry:

 

https://youtu.be/sTjL72Oau6U

 

On 6/26/2021 at 3:19 PM, Martin_Strada said:

So you're saying that my mission wasn't that good at all, that players voting for me because they know me well?

 

He's just jealous

[Martin_Strada]

Haha, yeah I know. Thanks for playing my mission!

[abdo mot34]

wait you not reivew my mission Just Martin and Aymunz?

[Horus Publishing]

On 6/26/2021 at 3:13 PM, abdo mot34 said:

2 Voting and after 2 hours he 10 voting and he win again what the hell?

 

The players love you martin not love your mission

they voting you for they love you you understand?

 

Bro, thing is simple: Make better missions, improve your grammar, improve your mission plots! Don't argue with other creators, just because they're good and you're just simply being jealous.

On 6/26/2021 at 3:23 PM, abdo mot34 said:

wait you not reivew my mission Just Martin and Aymunz?

Your mission is too hard at the end. I just literally writed the problems in my posts before. Geeez. As i said before:

- Cant complete it because Hunter HP is too big

- Tank HP is like 5% so it will get hit and it will catch on fire instantly

- Some enemies also take time to eliminate - so you need to fire atleast 3, 4 tank shots to kill them - and single RPG in 2, 3 hits would take out your tank. I played that, but I just didn't complete it and this is the things that you should fix in the future.

Edited June 26, 2021 by Horus Publishing

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/26/2021 at 4:23 PM, abdo mot34 said:

wait you not reivew my mission Just Martin and Aymunz?

He said he can't beat it.

[abdo mot34]

ah sh*t this last entry to me

bye all

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/26/2021 at 4:37 PM, abdo mot34 said:

ah sh*t this last entry to me

bye all

The most unexpected turn of event.

[Lolipopaaa]

Stop being a crybaby and participate. Just because nobody voted for you doesn't mean that's unfair. And who the hell cares if you left or not?! 

On 6/26/2021 at 4:37 PM, abdo mot34 said:

ah sh*t this last entry to me

bye all

 

[Martin_Strada]

A'ight guys enough of this fight, either vote or review.

[Aymunz]

On 6/26/2021 at 3:21 PM, Horus Publishing said:

I'll link them up here. I voted for Martin's because it's amazing and well done as always. Second pick would be Aymunz mission

Hey dude thanks for recording my mission! Appreciate it! 

You forgot to give a brother some feedback though.. Can you please? 

Not that it deserves it, since it's so goofy. But still

[Horus Publishing]

On 6/26/2021 at 8:06 PM, Aymunz said:

Hey dude thanks for recording my mission! Appreciate it! 

You forgot to give a brother some feedback though.. Can you please? 

Not that it deserves it, since it's so goofy. But still

 

Mission could be longer, and it could have more than just killing with a tank. But the dialogue and the whole meaning of "delivering pizza" was great. Kinda enjoyed it. Tried to speedrun it the most

[Aymunz]

On 6/26/2021 at 10:32 PM, Horus Publishing said:

 

Mission could be longer, and it could have more than just killing with a tank. But the dialogue and the whole meaning of "delivering pizza" was great. Kinda enjoyed it. Tried to speedrun it the most

Thanks king!

It was a last 2 hours work so I didn't have the time to expand it. But I'll take your advice into account next time. 

[abdo mot34]

On 6/26/2021 at 3:46 PM, Lolipopaaa said:

Stop being a crybaby and participate. Just because nobody voted for you doesn't mean that's unfair. And who the hell cares if you left or not?! 

 

shut up!

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/27/2021 at 1:28 AM, abdo mot34 said:

shut up!

Just because he said the truth doesn't mean you will get through with it

 

By the way, you just said that you're leaving MOTW too. 

[abdo mot34]

No i dont leave i design Missions and whatever to the people if them voting me i just play DYOM!

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/26/2021 at 4:37 PM, abdo mot34 said:

ah sh*t this last entry to me

bye all

''tell me lieeeesss, tell me sweet lil liesss.''

[abdo mot34]

On 6/27/2021 at 12:35 AM, Martin_Strada said:

''tell me lieeeesss, tell me sweet lil liesss.''

Sorry? What?

 

And i just now complet your mission good mission bro!

[Martin_Strada]

On 6/27/2021 at 1:36 AM, abdo mot34 said:

Sorry? What?

 

And i just now complet your mission good mission bro!

See? You gotta trust people for voting it now, because they loved my mission more than the others. After participating it would be better for you to play other missions from other authors, not be naive and somehow win it without experiencing other people missions.

[Martin_Strada]

My Review for MOTW #189

I played 2 of these missions and I really like their ideas while making a mission. Sadly one mission had alot of problems that I couldn't finished so decided to unfinish it and write a review.

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Nuclear Bombs by @abdo mot34

Spoiler

I expected something better from this author, since this guy is known for his laughable grammar. The gameplay wasn't that good and bad either. It's just putted mostly everything in one place and I have to fight everyone in that direction. I liked the first minutes of a mission when you approach a ghost town and had to destroy a whole town and grab the packages which the pickups were being used with DYOM# addon, this is something that I would like about the mission. The other problem is that the variety needs alot of improvements. Basically, helicopters are appearing out of nowhere, like one time in Verdant Meadows where there was sh*tload of the choppers flying around to kill me and that part was impossible to complete. It was cheap, unfinished mess.

Since I'm also not good at English. I know that english is not his native language, but you also gotta improve the grammar (I should not review the grammar, because I'm still not that keen on English yet, but this mission forced me to.)

 

PROS:

- Custom pickups (would've been better if the pickups would have had the different pickup icons.)

- Start of the mission was alright.

- Variety was mediocre at the start, needs some improvements.

until...

 

 

CONS:

- Grammatical and spelling mistakes.

- Poor variety during the end (i think) of a mission. Helicopters spawning out of thin air.

- Can't finish the mission, because the author decided to put alot of helicopters in one direction to kill me and I couldn't progress further.

- I'm not sure about this con, but if the mission takes place in current years, then why would my soldier say ''For the motherland'' when he's from US or not. Basically it didn't provide any presentation.

- No background plot behind this mission.

- Unfinished difficulty, couldn't progress further after being under attack.

 

In short, your mission needs alot of improvements. Variety and the presentation are the reasons why the mission went poorly. It didn't provide any context, even though it tried to explain at the start, but there was basically no introduction about the enemies I'm going to fight against.

 

VERDICT: 4/10 

 

Tank Service by @Aymunz

 

Spoiler

I liked the every second of this mission. Even thought it wasn't trying to be intense. I still liked the way how it intended to be a lazily/rushed made, but fun mission nonetheless. The writing was really funny and good. I also liked the story. It was written for laughs and he executed it really well. Basically you play as a guy who has PTSD supposed to bring pizzas to the customers with a ''bike'', but instead you destroy these people with your own TANK. Driving around to kill the enemies while there's a wanted level around the city was also fun to be honest. The ending made me laugh alot.

 

PROS:

- Can be a fun mission

- Writing and the presentation was funny.

- The ending was also funny.

- (that object movement was also good at one scene.)

- Driving around, killing the enemies with a tank while there's a riot mode on with a wanted level is just satisfying.

 

CONS:

- Poor cutscene quality.

- More variety would have made mission more chaotic.

 

Overall, the mission was made for fun and for the laughs and I can see that. The mission was still fun and it had something to share for.

 

VERDICT: 8/10 

Spoiler

Overall, I liked Aymunz's mission the most, since Abdo's mission could have been better if he would've understand my feedback I give to him, the mission would be way better. Thank you all for participating and I hope we'll see you in the other MOTW entries and I wish you all of the best!

 

Edited June 26, 2021 by Martin_Strada

[Aymunz]

On 6/27/2021 at 1:17 AM, Martin_Strada said:

Tank Service by @Aymunz

Thanks for the review and congratulations on a well deserved win!