CRAZY AL WARD Posted May 6, 2020 Share Posted May 6, 2020 (edited) Welcome to Jefferson State: located between the State of Cascadia & The Great Northern country of Canada. The Home of the City of Rainier in Luther County. Rainier is home to many Historical Landmarks; from the Galaxy Needle, to Lake Jefferson, Rainier has Everything you're Looking for. As for the Criminal Underworld, well... That's another story. Grand Theft Auto: Jefferson takes place in the Autumn of 2017 (After the Events of GTA 5) & centers around our 3 Protagonists: Alice, Adrien & John Their Stories play out Seperately (Similarly to GTA IV & EFLC's protagonists) until their paths eventually cross together. The Rainier Riot of Winter 2013 plays part of the story for both Alice, John & Adrien. I would like to thank (Ambient) for giving me permission to make my own alternative version of the project set in the same state, If you like the ideas: i recommend you go check their Original work. I also would like to thank my friends on the forums & discord for always supporting me. Thank You. Protagonists: Adrien Black Age: 21 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: None that he knows of Friends: Jacob, Craig, Barry Backstory: Adrien grew up in an Orphanage in the Poor parts of Rainier after his parents died in an accident. There he grew up with Jacob, Craig & Barry, together in their teenage years they got into trouble with the law: from graffiti & vandalism, to car-jackings & fights. Eventually they formed a plan to try to get out of town, but doing so would require getting some solid cash to escape with. They decide on a plan: Rob a small Fleeca branch in the winter of 2013 & get out of town. Will it work out though? Alice Burton Age: 20 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: John (Father), Sheryl (Deceased Mother) Friends: Carline, Jane, Backstory: Alice grew up in Rainier with her friends Carline & Jane in the suburbs, while her father was just a beat cop & her mother was making ends meet with an office job. She was always a good student at Shattuck High School, until the events of the winter riot of 2013. Her mother was killed by a Rioter at the mall & alice was almost next. What happend? John Burton Age: 48 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: Alice (Daughter), Sheryl (Deceased Wife) Occupation: Rainier Police Officer Friends: Officer Larry Wilson (Rainier Police Dept.), Chief Brian Carson (Rainier Police Dept.) Backstory: John Burton lived in Rainier all his life, even settled down & got married to Sheryl: The love of his life. Sheryl always helped John in his toughest times, even when things were tough for her too. Eventually they had their only child, Alice & moved into the suburbs. There he met Larry Wilson, they became friends & they both went to the Rainier Police Academy, where they passed with flying colors. All seemed like it was going well... Until the 2013 Riots happend. Deuteragonists & Main Characters: Spoiler Larry Wilson Age: 46 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: Jane Wilson (Daughter), Occupation: Rainier Police Officer Friends: Officer John Burton (Rainier Police Dept.), Chief Brian Carson (Rainier Police Dept.) Brian Carson Age: 50 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Occupation: Rainier Police Chief Family: Debra (Mentioned Wife) Friends: John Burton, Larry Wilson, Dave Norton (FIB Agent) Layne Ward Jr. Age: 23 Hometown: Ward Island, New Acadia Current Home: Rainier, Jefferson Occupation: Retired Drug Dealer Family: None in Rainier Friends: Kenny McGraw (Best Friend), John Burton, Craig Hogan Age: 20 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: None Friends: Adrien, Jacob, Barry Jacob Stone Age: 22 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: None Friends: Adrien, Craig, Barry Barry Emmerson Age: 21 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: None Friends: Adrien, Craig, Jacob Jane Wilson Age: 21 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: Larry Wilson (Father), Lisa Wilson (Mother), Harry Wilson (Brother) Friends: Alice, Carline Carline Rivers Age: 19 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Family: Kate Rivers (Mother) Friends: Alice, Jane Side Characters: Spoiler Dave Norton Age: Late 40s/Early 50s Home: Los Santos, San Andreas Occupation: FIB Agent Family: Unnamed Ex-wife Friends: John Burton, Layne Jr., Unknown Caller (most likely Michael De Santa as a Reference) Mitch Age: Early 50s Hometown: San Fierro, San Andreas Occupation: Angels Of Death drug dealer Family: Krystal (Girlfriend) Friends: Many members of the Angels Of Death MC, Derrick Scholz, Joseph Scholz, Paul O'Sullivan Antagonists: Spoiler Main Antagonists Joseph Scholz Age: 29 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Occupation: Member of Rainier's white supremacist gang Family: Derrick Scholz (Uncle), Unnamed Mother, Friends: Mitch, Paul O'Sullivan, Otto Derrick Scholz Age: Mid-50s Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Occupation: Leader of Rainier's white supremacist gang Family: Joseph Scholz (Nephew), Joseph's unnamed mother (Sister) Friends: Otto, Mitch, Paul O'Sullivan Detective Paul O'Sullivan Age: 49 Hometown: Rainier, Jefferson Occupation: Crooked police detective in the Rainier Police Dept. Family: Unnamed Ex-wife Friends: Mitch, Derrick, Otto, Joseph, Brian More Characters to be inroduced in future updates These are the Weapons that the player can get their hands on in Grand Theft Auto: Jefferson Melee Weapons: Baseball Bat Crowbar Fist Flashlight Golf Club Hammer Hatchet Hockey Stick Knife Machete Nightstick Pipe Wrench Pool Cue Shovel Switchblade Handguns: Pistol (Beretta 92FS) Combat Pistol (S&W 5906) Heavy Pistol (1911A1) Ceramic Pistol (Glock 22) Pistol .50 (Desert Eagle) SNS Pistol (AMT Backup) Double-Action Revolver (S&W Model 10) Combat Revolver (S&W Model 19) Heavy Revolver (Taurus Raging Bull) Flare Gun (Orion 12 gauge Flare Gun) Stun Gun (Tazer) Shotguns: Pump Shotgun (Remington 870 Police Folding Stock) Highwayman Shotgun (Mossberg 500 Cruiser) Sawed-Off Shotgun (Sawn Off Double-Barrel Shotgun) Assault Shotgun (AA12) Bullpup Shotgun (Kel-Tec KSG) Sweeper Shotgun (Street Sweeper Shotgun) Submachine Guns & LMGs Micro SMG (Micro UZI) SMG (H&K MP5) Mini-SMG (Scorpion) Machine Pistol (Tec-9) Gusenberg Sweeper (M1928A1 Tommy Gun) Heavy MG (M60) Assault Rifles: Assault Rifle (AK-47/Type 56) Carbine Rifle (AR-15) Compact Rifle (Compact AK-47/Type 56) Marksman Carbine (Ruger AC 556-F) Special Carbine (FN Scar-L) Sniper Rifles: Hunting Rifle (Remington 700) Heavy Sniper (Barrett M82) Marksman Rifle (Ruger Mini-14) Sniper Rifle (AW-F) Heavy Weapons: Compact Grenade Launcher (M79 Grenade Launcher) Firework Launcher (Home-made Fireworks Launcher) Grenade Launcher (Milkor MGL) Rocket Launcher (RPG-7) Thrown Weapons: Grenade Jerry Can Molotov Cocktail Pipe Bomb Snow Ball (Avaliable Only during Prologue) Sticky Bomb These are the Many vehicles you can get your hands on in the State of Jefferson Motorcycles: Spoiler Akuma Angel Bagger Bati 801 Bati 801RR Daemon Daemon (A.O.D.) Double T Enduro Faggio Faggio Sport Freeway Hakuchou Hakuchou Drag Hexer Innovation Lycan Nemesis Nightblade (1st Gen) Nightblade (2nd Gen) NRG 900F NRG 900RR PCJ 600 Revenant Ruffian Sanchez Vader Wayfarer Wolfsbane Zombie Zombie (A.O.D.) Compacts: Spoiler Blista Blista Kanjo Cadrona Dilettante Issi Issi Classic Matheson Panto Prairie Rhapsody Uranus Coupes: Spoiler Cognoscenti Cabrio Fortune Sentinel Sentinel XS Zion Zion Cabrio Sedans: Spoiler Admiral Arrow Asea Asterope Brigham Chavos Cognoscenti Emperor Emperor (Beater) Esperanto Exemplar Felon Fugitive Glendale Ingot Intruder Jackal Lokus Marbelle Merit Oracle Oracle XS PMP-600 Premier Primo Regina Regina (Beater) Romero Hearse Schafter (1st Gen) Schafter (2nd Gen) Solair Stanier (1st Gen) Stanier (2nd Gen) Stratum Stretch Super Diamond Surge Tailgater Warrener Washington Sports: Spoiler 8F Drafter 9F 9F Cabrio Banshee Blista Compact Buffalo Buffalo S Carbonizzare Comet Comet SR Coquette Elegy Elegy RH8 F620 Feltzer Fusilade Futo Gladiator Jester Jester Classic Kuruma Lynx Massacro Omnis Penumbra Sentinel Classic Sugoi Sugoi Kanjo Sultan Sultan Classic Sultan RS Super GT Turismo V-STR ZR-380 Sports Classics: Spoiler 190Z Ardent Casco Cheetah Classic Deluxo Fagaloa GT500 Infernus Classic JB 700 Mamba Manana Monroe Nebula Nebula Turbo Peyote Rapid GT Classic Retinue (1st Gen) Retinue (2nd Gen) Savestra Stinger Stinger GT Torero Tornado Turismo Classic Viseris Zion Classic Supers: Spoiler Adder Bullet Cheetah Emerus Entity XF FMJ GP1 Infernus Penetrator Reaper T20 Tempesta Turismo R Tyrus Vacca Voltic Zentorno Zorrusso Muscles: Spoiler Admiral LE Blade Buccaneer (1st Gen) 2nd Gen) (3rd Gen) Chino Clique Deviant Dominator Dominator GT Dominator GTX Dukes Ellie Faction Gauntlet Gauntlet Classic Gauntlet Hellfire Hermes Hotknife Hustler Impaler Merit SS Nightshade Phoenix Picador Ruiner Sabre 550SS Sabre Chumash Sabre Turbo Savanna Slamvan (Pickup) (Van) Stallion Tampa Tulip Tulip SS Vamos Virgo Vigero Voodoo Yosemite Classic Off-Roads: Spoiler Bifta Bison Blazer Bobcat Bodhi Caracara SWB Caracara XL Dubsta 6X6 Dune Buggy Injection Kamacho Marshall Outlaw Rancher Rancher XL Rebel Rebel (Beater) Riata Sadler Sandking SWB Sandking XL SUVs: Spoiler Alamo Alpine Baller Baller (2013) BeeJay Classic BeeJay XL Cavalcade Cavalcade (2nd Gen) Dubsta Executioner FQ 2 Granger Gresley Hartwell Habanero Huntley Sport Landstalker Landstalker XT Mesa Patriot Radius Rebla GTS Rocoto Scout Seminole Seminole Classic Serrano Toros XLS Vans: Spoiler Boxville Burrito Camper Gang Burrito (Civilian) Gang Burrito (A.O.D.) Journey Minivan Moonbeam Mr. Whoopie Ontario Ontario Classic Pony Rumpo Speedo Steed 1500 Steed 3500 Surfer Taco Van Youga Youga Classic Industrial: Spoiler Dock Handler Dozer Dump Flatbed Guardian Mixer (1st Gen) (2nd Gen) Rubble Tipper (1st Gen) (2nd Gen) Commercial: Spoiler Benson Biff Hauler Mule Packer Phantom Pounder Stockade Utility: Spoiler Airtug Caddy Caddy (Civilian) Docktug Fieldmaster Forklift Lawn Mower Scrap Truck Tow Truck (Slamvan Base) Tow Truck (Yankee Base) Utility Truck (Crane) Utility Truck (Box) Utility Truck (Van) Military: Spoiler APC Barracks Barracks Semi Crusader Rhino Tank Emergency: Spoiler Ambulance DOA Executioner FIB Buffalo FIB Granger Fire Truck Lifeguard Granger Police Bike Police Buffalo Police Cruiser Police Interceptor Police Maverick Police Riot Police Transporter Police Predator Prison Bus RCV Unmarked Cruiser Services: Spoiler Airport Bus Bus Dashound Rental Shuttle Bus Taxi Tourbus Trashmaster Cycles: Spoiler BMX Cruiser Endurex Race Bike Fixter Mountain Bike Scorcher Tri-Cycles Race Bike Whippet Race Bike Planes: Spoiler Atomic Blimp Besra Blimp Cargo Plane Cuban 800 Dodo Duster Hydra Jet Luxor Mallard Mammatus Miljet Mogul Nimbus P-996 LAZER Shamal Titan Velum Velum 5-Seater Xero Blimp Helicopters: Spoiler Air Ambulance Annihilator Buzzard Buzzard Attack Chopper Cargobob FH-1 Hunter Frogger Helitours Maverick Maverick News Frogger Skylift Valkyrie Valkyrie Attack Chopper Boats: Spoiler Dinghy Jetmax Marquis Reefer Seashark Speeder Squalo Suntrap Toro Tropic Tropic Classic Tug Expect more on this page sometime tomorrow, until then... Good night & stay safe. Edited May 7, 2020 by CRAZY AL WARD Jeansowaty, GTA-Biker, MyNameIsNotImportantBro and 1 other 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobeni Posted May 6, 2020 Share Posted May 6, 2020 (edited) I just find it very hard to believe that a girl fresh out of high school would make for a convincing GTA protagonist tbh I understand that it's a work in progress as well but you should also consider writing up a more concise summary for the concept, because right now I'm failing to grasp the main ideas and themes. As for the story itself, it just feels a little too derivative of GTA IV and V, just that now you have kids in their early 20s rather than a group of hardened criminals. More context on the 2013 riots is also needed, since I assume that would be an important event that would shape the narrative of this concept. Edited May 6, 2020 by DownInTheHole universetwisters 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRAZY AL WARD Posted May 6, 2020 Author Share Posted May 6, 2020 11 hours ago, DownInTheHole said: I just find it very hard to believe that a girl fresh out of high school would make for a convincing GTA protagonist tbh I understand that it's a work in progress as well but you should also consider writing up a more concise summary for the concept, because right now I'm failing to grasp the main ideas and themes. As for the story itself, it just feels a little too derivative of GTA IV and V, just that now you have kids in their early 20s rather than a group of hardened criminals. More context on the 2013 riots is also needed, since I assume that would be an important event that would shape the narrative of this concept. I am aware of this, i just didn't have enough time to continue working on it last night. I shall finish working on it later & thanks for pointing these things out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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