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MOTW #177


Which mission should win MOTW #177?  

14 members have voted

  1. 1. Which mission should win MOTW #177?

    • "Drug in Commerce" by abdo motw34
    • "Life of a Gopnik" by Professional Idiot
    • "Exploitation of Filth" by The Monster
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    • "The Gunslinger" by Stardust101
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    • "Escape From Prison" by Coneboy
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    • "The Ultimate Opportunist" by M136
    • "The Case" by Polski Oski

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  • Poll closed on 03/03/2021 at 05:00 PM

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On 2/23/2021 at 1:21 AM, Robert17 said:

This is Polski's nightmare he can't escape from.

he participated anyway

On 2/28/2021 at 12:05 AM, KingAceGamer said:

Sorry guys, got too much sh*t on my plate, and TOO MUCH!!. I may not be available for reviewing and for next MOTW's. I'll try to come back as soon as possible.

Man, that sucks, good luck with the "sh*ts" on your plate

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14 minutes ago, Axoez said:

he participated anyway

Man, that sucks, good luck with the "sh*ts" on your plate

Thanks, Man. I appreciate it.

 

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Ranking
1st - The Ultimate Opportunist
2nd - Life of a Gopnik
3rd - Escape from prison
4th - The Case
5th - The Gunslinger
6th - Drug in Commerce
7th - Exploitation of Filth

Sorry everyone, but I don't feel like giving any reviews, I feel very tired, too lazy to do anything... 😔

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I'm gonna take a break for next MOTW due of exam is ongoing at this moment, this is also explain why I being inactive & didn't submit my entry too.

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Well let me be the first to review since Axoez is too lazy to do it hehe:

Drug in commerce:

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Well idk what to say, besides the fact it has broken grammar among other stuff. There isn't anything special, just a regular mission u would find while DYOM surfing. 2.7/10

 

Life of a Gopnik:

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Finally Raxo you came up with a mission instead of a remake lol. And this one doesn't fail to impress. Tbh its creativity in satire and humor has to be very good. The execution as well as the SD didn't fail to impress. I liked your Boris cosplay so much so that I actually read the dialogue in his voice lol. Also the CSGO matchmaking part was pretty creative and unique. And the ending track was actually clever, I love the cheeki breeki song and I ended up vibing with it for the reminder if the mission. My only complain tho is it felt a bit short like I wanted to see more from Boris and his shenanigans. Also to mention your Russian dialogue impression was spot on. 6.9/10 {Yes the score is on purpose lol}

 

Exploitation of filth:

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I barely even remember what this mission is all about, all Ik that it had a drug issue related to it and u had to steal a drug van. Same thing as Drug in commerce, pretty lackluster and what you will encounter while surfing the DYOM page. 3/10

 

The Gunslinger:

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So when I first saw the photoshoot part, Viking's Quadruple extermination came to mind, seems that you have gotten some inspiration right there. Story feels "normal" to say the least up until the protagonist flips off for some reason and decides to go on a tear like my 8 year old self playing gta and failing missions constantly. Also the ending was anticlimactic, after all of this you kill the actor as a sherif and he just.... walks off. Weird if you ask me. Now I recall someone saying there is a pattern here but until it happens I am not that impressed. Even if the big mystery was to be revealed I don't think this mission will supplement it well enough. 4/10

 

Escape in prison:

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Cutscenes and atmosphere wise, it was pretty great, maybe if you work on it more you will become an object specialist like Lascha. The plot was straightforward, you break out a guy from prison, which which good however my main issue is that it is only like 20+ objectives. I mean you could have made it 5 times longer packed with action and it would have been cool, but gotta judge with what I am served. 4.5/10

 

The Case:

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Now ik you are a military specialist type of guy and basically participating in this MOTW was like shooting yourself in the foot but also can help to adapt other skills with other stories. The story is good, I mean you are a solid designer, I love how you skipped the drive part to infer that we traveled to Chicago in a fuxking San fransisco rip off lol. Now after you reach the hideout things began to be confusing,  first of all it was initially bugged but thank god that you have fixed it but I suggest you to make a custom interior up in the air this way it will be easier. Second, again like the others it feels like it ended prematurely and your effort of an open ending didn't work that will. I get that you dont make non militarization missions alot but IMO u should start working on it, trust me it will serve you will. 5.8/10

 

Thank f*ck rathard's mission didn't qualify otherwise I would have ripped him a new asshole in my review here, haha.

 

Anyways my vote goes to:

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Life of a Gopnik, congratulations raxo you stoopid blyat 😂👏👏

 

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Drug In Commerce (by @abdo mot34)

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Overall Rate (5.3/10)

NoteThe mission was plain basic, it was effortless. And the grammar, as well. Both which are a problem. The only good thing about your mission was the objects, though.

 

Story (4/10)

The story is too basic, It's all about some random dudes trying to blow up a factory... for what reason? You didn't give a care to at least try to make a decent plot (with a cutscene intro and a story).

Cutscenes (5/10)

Ok, cutscenes are something better than the story. What I liked is the slow motion cutscene at the end. But this mission kinda lacks cutscenes, and all these few cutscenes were static and boring. One wrong thing I forgot to mention though is the grammar and spelling.

Gameplay (7/10)

The best I can say about the mission is the gameplay. You've put some nice objects and cars outside and inside the factory. You messed up the route for the drug dealer character (I don't remenber his name, so sorry about that). The enemies weren't that challenging, and the gameplay felt really short.

 

Life of a Gopnik (by @Axoez)

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Overall Rate (8.3/10)

NoteYour mission was cyka blyat moment.

 

Story (8/10)

The mission starts off with the guy waking up to go to Cyka Bell, then gets disrespected by the employee then the gopnik goes to raid the place. Later, he goes home to play CSGO, he wins then afterwards he blasts a party with his homies. Now that's a real gopnik moment.

The story was rated 8/10 because:

1. The story was epic.
2. The story could've turned out better if Boris wasn't all by himself and all his homies could've be relevant to the plot as well.

Cutscenes (10/10)

I liked the humour, the object animations, the cutscenes overall and the SD which blends really well.

Gameplay (7/10)

Not much to say about the gameplay except the part where Boris plays CSGO. I liked the concept, it felt like I actually play CSGO but in DYOM. Anyway, the enemies had a big amount of health and I couldn't headshot them, so it took quite long to get past them. The gameplay in general felt kinda short.

 

Exploitation of Filth (by @The Monster)

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Overall Rate (5.6/10)

NoteYour mission was just as basic as abdo's mission, which is wrong. This seems to be your first mission uploaded in the website, so that should've been expected, but you're not quite prepared for MOTW, you still have a lot of things to learn.

 

Story (5.5/10)

I didn't understand the story at the beginning, it looked like some guy was caught by the police but that didn't have anything to do with the continuation of it, which confused me. Anyways, you visit "Willam" (the name should've been spelled William) who's obsessed with drugs and wants you to steal a van full of drugs from the ballas. Now the thing is the story was plain simple, and short, anybody could think of a story like this in 2 minutes.

Cutscenes (7.5/10)

What I liked about the cutscenes are the camera animations and placement, the animations and the objects. The issue is the bad grammar in dialogue.

Gameplay (4/10)

The only objective was to kill the ballas and steal the van, it didn't feel fun at all. The enemies just stayed like statues in their place, being harmless to the player without doing anything. That was a really boring gameplay.

 

The Gunslinger (by @Stardust101)

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Overall Rate (7.8/10)

NoteYou're improving! You've put some nice objects in El Castillo del Diablo. The actor animations and the cutscenes are good as well, although it could've been really good if you added SD music. I didn't like the story that much. And honestly using desert deagles 

 

Story (7/10)

It starts off when Derek played the role as the gunslinger, after he has done what he was told by the Director, he went insane and decided to kill everybody and rule Fort Carson. The concept is good, but I didn't really understand his sudden urge to kill everybody around him. Next up: after he killed some police officers and destroyed the helicopter, a random police officer comes to kill Derek by himself. I don't understand why Derek didn't just kill him with the AK, but instead he decided to play as the gunslinger again. After all of this of him killing few police officers and destroying an helicopter, he gets killed by a a casual police officer...

Cutscenes (9/10)

Overall the cutscenes were great (and what I mean are the camera positions, smooth cutscenes and actor animations). But you could've added a few more cutscenes (such as the part where Derek plays his role and is about to shoot the sheriff).

Gameplay (7.5/10)

I enjoyed killing the enemies and also destroy the helicopter, but it was easy (way too easy), I suggest adding more enemies next time. What I also didn't like is using the pistol, you could've replaced the pistol with a desert eagle so it would feel more "wild west", you know what I mean?

 

Escape from Prison (by @zakarum5835)

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Overall Rate (7.6/10)

Note: Your mission has a great gameplay with balanced difficulty. It lacks cutscenes and the story was too straight to the point.

 

Story (6/10)

The story starts off with a guy being in prison in the deserts of Las Venturas with no way to escape, if it wasn't for the nice cop who freed him out. Why did the cop free him out? Was the cop a good friend of him? The questions are left unanswered. The story was straight to the point with not much context, which I don't like.

Cutscenes (7/10)

I could be thanked by just a few cutscenes. I liked how the prison looked and the surroundings, it was built from scratch and that's an awesome effort. That's all there's to it. The issue is your mission lacks cutscenes, there were a lot of ways you could add more.

Gameplay (10/10)

Again, I'm amazed by the prison built from scratch! The gameplay was fun, the difficulty was balanced, just what I like to see.

 

The Ultimate Opportunist (by @M316)

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Overall Rate (9.3/10)

NoteAfter a lot of attempts, I finished passing the mission. The mission was so exciting, the gameplay being fun and stressful at the same time.

 

Story (10/10)

It's an annual game show where 8 people compete aganist eachother to win a mansion, and lots of cash. The concept of the mission is really interesting, It's something I haven't seen before, and I haven't seen somebody done this before, briliant! Even I couldn't have gone insane to make a mission like this!

Cutscenes (8/10)

In the first second of playing your mission, I was surprised to see an arena full of objects and I was already excited to get into it. I can't believe how much work you've put into the map! What sucked though, was the static cutscenes during the interview of the participants and the grammar.

Gameplay (10/10)

It was really hard, but with the motivation and courage, the mission was possible... and it was worth the prize of millions of dollars and a mansion. Despite it being so hard to pass, it's still one of the best gameplays I've experienced. One thing though, the driver's AI was bugged so the last round was a walk in the park, but I was still amazed by the amount of effort.

 

The Case (by @Polski Oski)

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Overall Score (7.3/10)

NoteThe cutscenes were amazing, story started off good with a dissapointing ending, and there's no fun gameplay whatsoever.

 

Story (6.5/10)

The story is an interesting one indeed! I like missions about closed cases and stuff, I'm always curious to see how both agents will solve a case which was closed 2 years ago? They found some interesting clues, but these clues didn't matter much anymore because the guy who were they looking for already showed up. I never thought the mission would take a sudden turn like this, especially the lame ending. So basically the story started off really good at first. but the ending destroyed it all and that's quite dissapointing.

Cutscenes (10/10)

Despite the story having a dissapointing ending, there was a good thing about the mission: the cutscenes. I liked the dialogue between the characters, the smooth cutscenes, the animations and so on.

Gameplay (5.5/10)

What about the gameplay? Well, the only interesting part was looking for clues and chase Greg, but that's all there's to it. There wasn't a fun gameplay such as shooting some enemies. Your mission wasn't action packed as expected.

 

I had a long journey playing these missions and finally post my detailed feedback. It took so long...

My vote goes to one and only...

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🥇M316 (Congratulations!) (Overall Rate: 9.3/10)

🥈Axoez (Overall Rate: 8.3/10)

🥉Stardust101 (Overall Rate: 7.8/10)

🏅zakarum5835 (Overall Rate: 7.6/10)

🏅Polski Olski (Overall Rate: 7.3/10)

🏅The Monster (Overall Rate: 5.6/10)

🏅abdo mot34 (Overall Rate: 5.3/10)

 

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8 hours ago, M316 said:

Life of a Gopnik, congratulations raxo you stoopid blyat

Pizdac poshol nahui blyat 797294580831092746.png?v=1 but thanks

9 hours ago, M316 said:

My only complain tho is it felt a bit short like I wanted to see more from Boris and his shenanigans

Well I don't have any ideas left, and there's only 6 objectives left, and I decided to use it to make that cheeki breeki scene with 3 objectives

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The John David

I've played all the entries and here's my reviews and guess who I voted for?

Drug in Commerce - @abdo mot34

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The mission is well-designed enough, but lack of indicators, enemy awareness and lots of spelling and grammar mistakes I've founded. Still, it was fun a bit only in sniper duty.

 

Life of a Gopnik - @Axoez

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Damn, this mission was good at least you've learned and improve something up here? I have nothing to say about this, but take note I've found a little grammar mistakes after reading all the dialogues.

 

Exploitation of Filth - @The Monster

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The mission was pretty easy by taking out all the enemies out there and recoup the van back to your friend containing drugs or something? I didn't find this interest, but it was fun, and take note you have a little grammar mistakes.

 

The Gunslinger - @Stardust101

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The mission was anticlimactic because apparently this Derek was supposed to film like a Wild West Gunfight Battle and after that, he goes rampage and kills anyone just to own the Fort Carson for no whatsoever reasons? Am I visualizing a behind-the-scene real gunfights?

 

Escape from Prison - @zakarum5835 (Coneboy)

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Woah? Did you just create your own prison using objects? The mission was surprisingly good, the placements you did reminds me on Catalina mission breaking the bank and escapes to the back door. Not to mention the friendly cop frees the player without any further reason why did he let him go? But it was fun.

 

The Ultimate Opportunist - @M316

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The mission was pretty challenging and intense. Honestly, this is way more fun to compete other participants? I had nothing to say about this, It's just all about contest like this MOTW.

 

The Case - @Polski Oski

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Wow! The mission is amazing? I always like detective missions like this. I'm impress how you put so much effort you did around here, the use of custom objects in DYOM# Add-on, chasing Greg was perfectly good. But it's not as much fun, I mean there's no little gunfights I should expected and the ending was pretty unfortunate?

 

My vote goes to:

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1st - @M316 - Congratulations! You earned my vote!

2nd -  @Polski Oski

3rd -  @zakarum5835 (Coneboy)

4th -  @Axoez

5th - @abdo mot34

6th -@The Monster

7th - @Stardust101

 

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37 minutes ago, The John David said:

but take note I've found a little grammar mistakes after reading all the dialogues.

Not really, these "grammar mistakes" such as "is not my car there men" is intentional. And thanks for the review.

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Let me play these missions and I'll write a unique review for them.

Btw, thanks for the feedback John David, I appreciate that. ^^

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Гопник блять

Gonna try crafting a mini review later.. 

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On 3/1/2021 at 9:07 PM, Robert17 said:

Escape from Prison (by @zakarum5835)

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Overall Rate (7.6/10)

Note: Your mission has a great gameplay with balanced difficulty. It lacks cutscenes and the story was too straight to the point.

 

Story (6/10)

The story starts off with a guy being in prison in the deserts of Las Venturas with no way to escape, if it wasn't for the nice cop who freed him out. Why did the cop free him out? Was the cop a good friend of him? The questions are left unanswered. The story was straight to the point with not much context, which I don't like.

Cutscenes (7/10)

I could be thanked by just a few cutscenes. I liked how the prison looked and the surroundings, it was built from scratch and that's an awesome effort. That's all there's to it. The issue is your mission lacks cutscenes, there were a lot of ways you could add more.

Gameplay (10/10)

Again, I'm amazed by the prison built from scratch! The gameplay was fun, the difficulty was balanced, just what I like to see.

 

 

 

 

I don't make missions since October/November so I need to take back my old skills xD. Thanks for the feedback. ^^

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15 hours ago, SonnyDR said:

Overall review:
 

 

I like the fact that you couldn't decide on which mission was better (between me and "M 30 16") so you had 2 winners

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On 3/19/2021 at 3:00 AM, Axoez said:

I like the fact that you couldn't decide on which mission was better (between me and "M 30 16") so you had 2 winners

He didnt wanna hurt ur feelings knowing that u r a minor, Life of Gopnik? more like Life of a tramp lol

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