Axoez 119 Posted January 2 Share Posted January 2 (edited) [This project is halted for now as I do not have any ideas for episode 3] Follow Jasper Anderson and Paul Jolson, a regular person with no job, accidentally getting in the "Shadow" gang. "Comeback" is a mission-pack that will have the story of the fall and rise of the "Shadow" gang. -=Chapter 1=- Episode 1: New Job Episode 2: Not The Job You Expected-=(More episodes is coming soon)=- Edited January 5 by Axoez Thunder0515, ThatDYOMdude1, Aymunz and 1 other 4 Link to post Share on other sites
Robert17 88 Posted January 2 Share Posted January 2 im waiting for episode 3 Axoez and ThatDYOMdude1 1 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted January 2 Author Share Posted January 2 (edited) 35 minutes ago, Robert17 said: im waiting for episode 3 im valve Edited January 2 by Axoez Aymunz, ThatDYOMdude1 and RithRake24 3 Link to post Share on other sites
Thunder0515 20 Posted January 2 Share Posted January 2 (edited) When the camera's broken for you in the first episode and it looks like Hotline Miami, but it's GTA and it's inside the house. Wait, it's intended. Uh-oh. fix pls The Quick-Time events ideas are cool. I would prefer using the animations 28-31 for phone calls instead of butt slaps, though. Overall, great job! Edited January 2 by Thunder0515 Oopsie Axoez, Aymunz and ThatDYOMdude1 1 2 Link to post Share on other sites
Thunder0515 20 Posted January 2 Share Posted January 2 7 hours ago, Axoez said: im valve We're waiting for Comeback Lost Coast then. Axoez and ThatDYOMdude1 1 1 Link to post Share on other sites
ThatDYOMdude1 32 Posted January 3 Share Posted January 3 I'm looking forward to this. Axoez 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted January 3 Author Share Posted January 3 11 hours ago, Thunder0515 said: We're waiting for Comeback Lost Coast then. ah fack ThatDYOMdude1 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted January 3 Author Share Posted January 3 (edited) 8 hours ago, ThatDYOMdude1 said: I'm looking forward to this. The mission-pack "Comeback" has been cancelled. Edited January 3 by Axoez lol not really, ep3 coming soon ThatDYOMdude1 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted January 3 Author Share Posted January 3 (edited) 11 hours ago, Thunder0515 said: When the camera's broken for you in the first episode and it looks like Hotline Miami, but it's GTA and it's inside the house. Wait, it's intended. Uh-oh. fix pls The Quick-Time events ideas are cool. I would prefer using the animations 28-31 for phone calls instead of butt slaps, though. Overall, great job! "Broken" camera is intended, also butt slap? I think you didn't install the phone call animation I gave, yes I edited the phone call script, since SIZZZ's uses the mouth idle animation (123) which mean sometimes ped can randomly take a phone call which is not what I want. Edited January 3 by Axoez Aymunz 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Robert17 88 Posted January 3 Share Posted January 3 6 hours ago, Axoez said: The mission-pack "Comeback" has been cancelled. but you said like 1-2 days ago u arent gonna cancel it wtf Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted January 3 Author Share Posted January 3 (edited) (DELETED) Edited January 23 by Axoez ThatDYOMdude1 1 Link to post Share on other sites
ThatDYOMdude1 32 Posted January 3 Share Posted January 3 Bruh hurB. Axoez 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Aymunz 396 Posted January 14 Share Posted January 14 My, oh my.. That's some fiiiine cover! Axoez 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted January 15 Author Share Posted January 15 18 hours ago, Aymunz said: My, oh my.. That's some fiiiine cover! Hmm okay.. Link to post Share on other sites
Aymunz 396 Posted February 2 Share Posted February 2 (edited) Ah, Comeback ,The mission pack where car driving is a puzzle of its own. The angles in the cutscenes and gameplay are interesting. I admired the angle from above in the beginning inside paul's house. felt like an early sims game. The Quick Time Events is a nice idea, but it doesn't work right for me. Most of the times if i click nothing it will just proceed with the mission. sometimes I click the wrong button and it still works somehow. One time i clicked the right button and the mission failed for some reason. So aparently, it doesn't work as intended. The dialouge is actually good. Certainly better than in your MOTW entry. The soundtrack is fitting with the atmosphere. I like that 50's style music. it kinda goes well with the game visuals. The rest of the soundtrack is equally fitting. The overall presentation is great so far. my favourite cutscene is where they are at the interview and they go like: Jasper: ey didn't ya say it was a job? (camera shifts to a guy holding a gun) Jasper: then why does he have a gun? I think it was deliviered perfectly! I'm not sure what to say about the overall plot, the shadow gang sounds like a group of underground vigilante. but I can't say for sure as you left us hanging here with only 2 missions and it's something that can only be made clear after the chapter is complete. I'm interested in how this will go, I hope you'll be able to get motivated and finish it. Edited February 2 by Aymunz RithRake24 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted February 3 Author Share Posted February 3 19 hours ago, Aymunz said: the shadow gang sounds like a group of underground vigilante ye it's kind of a vigilante gang thing idk i didn't plan anything since i'm stupid like that 19 hours ago, Aymunz said: The soundtrack is fitting with the atmosphere It does? I didn't even think it fits, but well I had to put in some kind of music so yeah, just slapped on some musics I like and tada. 19 hours ago, Aymunz said: Ah, Comeback ,The mission pack where car driving is a puzzle of its own. lol Link to post Share on other sites
Aymunz 396 Posted February 3 Share Posted February 3 8 minutes ago, Axoez said: It does? I didn't even think it fits, but well I had to put in some kind of music so yeah, just slapped on some musics I like and tada. Well, It's better than mute I guess. 😞 I did like it though. Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted February 3 Author Share Posted February 3 13 minutes ago, Aymunz said: Well, It's better than mute I guess. 😞 Link to post Share on other sites
Aymunz 396 Posted February 18 Share Posted February 18 A joke video I made for this MP Axoez 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Robert17 88 Posted February 18 Share Posted February 18 @Axoez mang some people are expecting the next episode. where is it Axoez 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted February 19 Author Share Posted February 19 On 2/18/2021 at 4:26 PM, Robert17 said: @Axoez mang some people are expecting the next episode. where is it I was planning to making it, it was kind of finished, but it crashes in a specific objective, and I got too lazy to fix it. Link to post Share on other sites
ThatDYOMdude1 32 Posted March 2 Share Posted March 2 Well, guess no more Comeback I guess. Link to post Share on other sites
The John David 767 Posted March 5 Share Posted March 5 Looks interesting to play this! I'll give you my review & feedback here soon as I have free-time left. Good luck finishing this! Link to post Share on other sites
Axoez 119 Posted March 5 Author Share Posted March 5 4 hours ago, The John David said: Looks interesting to play this! I'll give you my review & feedback here soon as I have free-time left. Good luck finishing this! Well just gonna tell you before-hand that you might be a little bit disappointed while playing, judging from your attitude to my MOTW entries xd Link to post Share on other sites
The John David 767 Posted March 7 Share Posted March 7 Just played out both episodes you released. Here's the pros and cons on them. Spoiler Pros: Use of static camera Practical dialogues Small character interactions Small gunfight practices Sensible cutscenes Cons: Overbearing static camera No small logical reasoning Lacks of creativity & variety Checkpoint marker are not indicated properly Cheesy small dialogues Incoherent patterns In conclusion, it's a good project you design at least, but you still got a long ways to go because this still needs more improvement in various ways? I recommend you to play other people's mission around on the DYOM Website so you could observe the dialogues and the way they input logical reasonings, you could understand them in a glimpse. And also, please do not overuse the static camera 'cause that'll makes your project more confusing and hard to completed. (Just use them for instance like the player is running away from explosion and you can put static camera and a little instructions so the player would understand the situation they are.) That's all for now! But quite enjoyable! Looking forward for you to finish this soon! Link to post Share on other sites
