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Martin_Strada

[MP] The Wrong Lines

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Martin_Strada

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About:



This mission pack is talking about infection of San Andreas, This MP idea is to kill zombies and survive the world




Story:




You are Rick Paul, a lost guy in the forest, the start's going on, where Rick Paul got crash with truck.. 6 hours later, he wakes up in the midnight, checking people, while he's walking, he sees a house where's empty, while entering the house, Rick Paul is missing something, because he looked a possessed guy, is he a zombie or culture? While we get out of this house, Rick Paul is running away from those things, Rick Paul is running to the helicopter, while he almost to the helicopter, Heli is destroyed, Rick Paul runs on foot. There's no way to run to him, he jumps through a big hill, is he survived?



Characters:



Rick Paul:



A lost man in the forest, he's a playable character.



Issac Spectre:



A veteran S.W.A.T. Member, he always wanted to be a hero.



Bob Riggleman:



A black guy, he tells everything that's going on this world.




Downloads:



Recommended Download/Required mods


http://www.gtagarage.com/mods/show.php?id=9226


https://www.sendspace.com/file/i61xmz




Game created by: Rockstar North


Story made by: AtomicSpawner (Atomic Man)


Characters made by: Martin (Strada)


Main Mission Pack's idea by Martin (Strada)


DYOM (Design Your own Mission) made by: Dutchy3010 & PatrickW


Text made by: Martin (Strada)


Overdose Effects made by: Function X


Edited by Martin_Strada

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MartZ2

Work on your grammar.

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Pablo Javier

I hope you will do a good work!

Edited by Pablo Javier

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.GreenGoo

Delaware's right, you must work on your grammar before designing cause the important thing in designing is the Grammar. Good luck :^:

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MartZ2

Delaware's right, you must work on your grammar before designing cause the important thing in designing is the Grammar. Good luck :^:

In this case, I don't think it's the most important thing. Martin's mission packs were usually very simple, short and fast. His projects usually lack character development and a decent story, which I think are the two most important things. His grammar is currently understandable, but at a weak level too. Oh and Martin, I have nothing personal against you. I am just judging your work. You need improvements.

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.GreenGoo

@Delaware Excatly, I always work hardly on the gameplay, creativity and actions.

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