MOTW #151

[Huzaifa khan]

6 hours ago, Aymunz said:

How long does it take for you?

Objects setting took alot of time. I finish my designing (Lengthy Missions) in Consecutive 6 hours playtime. Just Kinda LAZY! 

Edited January 28, 2020 by Huzaifa khan

[VikingEVM]

Trying to make the poll but the sh*t is f*cking bugged

[zakarum5835]

1 hour ago, VikingEVM said:

Trying to make the poll but the sh*t is f*cking bugged

You can make another topic about votings or something else. 

[VikingEVM]

Poll created, voting deadline extended to January 30 at 12:00 given the delay in starting the poll caused by forum issues

[zeko]

15 hours ago, Aymunz said:

Once again, I missed the train.

Nice missions guys! I liked "Cabin in The Wood" . But "Parasite" takes the cake for me. Even though It doesn't go well enough with the theme.

 

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I'm curious, how do yall manage to finish the missions in time? It takes about 3 hours for me to make a mission with 3 minutes  play time. How long does it take for you?

hey thanks! just to let you know:

sometimes, making missions can take an entire day depending on the gameplay, cutscene - etc. mostly, it takes me four/five hours to make a mission.

 

DON'T READ BEFORE YOU PLAY "PARASITE".

 

 

the mission was made in order to represent fear and trauma during a war. i wanted to include an "better" story, to make it more interesting - even the names in the mission symbolize their actions.

 

 

Edited January 28, 2020 by it's poundcake time

[Huzaifa khan]

Parasite 

very well deigned mission. I love the way the player hallucinated and eyes blinking Cutsene is the best part of entire mission. (For me).

And the boxes route to get to the top is very well made!

Background track is perfectly fitted! (For High end experience)  

 

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Rating : 4.5/5

 

Cabin In The Woods

DroidX, your missions are always best and respectable. Your (Bio Out Break one of the best) When you beat me & Galactic in MOTW # 100. 

BTW, Cabin in the woods, quiet nice name with extraordinary hot CHICK involved in the mission. ( I'm just lovin' her! xD) 

On the other hand, Old Junkie is always known to be a great legendary zombie, rather than old bald mysterious asshole. So yes, that was cool ! 

But unfortunately, the gameplay is too short, story is no doubt completely catching the atmosphere. (EPIC).

Ending & cutsenes everything is very good, but kinda short mission in (My opinion)

Good luck for your upcoming mission!  

 

Spoiler

Rating : 3.5/5

 

Edited January 28, 2020 by Huzaifa khan

[DroidX]

1 hour ago, Huzaifa khan said:

Parasite 

very well deigned mission. I love the way the player hallucinated and eyes blinking Cutsene is the best part of entire mission. (For me).

And the boxes route to get to the top is very well made!

Background track is perfectly fitted! (For High end experience)  

 

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Rating : 4.5/5

 

Cabin In The Woods

DroidX, your missions are always best and respectable. Your (Bio Out Break one of the best) When you beat me & Galactic in MOTW # 100. 

BTW, Cabin in the woods, quiet nice name with extraordinary hot CHICK involved in the mission. ( I'm just lovin' her! xD) 

On the other hand, Old Junkie is always known to be a great legendary zombie, rather than old bald mysterious asshole. So yes, that was cool ! 

But unfortunately, the gameplay is too short, story is no doubt completely catching the atmosphere. (EPIC).

Ending & cutsenes everything is very good, but kinda short mission in (My opinion)

Good luck for your upcoming mission!  

 

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Rating : 3.5/5

 

I appreciate the rating. and of course I plan on making more missions this time around

[Little Bear]

My Mission Review for MOTW #151

 

Zeko

Parasite: Liked the camera movement, and actors. but I dont think it fits the theme that well since it takes place back in the american revolution. also have to say that the ending was a little fast and would have liked to see what happens next

7/10

 

DroidX

Cabin in the Woods: It starts off pretty well, and really like the camera angles. 3 teenagers going off to this creepy cabin. I seen this before plenty of times, but it got me going for more with that ending

9/10

 

My Vote goes to DroidX

[CJ Running Dawg]

I don't wanna say anthing bad about people voting, they vote for who they want. But again for some reason I feel like people here can't actually analyze missions.

 

First Rift was put aside now again Cabin in the Woods is winning over the other mission which was way better designed.

 

I mean look, both these missions are cute but how in the world is Paraside losing by so much?

 

No offence to anybody again. I feel like people just click on vote randomly.

Edited January 29, 2020 by CJmamen

[LordStarship]

1 hour ago, CJ Running Dawg said:

I don't wanna say anthing bad about people voting, they vote for who they want. But again for some reason I feel like people here can't actually analyze missions.

 

First Rift was put aside now again Cabin in the Woods is winning over the other mission which was way better designed.

 

I mean look, both these missions are cute but how in the world is Paraside losing by so much?

 

No offence to anybody again. I feel like people just click on vote randomly.

They have their own opinions about the mission. Yeah, you may like Rift, but others found Menace is more fun. You may like Parasite, but others found Cabin in The Woods is more like it. 

 

If you say "Oh, both of them were really good at creating missions back in th past, they are seniors so we must vote for them", well it's not really the case. I still remember the comeback of Huzaifa in my MOTW was beaten by RithRake24, a new really awesome designer. The vote is subjective and nobody knows who will win as they have their own preferences even though they have been contributing on the DYOM community for so long.

 

Oh, and by the way, it's 4 vs 4. I'll play the missions then since i am real busy rn.

[CJ Running Dawg]

Since I voted for it yeah.. it's 4v4

 

If people btw are just voting after reading the names, then this may be one reason MOTW is dying.

[GalacticXp1]

DroidX's mission

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Superior in every single way when it comes to the Theme, main player has teenager friends they hang out together they go on a dangerous adventure and pay the consequences.

 

Zeko's mission

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This mission had some good work put in to it, but does not have anything to do with teenagers and does not fit the Theme, it's pretty much war which was last weeks MOTW.

 

[Aymunz]

I can see why people would vote for "Cabin in the woods" and ditch "Parasite". "Cabin" is all about teens, while the only thing "teeny" about "Parasite" is the main character's age. 

[Huzaifa khan]

4 on 4.... Dead!

[LordStarship]

Voted on Cabin. I really can't feel any horror in that but the mission itself is quite amazing. Even though it's really simple and have some grammatical errors which i myself don't like, Cabin was a real good mission which captures teenagers life as best as it can. Though i don't like the short length, it's presentation is quite great.

 

Why i didn't vote for Parasite? Just like how Galactic and Aymunz said, the mission itself doesn't quite capture the teenager theme as perfect as Cabin. It's real theme is War/Action theme, whereas Edward you'll help the American soldiers to defeat the British. However, props to Venom who always makes really good mission for MOTW. So sorry m8, the mission itself is really amazing and awesome, better than Cabin, but you forgot the main theme: Teenagers! 

 

Congrats to DroidX! Give us a good theme!

 

To make sure that i'm not biased towards Droid, i'll state it here. The main thing you should focus in MOTW is the Theme. If you want to create a mission for MOTW, try to capture the main theme as best as possible, except if the theme was not supposed to be a genre, like for example my theme which was Wang Cars, where you can design literally everything but in Wang Cars. This theme means it must be Teenagers genre, so the mission must capture the teenager aspect as best as possible. I sincerely hope you guys understand why i voted for Droid and not for Venom. I like both of their missions, but i personally like Venom's more. Sadly, it lacks of Teenagers aspect makes me lose my vote. So sorry, Venom.

[zeko]

congratulations to the winner! but i'm also not afraid to state about my mission.

 

 

first off, the mission theme has connection to teenager's physique. fear and trauma are both common especially in WARS - not to mention they lose their temper easily and can be moody overtime. 

 

if you do some quick research, you can see that even 10 year old boys participated in the American Revolutionary War. plus, the reason i included hallucinations is simple - they are symbolic to teenager's fear, whom he lost his family during the war.

 

brown and blue colors are symbolic as well. blue represents wealth, which you can clearly see on the soldiers' success. second, brown color represents security. which is exactly the protagonist's skin, along with his name which defines a "rich guard". that's why his clothes look more modern than most teenagers. 

 

again, congratulations.

[LordStarship]

23 minutes ago, it's poundcake time said:

congratulations to the winner! but i'm also not afraid to state about my mission.

 

 

 

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first off, the mission theme has connection to teenager's physique. fear and trauma are both common especially in WARS - not to mention they lose their temper easily and can be moody overtime. 

 

 

if you do some quick research, you can see that even 10 year old boys participated in the American Revolutionary War. plus, the reason i included hallucinations is simple - they are symbolic to teenager's fear, whom he lost his family during the war.

 

brown and blue colors are symbolic as well. blue represents wealth, which you can clearly see on the soldiers' success. second, brown color represents security. which is exactly the protagonist's skin, along with his name which defines a "rich guard". that's why his clothes look more modern than most teenagers. 

 

again, congratulations.

 

 

I see. I overthink the mission and thought that it was only a boy who had a trauma because the war and nothing else.

 

Still, though, there's a better way to capture the teenager's physique, which is to make a mission where the player controls a teenager with PTSD, in which case will clearly show that teenagers' mental state is really easy to hurt, which leads to the player may occasionally try commiting suicide or something. That way, i'm certain that everyone will get the trauma and fear you wanted to capture in this new mission. With your designing skill, you'd be able to win this MOTW.

 

The mission is based on a teenager who has a trauma and fear of war, but the mission is designed to be action-ish and a real heavy war genre. Aside of how you're able to implement the symbolic colors which amazed me that i didn't even think of that before, you forgot to ditch out more of the war or action scene to add more to the trauma/fear scene which will make everyone feel what does PTSD feel like.

 

Again, congrats to both of the participants and to voters. I'm sure that Venom will make a much better mission in the next MOTW, so don't lose hope! I really appreciate your bravery to accept your loss and to explain to us about the mission!

[zeko]

3 minutes ago, LordStarship said:

I see. I overthink the mission and thought that it was only a boy who had a trauma because the war and nothing else.

 

Still, though, there's a better way to capture the teenager's physique, which is to make a mission where the player controls a teenager with PTSD, in which case will clearly show that teenagers' mental state is really easy to hurt, which leads to the player may occasionally try commiting suicide or something. That way, i'm certain that everyone will get the trauma and fear you wanted to capture in this new mission. With your designing skill, you'd be able to win this MOTW.

 

The mission is based on a teenager who has a trauma and fear of war, but the mission is designed to be action-ish and a real heavy war genre. Aside of how you're able to implement the symbolic colors which amazed me that i didn't even think of that before, you forgot to ditch out more of the war or action scene to add more to the trauma/fear scene which will make everyone feel what does PTSD feel like.

 

Again, congrats to both of the participants and to voters. I'm sure that Venom will make a much better mission in the next MOTW, so don't lose hope! I really appreciate your bravery to accept your loss and to explain to us about the mission!

i had many ideas. some even included suicide. but i ran out of objectives, so i had to scrap it. waiting for the next MOTW, which hopefully goes a theme i will like so i can create "Parasite 2", which includes more psychological horror

[LordStarship]

2 minutes ago, it's poundcake time said:

i had many ideas. some even included suicide. but i ran out of objectives, so i had to scrap it. waiting for the next MOTW, which hopefully goes a theme i will like so i can create "Parasite 2", which includes more psychological horror

Ahh yeah. The 100 objectives limit has made many awesome misions cancelled. So sorry hearing that also happens to you. In the meantime, i'm waiting for Parasite 2!

[zeko]

Just now, LordStarship said:

Ahh yeah. The 100 objectives limit has made many awesome misions cancelled. So sorry hearing that also happens to you. In the meantime, i'm waiting for Parasite 2!

that always happens to me. also:

 

 

the reason i included parasite is simple - an different organism lives in a person's body and splits their status in half. this is proved in the behavior, and the "betrayal".

 

 

[Aymunz]

Well, congratulations @Droidx! Give us a good theme

[Huzaifa khan]

Congrats @DroidX just make perfect theme.

[Bekapro87]

I didn't finish my mission,but anyways congrats to @DroidX for winning.

Just make a good theme.

[zakarum5835]

Give us a great theme, I trust you

[DroidX]

Thanks for Voting for My Mission! I'll be adding the new theme Friday Morning