JaberDoe Posted February 12, 2018 Share Posted February 12, 2018 Anybody know of any place/forum/site where I could post what I've done and get some feedback? I've tried Reddit and I didn't get much from there. Thanks in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leftist Bastard Posted February 12, 2018 Share Posted February 12, 2018 I mean...no reason you can't try here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaberDoe Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 (edited) Well, okay then, lol. Here goes (might make a separate topic anyway): Episode #1 http://docdro.id/8qbAbCw Episode #2 http://docdro.id/xlKfE54 Episode #3 http://docdro.id/sYFbvio Episode #4 http://docdro.id/zN03HUT Episode #4.5 http://docdro.id/1QCUkNb Episode #5 (Finale) http://docdro.id/M5lM9dP It's total of ~60pgs and I know the thing is completely bonkers/nonsensical. I want to know if I am writing scripts in a way that is effective and whether I need to improve my formatting, etc. If you do give feedback, that'd be awesome and appreciated. Thanks! Edited February 12, 2018 by JaberDoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leftist Bastard Posted February 12, 2018 Share Posted February 12, 2018 I think me and others here would be able to better serve you if we had some kind of pitch or frame work to look at it through. General ideas, comparable movies/TV shows, what are your goals with this/what you want to get across etc. While it is possible to judge a script without context it helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaberDoe Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 Ah, right, for sure! Guess It'll be best to make a separate topic then. I'll get on that ASAP. Thanks for the help, bud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted February 12, 2018 Share Posted February 12, 2018 We do have a dedicated section for writers to share and showcase their work. It isn't the most active place in the world but it's a better fit there than anywhere else. I'll move this topic over there for you to save you making a new topic altogether. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaberDoe Posted February 12, 2018 Author Share Posted February 12, 2018 (edited) Gotcha! I've already made another topic anyways because I thought it'll be too long, but guess I'll post it here also for maximum exposure. I’ve basically done this “mini-series” for the sake of improving my writing by means of practice, so because it’s my first script it is beyond rough. There was a basic plot outline, but I pretty much changed so much and wrote down what came to me it’s unrecognizable from what it originally was. Plot summary: “A hitman gets hired by a mysterious figure who turns out to be psychotic. This leads our character, Const, to spiral down a hole of parallel universes, clones(?), accidental self-murder and talking vegetables.” I know it's completely ridiculous. I was inspired a lot by Quantum Leap, Inception, Hannibal and David Lynch’s stuff in some ways. Basically, I want to know if my writing and formatting are up to snuff, whether my dialogue makes sense, and in what ways I need to improve to work on proper screenplays. Anyways, without further blah-blah, here are the links to all 5½ episodes (total: ~60pgs): Episode #1 http://docdro.id/8qbAbCw Episode #2 http://docdro.id/xlKfE54 Episode #3 http://docdro.id/sYFbvio Episode #4 http://docdro.id/zN03HUT Episode #4.5 http://docdro.id/1QCUkNb Episode #5 (Finale) http://docdro.id/M5lM9dP Thanks for any comments/feedback. Edited February 12, 2018 by JaberDoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted February 12, 2018 Share Posted February 12, 2018 Alright, well I'll lock this one then and you can use the new one for feedback to keep it cleaner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
