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Rytuklis

[MP] Dark Skies

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DARK SKIES




The Story:



The City of Los Santos is devastated by a brand new and extremely deadly narcotic, nicknamed "The Purple Death". Extremely easy to overdose, the drug has caused deaths of more than 30 people within two months. Despite trying their best to contain the panic, LSPD is not able to get to the source of the drug, and the press starts questioning the real situation.



​As if the latter was not bad enough, the death toll only increases, as the mystery distributor of the drug starts solving internal disputes in the distribution ring by murdering former associates left and right. Desperately looking for answers, LSPD requests a transfer of a very well received LVPD detective, Connor Archibald, whose skills are now put to the test.



​In the reboot of this overlooked series, expierience the complicated partnership of two completely different detectives, who dive deep down into the city's bowels to stop the drug before it gets out of control.




Cases:



ACT 1: The Whitmann's Case



Two men are found murdered in Unity Station.....


FULL CHAPTER


Download: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37904




ACT 2: Death in Vinewood



Critically acclaimed singer Adam Lambert is assasinated in a gruesome public execution.



Work in Progress....


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Springfield

Been waiting for this. Thanks for editing the first "Act". I'll give my review soon. Goodluck on creating further missions.

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Rytuklis

Been waiting for this. Thanks for editing the first "Act". I'll give my review soon. Goodluck on creating further missions.

Thank you. I will be anxiously waiting for your review.

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Alan Eastwood

I've played the previous versions of this MP three years ago, hopefully this time we can see the end of it. Good luck!

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Springfield

Played the first Act (Whiteman's case) and here is my review: (Important: I apologize from any kind of mistake if i mentioned wrong. This is my little review :) )

 

Grammar: Seriously, the grammar was fabulous. I have nowhere found any mistake related to grammar. It was absolutely perfect. Enjoy it a lot.

Spells Check: After observing on spells work. I found two spell mistakes. "Whatoever" and again "Whtever". These two i found in the mission. The first spell mistake was in 6-7th cutscene and second mistake was 3-4 objectives (which are cutscenes) before the end of the mission. Rest of the text was excellent and spell mistakes free.

Story: The story you've choose is actually Perfect. Idea kinda from "Max Payne" but not everything. "Detective cases" is one of my best stories so, can't say anything against about story.

Presentation: Presentation was Good especially camera positions. All those coordinates was accurate and in position. The routes are kinda messed up in mission but it's a common thing in almost every mission. Civilians in coffee shop was messing up with special actors animation and you've forget to hide the first "Cody" in last cutscene of mission when "Cody" was leaving the office of "Captain". There was two "Cody" in the same room.

Difficulty: It was only cutscenes but it's okay! Every start just starts from cutscenes because it's only a introduction.

 

Overall: 8.5/10

 

It was really Good but some mistakes like peds in shops ruining special actors animations or keep coming in cutscenes. I hope you will fix these problem later. Goodluck :^: .

 

 

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Rytuklis

Thank you for playing! I already have the first couple of missions of ACT II. If you wish to beta test them, give me a heads up!

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.GreenGoo

Things looks outstanding! I'll play it and give my review soon. :)

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Rytuklis

Thanks! Will be waiting

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.GreenGoo
My review:


 


Effects: 5.0 - Effects were great, I like your style in designing.

Story/Plot: 4.5 - The story was awesome! I can't waitn to play the 2nd act. You're great.

Player/Actors Palcement: 4.5 - Placements of actors and the player, wasn't bad at all. It was good, I liked them.

Grammars: 5.0 - No any grammar mistakes found in the grammar, what I liked the most is sarcasm. You're very great in sarcastic, I like that. Keep it up!

Difficulty: 5.0 - No any actions were in the game, just presenting the Mission Pack, so great.

Length: 4.5 - The length was great, good enough to blessing a user to play this Mission Pack, but IMO you should've put the 'Two Months Ahead..." first before the conversation between Parker and Cody.

Final Score: 4.75 - I hope you didn't take any offence from me, I think you're a very pro and skilled designer, so. Keep it up, can't wait to play the full Mission Pack! ;)

 


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Alijay

Played this MP things were awesome, can't wait for the second act :D

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The Thug Life Cat

Played this MP things were awesome, can't wait for the second act :D

Stop f**king bump the old thread

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Light Syde Riandy

^ Are you serious?

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M.B. Kovas

 

Played this MP things were awesome, can't wait for the second act :D

Stop f**king bump the old thread

 

You must be retarded, son.

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Springfield

Stop f**king bump the old thread

This guy for real?

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Rytuklis

 

Played this MP things were awesome, can't wait for the second act :D

Stop f**king bump the old threadYou have issues
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Martin_Strada

Good luck!

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Aftab

So. I played it today but haven't completed the last mission yet.

The overall story was good but the gameplay was little bit boring. And I think that was because of the theme 'Detective'. Finding things around and talking to people was boring.

 

But it gets interesting in last 4 missions.

Some of the cutscenes in prologue were made very badly.

The mission Ms Wittman was crashed so I couldn't play it.

Another thing I've noticed in last mission was that after getting kidnapped and inspecting the computer, the protagonist is left behind without any weapon and he has to find drugs in another room. That was impossible because of an enemy with AK 47 standing in front of door.

And I've to use cheat code to get through it.

I'll give it 3.5/5 and that is because of the story.

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Rytuklis
Yeah I got too carried away by the story in Act I. I am trying to make it more action orientated in Act II

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The Half-Blood Prince

Will give you a feedback once you finish it. Looks very promising in a first look at the topic and the story has potential.

 

Good luck. Looking forward to this.

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SatournFan

why does the download link lead to the first mission of the first act? I didn't know and therefore thought it wasn't finished yet, fix it my man

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The Thug Life Cat

Will playing this mission pack soon.

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Rytuklis

why does the download link lead to the first mission of the first act? I didn't know and therefore thought it wasn't finished yet, fix it my man

WTF. Why haven't I noticed this..

 

The complete, full Chapter 1 link has been added for download!

Waiting for feedback!

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