MOTW #149 - It's voting time!

[LordStarship]

5 minutes ago, RyanAB said:

I cast my vote to LordStarship! Good job bro! 

Thank you so much, Ryan! Appreciate your vote!

Also, @XzeuX, Lotus' vote doesn't count. He has 0 content and probably a new account that was just made here.

[Polski Oski]

44 minutes ago, Martin_Strada said:

Another week, same sh*t, different entry/host. The designers are the same, how surprising. Any of you might think I'am aggressive little bit, but I know that you're having good holidays and beautiful snow, snowflakes outside in your country (maybe?). Well my town doesn't have a snow still, but enough for offtopic. It's time to review the missions and decide which is the best homies!

 

And of course, we gonna start with our Italiano designer Dtron, who's trying so hard to get the win of this entry

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...but to be honest, this mission ain't the best out of all those entries, but it's better than the other ones, not gonna spoil it right now. But let's talk bout his mission: Music Label Corruption, well first time I saw this mission name, it sounds cool, but after I finished the mission, I haven't got too many excitements just like his other past mission: Cold Deal. The writing is decent, but it really needs some real talk dialogues like it could theme the talking. DriveBy is kinda balanced, I'm not saying no of this driveby, because it's good. Length is good aswell, I also liked the shootout in Madd Dogg's mansion, everyone's charging at me to kill me, it was difficult, but it could've been better to be honest. There were no object placement, but you can see some but not too much, it felt like an empty place for me. Well if you liked his Cold Deal the most and voted for it, then this mission is poorer than Cold Deal.

 

PROS:

- Good length.

- Balanced Driveby.

- Shootout was ok.

- Decent variety of actors

 

CONS:

- Poor Dialogues and Writing.

- Almost no variety of objects.

- Story and Presentation goes so fast.

- Difficult mission.

 

VERDICT: The mission had some potential, but it got fallen quickly because it needs some improvements. 6/10

 

Bekapro87

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This mission style is definitely a knockoff of Huzaifa's Gang War, fast paced shootouts, object placement, etc. But I'am not saying that the mission is bad to be honest. Yes, since I played his past MOTW mission, I really didn't liked that much, but this one is kinda an improvement to his other MOTW missions, precisely. Story and Presentation is kinda... alright tho, but the writing is poor and I think people are writing so fast that they don't know how to make the entire dialogue good. Length is ok, but it's one of the most shortest mission comparing to the other MOTW entries. Variety is well done. Object placement is also good. I like the moment how cops are coming to the crime scene to kill us all. Mission is not too difficult. Cutscene Placement would better, only static cutscenes if I am not wrong.

 

PROS:

- Story and Presentation is ok.

- Awesome variety of object placement, actors.

- Quick and Fast paced shootout in the mission (but it's too easy for me and gets repetitive quick).

 

CONS:

- Short length. Probably the most shortest mission in this MOTW.

- Mission is too easy.

- Poor Writing.

- Gets too repetitive quick.

- Cutscene placement would be better, I can see only static cutscenes if I am not wrong.

 

VERDICT: It's kinda an allright mission. A huge improvement to his other MOTW mission. 6.5/10.

 

RazorITA:

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Wow, this mission is kinda badass, hilarious and evil at the same time. I was so odd when those all girlfriends is trying to kill CJ, but then Millie says that he's cheating but she's teaming with the others. That's kinda odd. But anyway, variety is kinda good, You with Jetpack killing girlfriend's bodyguards, defusing the bombs then someone comes out with hunter and 2 seasparrows. It was difficult to beat them. There aren't too much object placement, but It's not a big deal for a mission like this. Length is awesome. Writing is finally good but the grammar could be better. Cutscene placement is good. Presentation is simplistic but it's good.

 

PROS:

- Story and Presentation is good.

- Great variety of actors.

- Badass shootouts, shooting in Area 69, shooting with jetpacks outside the Area 69.

- Writing is finally good but it has some grammar flaws.

- Length is awesome.

 

CONS:

- Really hard mission. Them helicopters bust my ass several times.

- Not too much object placement, but it has some opening objects ( i might remove this con, if it's too much. )

- Some grammar flaws are here.

 

VERDICT: Mission itself is badass and good, but it had some flaws that it could make the score lower. 7.5/10

 

LordStarship:

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Wow, I laughed at some moments in this mission when he added this KDST music to fight off the ballas but it's not a bad thing, It's SO BADASS. Length is kinda short compare to the other missions. Writing is definitely good. Dialogue can be fun and funny to read. Story and Presentation is also good. Shootouts are awesome, fast paced and quick. Object placement is allright, it had some good cover with the objects, but it could be more better if there are more.

 

PROS:

- Story and Presentation is good.

- Good variety of actors (Ballas is drivebying Groves, coming with cars.)

- Awesome writing and dialogues.

- Badass shootout with SD.

- Cutscene movement is decent.

 

CONS:
- Length is shortest comparing to the other missions. I really wanted more.

- Object placement could be better.

- Mission is very very easy.

 

VERDICT: Mission is good, but it could be awesome if the length would be good. 7.5/10

 

Then the last one PolskiOski:

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Dude, I'm serious. Where are your DYOM talents came from? I mean, his mission was awesome, just like his Volkstrum. There are alot of things to explain in this mission. Story is really awesome, but why Polish gang included in LV? Well it's not a big deal. The start got me intriguing, the first cutscene was really great where are 3 drivers driving to the one place, Writing and Dialogues are making this more perfect. CJ talking with himself, talking with Polish gang leader, he sounds almost worried when he got kidnapped. Object placement is good, but I wanted to be more. Seriously. This guy has a style of making those missions like this, he used DYOM# by the way, just like the others. Cutscene movement is fire! Dude he literally used Linear and smooth cutscenes in every cutscene action. The variety is top notch aswell. Objects are making it better. The length is long aswell but shorter than Razor's

 

PROS:

- Awesome Presentation.

- Interesting and intriguing Story.

- Length is good but shorter than Razor's.

- Variety is perfect out of all those missions.

- Dialogue and Writing is perfect.

- Mission has a proper difficulty.

 

CONS:

- I really wanted more object placement from you.

 

VERDICT: This mission must win. 9/10. Marvelous mission, gets a seal of approval from Martin Reviews.

 

1st place: Gold

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PolskiOski all the way, by the way, when Volksstrum Part 2 is coming out? I want more.

 

2nd place: Silver

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RazorITA with his good mission but odd story.

 

3rd place: Bronze

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LordStarship with his magical, hillarious and fun mission.

 

4th place:

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Bekapro87 with his huge improvements comparing to his last mission, but it still could be better.

 

5th place:

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Dtron, good but kinda dissapointing.

 

Heh. When Volkssturm pt2? Still doing it. First looking for nice SD's for it. Don't worry. Time will come 

[XzeuX]

Well, my vote goes to @Polski Oski's! What I know is, he's new here, but his missions are epic!  

 

The object placements in his mission is my favourite! The difficulty is not too hard and not too easy either.

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[Polski Oski]

1 minute ago, XzeuX said:

Well, my vote goes to @Polski Oski's! What I know is, he's new here, but his missions are epic!  

 

The object placements in his mission is my favourite! The difficulty is not too hard and not too easy either.

I wouldn't Say "new". I'm making DYOM Missions for like 2 years already. But participating second time now. 

[XzeuX]

Also, Lotus's vote is invalid. Account must be 4 weeks old and at least has 20 contents made.

 

I can't tag him lol there's too many users named "Lotus" can't find his name 

 

5 minutes ago, Polski Oski said:

I wouldn't Say "new". I'm making DYOM Missions for like 2 years already. But participating second time now. 

 

Edited December 19, 2019 by XzeuX

[zakarum5835]

1 hour ago, Polski Oski said:

I wouldn't Say "new". I'm making DYOM Missions for like 2 years already. But participating second time now. 

and i'm making dyom missions for like almost 1 year tbh

[AnDReJ98]

Hey lads, after this week's finished, we will need to take a break from motw till 1st January. I need to reorganize stuff and open up Mission of the Year contest. It's just voting. The winner of this week will be included as well, but next motw (150) will be hosted after new year (by winner ofc).

[XzeuX]

Well, we've got our winner here!

@Polski Oski has won the contest!

Congratulations! Just like Andrej said, you will host the next MOTW in January 2020! And yeah, give us a good theme!

[RithRake24]

Congratulations to @Polski Oski for winning this contest! Thanks to all the participants and reviewers who made this MOTW another good competitive week. @XzeuX turned out to be a fantastic host this week, well done.

 

I haven't gotten time to try any of this week's entries but reviews like @Martin_Strada's help me realise that there's a lot of improvement from each designer. A shoutout to @LordStarship for recognising an invalid vote for his own mission while he could have chosen to simply stay silent and hope it wasn't noticed. I like that spirit.

 

On 12/20/2019 at 8:37 AM, AnDReJ98 said:

Hey lads, after this week's finished, we will need to take a break from motw till 1st January. I need to reorganize stuff and open up Mission of the Year contest. It's just voting. The winner of this week will be included as well, but next motw (150) will be hosted after new year (by winner ofc).

It's a shame that a heavily populated run of MOTW has to be ceased, but it's also necessary. I am excited for the MOTY, and I hope we get the same amount of interest and participation in MOTW next year too when it eventually does get resumed.

[LordStarship]

Congratulations to @Polski Oski for winning the MOTW! I had so much fun this week! Also, thank you very much @XzeuX for hosting this week's MOTW, and thank you for the shoutout @RithRake24! 

 

I am waiting for the MOTY, and for the next MOTW in 2020! I hope everyone that is participating in this MOTW will be able to participate in the next MOTW! 

 

I hope everyone's having a fantastic holiday this month! 

[Polski Oski]

Thanks for all Your Support. Now we wait Till the January. 

[Martin_Strada]

CONGRATULATIONS

@Polski Oski

You really deserved the win @Polski Oski. Hope you gonna give us a good theme in January, hope we gonna start 2020 year perfectly.

 

 

[zakarum5835]

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@Polski Oski