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MOTW #103

Killer_Queen_37

By Killer_Queen_37,
in Design Your Own Mission

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Voting for the MOTW #103  

12 members have voted

  1. 1. Vote for your preferred mission!

    • Riot in Los Santos by Stan1C
      0
    • Elysium by GKHEAT
      0
    • The Great Disaster by MarkoRS5
      0
    • Destruction by VenomDYOM
      0
    • Ashes of the Badges by LordStarship
      0
    • The Kingdom of Puzzle by Giorgia Vinegar
      0
    • Los Santos Asylum by XxGrovexX
      10
    • Meteors Strike by Agent-X
      2

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VenomDYOM

VenomDYOM

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Well... there is a bug that is making my mission worse (ball actors) are the ball actors, well I guess I might not participate :(

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Stan1C

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MY MISSION IS DONE! :D

HERE IS MY MISSION : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/52951

 

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In this mission, you are an ordinary man who fights for his freedom, or more precisely, the freedom of his city with his friends from the Internet.

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LordStarship

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Wow so fast, Stan! I hope your mission will win this time!

Well... there is a bug that is making my mission worse (ball actors) are the ball actors, well I guess I might not participate :(

Well, you still have 3 days left! Why won't you create a new mission instead? Your last mission was so great! Also, if you need help, just ask someone in here (not me tbh)! Maybe they will help you!

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Killer_Queen_37

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Well... there is a bug that is making my mission worse (ball actors) are the ball actors, well I guess I might not participate :(

 

Ball actors are caused by not hiding unnecessary actors. Go and hide them.

 

 

MY MISSION IS DONE! :D

HERE IS MY MISSION : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/52951

 

H8fQPrk.png

 

In this mission, you are an ordinary man who fights for his freedom, or more precisely, the freedom of his city with his friends from the Internet.

 

Excellent. I'll be adding this one up to the list.

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VenomDYOM

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Wow so fast, Stan! I hope your mission will win this time!

Well... there is a bug that is making my mission worse (ball actors) are the ball actors, well I guess I might not participate :(

Well, you still have 3 days left! Why won't you create a new mission instead? Your last mission was so great! Also, if you need help, just ask someone in here (not me tbh)! Maybe they will help you!

 

Thank you, starship. I'll accept that from your words.

 

Well... there is a bug that is making my mission worse (ball actors) are the ball actors, well I guess I might not participate :(

 

Ball actors are caused by not hiding unnecessary actors. Go and hide them.

 

 

MY MISSION IS DONE! :D

HERE IS MY MISSION : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/52951

 

H8fQPrk.png

 

In this mission, you are an ordinary man who fights for his freedom, or more precisely, the freedom of his city with his friends from the Internet.

 

Excellent. I'll be adding this one up to the list.

 

I did something wrong with the beginning, plus my mission was 100 objectives... rip

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M.B. Kovas

M.B. Kovas

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Undesirable and frightening to what extent? Murder, torture, rape? Such elements like that?

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Killer_Queen_37

Killer_Queen_37

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Undesirable and frightening to what extent? Murder, torture, rape? Such elements like that?

 

As I have said, as long as the environment is undesirable, then it's dystopia. If you need more information, then look for it online. The internet can explain it to you more than I could.

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VenomDYOM

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I played Stan1C's mission, here's a review:

 

So, at the start, we have the author name (Stan1C) as the main character.

And the other character (MarkoRS5) comes with the Sultan and he tells to drive to the camp of DYOM Designers, and when you drive there, you will meet Huzafia Khan, and he tells that KillerQueen is coming right now, and they are planning to eliminate the Operation Mamba, as you say. Then on the second fight (ball actors again) only two members can be killed and you place the bombs (explosives) and the building explodes and it's thanking me again for playing the mission. Sorry, Stan, but I'll give it a 3/5 on DYOM website, and the overall rating is 5.4/10 but you at least made a mission. Good job!

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Stan1C

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Thanks to everyone in nice words, but always something like that happens, it creates a problem after a longer mission, and I lose concentration, I'm sorry (I have noticed some errors right now)

If I make a new mission, will the old one be removed?

I will not rush any more when I'm doing the mission ...
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Killer_Queen_37

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Thanks to everyone in nice words, but always something like that happens, it creates a problem after a longer mission, and I lose concentration, I'm sorry (I have noticed some errors right now)
If I make a new mission, will the old one be removed?
I will not rush any more when I'm doing the mission ...

 

 

I don't think you can create another mission after submitting one.

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Stan1C

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Wow so fast, Stan! I hope your mission will win this time!

Well... there is a bug that is making my mission worse (ball actors) are the ball actors, well I guess I might not participate :(

Well, you still have 3 days left! Why won't you create a new mission instead? Your last mission was so great! Also, if you need help, just ask someone in here (not me tbh)! Maybe they will help you!

 

Thank you, starship. I'll accept that from your words.

 

Well... there is a bug that is making my mission worse (ball actors) are the ball actors, well I guess I might not participate :(

 

Ball actors are caused by not hiding unnecessary actors. Go and hide them.

 

 

MY MISSION IS DONE! :D

HERE IS MY MISSION : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/52951

 

H8fQPrk.png

 

In this mission, you are an ordinary man who fights for his freedom, or more precisely, the freedom of his city with his friends from the Internet.

 

Excellent. I'll be adding this one up to the list.

 

I did something wrong with the beginning, plus my mission was 100 objectives... rip

 

My mission also has 100 objects xD

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Huzaifa khan

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Hope this gonna be a hell of a contest. :D

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VenomDYOM

VenomDYOM

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Hey guys, I am getting a crash after the bike scene on my mission, the total is 92 objectives. What should I do? I didn't put any dialogue on the checkpoint...

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Killer_Queen_37

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Hey guys, I am getting a crash after the bike scene on my mission, the total is 92 objectives. What should I do? I didn't put any dialogue on the checkpoint...

 

Specify what happened.

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VenomDYOM

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Hey guys, I am getting a crash after the bike scene on my mission, the total is 92 objectives. What should I do? I didn't put any dialogue on the checkpoint...

 

Specify what happened.

 

After going through the checkpoint (objective 56) (it's made like a race) and going little straight the game crashes. That checkpoint with a arrow on it..

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AnDReJ98

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For new members - You are all allowed to vote. That rule was made to prevent people from making multiple accounts just to vote for their own missions. At some point, a lot of ''new'' accounts appeared and I had to make that rule to prevent false votes. You guys are (normally) allowed to vote and participate. Feel free to join.

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LordStarship

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For new members - You are all allowed to vote. That rule was made to prevent people from making multiple accounts just to vote for their own missions. At some point, a lot of ''new'' accounts appeared and I had to make that rule to prevent false votes. You guys are (normally) allowed to vote and participate. Feel free to join.

Really? Thanks! So i am able to vote to any of submitted mission (except mine)!

Aaaand it crashed, i didn't save. Surprise Surprise.

Don't rush. Still so many time left!

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LordStarship

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Hey guys, I am getting a crash after the bike scene on my mission, the total is 92 objectives. What should I do? I didn't put any dialogue on the checkpoint...

Specify what happened.

 

After going through the checkpoint (objective 56) (it's made like a race) and going little straight the game crashes. That checkpoint with a arrow on it..

I have ask why a DYOM missiom crashes when you reach certain number. They say if Actor, car, OR objects has reach 100, it will crash after that. But if you hide your actors (Like you create 120 actors, but you hide 50 actors after that), the hidden actors won't count. Same happen to cars and objects. And, about objectives, the limit is 100, so after it, it will crashes. Sorry about my bad grammar, i'm not from Europe or America, i'm from Asian.

Hope this gonna be a hell of a contest. :D

Do you join the MOTW? I like to see your mission! :)

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LordStarship

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My mission is 80%. Hope mine doesn't crash, else i won't be able to do another mission. The problem is the next 2 days after this, i will be so busy, so if i can i'll upload it today.

 

Still waiting for Galactic to join. Where is he/she?

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LordStarship

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My review for Stan's mission:

 

So, the mission starts with riot across Los Santos, and Stan1C is the main character. Then idk why but when Marco comes with Sultan, there is no peolle in the Sultan. So we drive to Las Colinas, go into DYOM Designer camp, and then talk to Huzaifa Khan. After that we talk to Killer Queen, and we will teleported to the city to shooting the Black Mamba.

 

1. The mission is simple but short

You can add some gunfight after the second gunfight, or you can add something after we bomb the tower.

 

2. Driving too long

If you makes we drive to certain area that is far, add extra event. The player fastly get bored if we keep driving.

 

3. The story is so short

The story is too short. You need to add something that makes the story more complicated. For example, why Black Mamba try to make a riot.

 

Until now, i give 7/10 review to your mission. Don't rush to complete your mission (unless you are me). Take a time and think how to make the player try to play it again and again. Sorry, but you don't get my vote. Have a beatiful day/night :D

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