Rytuklis Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 (edited) DARK SKIES The Story: The City of Los Santos is devastated by a brand new and extremely deadly narcotic, nicknamed "The Purple Death". Extremely easy to overdose, the drug has caused deaths of more than 30 people within two months. Despite trying their best to contain the panic, LSPD is not able to get to the source of the drug, and the press starts questioning the real situation. As if the latter was not bad enough, the death toll only increases, as the mystery distributor of the drug starts solving internal disputes in the distribution ring by murdering former associates left and right. Desperately looking for answers, LSPD requests a transfer of a very well received LVPD detective, Connor Archibald, whose skills are now put to the test. In the reboot of this overlooked series, expierience the complicated partnership of two completely different detectives, who dive deep down into the city's bowels to stop the drug before it gets out of control. Cases: ACT 1: The Whitmann's Case Two men are found murdered in Unity Station..... FULL CHAPTER Download: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/37904 ACT 2: Death in Vinewood Critically acclaimed singer Adam Lambert is assasinated in a gruesome public execution. Work in Progress.... Edited August 14, 2017 by Rytuklis Alan Eastwood, Alijay and M.B. Kovas 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Springfield Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 (edited) Been waiting for this. Thanks for editing the first "Act". I'll give my review soon. Goodluck on creating further missions. Edited August 1, 2017 by Springfield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 1, 2017 Author Share Posted August 1, 2017 Been waiting for this. Thanks for editing the first "Act". I'll give my review soon. Goodluck on creating further missions. Thank you. I will be anxiously waiting for your review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 (edited) I've played the previous versions of this MP three years ago, hopefully this time we can see the end of it. Good luck! Edited August 1, 2017 by Alan Eastwood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Springfield Posted August 2, 2017 Share Posted August 2, 2017 (edited) Played the first Act (Whiteman's case) and here is my review: (Important: I apologize from any kind of mistake if i mentioned wrong. This is my little review ) Grammar: Seriously, the grammar was fabulous. I have nowhere found any mistake related to grammar. It was absolutely perfect. Enjoy it a lot. Spells Check: After observing on spells work. I found two spell mistakes. "Whatoever" and again "Whtever". These two i found in the mission. The first spell mistake was in 6-7th cutscene and second mistake was 3-4 objectives (which are cutscenes) before the end of the mission. Rest of the text was excellent and spell mistakes free. Story: The story you've choose is actually Perfect. Idea kinda from "Max Payne" but not everything. "Detective cases" is one of my best stories so, can't say anything against about story. Presentation: Presentation was Good especially camera positions. All those coordinates was accurate and in position. The routes are kinda messed up in mission but it's a common thing in almost every mission. Civilians in coffee shop was messing up with special actors animation and you've forget to hide the first "Cody" in last cutscene of mission when "Cody" was leaving the office of "Captain". There was two "Cody" in the same room. Difficulty: It was only cutscenes but it's okay! Every start just starts from cutscenes because it's only a introduction. Overall: 8.5/10 It was really Good but some mistakes like peds in shops ruining special actors animations or keep coming in cutscenes. I hope you will fix these problem later. Goodluck . Edited August 2, 2017 by Springfield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 2, 2017 Author Share Posted August 2, 2017 Thank you for playing! I already have the first couple of missions of ACT II. If you wish to beta test them, give me a heads up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GreenGoo Posted August 2, 2017 Share Posted August 2, 2017 Things looks outstanding! I'll play it and give my review soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 2, 2017 Author Share Posted August 2, 2017 Thanks! Will be waiting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GreenGoo Posted August 3, 2017 Share Posted August 3, 2017 My review: Effects: 5.0 - Effects were great, I like your style in designing. Story/Plot: 4.5 - The story was awesome! I can't waitn to play the 2nd act. You're great. Player/Actors Palcement: 4.5 - Placements of actors and the player, wasn't bad at all. It was good, I liked them. Grammars: 5.0 - No any grammar mistakes found in the grammar, what I liked the most is sarcasm. You're very great in sarcastic, I like that. Keep it up! Difficulty: 5.0 - No any actions were in the game, just presenting the Mission Pack, so great. Length: 4.5 - The length was great, good enough to blessing a user to play this Mission Pack, but IMO you should've put the 'Two Months Ahead..." first before the conversation between Parker and Cody. Final Score: 4.75 - I hope you didn't take any offence from me, I think you're a very pro and skilled designer, so. Keep it up, can't wait to play the full Mission Pack! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alijay Posted August 4, 2017 Share Posted August 4, 2017 Played this MP things were awesome, can't wait for the second act Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Thug Life Cat Posted August 8, 2017 Share Posted August 8, 2017 Played this MP things were awesome, can't wait for the second act Stop f**king bump the old thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Shizuku Posted August 8, 2017 Share Posted August 8, 2017 ^ Are you serious? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B. Kovas Posted August 8, 2017 Share Posted August 8, 2017 Played this MP things were awesome, can't wait for the second act Stop f**king bump the old thread You must be retarded, son. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Springfield Posted August 8, 2017 Share Posted August 8, 2017 Stop f**king bump the old thread This guy for real? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 8, 2017 Author Share Posted August 8, 2017 Played this MP things were awesome, can't wait for the second act Stop f**king bump the old threadYou have issues Super Shizuku 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin_Strada Posted August 8, 2017 Share Posted August 8, 2017 Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aftab Posted August 8, 2017 Share Posted August 8, 2017 So. I played it today but haven't completed the last mission yet. The overall story was good but the gameplay was little bit boring. And I think that was because of the theme 'Detective'. Finding things around and talking to people was boring. But it gets interesting in last 4 missions. Some of the cutscenes in prologue were made very badly. The mission Ms Wittman was crashed so I couldn't play it. Another thing I've noticed in last mission was that after getting kidnapped and inspecting the computer, the protagonist is left behind without any weapon and he has to find drugs in another room. That was impossible because of an enemy with AK 47 standing in front of door. And I've to use cheat code to get through it. I'll give it 3.5/5 and that is because of the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 8, 2017 Author Share Posted August 8, 2017 Yeah I got too carried away by the story in Act I. I am trying to make it more action orientated in Act II Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Half-Blood Prince Posted August 8, 2017 Share Posted August 8, 2017 Will give you a feedback once you finish it. Looks very promising in a first look at the topic and the story has potential. Good luck. Looking forward to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted August 9, 2017 Share Posted August 9, 2017 why does the download link lead to the first mission of the first act? I didn't know and therefore thought it wasn't finished yet, fix it my man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Thug Life Cat Posted August 10, 2017 Share Posted August 10, 2017 Will playing this mission pack soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 14, 2017 Author Share Posted August 14, 2017 why does the download link lead to the first mission of the first act? I didn't know and therefore thought it wasn't finished yet, fix it my man WTF. Why haven't I noticed this.. The complete, full Chapter 1 link has been added for download! Waiting for feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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