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[MP] REBOUND


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(Thanks to Mikul for helping me improve the SSU logo)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Description

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They always say opportunities are limited and/or everything happens for a reason. That's exactly what happens to our main character, Andrew Paterson. In 2005 within the state of San Andreas, the state among the generation of this decade is drastically different than that of its previous year. Crimes are on the horizon, bad people pushing the innocent around, corrupt among the regime, disruption of illicit goods across markets,etc... It is hard for someone to begin a new beginning and seize what rarely exists. Everyone is looking for their perfect stability of life, some might even have a......REBOUND.

 

Characters (Spoilers)

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- Andrew Paterson, AP:
Andrew Paterson, or AP, is a 32 year old man American who is a working in a bike salesman and was born in Oklahoma city. His occupation is a rented hotel room with an average lifestyle and some drinking habits. Besides bike selling, Andrew also had an MMA training back in Canada getting a record of 13-4. He also was in the military, US marine for 2 years before resigning for moral conduct issues. After remaining outta job for 4 years, he was recruited for bike salesman in 2005.

- Lemmy Hughes:
The owner of Lemmy's Bike Autoshop in San Fierro and Andrew's boss. He gave Andrew the opportunity to begin a new life as Andrew proclaims and even resemble asa father figure for him sometimes.

- Chris Thompson:
One of Hughes's customers and happens to be under debt for some loan sharks in which Andrew helps at fending them off. This inevitable meeting would cause the beginning of unusal friendship. Chris also owns the Wheel Arcs Angel autoshop in San Fierro.

- Tony Graves:
AP's best friend from Canada; he is born to a Canadian mother and Nigerian father. Their friendship goes back to the days when AP was competing in MMA and they remain friends ever since. Tony pays a visit to our protaginist in San Fierro and sees through the sh*t the city will put them through. Tony also likes to smoke weed and has some skills when it comes to gun to gun combat.

- Evangeline Parker:
A random girl AP met at Pier 69 after an altercation with her ex, Tyron, who was abusing her for the reminder of their relationship. Eventually after AP saves her, their friendship starts to grow over the journey.

- Red Bulls:
An organized crime full of pushers who pick on the small and profitable businesses to use them for their advantage of accumulating money and developing their underground organization.

- Kazushi Renoki:
Head of the Red Bulls, this Chinese individual is a rather cunning and smart trickster. Always knows the best opportunity to use others for his advantage.

- Callum Galloway, Cal:
This Liverpoolian son of a gun is what you expect from a Brit: Quick wity, charming, and hands that are ready for scraps or hand to hand gun combat. Callum is a gunrunner having inherited the business from his father's bloodline, dating back to the early 1900s since the Galloway starting gunrunning operations. He came to San Andres to try and fulfill his and his father's dreams of becoming the biggest gun dealer in the state.



MORE CHARACTERS TO BE ADDED........

 

What is the Sinister Spades Universe?

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This is the first and one of many universes to come in which future MPs are made in. Every universe has its own characters and distinction among others. MPs will usually have a universe watermark from now on. Let's say it is a bit of an inspiration from certain someone....

 

Collectibles
 

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San Andres is filled with mysterious and unusual sh*t that either assists you, intrigues your friends & allies, or at the very least catches your eyes. When you find a lost goody, dont hesitate to pick it up. You never know, someone might benefit from it.

Now remember, it's best advised to memorize or in our cases note down on a notepad the missions where you found specific collectibles because this would come in handy later on and the collectibles would serve their purpose. In order to do that, you NEED to know the mission names where you found said collectibles.

1- Lemmy's bike rims

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Total rims in Chapter 2
4

WARNING: Only one variety of collectible can be found in any mission.
(Eg: You wont find two Lemmy's bike rims in the same mission)

MORE COLLECTIBLES COMING SOON.....

 


Missions

  

 

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More chapters coming soon.......


Note
This MP was originally under development back in the summer of 2019 and went as far as making an announcement and first 4 missions that didnt get published but eventually the author, me, came to the plans of not continuing DYOM at the time........ until this year. 

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wow puto very cool mp woww so much fun cool story wow

(ssu logo do be lookin kinda trash)

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4 minutes ago, Axoez said:

wow puto very cool mp woww so much fun cool story wow

(ssu logo do be lookin kinda trash)

I mean i am not the best photoeditor also i couldnt think of a better photo so i am open to improvement.

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6 minutes ago, M316 said:

I mean i am not the best photoeditor also i couldnt think of a better photo so i am open to improvement.

I told you many times, make the logo more simple

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ThatDYOMdude1

Wow, that was really cool :bored:

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  • 4 weeks later...

ATTENTION!!!

 

Expect "Life of a mediocore" to be released within this month, hope yall would enjoy it!!!

 

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Ah yes, nice to see this community is still kicking on. It's been uh ... I can't remember. But I guess I'll make a comeback only for this time.

So, you, good luck whatever you're planning this mission to be. Let's see if I can install DYOM again. 

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Hey you, May is almost over. When are you releasing this already! :sneaky:

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13 hours ago, Aymunz said:

Hey you, May is almost over. When are you releasing this already! :sneaky:

Sorry mang, i am curently having a slight setback in my life, i may delay it a bit but rest assured, you will play & record it and meme it soon on your channel lmao as well as others

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  • 3 weeks later...

ATTENTION!!!!!

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First chapter has been officially released!!!!
 

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By the way, in case I didn't make this known, this thread is open for feedbacks and reviews but make sure to put any spoilers in a spoiler bar. Any input is appreciated,  thank you in advanced.

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Martin_Strada

I dunno, where to start, the moment of M316 making his very first mission pack and end up like this is something that DYOM has ever tried to reach it's greatness. That said: REBOUND

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is

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indeed

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a

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f*cking

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good

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mission pack so far.

 

 

 

 

 

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So let's start with the 

Writing/Plot:

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It ranged from kinda decent to a pretty good and a few amazing ones. It features an open minded presentation with cool characters. It shares their objectives, life goals, ambitions. The character that was open minded and wanted to have a better life is called Andrew. A protagonist which basically has Claude skin, struggles in life, wants to find something achievable, finds good friends that they joke about (especially Tony and Chris which they are of course also open minded characters, even Evengeline where Andrew saved her from her abusive boyfriend.). Andrew Patterson is indeed a good protagonist. I was surprised with this dialogue, because how he was acting so real. I like how things didn't went so fast when it wasn't suppose to. The cutscenes properly explained the whole plot itself. Even the antagonists were well written. Especially the Loan Shark boss member where he had a dialogue with AP in a restaurant. I was laughing at one scene where Chris and Andrew was drinking and it was using these funny ass transitions. Like OH MY GOD. where do these ideas come from? It's basically something that a designer would never do. Even SD transition makes the scene funnier. And also a meeting with Tony made me think that they were acting like family too. They were like friends for 7 years and still in the same position as usual. The shopping scene was unique and something innovative. The ending of the chapter 1 gave me feels and had some quotes that made smile a bit. Giving a backstory about them would be really cool since I was interested with these characters with their goals, deepness, etc. The story was acceptable, good and fun to follow. As my raiting wise. It will be 8/10.

 

Grammar:
 

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It was acceptable, but the spelling has some minor flaws, but it's not a big deal. So gonna give 9/10 for this.

 

 

 

Length:

 

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This ranged from good to perfect. None of the missions felt too short or very long. Also, loads of cutscenes and action to talk about. So 10/10 for this one.

 

Difficulty:

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 It was okay at it's best. Went from easy to hard really slow. The last missions were hard, because it required to do some stealth, which was also frustrating. Also the parkour in the last mission which was also hard. Can't talk more about it, cus it didn't provide a lot in Chapter 1 yet. Will give 7/10 on this one.

 

Cutscnes: 

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Was alright, nothing really special but well done at what it intended to show. Especially final missions which basically improved it. 7/10

 

Scenario:
 

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 That was so good, had some missions where a lot of cars, objects, and interiors were used effectively. He used a map editor to make a hospital with the objects that we never seen before and also DYOM# objects aswell. Props to the designer who tried his best to increase a great atmosphere with the objects that were made with the mapping script and with the dyom# addon. Overall, I feel like there was loads of great scenarios for each mission. 9/10

 

 

 

Presentation: 
 

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Once again, it showed alot of good things about the characters and the plot itself. The characters were open minded, ambitious and well written. Some missions proved big amount of variety than others, which others were full of story going and that is awesome. We need to have some more writing to understand the plot better, if there would be none, the writing would be a lackluster. It had loads of impression with the objects, gameplay mechanics and also the SD files.  In my words, this mission pack is something that it's trying to prove most of the things right that it got amazingly enhanced. I feel like this mission pack is gonna have some kinda deep writing in the future chapters and I can't wait to progress into the story, gameplay, variety of objects, because this presentation got me on BLAST. IT WAS FIRE. 9/10

 

 

 

Overall raiting of chapter 1:

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8.5/10

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I want to see where this will head into. Hope it won't be an another generic shooter, which will basically have hundreds of enemies to kill at one position. And it feels like there's GOTTA BE some kind of racing missions, because when I have entered a garage where Chris showed me. It made me impressed as hell. Also if you have any problems with these things I mentioned in my review, don't forget to ask. There will be something I can improve these aspects that you're having a hard time a bit. Don't get hyped from a big score, because 4 chapters is still a long way to go. Can't wait for Chapter 2. :D

 

 

 

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22 hours ago, Martin_Strada said:

I dunno, where to start, the moment of M316 making his very first mission pack and end up like this is something that DYOM has ever tried to reach it's greatness. That said: REBOUND

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is

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indeed

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a

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f*cking

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good

  Reveal hidden contents

mission pack so far.

 

 

 

 

 

  Reveal hidden contents

So let's start with the 

Writing/Plot:

  Reveal hidden contents

It ranged from kinda decent to a pretty good and a few amazing ones. It features an open minded presentation with cool characters. It shares their objectives, life goals, ambitions. The character that was open minded and wanted to have a better life is called Andrew. A protagonist which basically has Claude skin, struggles in life, wants to find something achievable, finds good friends that they joke about (especially Tony and Chris which they are of course also open minded characters, even Evengeline where Andrew saved her from her abusive boyfriend.). Andrew Patterson is indeed a good protagonist. I was surprised with this dialogue, because how he was acting so real. I like how things didn't went so fast when it wasn't suppose to. The cutscenes properly explained the whole plot itself. Even the antagonists were well written. Especially the Loan Shark boss member where he had a dialogue with AP in a restaurant. I was laughing at one scene where Chris and Andrew was drinking and it was using these funny ass transitions. Like OH MY GOD. where do these ideas come from? It's basically something that a designer would never do. Even SD transition makes the scene funnier. And also a meeting with Tony made me think that they were acting like family too. They were like friends for 7 years and still in the same position as usual. The shopping scene was unique and something innovative. The ending of the chapter 1 gave me feels and had some quotes that made smile a bit. Giving a backstory about them would be really cool since I was interested with these characters with their goals, deepness, etc. The story was acceptable, good and fun to follow. As my raiting wise. It will be 8/10.

 

Grammar:
 

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It was acceptable, but the spelling has some minor flaws, but it's not a big deal. So gonna give 9/10 for this.

 

 

 

Length:

 

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This ranged from good to perfect. None of the missions felt too short or very long. Also, loads of cutscenes and action to talk about. So 10/10 for this one.

 

Difficulty:

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 It was okay at it's best. Went from easy to hard really slow. The last missions were hard, because it required to do some stealth, which was also frustrating. Also the parkour in the last mission which was also hard. Can't talk more about it, cus it didn't provide a lot in Chapter 1 yet. Will give 7/10 on this one.

 

Cutscnes: 

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Was alright, nothing really special but well done at what it intended to show. Especially final missions which basically improved it. 7/10

 

Scenario:
 

  Reveal hidden contents

 

 That was so good, had some missions where a lot of cars, objects, and interiors were used effectively. He used a map editor to make a hospital with the objects that we never seen before and also DYOM# objects aswell. Props to the designer who tried his best to increase a great atmosphere with the objects that were made with the mapping script and with the dyom# addon. Overall, I feel like there was loads of great scenarios for each mission. 9/10

 

 

 

Presentation: 
 

  Reveal hidden contents

 

Once again, it showed alot of good things about the characters and the plot itself. The characters were open minded, ambitious and well written. Some missions proved big amount of variety than others, which others were full of story going and that is awesome. We need to have some more writing to understand the plot better, if there would be none, the writing would be a lackluster. It had loads of impression with the objects, gameplay mechanics and also the SD files.  In my words, this mission pack is something that it's trying to prove most of the things right that it got amazingly enhanced. I feel like this mission pack is gonna have some kinda deep writing in the future chapters and I can't wait to progress into the story, gameplay, variety of objects, because this presentation got me on BLAST. IT WAS FIRE. 9/10

 

 

 

Overall raiting of chapter 1:

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8.5/10

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I want to see where this will head into. Hope it won't be an another generic shooter, which will basically have hundreds of enemies to kill at one position. And it feels like there's GOTTA BE some kind of racing missions, because when I have entered a garage where Chris showed me. It made me impressed as hell. Also if you have any problems with these things I mentioned in my review, don't forget to ask. There will be something I can improve these aspects that you're having a hard time a bit. Don't get hyped from a big score, because 4 chapters is still a long way to go. Can't wait for Chapter 2. :D

 

 

 

Appreciate the kind words my friend, this is (no joke) probably the best review for Chapter 1 so far that i have recieved not cos it is mostly positive but you higlighted its best and a little bit of its worst even some of them can insinuated like the gameplay difficulty part, but yeah i envisioned rebound to be dialogue based alot of the time but ehhhh, i am trying to compensate with some gameplay here and there for it, so yeah stay tuned for more and hopefully i dont disappoint, thanks again!!!

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i reviw de fort leik dis, i revyu rebon lek dis too

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karaktre gud, adnrew is gud, cris veri gud, tony yes he gud, lemy f*ck lemy

 

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kutsin is gud to

 

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dailog little bland but is ok, veri many tipo stoopidd autor

 

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konkosyon is is a nice mp i like ep7 drunk drunk moemen, were is capter 2

 

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it's actually an okay mp, but it can get pretty hard at times. 

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that and you cyberbullying me over discord dms when i was desperate to finish the f*cking stupid ac unit parkour mission

 

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  • 4 months later...

Came back here to say that:
A) The MP isnt dead
B) Expect Chapter 2 either today or in the next 2 days

Hope yall would like it

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Martin_Strada

Yeah. I already wanted to take my hands on this chapter. All of the cons and flaws I've mentioned most of the things were fixed, added and made it even better.

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Writing/Plot:

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I mostly praised chapter 1 due to his intriguing writing, but in Chapter 2 this sh*t goes into a fan. The story went dark as I quite expected less. It always featured an open-minded presentation with cool characters (even new ones were really well made. I really liked Cal for his actions and jokes let's just say haha. In some parts, we have to play as him. I actually liked the unique perspectives of playing other characters and experiencing more to them. Tony was indeed a respectable homie with huge balls. The dialogue felt like I was watching a high-budget TV series or either a movie. I also liked the references of Chris' PS2 playing  San Andreas and talking about Cryptocurrency. This is where I had laughed the most. It broke the 4th wall, but in a hilarious way. The cutscenes properly explained the whole plot itself. The antagonists were... let's just say well written, I guess but they have some flaws. I liked Kazushi quite a lot, because a designer showed his perspective the most while others mostly weren't shown or explained further what are their goals, etc. Especially Luke and others (i literally almost forgot the character names of how they weren't shown a lot compared to their boss of The Red Bulls gang Kazushi). The ending of chapter 2 gave me strange vibes and made me think what will happen to my playable character. Honestly, the story got improved, but severes from small flaws like not showcasing other antagonist goals. As my rating wise. It will be 8/10.

Grammar:

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It was acceptable, improved comparing to chapter 1. 10/10

Length:

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As always, the mission produces an amazing example of endless length. 10/10

Difficulty:

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From my DYOM experience this is possibly one of the hardest mission packs I have played in a while. The stealth missions were pain in the ass, the accuracy was insane whenever the enemies were trying to shoot you. All of the enemies had a crazy good accuracy and it was too frustrating to get rid of them. Especially the mission where you had to driveby. Since I have no problems with missions being challenging (atleast they are possibe to finish) imma give this 7.5/10, because it tried innovating the DYOM playerbase.

Cutscenes:

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A massive improvement comparing to the last one. Good job! It had some tough and badass moments too.  10/10

Presentation: 
 

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Once again, it showed alot of good things about the characters and the plot itself. The characters were really cool, badass and well written. Some missions had AN INSANE AMOUNT OF DETAILS like a custom made kitchen, DYOM# object placements, like it was too pretty and amazing to look at. This is possibly a new MP that focused more into a new exprience of putting new objects and even new animations for a MP. Impressed with the objects, gameplay mechanics and also the SD files.  In my words, this mission pack is something that it's trying to prove most of the things right that it got amazingly enhanced. 10/10

Overall raiting of chapter 2:

 
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9.5/10

 

 

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"liverpoolian"

 

its liverpuldian you uncultured swine

 

noob

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Time to review Rebound. Needless to say I'm absolutely devastated and dissapointed. (SPOILERSS!!!!1)

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Overall Rate (-1/10)

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Story (0/10)

After playing Second Shine mission, I was so heartbroken to see that Eve friendzoned Andrew. Why cant they just date????? why??????????? i play this chapter cuz i wanna see eve and andrew go wild... but that never happen.
Cutscenes (0/10)

bro.... why.

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Gameplay (0/10)

Gameplay was alright ACTUALLY WHO F*CKIN CARES IM ONLY UP FOR LOCO SEXO GAMEPLAY BETWEEN EVE AND ANDREW

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CONCLUSION

this mp sucks.

this is clearly a joke review

 

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14 hours ago, Robert17 said:

Time to review Rebound. Needless to say I'm absolutely devastated and dissapointed. (SPOILERSS!!!!1)

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Overall Rate (-1/10)

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Story (0/10)

After playing Second Shine mission, I was so heartbroken to see that Eve friendzoned Andrew. Why cant they just date????? why??????????? i play this chapter cuz i wanna see eve and andrew go wild... but that never happen.
Cutscenes (0/10)

bro.... why.

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Gameplay (0/10)

Gameplay was alright ACTUALLY WHO F*CKIN CARES IM ONLY UP FOR LOCO SEXO GAMEPLAY BETWEEN EVE AND ANDREW

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CONCLUSION

this mp sucks.

this is clearly a joke review

 

Awesome and detailed and very well thought out review! This will surely help the developer of this missionpack.

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i ain't qualified for sh*tty reviews so i can only give a score and a verdict

score: 7.75/10

verdict: it was enjoyable to say the most. the difficulty is at least justifiable since you're killing fags instead of jumping off a small industrial sized air conditioning unit.

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  • 3 weeks later...

Small heads up, there is gonna be some updates to both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, ranging from small fixes to some revamps in Chapter 1. Also some revamps to the entire thread to make it look more appealing rather than "weird", to be announced soon...

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