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Jokercina

Attack on Sweet

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Jokercina

I recently created my first mission called Attack on Sweet. I hope you like it here's download link

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/55316

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GKHEAT

good, You need some impovements.

Keep it up

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Jokercina

I will keep up, thank you, if you know some tips for me be free to write them down

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Nuddle King

you can create some more single missions so you improve, and then create a mission pack.

 

Just if you want.

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Target13

For a beginner it's a pretty good mission. It's an alternate prequel to San Andreas (with the green sabre and all). The story was a bit lacking though, your English was okay but the dialog wasn't really realistic, or at least it didn't sound like something these characters would say. (But maybe I'm nitpicking here.) I'd advise you to work on planning out a story. You could write it down in notepad or something first. Also, try using objects to create some cover between the player and enemies. Besides that, it was a decent mission. Keep it up. Just like Nuddle King said, make single missions like these until you nail them down before starting anything big. Good luck 👍

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Jokercina

I will listen all of you, thank you for the great comments

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Jokercina

And yea, if you want to see me create what you want tell me and I will do it

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