KratosDrake Posted July 29, 2017 Share Posted July 29, 2017 I decided to try and do a L.A Noire fanfic, for sh*ts and giggles. Here are the results (if the link doesn't appear, just c/p it into your searcher): www.fanfiction.net/s/12591500/1/Breakdown I'd like it if you guys tell me how it was, for me to improve on a next fanfic. WARNING: Contains Stefan/Cole, so if you guys don't like, don't read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G U M M I Posted August 28, 2017 Share Posted August 28, 2017 (edited) I decided to try and do a L.A Noire fanfic, for sh*ts and giggles. Here are the results (if the link doesn't appear, just c/p it into your searcher): www.fanfiction.net/s/12591500/1/Breakdown I'd like it if you guys tell me how it was, for me to improve on a next fanfic. WARNING: Contains Stefan/Cole, so if you guys don't like, don't read. Surprised no one replied. It was alright. Though. The dialogue, I felt was almost like nothing Cole would ever say. But I guess the drinking would have thrown his professionalism and seriousness out of the window. I didn't know what you meant by Stefan/Cole, but when I read into it, I'll leave it there. I'd like to see one with more action. Like actual action, not romance. Good detail, good description, decent writing, decent fan fiction. Good job. Edited August 28, 2017 by Lucius M. Galloway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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