Martinovich Posted August 26, 2017 Share Posted August 26, 2017 (edited) About: This mission pack is talking about infection of San Andreas, This MP idea is to kill zombies and survive the world Story: You are Rick Paul, a lost guy in the forest, the start's going on, where Rick Paul got crash with truck.. 6 hours later, he wakes up in the midnight, checking people, while he's walking, he sees a house where's empty, while entering the house, Rick Paul is missing something, because he looked a possessed guy, is he a zombie or culture? While we get out of this house, Rick Paul is running away from those things, Rick Paul is running to the helicopter, while he almost to the helicopter, Heli is destroyed, Rick Paul runs on foot. There's no way to run to him, he jumps through a big hill, is he survived? Characters: Rick Paul: A lost man in the forest, he's a playable character. Issac Spectre: A veteran S.W.A.T. Member, he always wanted to be a hero. Bob Riggleman: A black guy, he tells everything that's going on this world. Downloads: Recommended Download/Required mods http://www.gtagarage.com/mods/show.php?id=9226 https://www.sendspace.com/file/i61xmz Game created by: Rockstar North Story made by: AtomicSpawner (Atomic Man) Characters made by: Martin (Strada) Main Mission Pack's idea by Martin (Strada) DYOM (Design Your own Mission) made by: Dutchy3010 & PatrickW Text made by: Martin (Strada) Overdose Effects made by: Function X Edited September 18, 2017 by Martin_Strada Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/895043-mp-the-wrong-lines/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B. Kovas Posted August 26, 2017 Share Posted August 26, 2017 Work on your grammar. .GreenGoo 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/895043-mp-the-wrong-lines/?do=findComment&comment=1069798034 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pablo Javier Posted August 26, 2017 Share Posted August 26, 2017 (edited) I hope you will do a good work! Edited August 26, 2017 by Pablo Javier Martinovich 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/895043-mp-the-wrong-lines/?do=findComment&comment=1069798037 Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GreenGoo Posted August 26, 2017 Share Posted August 26, 2017 Delaware's right, you must work on your grammar before designing cause the important thing in designing is the Grammar. Good luck Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/895043-mp-the-wrong-lines/?do=findComment&comment=1069798418 Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B. Kovas Posted August 26, 2017 Share Posted August 26, 2017 Delaware's right, you must work on your grammar before designing cause the important thing in designing is the Grammar. Good luck In this case, I don't think it's the most important thing. Martin's mission packs were usually very simple, short and fast. His projects usually lack character development and a decent story, which I think are the two most important things. His grammar is currently understandable, but at a weak level too. Oh and Martin, I have nothing personal against you. I am just judging your work. You need improvements. Martinovich and .GreenGoo 2 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/895043-mp-the-wrong-lines/?do=findComment&comment=1069798521 Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GreenGoo Posted August 27, 2017 Share Posted August 27, 2017 @Delaware Excatly, I always work hardly on the gameplay, creativity and actions. M.B. Kovas 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/895043-mp-the-wrong-lines/?do=findComment&comment=1069800084 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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