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[MP] Comeback


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Axoez

[This project is halted for now as I do not have any ideas for episode 3]
Follow Jasper Anderson and Paul Jolson, a regular person with no job, accidentally getting in the "Shadow" gang.
"Comeback" is a mission-pack that will have the story of the fall and rise of the "Shadow" gang.

 

-=Chapter 1=-
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Episode 1: New Job

Episode 2: Not The Job You Expected

-=(More episodes is coming soon)=-

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Posted (edited)
35 minutes ago, Robert17 said:

im waiting for episode 3 

im valve 

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Thunder0515

When the camera's broken for you in the first episode and it looks like Hotline Miami, but it's GTA and it's inside the house. Wait, it's intended. Uh-oh.

fix pls
The Quick-Time events ideas are cool. I would prefer using the animations 28-31 for phone calls instead of butt slaps, though. Overall, great job!

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7 hours ago, Axoez said:

im valve 

We're waiting for Comeback Lost Coast then.

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ThatDYOMdude1

I'm looking forward to this.

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Axoez
11 hours ago, Thunder0515 said:

We're waiting for Comeback Lost Coast then.

ah fack

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8 hours ago, ThatDYOMdude1 said:

I'm looking forward to this.

The mission-pack "Comeback" has been cancelled.

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lol not really, ep3 coming soon
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11 hours ago, Thunder0515 said:

When the camera's broken for you in the first episode and it looks like Hotline Miami, but it's GTA and it's inside the house. Wait, it's intended. Uh-oh.

fix pls
The Quick-Time events ideas are cool. I would prefer using the animations 28-31 for phone calls instead of butt slaps, though. Overall, great job!

"Broken" camera is intended, also butt slap? I think you didn't install the phone call animation I gave, yes I edited the phone call script, since SIZZZ's uses the mouth idle animation (123) which mean sometimes ped can randomly take a phone call which is not what I want.

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Robert17
6 hours ago, Axoez said:

The mission-pack "Comeback" has been cancelled.

but you said like 1-2 days ago u arent gonna cancel it wtf

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18 hours ago, Aymunz said:

My, oh my.. That's some fiiiine cover! 

Hmm okay..

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Aymunz

Ah, Comeback ,The mission pack where car driving is a puzzle of its own.
The angles in the cutscenes and gameplay are interesting. I admired the angle from above in the beginning inside paul's house. felt like an early sims game. The Quick Time Events is a nice idea, but it doesn't work right for me. Most of the times if i click nothing it will just proceed with the mission. sometimes I click the wrong button and it still works somehow. One time i clicked the right button and the mission failed for some reason. So aparently, it doesn't work as intended.
The dialouge is actually good. Certainly better than in your MOTW entry. The soundtrack is fitting with the atmosphere. I like that 50's style music. it kinda goes well with the game visuals. The rest of the soundtrack is equally fitting. The overall presentation is great so far. my favourite cutscene is where they are at the interview and they go like:

 

Jasper: ey didn't ya say it was a job?
(camera shifts to a guy holding a gun)
Jasper: then why does he have a gun?

 

I think it was deliviered perfectly!

 

I'm not sure what to say about the overall plot, the shadow gang sounds like a group of underground vigilante. but I can't say for sure as you left us hanging here with only 2 missions and it's something that can only be made clear after the chapter is complete.

I'm interested in how this will go, I hope you'll be able to get motivated and finish it. 

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19 hours ago, Aymunz said:

the shadow gang sounds like a group of underground vigilante

ye it's kind of a vigilante gang thing idk i didn't plan anything since i'm stupid like that

19 hours ago, Aymunz said:

The soundtrack is fitting with the atmosphere

It does? I didn't even think it fits, but well I had to put in some kind of music so yeah, just slapped on some musics I like and tada.

19 hours ago, Aymunz said:

Ah, Comeback ,The mission pack where car driving is a puzzle of its own.

lol

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8 minutes ago, Axoez said:

It does? I didn't even think it fits, but well I had to put in some kind of music so yeah, just slapped on some musics I like and tada.

Well, It's better than mute I guess. 😞

I did like it though. 

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13 minutes ago, Aymunz said:

Well, It's better than mute I guess. 😞

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On 2/18/2021 at 4:26 PM, Robert17 said:

@Axoez mang some people are expecting the next episode.

where is it

I was planning to making it, it was kind of finished, but it crashes in a specific objective, and I got too lazy to fix it.

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The John David

Looks interesting to play this! I'll give you my review & feedback here soon as I have free-time left. Good luck finishing this! :D

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4 hours ago, The John David said:

Looks interesting to play this! I'll give you my review & feedback here soon as I have free-time left. Good luck finishing this! :D

Well just gonna tell you before-hand that you might be a little bit disappointed while playing, judging from your attitude to my MOTW entries xd

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