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RithRake24

MOTW #170

Voting has commenced!  

12 members have voted

This poll is closed to new votes
  1. 1. Which mission should win MOTW #170?

    • Playing It By The Book by ElectricFish
    • The Night Comes Down by Luitger
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    • The Burning Papers by Meyland12
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    • Jethro's Car Theft by VCFanboi
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    • Madd Dogg's Mansion by Robert17
    • Woozie's Request by YGE
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  • Poll closed on 11/24/2020 at 07:15 AM

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RithRake24
6 minutes ago, GalacticXp1 said:

Glad to see MOTW is back on it's feet, I wish good luck for all the participants.

Always good to see you around man!

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GalacticXp1
24 minutes ago, RithRake24 said:

Always good to see you around man!

Same here, MOTW missions are looking pretty good.

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boy of the cones

Newbies... It's gonna be fun to see new faces on DYOM.

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Robert17

Alright, my mission is finished. It took long because it looked pretty bad and I had to remake it from scratch.

I'll participate as well. Good luck, guys!

https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/67203

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RithRake24
1 hour ago, Robert17 said:

Alright, my mission is finished. It took long because it looked pretty bad and I had to remake it from scratch.

I'll participate as well. Good luck, guys!

https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/67203

Mission added to the main topic. Good luck!

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Axoez

damnn, 5 entry? seems like the motw advertising on the website really does help huh?

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boy of the cones

I'm sorry but I'm not gonna participate this time, I finished my mission and it keeps crashing at the objective 78 (checkpoint) and I tried to fix that, nothing is happened. I'll vote the best mission.

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RithRake24

@Luitger You are not allowed to vote for yourself. Please refer to the MOTW rules.

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The John David

So many entries? Well, gotta play all of them before I vote someone the best and give my feedbacks and reviews :D

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boy of the cones

I played these missions by those newbies and I'm having fun writing this review for them. This MOTW it's extremely weird but I guess, I had to use cheats to complete the missions aswell. It's extremely hard to choice the vote because they are all newbies. After played these 6 missions I finally decided my final vote. My vote goes to @ElectricFish's mission and I hope you'll make better missions. Hype! :santa:

 

EDIT: You shouldn't vote for yourself. Even because your vote is invalid. Just vote another mission, not yours.

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The John David

Alright! I've finished all the entries and here's my feedback and voted who's the best mission?

 

Playing It By The Book - @ElectricFish

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This mission is well-designed from the beginning to end, the storytelling is also one of my interest to understand the scrutiny, the gameplay greatly impress me enough to be always silent for the enemies, bear in mind that you have a little error on your spelling and grammars which it's fine. I want to say, Excellent work. I hope you keep this effort up. 

 

The Night Comes Down - @Luitger

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This mission is disturbing and turning into an action gunfights rather than being in silent manner. First of all. You had no object placements secure in the Area 69 so I can determine where should I go, next, all enemies I encountered are completely aware of the player from the start when I begin my assault. Second, all the dialogues are reconsider it as meme from Big Smoke best quota? Yeah, I take that as an insult. But it doesn't make everything sense and weird? Seriously, your work needs a lot of improvements and observations.

 

The Burning Papers - @Meyland12

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This mission is good, but need improvements a bit. The common error I could find is your spelling and grammars. Everything's sneaky with no weapons, making it harder to sneak past all the enemies without drawing their single attention. Good work.

 

Jethro's Car Theft - @VCFanboi

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I had my review same as Meyland12. But this is another great stealth mission you made. But lack of details, actor placements and reasonable dialogues. Nice work.

 

Madd Dogg's Mansion - @Robert17

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Well done. It has same inspiration idea as ElectricFish did in the first place. I'm more impressed you did that the player could hide from the guards. You know, it would be better to design if enemies are alerted in the middle. I could hide in the dark areas or behind the walls, preventing to look for the player. I recommended not to bother or kill all of them in one piece once I got the objective and out of my way inside of the mansion. That would be splendid! Great work.

 

Woozie's Request Remake - @YGE

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Same goes for the feedback of Night Comes Down by Luitger. This mission is a blow mind gunfight action rather than being in silent manner. The first as I encounter two guards once I'm inside of the bank, that's the only I found stealthy thing, but in the next, it became an gunfight action once I got the briefcase full of money. All guards are been facing towards me instead trying to get past them without a fight. Well, the choice I could made is to bust my way out of the bank fighting them completely straight to the entrance. Could I just go back where I came inside of the bank instead of the entrance without killing or drawing their attention?

 

My vote goes to:

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1st: @ElectricFish - Congratulations! You've earned my vote! 🥇
2nd: @Robert17 - 🥈
3rd: @Meyland12 - 🥉
4th: @VCFanboi - 
5th: @YGE
6th: @Luitger

 

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Robert17

Thanks so much for your feedback! Maybe I could've done some things better for my mission.

I'll participate in the next MOTW for sure, if the next theme isn't gonna be tough.

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Luitger

Okay first of all, my mission was rushed so I apologize for the enemies attacking you instantly. I never created a stealth Mission before. And I tried to make my mission a little bit different, not so serious because in my opinion making the mission too serious is boring and everyone else already did this. So next time I think I will just copy a mission from Mafia 1 then

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The John David

I forgot to add this post:

- For other participants I give poor feedbacks? I didn't really mean them, In fact, you did a pretty good job participating in a first time. So, just a quick advice, try reading a plenty of DYOM tutorials of making your missions more epic and realistic, you can even watch any movies to form more creative ideas? Try asking this for yourself? Is it stealth? Hijack? Survival? or something special? Make use of all these strategies anytime you want and this way, you will be a great designer soon.

 

I know you have negative consequences to comment? But let's not get ahead of ourselves? I'm just trying to test and observe everything how hard work you made this is? Just more practice and patience is needed to make it more habituate and well-designed.

 

35 minutes ago, Luitger said:

Okay first of all, my mission was rushed so I apologize for the enemies attacking you instantly. I never created a stealth Mission before. And I tried to make my mission a little bit different, not so serious because in my opinion making the mission too serious is boring and everyone else already did this. So next time I think I will just copy a mission from Mafia 1 then

It's alright to keep your mission too serious or too weird or whatever, you could just make it balance to limit those pressure so every new designers won't be bored. It's not necessary to copy someone's work. You could form many ideas starting by a scratch. Or you could play old missions that have good storytelling to give you simple idea. It's up to you to decide.

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Polski Oski

My vote goes to ElectricFish. Great Work bro! 

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Axoez
9 hours ago, Luitger said:

Okay first of all, my mission was rushed so I apologize for the enemies attacking you instantly. I never created a stealth Mission before. And I tried to make my mission a little bit different, not so serious because in my opinion making the mission too serious is boring and everyone else already did this. So next time I think I will just copy a mission from Mafia 1 then

Is it a coincidence that you are going to copy a mission from Mafia 1 and 3lectric also copied a mission from Mafia 1?

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Luitger
4 hours ago, Axoez said:

Is it a coincidence that you are going to copy a mission from Mafia 1 and 3lectric also copied a mission from Mafia 1?

No, not really. I played the missions and immediately noticed that he was coping a Mafia 1 mission, and apparently he made a great job and even won MOTW. So next time, I will try something similar like that too. But maybe not a Mafia 1 mission.

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Axoez

well congratulations ElectricFish for winning this MOTW

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ElectricFish

Thanks to everyone who voted for me, i very much appreciate it!

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RithRake24

Congratulations @ElectricFish for winning MOTW #170! You have two days to create the topic of the next MOTW. I will send you the format in DM which you need to use.

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The John David
1 hour ago, ElectricFish said:

Thanks to everyone who voted for me, i very much appreciate it!

Congratulations! Now It's your turn to decide the next MOTW theme 😊👍

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Huzaifa khan

Congrats @ElectricFish :beerhat:

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YourName_2

Congratz @ElectricFish :^:

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