AndreiXZ. Posted August 16, 2017 Share Posted August 16, 2017 (edited) Welcome to my first missionpack. This missionpack has three chapters. (EASY)1. Robing the Clucking Bell - Here you need to save the clucking bell. WARNING: SKIP Cutscenes in this mission is 90% to crash the game. (MEDIUM)2. An invitation - Here you need to pick up a bag. (HARD)3.Stoping some boys to destroy San Fierro - Here, some guys want to explode San Fierro. The mission is little bit hard. If i have succes with this missions I will do Hitmen in Las Venturas. Leave a comment ! *Sorry for bad english Download: http://www.girlshare.ro/3489908342.8 Edited August 16, 2017 by AndreiXZ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leko11 Posted August 17, 2017 Share Posted August 17, 2017 Hello, i played your missions. I am not a pro dyom designer or anything but i will give you my honest opinion. 1) The missions were too easy. Next time try to make it more challenging by placing the enemy actors better, disabling headshots, giving them more variety of weapons etc. 2) The writing wasn't really good. Not only did it have grammar errors but also was It very unnatural. I understand that English isn't your language and im also from eastern Europe but you can put more effort in text. 3) If this is first mission pack you did it is really solid so keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
