MOTW #158

[Fahad Eabd]

Here is My Dyom Entry :

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And For Sounds:

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Theme:  Betrayal
 

 

Edited March 26, 2020 by Fahad Eabd

[Roxie]

Extended deadline for 4 hours, need some time for my mission

[Roxie]

Loose Ends My mission is in. Remember no russian  I used high frequency sounds Be Advised keep your pc volume low, real low, 50 percent is recommended anyways Voting is on ^^, have fun guys. Good luck to all participants  

[Polski Oski]

22 minutes ago, Roxie said:

Loose Ends My mission is in. Remember no russian  I used high frequency sounds Be Advised keep your pc volume low, real low, 50 percent is recommended anyways Voting is on ^^, have fun guys. Good luck to all participants  

Nice. I didn't expected you to participate in your own MOTW! 

[Polski Oski]

Okay, I played other MOTW missions here and here's my review for every here.

 

Loose Ends by Roxie

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Okay, I can say that this mission was most laggy mission here. Object placement was hell of a good job here. The whole Makarov safehouse was very well prepared too. All SD's, skins and map. It worked very good. But there are things that didn't. First of all, skins. Skins are supposed to be not required in MOTW and it looks like they are requiredd here. Also, some cutscene positions doesn't make sense for me. Those cutscenes at the end are very very weird positioned. I didn't liked the Ambush scene too. We don't see our enemies in the smoke and one of them is too high to be seen. All enemies are very hard to kill and those grenade spam might get you killed very fast. I used cheats here because it was too hard for me. 

What do I think about this mission? For me, this mission could be better. It uses a lot of assets and it makes game possible to crash at some point.

I give this mission 7/10 Nice cutscenes at the beginning, good SD's and Perfect object placement! Good job, Roxie!

 

One City 2 Godfathers by GKHEAT

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Next mission here. 2 guys "ruling" LS. I must say that the whole betrayal have good point here. Also these 2 guys working with different gangs. But many things are not nice for me. First of all, player may not know what's happening at the start. 2 guys destroying everything. After that we got enjoyable quotes from them in the car. And the betrayal scene. We got chased by GSF and we have to get to Vagos territory. We got plan, and execute it wwithout screwing it up. And it's easy to screw it up. Our enemies have too much health, too powerful weapons and our comrades don't help us much. We are alone in the fight. Also, when second wave attacks, they spawn right next to player! It should not go like this! Player can start to panic and get killed instantly. I used cheats here too because it was almost impossible to survive this mess. There were good object placement too but not that much. Also, we don't have any health or armor pickups during the fight, which makes it harder a lot. Our main opponent has too powerful weapon too. After the fight we have acctually very nice cutscene! We see them talking and we are killing our target. SD's for single objective were nice but music was... mehh. I didn't liked it at the beginning. It was enjoyable only during our way to the GSF territory.

My opinion? That mission had potential but didn't used it. 

I will give it 6/10 GKHEAT tried and made something from this but it's not perfect mission. But you did well here too!

 

P.O.R.T.A.L by Mikul

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From all those other missions, I liked this the most. We got interesting story about group of... some guys attacking the Research lab? It looked weird at the start but it got better later. So we have interesting tasks here. Clearing out the base was normal. Nothing special. But I liked that rope part. Flying with jetpack to connect the rope with the roof to let our guys come across. Killing soldiers... Normal thing in DYOM. Then rushing through the lab and looking for something. That thing was Portal Gun! I didn't expected that. Then we got one guy betray us and we need to kill him. Simple. I liked that teleporting part. Something really new for DYOM! That looked very good! Then killing that guy and mission ends. Ending could be better in my opinion. But there are bad things too. Some pedestrians can spawn because there's bench used as a rope part... It looked weird. Then we got strange map changing. Once we are in the Area 69, once in SF Military bay. It's easy too see there so... Do something with it in the future. Our comrades can rush into enemies without us knowing and get surrounded and killed. Now our enemies. Some of them have too much accuracy but it's a lot better than in other missions with them.

What can I say? It was really good mission here, Mikul.

I give it 8/10 There are some bugs, but mission itself is really good. Great Job, Mikul!

 

And last. War is Betrayel by Fahad Ebad

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Now this mission is I think the worst mission here. But first things first. We are being tasked with getting Nuclear Codes and escaping with them. To be honest, Writing is very bad here. Every word (almost) is with big letter and there are not special marks for them. We don't even know our partner. No object placement. Only explosive barrels and some objects inside the house. Mission is easy and enemies doesn't really do much damage to us. When I played it, Hunter objective got... bugged. Pilot got run over by his own helicopter and I had to walk there. We have infinite ammo for every gun in mission. And how did we get that Minigun? After destroying that Hunter, our partner gets shot and dies. We are escaping with a plane to the base and we get instantly killed by our commander. We get some quotes and that's it. Mission ends. But I really liked the SD's here. these were nice addition to the mission. Also, we got nice effects like our enemy and partner getting killed with a lot of blood being spilled in slow motion. Also, we got nice task at the beginning. Coordinating killing 2 targets with player shooting the left one and our partner shooting right one. It looked nice. But nice cutscenes, SD's and some nice objectives is not good enough.

My opinion? Worst mission here which looked like from a beginner. But the whole idea and some good points saved it a little bit.

I will give it 6/10 too. It was not perfect but not bad too. Worst is for this MOTW. Not all missions ever made. Some mistakes were made but I expect improving from Fahad. You did well here too! Good luck in the future and improve your missions with better quality to make them look better!

And who I will vote for? We will see about that. I'm not reviewing my own mission so I think someone else will take care of it soon 

Good luck to other participants!

[zakarum5835]

Voted for GKHeat. Best of luck to everyone.

[Huzaifa khan]

 

@GKHEAT Impressive mission man, I also a die hard hard fan of classic gang war missions, and you showed the betrayal between Mike & Trey with perfection. It can be more better and interesting in some points, but still I appreciate your work. Hope you make missions like that again. 4/5 

 

Spoiler

- Now You're My New Gang Partner! 

 

Edited March 28, 2020 by Huzaifa khan

[Polski Oski]

My vote goes to Mikul. Good Job bro! 

[GKHEAT]

Thanks to all my voter homies.

I appreciate y'll love and support.

 

3 hours ago, Huzaifa khan said:

 

@GKHEAT Impressive mission man, I also a die hard hard fan of classic gang war missions, and you showed the betrayal between Mike & Trey with perfection. It can be more better and interesting in some points, but still I appreciate your work. Hope you make missions like that again. 4/5 

 

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- Now You're My New Gang Partner! 

 

Thanks Huzaifa bro

Much love 4 Gangsta

Edited March 28, 2020 by GKHEAT

[Polski Oski]

I think that Erax vote doesn't count. He has only 9 content made, not 20 

[RithRake24]

4 hours ago, Polski Oski said:

I think that Erax vote doesn't count. He has only 9 content made, not 20 

Correct. The only exception to this rule is if he participates, he can vote too. But in this edition he cannot vote since he doesn't have 20 content count neither has he participated.

[Huzaifa khan]

Congratulations bro! 

[RithRake24]

Congrats on your win @GKHEAT! Now, think of a great theme!

[GKHEAT]

Thanks

Will start the new contest soon.

[Roxie]

Congratulations GKHEAT the winner of this week MOTW,
and thanks to other designers for participating in the contest making this motw active and possible. It probably would have been even better if i'd been more committed to my mission from the start I know those cutscenes were really weird positioned especially that ambush scene ngl haha billiard ball coming out of nowhere, lets just say its something that i cant quite make sense of xD,ending was made in rush. Kudos to Gkheat for winning the motw give us a great theme ^^.

Edited March 29, 2020 by Roxie