GTA V: Rewritten.

[Wackyshrek]

Hello, today I'm starting something different. I'm re-writing GTA V but, I may add/remove missions as well as rewrite them. I'll upload when I can but for now here's a start. 

PROLOGUE 

Ludendorff North Yankton, 9 years ago...

A man, ran t,towards a booth outside the Ludendorff bank, dressed in a navy blue ski mask, a yellow coat, blue jeans, navy blue gloves, and navy blue boots. The man shot the security guard at the booth with his sawed-off shotgun, as he screamed "M, Get the f*ck over here with T!" Suddenly, a man sprinted towards B, and this one was wearing a black ski mask, a red button-up plaid shirt over a grey sweater, brown gloves, blue jeans, and brown boots. The second man whipped out an assault rifle and said "B, T's getting the f*cking bags." Then, a man wearing a red and white ski mask, a green large coat, yellow snow pants, and black boots came walking carrying an assault rifle, and three duffel bags. B and M each grabbed a bag as the trio busted down the front door to the bank. T hit a woman in the side of the head with the barrel of his rifle. B shot the lock on the door entering the bank teller's area. M screamed "Alright, everybody pays attention and nobody gets hurt." T screamed "Were coming in, and if you try to stop us, you'll all be worse than hurt!" B looked at M and said "Going soft, Mike?" M looked at B and said "Shut the f*ck up Brad, or I won't be soft with you." T screamed "Both of you, shut the f*ck up, and babysit these f*cking pr*cks while I plant the f*cking bomb on the mother f*cking vault!" M said "Ok Trev, I'll babysit Brad and the rest of these c*nts." T rushed into the hallway. M and B swung their guns around, until T got back. T rushed in as M pulled out his cellular phone. M screamed" Brace yourselves!" as he dialed the detonation number. The whole bank shook as rubble flew from the hall. M put his bag and assault rifle on his back, as he held T and B's bags in his hands. M screamed "Normal procedure, I'll fill the bags, T hold off any arriving cops, B babysit the f*cking hostages, show no weakness." M rushed to the vault. M filed up the three bags as T and B ran in. They each took their bag as they ran for the garage door. B said "It's so f*cking hot in this bank, I wouldn't be surprised if were dead and this is us burning in f*cking hell. T said "F*ck, I hear sirens." B pulled off his mask to reveal a chubby face and his blonde man bun. M ripped off his mask as he said "It's hot in here, and besides there's gonna be a ton of NYPD casualties today." M has now revealed his military-like haircut. T said "F*ck it!" As he pulled his mask off to reveal his mullet and lumberjack beard. As they burst through the garage door, one cop said "Holy f*cking sh*t, that's Michael f*cking Townley, it's Michael f*cking Townley, holy f*cking sh*t!" T started spraying bullets everywhere as he screamed as loud as possible "F*ck all of you mother f*cking b*tch ass f*cking whore ass c*nt pricks, f*ck all of you f*cking whore c*nt ass b*tch pr*cks!" Michael said "Well Trevor, if you get arrested there's an F on the attitude test." Trevor said "Shut the f*ck up Michael, and please can you and Brad stop being lazy and help me fight these cops!?" The crew ran for the main road. Soon, a tan and brown Declasse Rancer XL pulled up, driven by a much younger Talianna Martienz. The trio hopped in as Talianna said "What the f*ck was that?" Trevor said "Michael employing a driver that can't get her f*cking ass here soon e-f*cking-nough!" Brad said "Trevor, leave the b*tch alone, it's her first score." Trevor looked at Brad and said "F*ck you." Brad said "At least we're not giving Lester his 20 percent." Michael said "We f*cking are." Brad said "F*ck you, Michael!" Michael said "F*ck off, I'm the crew leader, and I'll fire your ass."  Trevor said "Watch the f*ck out, NYPD in both f*cking lanes charging at us!" Brad said "It's Michael's fault!" Michael said "Shut the f*ck up you annoying pr*ck." Brad said "F*ck you Mike, cause I'd still take a bullet for you." Talianna slammed on the brakes, as the car tubled and flew off the road and landed on it's left side on the icy North Yankton river. The crew got out as Michael asked "Everyone alright?" Talianna said "Yeah, let's walk on the ice, there's a warehouse nearby we can duck into." The crew walked forwards, towards a bridge. On that bridge stood a man named David. Davis was wearing a black trench coat, black slacks, and black boots. David pulled out his sniper rifle and aimed it at Michael. Brad screamed "Sniper!" as he ran in front of Michael. Immediately, Brad had a bullet wound on the left side of his chest. Brad fell to the ground as Trevor screamed "The f*cking feds found us!" Michael got hit by a bullet in the center of his chest now. Michael stumbled to the ground as he mumbled "F*cking go T, Brad's gonna make it, but I'm not." Trevor dropped his bag, as he fell to his knees and a single tear dropped from his left eye. Talianna pulled out a pistol as sirens whaled in the distance. Suddenly, Trevor and Talianna got ambushed by the cops. Trevor whipped out his assault rifles, as police cruisers rushed in. Suddenly black Declasse Rancher XL's sped in and out stepped men, in FIB armor wielding Special Carbine's with extended clips and scopes. Bullets flew everywhere, as Talianna got hit in the left thigh by one. Trevor held off the cops and FIB some more until he had enough, and hijacked an FIB Rancher and sped off into the fog. 3 days later, at the Ludendorff cemetery, Amanda, Jimmy, Tracey, Trevor, Dave, Michael's mother, Amanda's parents, and Amanda's sister stood at Michael's grave. A priest walked up as he started saying some prayers for Michael. Talianna came in on crutches, as tears fell from her eyes. Talianna crutched over to Trevor as she asked "How's Brad?" Trevor said "His nurse said he'll be outta there in a week." Behind the bushed stood Michael, in a black beanie, sunglasses, a dark grey trench coat, dark tan khakis, and black sneakers. Michael pulled the cigarette from his mouth as he mumbled "F*cking bullsh*t. Michael walked away as he stepped into his yellow Dundreary Regina station wagon, as "Live And Let Die" by Guns N' Roses played on the radio as Michael pulled away. 

[TrevorIsMyDad]

I mean this in the nicest way. Walk away from the game sometimes and enjoy life. If you re-write the rest of the game, which is rather long, I have no doubt you will go postal. Seriously.

[Slonitram]

Nice wall.

[Wackyshrek]

*UPDATE* I'm seeing that a certain individual is concerned about me being too close to GTA V. I only intend to post 1-3 missions a week, so that way I don't go overboard. I will be going to Complications this week, and next week I'll have a schedule ready. 

FRANKLIN & LAMAR 

NEW CHARACTER UNLOCKED: Franklin Clinton, his weapons inventory include; SMG, Bottle, Flashlight, and Switchblade. Franklin's safehouse is located on Strawberry Avenue. Franklin's white Bravado Buffalo S will spawn at the house as Franklin's vehicle. 

Michael sat in Dr, Isiah Frielander's office now 9 years later, with his new lexington haircut wearing a grey suit. Michael said "It's just so f*cking hard, Doc. Dr. Frielander said "Well, Michael it's only going to be harder if you don't start helping yourself like you've been refusing to do for the past 8 years." Faint engine noises can be heard as a white Vapid Speedo van zooms by, driven my Lamar Davis. Franklin Clinton sat in the passenger seat wearing his blue tee-shirt over his white long-sleeve shirt with black jeans and yellow boots. The Speedo pulled up to a house along Vespucci Beach. Franklin stepped out and walked towards a parked red Ocelot F620. Lamar rolled down the passenger window as he shouted "Hey, n*gga watch out that sprung n*gga we takin this car from's behind you!" A man of Asian descent jogged to Franklin carrying a Pistol. Franklin pulled out his SMG as he said "Bad move, homie." The man said "Fine, take the car!" As he dropped the Pistol and ran away. Franklin picked up the Pistol. *Pistol has been added to Franklin's inventory.* Franklin got in the F620, as he sped off. Franklin sped to Simeon's dealership as he dropped off the car. Franklin and Lamar met inside with Simeon. Simeon looked at the two boys and said "You two get the f*ck over here this racist b*sterd insulted me!" Lamar walked up to Jimmy and said "F*ck you n*gga, i'll insult you're corpse if you insult my foreign manager again!" Jimmy flipped off Lamar and walked outside and into the passenger seat of a black Obey Tailgater. As the Tailgater sped off Simeon said "Not so fast, some black motherf*cker stole a green Western Bagger from me, get it back and i'll give you an extra 25 cents each." Franklin said "Yeah, then my aunt would be happy I'm making a whole f*cking dollar an hour from your underpaying ass!" Franklin and Lamar stepped outside and into Lamar's Speedo. Lamar turned on the radio and "Speedline Miracle Masterpiece" played. Lamar said "We going to that Vagos garage at Cypress Flats." Lamar pulled up. Lamar said "Better to be safe than sorry." As he put sunglasses on. The pair stepped out as one Vagos instantly shouted "Those two n*ggas from Families!" Suddenly Vagos surrounded Franklin and Lamar armed with Pistols, Assault Rifles, and Pump Shotguns. Lamar drew his Sawed-Off Shotgun as he looked at Franklin. Franklin pulled out his SMG and yelled "F*ck em' up, homie!" Franklin and Lamar sprayed bullets everywhere until all the Vagos were dead. Lamar pointed and screamed "The bike!" Franklin got on the green Bagger and said "I'm keeping this one, so go tell Yetarian that we couldn't get it." *Franklin can now use the green Western Bagger as a personal vehicle alongside his white Buffalo S.*

Edited July 3, 2018 by Wackyshrek

[TrevorIsMyDad]

Ohhhhhh just 1-3 missions a week, that's all, what was I thinking. Serious question, other than you have A LOT of time on your hands, what is the point of this? I mean no ass intended, seems to me most will find it TLDR (one guy seemed to already) and I don't think it will get you a job with Rockstar but who am I to say. I mean I get it, the forum is grinding pretty slow these days, but just curious.

 

Edited July 4, 2018 by TrevorIsMyDad

[Wackyshrek]

@TrevorIsMyDad The point of this, is to show how there are many different ways that Rockstar could've executed the missions, and so I have something to do.

[Wackyshrek]

COMPLICATIONS 

Franklin rushed home on his new Bagger. He walked inside, and changed into his white tank top, cream cargo shorts, and white sneakers. He walked into the kitchen and prepared a piece of toast. As the toast finished toasting, Franklin's cell phone rang. Franklin looked at it to see it was a call from Simeon. He answered, to find out Simeon would give him a raise if he successfully reposessed James De Santa's yellow Karin BeeJay XL. Franklin, delighted by the news walked outside. Franklin mumbled "I might as well take a cab so I don't have to go back for my car." Franklin called Downtown Cab Co. But, they had no available taxis. Franklin mumbled "F*ck, now how am I gonna get that whole dollar for takin' back this car?" Franklin walked over to Lamar's house, as he knocked o the door. Lamar agreed to give Franklin a ride. They both got in Lamar's Speedo, as they drove to Rockford Hills. Ince there, Lamar dropped Franklin off at a big and beautiful mansion. Franklin climbed over the gate to see the same black Obey Tailgater from the previous day that Jimmy took off in. He looked to his left to see a yellow Weeny Issi and a tornito red Ubermacht Senteniel. Franklin walked to the garage which thankfully, was open. Franklin got in the yellow BeeJay XL. He zoomed out of that driveway at full speed and the second he was near Simeon's dealership, a man sprung up out of nowhere in the back seat. The man, was the same one who was at therapy the previous day. This time, the man had on a denim shirt, jeans, and brown sneakers. The man said "You can never successfully rob a rich white American." As the man pulled out a Pistol. Franklin said "I'm just repoin' the f*ckin whip." The man said "I'll whip you in the ass if you don't get out." Franklin said "I gotta get my whole f*cking dollar for repoin' this car!" The man said "Oh, you work for a credit scam company?" Franklin said "No, just some cheap asshole that underpays me." The man said "Don't worry, I'll get you a job if you get me a job, maybe we'll go out for a beer or something and I'll show you how the f*cking world works, but is that dealership the one you work at?" Franklin said "Yeah, dog." The man said "Drive through the front f*cking window." Franklin booked it, gas pedal grinding into the floor, as he sped at full speed through the window. Simeon ran out and screamed "You f*cking asshole!" The man handed Franklin a grand in cash and said "I'll handle this f*cker." *Franklin now has a total of $1,250.*  Franklin ran off. *New character unlocked: Michael Townley/De Santa. Michael's inventory includes: Pistol, Heavy Sniper (With Advanced Scope.), and Marksman Rifle (with Scope, Suppressor, Grip, Extended Clip, and Flashlight.) Michael's safehouse is a mansion located in Rockford Hills. Michael's personal vehicle is a black Obey Tailgater. Michael has $793,004.* *Switching available between Michael and Franklin.* Michael pulled out his Pistol and aimed it at Simeon and said "Wrong chose motherf*cker." Michael shut his eyes tight as he pulled the trigger. He looked down to see a bullet wound on Simeon's forehead. Michael pulled out his cigar lighter as the dealership went in flames, Michael walked out as the dealership turned to ash and the cars inside exploded. 

Edited July 4, 2018 by Wackyshrek

[Bratva Assassin]

@Wackyshrek Your writing is mighty nice! In fact, I enjoy reading this even more than I enjoy playing GTA V! By any chance, do you mind if I help you write this? Because I'm VERY good at writing, agree that this game needs improvement in storyline, and I can get it done faster for you! I promise! 

[uNi]

On 7/5/2018 at 1:44 AM, ThatBenGuy said:

@Wackyshrek Your writing is mighty nice! In fact, I enjoy reading this even more than I enjoy playing GTA V! By any chance, do you mind if I help you write this? Because I'm VERY good at writing, agree that this game needs improvement in storyline, and I can get it done faster for you! I promise! 

Open your own thread for it.

[Wackyshrek]

2 hours ago, uNi said:

Open your own thread for it.

Thanks man a lot, I'll add more to this soon, as I am currently trying to promote this fanfiction on other websites.