Stardust101 Posted January 9, 2021 Share Posted January 9, 2021 Spoiler DEADLY MONEY Deadly Money is my newest mission pack, and you can play it right now by clicking the following link: https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/67872 STORY After the death of their parents, David Keaton and his brother George acquired a bunch of loans from Russian loan sharks. However, the brothers fail to pay back their debt, making the Russians very angry. These same Russians end up killing George. After seeing his brother die, David knew he wasn't safe... P.S.: I highly suggest you learn more about the story by playing the mission pack itself. The cutscenes are short and it's easy to understand the plot. Plus I think revealing a lot more would be considered Spoilers. FUN FACTS -I chose the surname Keaton thanks to American actor Michael Keaton, best known for playing Batman in Batman (1989). -The story was kinda inspired by the first Max Payne game, another Rockstar title. Both David and Max lose a family member in the beginning and both have to fight against Russian mobsters. FEEDBACK IS IMPORTANT! I highly suggest you leave a comment telling me what you liked and disliked about Deadly Money. I'm new to the DYOM community so I don't what exactly you guys like. Tell me what you tought about my dialogue, my grammar, my story, my gunfights, etc. DYOM is a hobby of mine and I want to improve my skills! Have a nice day! Thunder0515 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunder0515 Posted January 9, 2021 Share Posted January 9, 2021 This. Is. Awesome! You have learned a lot from my feedback. There's still problems like missions 1, 2, 6 and 8 being too short. However, they're the only problems! Most notable things that I liked were: Armour and health pickups before a shootout 100% flawless grammar Vehicles present every time you had to drive somewhere Varied gameplay Actors have varied guns (they still mainly used M4s) Keep up the good work, man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust101 Posted January 29, 2021 Author Share Posted January 29, 2021 On 1/9/2021 at 6:42 AM, Thunder0515 said: This. Is. Awesome! You have learned a lot from my feedback. There's still problems like missions 1, 2, 6 and 8 being too short. However, they're the only problems! Most notable things that I liked were: Armour and health pickups before a shootout 100% flawless grammar Vehicles present every time you had to drive somewhere Varied gameplay Actors have varied guns (they still mainly used M4s) Keep up the good work, man! Thanks a lot Thunder0515! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
