ThatDYOMdude1 32 Posted October 5, 2020 Share Posted October 5, 2020 Hey sonny could you review my mission? Mission: https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/66646 Don't forget to install the SD too. Yasa Shakeel 1 Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted October 10, 2020 Author Share Posted October 10, 2020 Okay. I'll record and review missions ASAP. Link to post Share on other sites
zakarum5835 736 Posted October 10, 2020 Share Posted October 10, 2020 What about Codename Q4? Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted October 12, 2020 Author Share Posted October 12, 2020 On 10/10/2020 at 7:32 PM, boy of the cones said: What about Codename Q4? Codename Q4 will be recorded aswell. Just be patient guys zakarum5835 1 Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted October 17, 2020 Author Share Posted October 17, 2020 Missionpack made by: @Yasa Shakeel Link to post Share on other sites
Polski Oski 165 Posted October 22, 2020 Share Posted October 22, 2020 Yo Sonny. If you want you can Review my Mesra Mission https://mega.nz/#!jltX1YAS!n4cgFI6TNvjknRoIf0Jx1dJnBhPKqP244ZBrxvn82i0 You may know it from PSD xd Link to post Share on other sites
Galeb 142 Posted November 9, 2020 Share Posted November 9, 2020 Let's try this: MODLOADER: http://www.mediafire.com/file/il9soehgo7t2amx/Codename+-+E.U.C.K.rar/file OPERATION I- The U-Boat : http://www.mediafire.com/file/4zphcggy7zsoq6v/The+U+Boat.zip/file If you are interested in 2nd operation, feel free to msg me : ) Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 On 11/9/2020 at 2:51 PM, Galeb said: Let's try this: MODLOADER: http://www.mediafire.com/file/il9soehgo7t2amx/Codename+-+E.U.C.K.rar/file OPERATION I- The U-Boat : http://www.mediafire.com/file/4zphcggy7zsoq6v/The+U+Boat.zip/file If you are interested in 2nd operation, feel free to msg me : ) Thanks for another mission to review. I'll walkthrough it asap RithRake24 1 Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted November 12, 2020 Author Share Posted November 12, 2020 Another one: RithRake24 1 Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted November 13, 2020 Author Share Posted November 13, 2020 RithRake24 1 Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted November 17, 2020 Author Share Posted November 17, 2020 Aymunz and M.B. Kovas 2 Link to post Share on other sites
The John David 767 Posted November 19, 2020 Share Posted November 19, 2020 (edited) Hi! Is this topic active? If it is? Then can you review my mission: Click Here... Edited November 19, 2020 by The John David Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted November 25, 2020 Author Share Posted November 25, 2020 Mission made by @The John David The John David 1 Link to post Share on other sites
The John David 767 Posted November 26, 2020 Share Posted November 26, 2020 (edited) 8 hours ago, SonnyDR said: Mission made by @The John David Thank you pal for accepting my request! Allow me to clarify something about the cons you listed on your video description: Cons: - Some grammar mistakes. It's commonly to have mistakes because there are some issues typing a character either it's supported or unsupported using DYOM. I used the Notepad ++ to completely edit and fix some lines that aren't making sense through the story. I literally did my best to comprehend everything, but If you notice like this, try ignoring them. (Using the "DYOMTemp.txt" is pointless to fix everything, unless it's making another paragraph line that messed up the cutscenes / timeout info.) - (8:24) Well. That garage doors aren't looking great in this place. You could other objects than this. I guess you're right. That wasn't supposed the objects I was looking for to determine the height and measurements. But due of time issues. I didn't have a choice but to use the simple object to shed out the open areas inside of the warehouse. I can do better than that. But it's alright. - (10:00) We got too much time here. Well, duh, the three introduction texts makes a point for designers to pay attention. First of all, this mission focused in many sneak kills to reach the player's objective. So it's recommended to take time observing the area and enemy's presence patiently. Second, since it has a completed one-hundred (100) objectives to do. You already know how long this mission has designed. Instead of rushing and letting your guard down, try examining the enemy where they are facing to avoid yourself being killed. As for the cops. Yeah that makes it harder to get past them without killing one. (Since A.I. peds are dumber to move and kill you, you can rush ahead.) Edited November 26, 2020 by The John David Link to post Share on other sites
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SonnyDR 78 Posted December 8, 2020 Author Share Posted December 8, 2020 Aymunz and zakarum5835 2 Link to post Share on other sites
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Thunder0515 20 Posted January 2 Share Posted January 2 Hey, Sonny! I am working on my first mission pack. I have currently only released a prologue for it. Hope to see your review shortly! Link here! Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted January 2 Author Share Posted January 2 10 hours ago, Thunder0515 said: Hey, Sonny! I am working on my first mission pack. I have currently only released a prologue for it. Hope to see your review shortly! Link here! Done. I've recorded your mission. Thunder0515 1 Link to post Share on other sites
VikingEVM 409 Posted January 9 Share Posted January 9 (edited) Hello there Sonny! :] I'd like to submit this "old" Storyline i did for reviewing, so i can have some useful feedback in case i find the time to do something like continuing it and maybe remastering the first Act 🌚https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/64604 (don't read the comment below, it's spoiler) Edited January 9 by VikingEVM Link to post Share on other sites
lascha2nd 102 Posted February 15 Share Posted February 15 You still alive homie? Link to post Share on other sites
ThatDYOMdude1 32 Posted February 15 Share Posted February 15 31 minutes ago, lascha2nd said: You still alive homie? I think he is, He just isn't very active on the forums for some reason. Link to post Share on other sites
M316 114 Posted February 15 Share Posted February 15 Yo Sonny can u review my MOTW 175 entry mission Operation Magma? Here is the link: https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/68371 Have fun!!! Link to post Share on other sites
SonnyDR 78 Posted February 24 Author Share Posted February 24 On 2/15/2021 at 11:11 PM, M316 said: Yo Sonny can u review my MOTW 175 entry mission Operation Magma? Here is the link: https://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/68371 Have fun!!! M316 1 Link to post Share on other sites
M316 114 Posted February 24 Share Posted February 24 2 hours ago, SonnyDR said: Ok so just watched the video and would like to share some of my thoughts regarding your points: 1- I am not new to DYOM, yes I am an unfamiliar name but I started making missions in early 2019 and eventually took a layoff from mid 2019 till now. 2- Cutscene capturing is something I am working and need improvement so I appreciate you pointing it out for me, however the part where it goes through the stallion was intentional, it was meant as a reveal to the character's disguise. 3- the unlimited ammo thing is my fault tbh and I should start implementing some limitations, however as for the shared weapons well I was on 100 limit so there wasn't anything I can do 4-As for the grammar like u and ur, again because of dialogue limits, and ik some people said to add more cutscenes but then again I was on 100 or 99 as far as I can remember, and no there is no shorter way to explain the plot clearly, otherwise it would result in some odd comments and incoherent dialogue for me which people don't understand. But I will try and keep my eye on it to my best abilities. Thanks again for your time and review, looking forward to your work, also sidenote you should review every MOTW missions from last week in a video and tell us who you would vote for, cheers pal. SonnyDR 1 Link to post Share on other sites