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MOTW #129  

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  1. 1. Who should win the MOTW #129?

    • "Operation: DICE", by VikingEVM
    • "Dirty Drug Deal", by RithRake24

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  • Poll closed on 03/14/2019 at 02:00 AM

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Theme:

 

ACTION

 

Watch any Sylvester Stallone film as an inspiration and make a mission with a lot of action for this week.

 

 

Entries:

 

Call of the Wall, by @Seth

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/59581

 

Operation: DICE, by @VikingEVM

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/59593

 

Extermination, by @Roxie

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/59616

 

Dirty Drug Deal, by @RithRake24

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/59617

 

 

Deadlines

Participation: 10 March 2019 - 23:00 (GMT -3)

Voting: 12 March 2019 - 23:00 (GMT -3)

 

 

Credits

AnDReJ98 - Founder of MOTW & Leader

Chips237 - Co-Leader of MOTW 2013

Target13 - Co-Leader of MOTW 2014 & 2018-present

The Odyssey - Founder of the MOTW Discussion Thread

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zakarum5835

I will watching Sylvester Stallone before to start making my new mission.

 

ops, i can participate it

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El Penguin Bobo
2 hours ago, Troz said:

Wait so the winner is not doing the mission of the week?

No, because he was too busy with something in real life to make the thread.

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11 hours ago, xXPinguXx said:

No, because he was too busy with something in real life to make the thread.

Prince could at least had mentioned it. but alright

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1 hour ago, Troz said:

Prince could at least had mentioned it. but alright

We sort of had a discussion about it in the DYOM discord server.

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SeanAlgerian

Not gonna make my return in this MOTW, but will vote for sure and give reviews for now.

 

#DYOM4Active

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14 hours ago, RithRake24 said:

We sort of had a discussion about it in the DYOM discord server.

I can't seem to find it. but I'll surely be following the discord

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1 hour ago, Troz said:

I can't seem to find it. but I'll surely be following the discord

Oh that's because we had the discussion in the previous MOTW 128 channel which was replaced with the new fresh one (MOTW 129)

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zakarum5835

Sorry guys to tell this but i can't participate and send my mission for this current MOTW because my school still taking my life and i can't quit the study. :/

 

i think i can make my mssion for MOTW #130
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SeanAlgerian

When you see people studying so hard but still, they design a MOTW mission!

 

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SeanAlgerian

I was kidding at all, here my mission:Call of the Wall

 

WARNING:

Use remove wanted levels cheat(due to mistakes) and Infinite health cheat if mission is hard(suggested)

 

Good luck all!

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zakarum5835

i'm glad to play all missions and give a full review.

 

i just downloaded your mission

@Seth

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On 3/7/2019 at 4:13 PM, RithRake24 said:

Oh that's because we had the discussion in the previous MOTW 128 channel which was replaced with the new fresh one (MOTW 129)

Thanks! Ill be sure to check on it more

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My entry, coming soon.

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EDIT: I may only submit my mission slightly before the deadline time because of IRL stuff. I’ll try my best to make it in time.

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Here is my entry guys!

 

Dirty Drug Deal

 

Good luck to all participants. 4 participants so far including me...

 

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Why am I anticipating a VikingEVM victory? Oh yeah, because he's an amazing gameplay designer. And I'm a fan.

 

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I just played all missions and have multiple opinions on them, however I will only post my reviews and ratings of each mission after the voting phase starts.

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14 minutes ago, GKHEAT said:

gonna vote :)

Where were you, my friend? You disappeared for quite long!

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I played the missions, good work guys.

I liked Rithrake's mission (His story and effect was cool. 

Good Work :)

12 minutes ago, RithRake24 said:

Where were you, my friend? You disappeared for quite long!

Cause of my school exams

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2 minutes ago, GKHEAT said:

I played the missions, good work guys.

I liked Rithrake's mission (His story and effect was cool. 

Good Work :)

Cause of my school exams

Thank you so much! Did exams go well?

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9 minutes ago, RithRake24 said:

Thank you so much! Did exams go well?

Of course, all good

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MY REVIEWS FOR ALL THE MISSIONS

 

Disclaimer: The opinions and thoughts mentioned in my review may or may not reflect the overall community's ideas or perception. My reviews are constructed by putting together my own personal thoughts and opinions that arose when I played through the missions. Please take my comments positively and constructively. ☺️

I'm not reviewing my own mission for obvious reasons. However, I'm open to any comments from you guys.

 

CALL OF THE WALL by @Seth

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Review: The mission had an interesting prospect and idea, but the way it was presented was not very pleasing. There was a horde of enemies just thrown at you with higher-than-usual health and strong weaponry, behaving more like zombies than organised Mexican criminals. When the second wave of enemies was unleashed, they couldn't even make their way up the slope, so I had to get out of cover and come down the slope to shoot them. I found myself taking the police vehicle, driving it to a suitable location within reach of the enemies, then using the vehicle as cover. It wasn't only just hard, it felt frustrating, like a chore. Additionally, since the conversation between the characters was so close to the checkpoint that you had to drive your vehicle to, the characters spawned with their bodies cutting through the vehicle, making it look amateurish and messy. EDIT: I forgot to add something - there were cars trying to repeatedly drive into the wall. That looked crazy. Maybe you should have disabled cars.

 

My rating: 4/10

 

How you could improve: Use more variety. All your mission had was a short bit of driving and lots of shooting. Use objects and effects and have unique story ideas to captivate players. I've seen enough shooting in GTA: SA's original story and in dozens of DYOM missions and MPs, so I can state that shooting alone never makes a good mission.

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EXTERMINATION by @Roxie

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Review: This mission did make an attempt to establish a story: the fall and rise of Grove Street, losing and stealing back a weapons truck. The idea was quite interesting, but there were a few issues. Firstly, I found it hard to accept that the 'traitors' Ryder and Big Smoke went through the first act in the mission without any problems while CJ succumbed to his injuries and Sweet was weakened so badly. Even though you've borrowed the characters and setting straight from the original storyline, the events in your mission were not consistent with it. Sweet and CJ are portrayed as the 'big guns' of Grove Street, unlike Ryder and Big Smoke who betray them after all. Also, in this mission, Sweet uses a green Infernus. The Infernus is a sophisticated car that Grove Street definitely wouldn't be able to afford considering the poor state they were at. Sweet normally uses a blue Greenwood. I'm not saying everything in your mission has to agree with the original storyline; you might have your own perception and portrayal of the characters, but I just found it hard to accept. Out of the gunfights, I found only the very last gunfight well organised and fun. In the first gunfight, Ryder is thrown in a position where he is open to heavy gunfire, and I had to dash to the nearest cover first before taking any action.

 

My rating: 7/10

 

How you could improve: Design the environment for shootouts better. And this second point you may choose to ignore but I'm still just gonna say it - Try to be consistent with GTA: SA's characters if you choose to use them (as I said, this is not really a major thing).

 

 

OPERATION: DICE by @VikingEVM

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Review: Honestly this mission was fun. The dialogue and the objectives were to an authentic military standard and the positioning and behaviour of the enemies were realistic. The cutscenes were also well positioned, giving it an occasional Hollywood feel. I loved the "push through our barricade" cutscene and the helicopter cutscene at the end. Another thing I really like was how VikingEVM used interiors to his advantage, especially the interior of the Caligula's Casino (was it that? I think it was). I liked how I was prompted to find another exit when one was blocked. Those are realistic problems faced by soldiers in real life and they made me feel a part of the mission.

 

My rating: 9/10

 

How you could improve: There's nothing that I really have to say here. Maybe the shootouts were too easy? I lost very little health in the mission and breezed through this mission, even though it was fun. This is really just a nitpick in an otherwise well-defined mission. Good job!

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My vote goes to VikingEVM. Well done!

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zakarum5835

HERE'S MY REVIEW BY RYANAB OwO

 

Note: This review is only to improve the design for all members on DYOM. Hope you like it my review:

 

 

Call Of The Wall by @Seth - The mission was good but i don't know why the mission is short because it's annoying to play ''a mission short''. The rest is almost good when i see all cutscenes where cops explain bla bla bla. Anyway, you just do a something was good: good placement of vehicles, how many enemies you put in this mission? All enemies having good weapons and i like it the accuracy in the enemies.

I don't like the stars because you didn't put ''The Maximun/Minimun Wanted Level at 0 (zero) stars. This was a problem for me to finish the mission. The rest is good. Keep going. My rating is 3/10 Good luck for your next work or mission.

 

 

Operation Dice by @VikingEVM - Holy sh*t, your mission is almost a masterpiece because you created a mission where you killed all the terrorists/idiots. When i'm playing your mission i said ''Nice mission, nice gameplay, nice creator/designer, nice cutscenes and the rest.'' So, yeah, i didn't died for a miracle when i killed the latest terrorist. Phew. I can said the SD, all sounds are good for this mission theme, but it was a really easy to kill everyone. BTW I should take some ispiration from this themes. Anyway, you just created a mission was almost a ''Masterpiece''. Good job! Hope to see your next work as soon as possible. My rating is 7/10.

 

 

Extermination by @Roxie - A little gameplay was annoying (my opinion) but i see all nice enemies when you put the accuracy. I never forgot this moment because the beginner is almost good. I like a lot pickups because you put the option ''Spawn Again in 30 seconds or 60 minutes'' because it's really easy to didn't die. LOL! My rating is 6/10 I hope i see your next work.

 

 

Dirty Drug Deal by @RithRake24 - Wait for a second, i just said ''Hey, nice designer, nice mission'' because your mission is almost a masterpiece than Operation Dice (but i don't want to offend him) Everyone can create a good mission. I'd like if you put a lot enemies with weapons are strong but no worries. All mission of this contest we're good. I like the gameplay and all cutscenes/animations. The objects placement it's really cool because i can cover myself and keep going to kill all enemies but the MAFIA we're stronggggggg. I said ''Damn, this is a really f*ckin' good mission''. Ok dokie, i think i v*te your mission. My rating is 9/10 Keep it up and hope you see your next mission!

 

 

 

my vote goes to rithrake24 cuz he created a good mission

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SeanAlgerian
16 minutes ago, RyanAB said:

HERE'S MY REVIEW BY RYANAB OwO

 

Note: This review is only to improve the design for all members on DYOM. Hope you like it my review:

 

 

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Call Of The Wall by @Seth - The mission was good but i don't know why the mission is short because it's annoying to play ''a mission short''. The rest is almost good when i see all cutscenes where cops explain bla bla bla. Anyway, you just do a something was good: good placement of vehicles, how many enemies you put in this mission? All enemies having good weapons and i like it the accuracy in the enemies.

I don't like the stars because you didn't put ''The Maximun/Minimun Wanted Level at 0 (zero) stars. This was a problem for me to finish the mission. The rest is good. Keep going. My rating is 3/10 Good luck for your next work or mission.

 

 

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Operation Dice by @VikingEVM - Holy sh*t, your mission is almost a masterpiece because you created a mission where you killed all the terrorists/idiots. When i'm playing your mission i said ''Nice mission, nice gameplay, nice creator/designer, nice cutscenes and the rest.'' So, yeah, i didn't died for a miracle when i killed the latest terrorist. Phew. I can said the SD, all sounds are good for this mission theme, but it was a really easy to kill everyone. BTW I should take some ispiration from this themes. Anyway, you just created a mission was almost a ''Masterpiece''. Good job! Hope to see your next work as soon as possible. My rating is 7/10.

 

 

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Extermination by @Roxie - A little gameplay was annoying (my opinion) but i see all nice enemies when you put the accuracy. I never forgot this moment because the beginner is almost good. I like a lot pickups because you put the option ''Spawn Again in 30 seconds or 60 minutes'' because it's really easy to didn't die. LOL! My rating is 6/10 I hope i see your next work.

 

 

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Dirty Drug Deal by @RithRake24 - Wait for a second, i just said ''Hey, nice designer, nice mission'' because your mission is almost a masterpiece than Operation Dice (but i don't want to offend him) Everyone can create a good mission. I'd like if you put a lot enemies with weapons are strong but no worries. All mission of this contest we're good. I like the gameplay and all cutscenes/animations. The objects placement it's really cool because i can cover myself and keep going to kill all enemies but the MAFIA we're stronggggggg. I said ''Damn, this is a really f*ckin' good mission''. Ok dokie, i think i v*te your mission. My rating is 9/10 Keep it up and hope you see your next mission!

 

 

 

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my vote goes to rithrake24 cuz he created a good mission

I think I said enable the remove wanted stars cheat

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zakarum5835
34 minutes ago, Seth said:

I think I said enable the remove wanted stars cheat

oh, yeah but i don't want to enable the cheat :/

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