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MOTW #149 - It's voting time!

XzeuX

By XzeuX,
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MOTW #149 Winner?  

8 members have voted

  1. 1. MOTW #149 Winner?

    • Music Label Corruption (Dtron01)
      2
    • The Two Rivals (Bekapro87)
      0
    • Girlfriends Uprising (RazorITA)
      1
    • Turnover Situation (LordStarShip)
      2
    • Organisation War (Polski Oski)
      3

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  • Poll closed on 12/21/2019 at 04:30 AM

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XzeuX

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MOTW #149

 

 

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For rules and guidelines, click here.

 

 

Theme:

 

CJ

 

Design a mission where CJ will be the main/playable character of the mission. In short, the player will play as CJ.

You can make a mission with any genre.

 

 

 

Entries:

 

@Dtron01

Music Label Corruption

 

@Bekapro87

The Two Rivals

 

@RazorITA

Girlfriends Uprising

 

@LordStarship

Turnover Situation

 

@Polski Oski

Organisation War

 

 

 

Deadlines

Participation: 19 December 2019 - 11:00 (GMT+8) ENDED

Voting: 21 December 2019 - 11:00 (GMT+8) 

 

 

 

Credits

AnDReJ98 - Founder & Co-Leader

Target13 - Co-Leader (2014, 2018-present)

MOTW Council - Management Team

Chips237 - Co-Leader (2013)

The Odyssey - Founder of the first MOTW Discussion Thread

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zakarum5835

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Congrats for won the last motw! I was inactive, i know...

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A lot of missions. Unfortunately, i can't play...

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RithRake24

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2 hours ago, RazorITA said:

@XzeuX

There was a small bug in my mission, I solved it and I hope it isn't a problem!

It’s okay, since you did it before the voting stage.

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Roxie

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I'm not happy rn, Im working on my mission real hard but as you can see I cant finish my mission due to lack of time perhaps extending the deadline might work and i believe I may be able to complete my mission ^^  

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zakarum5835

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If this MOTW was mine, i extended without a problem. Everyone can ask about this to me^

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RithRake24

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3 hours ago, Roxie said:

I'm not happy rn, Im working on my mission real hard but as you can see I cant finish my mission due to lack of time perhaps extending the deadline might work and i believe I may be able to complete my mission ^^  

How many more days do you think you'll need?

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14 hours ago, LordStarship said:

Returning...

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/63105

 

This is a rushed mission, so this is one of my worst :dontgetit:

Your entry has been added!

 

12 hours ago, Roxie said:

I'm not happy rn, Im working on my mission real hard but as you can see I cant finish my mission due to lack of time perhaps extending the deadline might work and i believe I may be able to complete my mission ^^  

I extended the deadline for 1 day!

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LordStarship

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Good luck on finishing your mission with the addition, Roxie! I hope your mission is equal to all of your hard work! 

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XzeuX

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8 hours ago, Polski Oski said:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/63112

Here's my entry. Hope I'm on time :)

Your entry has been added!

 

It's now 3 hours before the voting section starts. 

So, for the participants who are still designing their mission, please complete it ASAP! @Roxie

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Voting has started!

Voting will close on 21 December 2019, on 11:30 (GMT +8)

 

@Roxie

I'm sorry that the voting has started before you can participate in this MOTW :( You can try another time, my friend!

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zakarum5835

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I'll play the missions today tbh. 

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Another week, same sh*t, different entry/host. The designers are the same, how surprising. Any of you might think I'am aggressive little bit, but I know that you're having good holidays and beautiful snow, snowflakes outside in your country (maybe?). Well my town doesn't have a snow still, but enough for offtopic. It's time to review the missions and decide which is the best homies!

 

And of course, we gonna start with our Italiano designer Dtron, who's trying so hard to get the win of this entry

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...but to be honest, this mission ain't the best out of all those entries, but it's better than the other ones, not gonna spoil it right now. But let's talk bout his mission: Music Label Corruption, well first time I saw this mission name, it sounds cool, but after I finished the mission, I haven't got too many excitements just like his other past mission: Cold Deal. The writing is decent, but it really needs some real talk dialogues like it could theme the talking. DriveBy is kinda balanced, I'm not saying no of this driveby, because it's good. Length is good aswell, I also liked the shootout in Madd Dogg's mansion, everyone's charging at me to kill me, it was difficult, but it could've been better to be honest. There were no object placement, but you can see some but not too much, it felt like an empty place for me. Well if you liked his Cold Deal the most and voted for it, then this mission is poorer than Cold Deal.

 

PROS:

- Good length.

- Balanced Driveby.

- Shootout was ok.

- Decent variety of actors

 

CONS:

- Poor Dialogues and Writing.

- Almost no variety of objects.

- Story and Presentation goes so fast.

- Difficult mission.

 

VERDICT: The mission had some potential, but it got fallen quickly because it needs some improvements. 6/10

 

Bekapro87

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This mission style is definitely a knockoff of Huzaifa's Gang War, fast paced shootouts, object placement, etc. But I'am not saying that the mission is bad to be honest. Yes, since I played his past MOTW mission, I really didn't liked that much, but this one is kinda an improvement to his other MOTW missions, precisely. Story and Presentation is kinda... alright tho, but the writing is poor and I think people are writing so fast that they don't know how to make the entire dialogue good. Length is ok, but it's one of the most shortest mission comparing to the other MOTW entries. Variety is well done. Object placement is also good. I like the moment how cops are coming to the crime scene to kill us all. Mission is not too difficult. Cutscene Placement would better, only static cutscenes if I am not wrong.

 

PROS:

- Story and Presentation is ok.

- Awesome variety of object placement, actors.

- Quick and Fast paced shootout in the mission (but it's too easy for me and gets repetitive quick).

 

CONS:

- Short length. Probably the most shortest mission in this MOTW.

- Mission is too easy.

- Poor Writing.

- Gets too repetitive quick.

- Cutscene placement would be better, I can see only static cutscenes if I am not wrong.

 

VERDICT: It's kinda an allright mission. A huge improvement to his other MOTW mission. 6.5/10.

 

RazorITA:

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Wow, this mission is kinda badass, hilarious and evil at the same time. I was so odd when those all girlfriends is trying to kill CJ, but then Millie says that he's cheating but she's teaming with the others. That's kinda odd. But anyway, variety is kinda good, You with Jetpack killing girlfriend's bodyguards, defusing the bombs then someone comes out with hunter and 2 seasparrows. It was difficult to beat them. There aren't too much object placement, but It's not a big deal for a mission like this. Length is awesome. Writing is finally good but the grammar could be better. Cutscene placement is good. Presentation is simplistic but it's good.

 

PROS:

- Story and Presentation is good.

- Great variety of actors.

- Badass shootouts, shooting in Area 69, shooting with jetpacks outside the Area 69.

- Writing is finally good but it has some grammar flaws.

- Length is awesome.

 

CONS:

- Really hard mission. Them helicopters bust my ass several times.

- Not too much object placement, but it has some opening objects ( i might remove this con, if it's too much. )

- Some grammar flaws are here.

 

VERDICT: Mission itself is badass and good, but it had some flaws that it could make the score lower. 7.5/10

 

LordStarship:

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Wow, I laughed at some moments in this mission when he added this KDST music to fight off the ballas but it's not a bad thing, It's SO BADASS. Length is kinda short compare to the other missions. Writing is definitely good. Dialogue can be fun and funny to read. Story and Presentation is also good. Shootouts are awesome, fast paced and quick. Object placement is allright, it had some good cover with the objects, but it could be more better if there are more.

 

PROS:

- Story and Presentation is good.

- Good variety of actors (Ballas is drivebying Groves, coming with cars.)

- Awesome writing and dialogues.

- Badass shootout with SD.

- Cutscene movement is decent.

 

CONS:
- Length is shortest comparing to the other missions. I really wanted more.

- Object placement could be better.

- Mission is very very easy.

 

VERDICT: Mission is good, but it could be awesome if the length would be good. 7.5/10

 

Then the last one PolskiOski:

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Dude, I'm serious. Where are your DYOM talents came from? I mean, his mission was awesome, just like his Volkstrum. There are alot of things to explain in this mission. Story is really awesome, but why Polish gang included in LV? Well it's not a big deal. The start got me intriguing, the first cutscene was really great where are 3 drivers driving to the one place, Writing and Dialogues are making this more perfect. CJ talking with himself, talking with Polish gang leader, he sounds almost worried when he got kidnapped. Object placement is good, but I wanted to be more. Seriously. This guy has a style of making those missions like this, he used DYOM# by the way, just like the others. Cutscene movement is fire! Dude he literally used Linear and smooth cutscenes in every cutscene action. The variety is top notch aswell. Objects are making it better. The length is long aswell but shorter than Razor's

 

PROS:

- Awesome Presentation.

- Interesting and intriguing Story.

- Length is good but shorter than Razor's.

- Variety is perfect out of all those missions.

- Dialogue and Writing is perfect.

- Mission has a proper difficulty.

 

CONS:

- I really wanted more object placement from you.

 

VERDICT: This mission must win. 9/10. Marvelous mission, gets a seal of approval from Martin Reviews.

 

1st place: Gold

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PolskiOski all the way, by the way, when Volksstrum Part 2 is coming out? I want more.

 

2nd place: Silver

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RazorITA with his good mission but odd story.

 

3rd place: Bronze

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LordStarship with his magical, hillarious and fun mission.

 

4th place:

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Bekapro87 with his huge improvements comparing to his last mission, but it still could be better.

 

5th place:

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Dtron, good but kinda dissapointing.

 

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Can't make any review because i have less time in December.

Thank you for you kind review, Martin! My mission is supposed to be one like you said. Fun, hilarious, badass, all in the same time. The mission is really short as i'm afraid that something will bugged out if i make the mission longer (The desk was supposed to move all the way, but only move half the way), so i decided to just end up there. For the difficulty, yeah.. i thought i would make it a bit too hard if i turn the headshot off, so i'm sorry if it was too easy for you:D Ahh also, for some reason DYOM# is not compatible for me, soo... yeah:sui:

 

Also, for my vote, it's definitely going to be @Polski Oski's mission, Organisation War! To be fair, his mission really blew my mind, especially the cutscene movement where CJ "crawls" to the box is really cool! Mission is fair and balanced, pretty much a really fun shootout! Not counting the chasing to the airport killing all those criminals! Though i'd say in the Airport, it was harder and i had to spend some times to kill them but it was worth it! By the way, i love the SD! Detroid: Become Human in a shootout inside a factory, damn that music really blend well! 10/10, you are the best!:happy::^:
 

 

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I cast my vote to LordStarship! Good job bro! :^:

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