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DYOMER99

[MP] Bullets of Vengeance

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DYOMER99

5JWvBLI.pngBULLETS OF VENGEANCE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Story:

You are Eric Taylor, a professional sniper working for the San Andreas Defense Force. One day you get a job of eliminating a big drug dealing organization called the VFGV - 9 Corp. with it's founder and president, Mr. Colin Walker. You thought it will also a usual official work. But........................ After accomplishing the mission when you return home you get a sudden surprise! Now things get very different after that. This usual official work suddenly turns to a personal revenge.

Characters:

COLOR CODES : Blue - protagonist

Green - friend

Red - enemy

Yellow - neutral

1) Eric Taylor - The professional Sniper and protagonist of this MP

First Appearance in the MP: In the house of Eric in LS, mission 1 - The Call

​2) Colin Walker - The president and the prime enemy of Eric Taylor

First Appearance in the MP: (not yet)

3) Lee Wu - The friend-in-need of Eric Taylor and a undercover agent

First Appearance in the MP: In the Police Department of LS, mission 1 - The Call

4) Fred Johnson - The chief of LS Police and a close friend of Eric Taylor

First Appearance in the MP: In the Police Department of LS, mission 1 - The Call

(More coming soon)...

Trailers & Walkthroughs:

Game-play Walkthrough of mission 1, The Call, by DeAdLy PyThOn -

Missions:

Mission 1 - The Call

link : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/50579

Mission 2 - Out there

​link : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/50741

Mission 3 - An Appalling Shock

link :

Mission 4 : Great Victory

link:

Mission 5 : Get the Rat out - 1

link:

Mission 6 : Get the Rat out - 2

link:

Credits:

PatwrickW and Dutchy3010 for creating this mod - Design Your Own Mission (without which making this MP would be impossible)

Amethyst for creating GFX logo for my MP

DeAdLy PyThOn for making game-play walkthroughs for my missions

AfricaDesignerDz for sharing my missions

Notice:

​Since am a bit new to GTAForums and this is my first MP and does not know much about GFX designing, this MP page will be a simple. So please don't write anything rude in the replies regarding the setup and looks.

News & Updates:

+ Walkthrough of 1st mission added. Thanks to DeAdLy PyThOn.

+ Second mission uploaded

+ First mission uploaded

Stay tuned for more news.

Edited by DYOMER99

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Amethyst

About GFXs you can request it to me, pal. I'll make it as I can.

Just simply drop it to the PM :)

Edited by Amethyst

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DYOMER99

Alright Amethyst. Will PM you for GFX.

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DeAdLy PyThOn

Goodluck on your first project! :D

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DYOMER99

Goodluck on your first project! :D

Thank you very much bro!

Hope it will go nicely.

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Killer_Queen_37

Your first project, I see. I'll support you in this one. I'll try and give helpful feedback in order for you to improve, somehow.

 

GOOD LUCK! :happy:

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DYOMER99

Your first project, I see. I'll support you in this one. I'll try and give helpful feedback in order for you to improve, somehow.

 

GOOD LUCK! :happy:

Thank you very much for supporting me Killer Queen !

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.GreenGoo

I always loved revenge games, so this one looks good. Since you're a newbie, I'll try this out to see if you're skilled well or not. Good Luck :^:

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DYOMER99

I always loved revenge games, so this one looks good. Since you're a newbie, I'll try this out to see if you're skilled well or not. Good Luck :^:

 

Thank you very much GreenGoo for your support!

I will try my best on this MP !!!

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DYOMER99

Well guys am busy in some personal and school matters. So there will be a bit delay in uploading the 1st mission. I will try to upload it as soon as I can.

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DYOMER99

So the GFX logo is out ! Thanks to Amethyst for making it.

And regarding my mission, I have solved all the matters I was involved in ! So I will upload the first mission within 8 hours.

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DYOMER99

The moment you were waiting for is now ! :lol::lol:

 

My First Mission of my First MP is out finally !!

link : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/50579

 

Download, enjoy, rate and stay tuned !

 

EDIT: Come on guys, write some review about the mission. Good, bad whatever give some feedbacks

Edited by DYOMER99

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DeAdLy PyThOn

So, here's a small review of your first missions.

 

 

 

Story: 4.3: Good story and great explained by Fred about the plan.

Effects: 4.0: Great cut-scenes, like phone vibration etc. (Could be lil' bit better)

Grammar: 3.5: I found few grammatical mistakes, you should improve on grammar.

Difficulty: 3.0: I didn't faced any gunfight, just driving.

Length: 3.5: These missions were pretty short. I mean no offence, but your missions should've at least 60+ objectives.

 

Overall Rating: 3.5: Since you're a newbie, this rating is good. Just improve a little bit and you'll be a pro designer!

 

 

Edited by DeAdLy PyThOn

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DYOMER99

So, here's a small review of your first missions.

 

 

 

Story: 4.3: Good story and great explained by Fred about the plan.

Effects: 4.0: Great cut-scenes, like phone vibration etc. (Could be lil' bit better)

Grammar: 3.5: I found few grammatical mistakes, you should improve on grammar.

Difficulty: 3.0: I didn't faced any gunfight, just driving.

Length: 3.5: These missions were pretty short. I mean no offence, but your missions should've at least 60+ objectives.

 

Overall Rating: 3.5: Since you're a newbie, this rating is good. Just improve a little bit and you'll be a pro designer!

 

 

Thanks bro for writing a review !

Well this was the starting mission so it does not contain much. But the next mission will be more better than this one.

 

Well guys now I have a question about what to do next.

I mean shall continue to make the rest of the mission or should I make the trailer of the MP ? :dontgetit:

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DeAdLy PyThOn

 

So, here's a small review of your first missions.

 

 

 

Story: 4.3: Good story and great explained by Fred about the plan.

Effects: 4.0: Great cut-scenes, like phone vibration etc. (Could be lil' bit better)

Grammar: 3.5: I found few grammatical mistakes, you should improve on grammar.

Difficulty: 3.0: I didn't faced any gunfight, just driving.

Length: 3.5: These missions were pretty short. I mean no offence, but your missions should've at least 60+ objectives.

 

Overall Rating: 3.5: Since you're a newbie, this rating is good. Just improve a little bit and you'll be a pro designer!

 

 

Thanks bro for writing a review !

Well this was the starting mission so it does not contain much. But the next mission will be more better than this one.

 

Well guys now I have a question about what to do next.

I mean shall continue to make the rest of the mission or should I make the trailer of the MP ? :dontgetit:

 

 

It's up to you, do whatever you wanna do first.

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Killer_Queen_37

Alright, so, I have played the first mission. To be honest, it could have been better. Hopefully, you would not take offense in any of these but if I have to give an honest feedback, then here it is;

 

As usual, I will be using AznKei's format.

 

 

 

Writing: Decent

- The sentences and words in the mission were decently constructed. However, I have seen a majority of mistakes, but don't worry, it's fine. For your next missions, please capitalise what needs to be capitalised. Also, don't condense dialogues in one cutscene for it doesn't look presentable. Lastly, don't put unnecessary expressions such as (thinking). You can express their expressions with animations but if it looks impossible, then you can go and use it. Well, this is only my opinion. You can disregard it if you want to.

 

Presentation: Decent

- The cutscenes were in a decent angle. To be honest, it doesn't look cinematic. Cinematography is very important for it makes the mission presentable and tidy.

 

Length: Short

- The length of the mission was short. At least, it's not too short. Don't worry, it wasn't boring, but it could have been better. I can see that it only takes 50 objectives for you to complete the mission.

 

Difficulty: N/A

- I understand that there was no need for a difficulty in the mission.

 

Variety: Good

- The contents were good, somehow, but I don't see anything special.

 

 

 

All in all, I will be giving your mission the rating of 3/5.

 

Hopefully, you would improve, and don't worry, maybe someday, you may impress all of us. Most importantly, don't let this demotivate you.

 

Lastly, GOOD LUCK for the next missions! :happy: I will be waiting for 'em.

Edited by Killer_Queen_37

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DYOMER99

Alright, so, I have played the first mission. To be honest, it could have been better. Hopefully, you would not take offense in any of these but if I have to give an honest feedback, then here it is;

 

As usual, I will be using AznKei's format.

 

 

 

Writing: Decent

- The sentences and words in the mission were decently constructed. However, I have seen a majority of mistakes, but don't worry, it's fine. For your next missions, please capitalise what needs to be capitalised. Also, don't condense dialogues in one cutscene for it doesn't look presentable. Lastly, don't put unnecessary expressions such as (thinking). You can express their expressions with animations but if it looks impossible, then you can go and use it. Well, this is only my opinion. You can disregard it if you want to.

 

Presentation: Decent

- The cutscenes were in a decent angle. To be honest, it doesn't look cinematic. Cinematography is very important for it makes the mission presentable and tidy.

 

Length: Short

- The length of the mission was short. At least, it's not too short. Don't worry, it wasn't boring, but it could have been better. I can see that it only takes 50 objectives for you to complete the mission.

 

Difficulty: N/A

- I understand that there was no need for a difficulty in the mission.

 

Variety: Good

- The contents were good, somehow, but I don't see anything special.

 

 

 

All in all, I will be giving your mission the rating of 3/5.

 

Hopefully, you would improve, and don't worry, maybe someday, you may impress all of us. Most importantly, don't let this demotivate you.

 

Lastly, GOOD LUCK for the next missions! :happy: I will be waiting for 'em.

Thank you very much Killer Queen for the review!!

I will mind those things in which I was down while making the next mission. Hope it will be well. I will upload it within this week positively as tomorrow's my B'Day so I will take a rest. ;)

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DYOMER99

Am sorry guys for being inactive these few days since my computer had a virus and I had to format it. So my SA as well as DYOM files got deleted. It me time to recover all those.

And now am back ! I have started with the next mission so stay tuned!

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Nuddle King

Can You Continue The Project Please...

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DYOMER99

Hmm... right said AfricadesignerDz.

So my mission is ready except for a few editing. Hopefully I can upload it within 8 hrs. !!

So stay tuned.

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Yasir_RFL

Awesome Story bro ,

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Nuddle King

Hmm... right said AfricadesignerDz.

So my mission is ready except for a few editing. Hopefully I can upload it within 8 hrs. !!

So stay tuned.

I Cant Wait,7hrs Left!

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DYOMER99

Alright guys, your waiting is finally over now. Yeah right guessed, my 2nd mission, Out There, is out now!!!!!!!

Download it, play it, enjoy it and rate and review it! Hope you guys like playing.

 

Link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/50741


Awesome Story bro ,

Thanks bro! Nice to see more Indians here!

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Nuddle King

Yessss!M2 Finaly

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DYOMER99

Yup. Play it, Enjoy it and don't forget to rate and review the mission.

 

EDIT: Also I had made a comment in the DYOM site regarding the bugs I found in the mission.

I have downloaded it and after I tested the mission, I realized that the first fire bug is not found now. Maybe it was only showing in my version. Anyways so the remaining bug is the second bug.

 

EDIT: Feedback pls!

Edited by DYOMER99

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DeAdLy PyThOn

 

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Nuddle King

Nice Work Python...Gameplay 100%

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DYOMER99

Feedbacks and reviews pls guys!!

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Nuddle King

Nice Topic Edit.

 

---------------Keep Going!---------

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DYOMER99

Nice Topic Edit.

 

---------------Keep Going!---------

Thanks !!

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