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GKHEAT

[MP]Crime Cities

Alex's Which friend is most helpful?  

14 members have voted

  1. 3. Alex's Which friend is most helpful?

    • Sean Johnson from Groove street
    • Melvin from Groove strret
      0
    • Adam from truck terminal
    • Ron from truck terminal
      0
    • Lance 'Ryder' Wilson
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GKHEAT

Chapter-1 Completed

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Target13
Posted (edited)

To be honest, the story made no sense and the dialogue was laughable but I did like your object placement. eg. the weed farm at Grove Street and the training yard.

4/10

Edited by Target13

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Giorgia Vinegar
55 minutes ago, Target13 said:

To be honest, the story made no sense and the dialog was laughable but I did like your object placement. eg. the weed farm at Grove Street and the training yard.

4/10

A topic will soon be released on one of my MP. I hope you like it.

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GKHEAT
13 hours ago, Target13 said:

To be honest, the story made no sense and the dialogue was laughable but I did like your object placement. eg. the weed farm at Grove Street and the training yard.

4/10

Sorry for my English and, Thanks for your reply.

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Target13

No problem. Something I would fix about your mission pack is the camera angles during the cutscenes, many times during the mission pack, the camera would be clipping through the actor. That is not only ugly but it also distracts from the dialog. Also try to avoid letting the player drive long distances (eg. Vinewood to Grove Street) because it's just plainly boring and doesn't really add much in terms of story. Another very important thing is making sure to disable wanted levels during the missions. Training Day for example had wanted levels turned on and I got a four star wanted level for shooting at 'statues'.

 

But besides all that, I like your creativity when it comes to world building. Like I mentioned earlier, Grove Street was decorated very well and I also liked the traffic jam during The Johnson Boy (2). I was live streaming this MP for a friend of mine and we were laughing and enjoying it a lot. We especially liked when the friends of the house owner in A New Start jumped in slow motion.  Don't worry about your English because even I make mistakes when it comes to grammar and spelling. Just put a little more effort in gameplay and story. 

 

Waiting for chapter 2. 👍

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GKHEAT
53 minutes ago, Target13 said:

No problem. Something I would fix about your mission pack is the camera angles during the cutscenes, many times during the mission pack, the camera would be clipping through the actor. That is not only ugly but it also distracts from the dialog. Also try to avoid letting the player drive long distances (eg. Vinewood to Grove Street) because it's just plainly boring and doesn't really add much in terms of story. Another very important thing is making sure to disable wanted levels during the missions. Training Day for example had wanted levels turned on and I got a four star wanted level for shooting at 'statues'.

 

But besides all that, I like your creativity when it comes to world building. Like I mentioned earlier, Grove Street was decorated very well and I also liked the traffic jam during The Johnson Boy (2). I was live streaming this MP for a friend of mine and we were laughing and enjoying it a lot. We especially liked when the friends of the house owner in A New Start jumped in slow motion.  Don't worry about your English because even I make mistakes when it comes to grammar and spelling. Just put a little more effort in gameplay and story. 

 

Waiting for chapter 2. 👍

Thanks my friend,and can you give me the link of video of your live streaming.

 

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Target13

It was a private stream. I did not publish it.

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GKHEAT
1 hour ago, Target13 said:

It was a private stream. I did not publish it.

OK, no problem

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GKHEAT

UPDATE

Chapter 2 first mission is coming

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GKHEAT

-UPDATE-

1. 2 New actors added

2. chapter 2 First mission is out,now

Thank you

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Target13

Right off the bat I noticed a few improvements, especially in your camera angles during cutscenes. Your object placement at the Truck Stop and the manager's office were great as usual.

Unfortunately, the mission is plagued with much of the same problems as I have already pointed out before. Driving long distances is no fun at all, and in this mission I had to drive from Los Santos to Blueberry and back.

Also, it doesn't feel like we're making any progress in finding our wife's killers.

 

If you would spend the same amount of time writing the story as you spent when placing objects, your mission would be of much better quality.

Overal, a good enough mission for a beginner like yourself. Keep it up. 👍  

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ZekoX
35 minutes ago, Target13 said:

Right off the bat I noticed a few improvements, especially in your camera angles during cutscenes. Your object placement at the Truck Stop and the manager's office were great as usual.

Unfortunately, the mission is plagued with much of the same problems as I have already pointed out before. Driving long distances is no fun at all, and in this mission I had to drive from Los Santos to Blueberry and back.

Also, it doesn't feel like we're making any progress in finding our wife's killers.

 

If you would spend the same amount of time writing the story as you spent when placing objects, your mission would be of much better quality.

Overal, a good enough mission for a beginner like yourself. Keep it up. 👍  

You can try out my mission-pack too, the battle never ends.

 

 

And GKHEAT, don't do long driving distances, it's not fun at all. But for you, it's okay. Keep up with the missions!

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GKHEAT
Posted (edited)

-UPDATE-

1.One New Actor Added

2.Chapter-2 Part-2 is out now.

3.One more killer has killed.

-Stay Tuned, It's gonna more intresting.

Edited by GKHEAT

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ZekoX

I played your new mission:

 

Again, long driving distances. I man, it's not that far but it's okay. Long driving distances are not making fun at all, to me. I would fix the mission like this: You need to go to the Dillimore, I'll just skip the entire driving and teleport the protagonist at Joony's home. And yeah, the bikers were kinda hard to kill, but still it's possible. I liked your object placement, it's very good. You may improve yourself later, and not doing long driving distances. And the last biker that was meant to kill had a lot more health than the default set of health, which is okay. I killed him at Blueberry. And the ending was pretty good - usage of linear and smooth cutscenes and plus the death of the last biker. The mission is normal like the others, killing, driving etc. Good luck on the other mission.

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GKHEAT

I got you @ZekoX

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GKHEAT
Posted (edited)

-UPDATE-

1.New mission added

2.New poll added

Play N' Enjoy

Have a nice day

Edited by GKHEAT

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GKHEAT

-UPDATE-

1.chapter 2 part 4 is out now.

 

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GKHEAT

-UPDATE-

1.Crime Cities CHapter-2 part-5 is out now.

Thank you

 

And, @ZekoX Thanks for your vote.

This will finish soon.

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Nuddle King

How much chapters there will be?

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GKHEAT
On 8/31/2018 at 7:28 AM, Nuddle King said:

How much chapters there will be?

Only 2 :)

Thanks for coming/...

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GKHEAT

-UPADTE-

1.New mission added.

 

-UPADTE-

1.New mission added.

 

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Jokercina
On 9/7/2018 at 3:39 PM, GKHEAT said:

UPDATE

1. New mission added. 1 more mission is remaining that will finish soon.

2.Thanks for your support guys.

@Giorgia Vinegar@Nuddle King @ZekoX and @Jokercina.

 

No problem dude, I am going to play that mission right now. I was on holiday so i couldn't play it before

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GKHEAT

-UPDATE-

1.MP status- Finished 

2.CHapter 2 realesed

Thanks for playing....

:)

[WHOLE MISSION LINK ADDED]

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Soon, I write the review of this mission pack. I give you review soon.

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