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TQR12345

Video Walkthrough (30FPS+) & Text Review

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TQR12345

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I have no idea what to do next in DYOM, so until something comes in my mind,I'll just do mission walkthrough videos of mine and yours. You can request me here to review your mission and make a walkthrough for it. My youtube channel :
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCY78OIleENSt-CDd3dpvf5g

 

Mission List

Las Venturas Stories #1 (Uploaded)

2/5. This mission is not properly made. Leo, the protagonist, is first seen insulting and complaining about criminals, but after he meets his friends, he kills "Mr Stinky,, and the mission is 4 minutes. The grammar is not good and there are several mistakes done in this mission. Overall, the story would be a bit interesting if the designer would add more realistic events.

 

 

 

 

 

Ryder's Revenge (Uploaded)

Not gonna review this one. It's my own.

 

 

 

 

Civilians Defense (Uploaded)

3/5. Grammar must be better. Story must make more sense, the characters have kind of weird names and real designer names.

Must have better use of objects

 

 

A Cage Match (Uploaded)

5/5. This used to be my favourite genre of missions. Just some problems related to the game's artificial intelligence.

This is a bit hard, but once you get the chainsaw,you know you're the strongest out there.

Mission is long enough. Good job

 

 

Conquer The Grove (Uploaded)

My mission. No need to review it.

Rating on DYOM website 5/5 (3)

 

 

 

Robbing the Casino (Uploaded)

This is a nice mission. I rate 4/5 'cos Jacob could profit from usage of objects.There was a mistake with timeout objectives

But mission is easy-medium. And its long enough to be good.

 

Mission Pack List

The Money Chronicles

 

 

Storyline List

The King of Los Santos (Not Uploaded)

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Nuddle King

Wait what?Las Venturas Stories is my brother project!

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TQR12345

Wait what?Las Venturas Stories is my brother project!

I downloaded from GuerreroX.

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Nuddle King

But he didn't ask you to review it.

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MartZ2

I highly recommend getting OBS for recording gameplay. These free versions of minor weak recorders are all bound to have watermarks generated on your video.

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I highly recommend getting OBS for recording gameplay. These free versions of minor weak recorders are all bound to have watermarks generated on your video.

If you can tell me some recommended settings,too, I could record with OBS

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If you can tell me some recommended settings,too, I could record with OBS

If you have some sort of general idea about VFX and it's formats, preferences and such, you can set up the recorder according to your system in less than half an hour. It doesn't take much. I, as of myself, had to spend a long time while trying to fix everything to fit my needs.

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If you can tell me some recommended settings,too, I could record with OBS

If you have some sort of general idea about VFX and it's formats, preferences and such, you can set up the recorder according to your system in less than half an hour. It doesn't take much. I, as of myself, had to spend a long time while trying to fix everything to fit my needs.

 

Cant record with it. Black screen.

Anyway Martin here's the first mission from TGU

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@THBP Recorded 5/5

What I like the most about your missions is that you use the cutscenes to have a big advantage and through them you make the plot just like a TV show or a movie. Here you make the mission more beautiful since you mention these real elements, such as the global warming, the average wage in China, etcetera.



@VenomDYOM 5/5.

First,it took me a while to get familliar with the design technique. Great job on this mission. It felt like I was playing a mystery game other than San Andreas, total new feeling. And, if the mission wasn't creepy enough,the sound came and made it look like one of those creepy puzzle games. Keep up working on this, and I request to record more of Silence Scream. I'm sorry if the framerate was locked at 30,but that's a problem when I play DYOM in interiors.

 

 

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VenomDYOM

Thank you. I'll be more active on the mission pack. It was inspired from my favorite game of all time, Silent Hill.

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Yasir_RFL

Can you record my one of the bestest mission? And please buddy send a trailer proposal too. ;)

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TQR12345

Can you record my one of the bestest mission? And please buddy send a trailer proposal too. ;)

Sure buddy. Let's download it.

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TQR12345

Can you record my one of the bestest mission? And please buddy send a trailer proposal too. ;)

 

 

5/5. My friend, you are one stealthy architect!

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TQR12345

Can I get a review bro?

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/52451

You will, I promise to 5 videos in weekend, right now, I'm busy.

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Could you play only the 3rd chapter and 4th chapter (11 missions) of my MP series?

 

Link to it: http://gtaforums.com/topic/862352-mp-empire-of-the-soul/

Hey friend, here's mission 1 from chapter 3.

4.5/5 Overall your mission pack is good and it's not like these typical missions, but treats another kind of idea, I wouldn't think of ever doing this in DYOM. Also,nice usage of character's manners, Travis looks badass. Mission is long enough and leaves good first impressions. The usage of cutscenes is nice, too.

I need to get to know the story better,you know. More vids coming soon.

Keep up designing.

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Could you play only the 3rd chapter and 4th chapter (11 missions) of my MP series?

 

Link to it: http://gtaforums.com/topic/862352-mp-empire-of-the-soul/

Hey friend, here's mission 1 from chapter 3.

4.5/5 Overall your mission pack is good and it's not like these typical missions, but treats another kind of idea, I wouldn't think of ever doing this in DYOM. Also,nice usage of character's manners, Travis looks badass. Mission is long enough and leaves good first impressions. The usage of cutscenes is nice, too.

I need to get to know the story better,you know. More vids coming soon.

Keep up designing.

 

Well it would help if you had played the first 2 chapters, but I requested the latest because the first 2 have already been widely reviewed as they were released 1 and a half year ago. This one is brand new, and continues on the story, I will try to make a brief about it:

 

Daniel 'Dan' Beeson was living a normal life in San Fierro with his girlfriend Miley, early in 1999. A day after he got promoted at his job, the building where he used to work suffers a suspicious terrorist attack, his boss dies of heart arrest. When he thought it wouldn't get worse, he arrives home a bit earlier than usual to find out that his long standing girlfriend was cheating on him. The guy and the gf try to kill Dan, but he manages to kill the man and beat her enough that she becomes paraplegic. Soon after that, he goes to his old friend, Matthew 'Matt' Dempsey's house to escape and breath for a bit. In the day after, they go to the highway to find a place to discard Dan's car in the ocean as a way to get rid of any proofs while escaping from San Fierro. While doing that, they find a girl floating on a carcass at the ocean. When they go rescue her, they find out she's actually an illegal brazilian immigrant named Graziela 'Grazi' Moreira, who crossed to USA using the remainings of a car.

 

Soon after that, they decide to escape to the nearmost city, Angel Pine, only to find out they're getting pursued by a secret organization named ALSOUL, which leader is Taylor 'Miss' Effsay and co-workers are Agent 69 and Agent 24, all because Dan's ex girlfriend called the cops after he beated her, but they were corrupt enough to find a better use for them, so they called ALSOUL to take care of Dan and his group of friends. Actually they are forced to work for ALSOUL, otherwise they'll get in jail for illegal activities. Uncle Travis joins the group as a former member of ALSOUL, after being kidnapped from a log factory. Sooner than later, Dan realizes that he's actually being protected from a much worse antagonist, Tyler, a misterious FBI officer who's after him for yet unknown reasons. The main goal of ALSOUL is to control the world with their scientific experiments, Dan and his friends must do tasks in order to bring enough equipment to the main lab, so that Miss Effsay's main objective, a fully working time machine is completed by the end of 1999. Many things happen, until the D-day finally happens and they manage to jump through the time machine's portal.

 

What happens afterwards is shown from chapter 3 onwards. :)

Edited by Danz.

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Could you play only the 3rd chapter and 4th chapter (11 missions) of my MP series?

 

Link to it: http://gtaforums.com/topic/862352-mp-empire-of-the-soul/

Hey friend, here's mission 1 from chapter 3.

4.5/5 Overall your mission pack is good and it's not like these typical missions, but treats another kind of idea, I wouldn't think of ever doing this in DYOM. Also,nice usage of character's manners, Travis looks badass. Mission is long enough and leaves good first impressions. The usage of cutscenes is nice, too.

I need to get to know the story better,you know. More vids coming soon.

Keep up designing.

 

Well it would help if you had played the first 2 chapters, but I requested the latest because the first 2 have already been widely reviewed as they were released 1 and a half year ago. This one is brand new, and continues on the story, I will try to make a brief about it:

 

Daniel 'Dan' Beeson was living a normal life in San Fierro with his girlfriend Miley, early in 1999. A day after he got promoted at his job, the building where he used to work suffers a suspicious terrorist attack, his boss dies of heart arrest. When he thought it wouldn't get worse, he arrives home a bit earlier than usual to find out that his long standing girlfriend was cheating on him. The guy and the gf try to kill Dan, but he manages to kill the man and beat her enough that she becomes paraplegic. Soon after that, he goes to his old friend, Matthew 'Matt' Dempsey's house to escape and breath for a bit. In the day after, they go to the highway to find a place to discard Dan's car in the ocean as a way to get rid of any proofs while escaping from San Fierro. While doing that, they find a girl floating on a carcass at the ocean. When they go rescue her, they find out she's actually an illegal brazilian immigrant named Graziela 'Grazi' Moreira, who crossed to USA using the remainings of a car.

 

Soon after that, they decide to escape to the nearmost city, Angel Pine, only to find out they're getting pursued by a secret organization named ALSOUL, which leader is Taylor 'Miss' Effsay and co-workers are Agent 69 and Agent 24, all because Dan's ex girlfriend called the cops after he beated her, but they were corrupt enough to find a better use for them, so they called ALSOUL to take care of Dan and his group of friends. Actually they are forced to work for ALSOUL, otherwise they'll get in jail for illegal activities. Uncle Travis joins the group as a former member of ALSOUL, after being kidnapped from a log factory. Sooner than later, Dan realizes that he's actually being protected from a much worse antagonist, Tyler, a misterious FBI officer who's after him for yet unknown reasons. The main goal of ALSOUL is to control the world with their scientific experiments, Dan and his friends must do tasks in order to bring enough equipment to the main lab, so that Miss Effsay's main objective, a fully working time machine is completed by the end of 1999. Many things happen, until the D-day finally happens and they manage to jump through the time machine's portal.

 

What happens afterwards is shown from chapter 3 onwards. :)

 

I get it now, thanks!

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Can I get a review bro?

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/52451

 

 

5/5. Revolutionary, brother.

Typical government takedown mission, night-theme, infiltration, and the player sure is one hell of a daredevil, killing the governor. Where do you get such ideas, man? The mansion shootout could be more beautiful with adding actors that are running to attack you.

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