DEATH PENALTY

[Coldnew]

 

 

You are forced to do a Bank rob by your Gang Members, it fails and

you have to escape from the Cops. You are arrested and ordered to

Death. Can you escape before its to late?

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http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/53197

Edited May 1, 2018 by Coldnew

[JohnLS]

Posted 01 July 2010 - 06:24 AM Edited by AznKei, 27 March 2014 - 03:21 AM

Writing: Decent. While there is a lot of grammar mistakes, it can be still understood.
Presentation: Could be better. My reason for this is lack of storyline, it is CJ, not some dude and his mother is already dead.

Length: Decent (Around 4-5 minutes.) This is obvious.
Difficulty Very Hard! It is very hard when you get wanted, (4 stars) and I did not know what to do after getting to grove street.--
Variety Decent: There are not many actors and only one pickup.

Edited May 3, 2018 by JohnLS

[Coldnew]

 

Posted 01 July 2010 - 06:24 AM Edited by AznKei, 27 March 2014 - 03:21 AM

Writing: Decent. While there is a lot of grammar mistakes, it can be still understood.

Presentation: Could be better. My reason for this is lack of storyline, it is CJ, not some dude and his mother is already dead.

Length: Decent (Around 4-5 minutes.) This is obvious.

Difficulty Very Hard! It is very hard when you get wanted, (4 stars) and I did not know what to do after getting to grove street.--

Variety Decent: There are not many actors and only one pickup.

 

 

Thx for your rate!

 

I will try to do that better next time