[MP] Bribed: Blood Money

[.GreenGoo]

I finished editing the first chapter, it wasn't as easy as I thought.

Now do you feel as I do? I put a lot of efforts on this MP and what did I got? Nothing, as I thought.

[noname1259]

 

I finished editing the first chapter, it wasn't as easy as I thought.

Now do you feel as I do? I put a lot of efforts on this MP and what did I got? Nothing, as I thought.

 

gotta stay positive.

[Martin_Strada]

Part3 is coming soon, stay tune.

[.GreenGoo]

Part3 is coming soon, stay tune.

What is coming soon? Part what??

[Martin_Strada]

 

Part3 is coming soon, stay tune.

What is coming soon? Part what??

 

Your mission pack part is coming soon.

[noname1259]

Finally, finished editing all of James missions.Also the credits song at the end was not fitting at all, just my opinion.

Edited October 8, 2017 by lol29

[.GreenGoo]

Finally, finished editing all of James missions.Also the credits song at the end was not fitting at all, just my opinion.

Thanks, and yeah you're right cause I did some changes in the soundtracks I changed the credits song and it didn't fit goodly.

[Springfield]

Created a first part of this Mission Pack. Visit at my "Gameplay field" everytime. I'm working on your MP.

[noname1259]

One question, Do you have to update Dans missions in order to make it work with the SD? when your gonna release it,Cuz i want to edit those as well.

[noname1259]

I noticed something, on this topic at the STORY it says that Lucas was working for the Lone Wolves for years but in one mission he mentions that he was working for them for only one year.

Edited October 8, 2017 by lol29

[.GreenGoo]

Created a first part of this Mission Pack. Visit at my "Gameplay field" everytime. I'm working on your MP.

Very glad to hear that! You have a really good and advanced gameplay topic, I'll be thankful to you if you do recording the whole pack!

One question, Do you have to update Dans missions in order to make it work with the SD? when your gonna release it,Cuz i want to edit those as well.

Sorry for that, I have a really busy life, I'm busy with my school and busy with my exams and busy with designing Infection and etc. It'll take some time to publish the SD Files of Dan's side.

I noticed something, on this topic at the STORY it says that Lucas was working for the Lone Wolves for years but in one mission he mentions that he was working for them for only one year.

I'll have to explain the "[MP] Vengeance, the prequel of B:BM" to you to understand the whole story of it.

 

Here it is, the short backstory of Vengeance: "Year 1985, Ralph Lucas is a businessman that works with his partner Peter Jackson and their business is selling drugs to every gang group of San Andreas. After few years Ralph understands that Peter want to take him out and the reason is to take the whole kingdom of their business to himself. Ralph was trying to leave the city and take his wife and his son with him. When he was trying to escape Peter and his goons surrounded him and killed him and his wife without giving them any mercy. But, Ralph's son escaped safely from the house but he saw the death scene of his parents. After 17 years Ralph's son grew up and didn't forgot that day, he was always thinking about the revenge and when he became a man with 23 age he started planning about the revenge of his family. But, do you know his name? Ralph's son's name is James Lucas."

[noname1259]

DAMN Thats some Nice and interesting story,but what i said in the reply above, I was pointing out that you made an error cuz in the topic at story it says that Lucas was working for the Lone Wolves for years but in a mission he says that he was working for the for only one year.You get it?

Edited October 8, 2017 by lol29

[.GreenGoo]

DAMN Thats some Nice and interesting story,but what i said in the reply above, I was pointing out that you made an error cuz in the topic at story it says that Lucas was working for the Lone Wolves for years but in a mission he says that he was working for the for only one year.You get it?

The answer is in the game. I'll explain, when Lucas was looking for some way to kill Peter he get introduced to Marcus, and work for him for almost a year to kill peter, after that he work for him to get some money for a year. 1 for revenge and 1 for money means he was working for Marcus for almost 2 years. That is it.

[Martin_Strada]

Hey, GreenGoo, what's the name of the song of trailer?

[.GreenGoo]

Hey, GreenGoo, what's the name of the song of trailer?

It's "Imagine Dragons - Friction".

[Martin_Strada]

 

Hey, GreenGoo, what's the name of the song of trailer?

It's "Imagine Dragons - Friction".

 

Thx

 

Edit: Check motw 86 missions.

Edited October 9, 2017 by Martin_Strada

[.GreenGoo]

Great, it was already released. I will see if I have the time to play this. Please wait for my feedback.

Still waiting for it, if you care.

[Notna]

I am speechless. You blew me away with this! I wasn't assured when I downloaded, but halfway through the first mission, I knew this was going to be great. Very original style of designing, nice cutscenes and mostly well put-together plot - and this is a compliment coming from a semi-professional writer! Awesome how you took a cliche betrayal-revenge plot and made it something of your own, rarely see that. I'd struggle doing that. The missions were challenging and fun to play. Wasn't just point and shoot, it kept me thinking for a strategy throughout. My only criticism comes towards your dialogue and grammar. I bet you know what kind of work you have to do the better your grammar and punctuation, so I won't get into that. I'd say you tried to explain a bit too much through the text. I like the clues subtle and some things left unsaid, it makes it way more realistic and smooth. Some clever small talk with puns here and there would do a big difference to the flow.

 

Writing this feedback I'm trying to figure some nice words how to accurately describe how good this is but it's really hard. Amazing work, I'll surely play more from you if you come up with a story that interests me. You might be the sole reason I'm getting back to the game as well. Very well done, friend. Highly recommended mission pack to anyone reading.

[.GreenGoo]

I am speechless. You blew me away with this! I wasn't assured when I downloaded, but halfway through the first mission, I knew this was going to be great. Very original style of designing, nice cutscenes and mostly well put-together plot - and this is a compliment coming from a semi-professional writer! Awesome how you took a cliche betrayal-revenge plot and made it something of your own, rarely see that. I'd struggle doing that. The missions were challenging and fun to play. Wasn't just point and shoot, it kept me thinking for a strategy throughout. My only criticism comes towards your dialogue and grammar. I bet you know what kind of work you have to do the better your grammar and punctuation, so I won't get into that. I'd say you tried to explain a bit too much through the text. I like the clues subtle and some things left unsaid, it makes it way more realistic and smooth. Some clever small talk with puns here and there would do a big difference to the flow.

 

Writing this feedback I'm trying to figure some nice words how to accurately describe how good this is but it's really hard. Amazing work, I'll surely play more from you if you come up with a story that interests me. You might be the sole reason I'm getting back to the game as well. Very well done, friend. Highly recommended mission pack to anyone reading.

Wow, that was a really awesome feedback, cause it's from one of my favorite designers! Thanks dude, I know that my grammar is a little bit weird but, I worked hardly on this. Very glad that I heard this feedback from you bro! Thanks! <3

About the word you said that you're getting back, in one of your project's page, I saw that you said you're a very bad designer but you weren't bad at all, I'm waiting for you cause you're a really good designer and the community needs someone like you!

Edited October 23, 2017 by .GreenGoo

[Notna]

Haha, which project was that? Must have been years ago. These days my ego is too big to downplay myself

[.GreenGoo]

Haha, which project was that? Must have been years ago. These days my ego is too big to downplay myself

Yeah, hahaha anyway thanks for the support bro appreciated it.

[Super Shizuku]

I feel like I am a noob when it comes to finding a hidden item inside a big building, where did you actually hidden it in "Introduction"?

 

[.GreenGoo]

 

I feel like I am a noob when it comes to finding a hidden item inside a big building, where did you actually hidden it in "Introduction"?

 

Hidden what the parachute? In the end of the hallway right side you'll find it there.

[Super Shizuku]

Access card.

[.GreenGoo]

Access card.

Tell me which mission and which card? If you mean the access card of the introduction mission of James Lucas then it's in the first aids room.

[Killer_Queen_37]

Finally, I've finished it only by now since my everyday life is always busy. I've only played Hudson Dan's side and did not bother to play James Lucas' since I'm already fond of Hudson Dan's. It was excellent! To be honest, I enjoyed playing especially the storyline. There are some occurrences that are predictable but what surprised me is that most occurrences are unpredictable!

 

So, here's my review;

 

Since I'm too lazy to construct a paragraph, I'll just use AznKei's format.

 

Writing: Very Good

- The sentences and the words in the missions were properly constructed but there were some misused and misspelled words that have to be improved but all in all, it was very good.

 

Presentation: Very Good

- I like on how some scenes were creatively constructed. I like the creativity. But, the only thing I would say is that the cinematic experience can be improved in order to give the audiences a more lively scene.

 

Length: Excellent

- The length of the missions was great! The playing time are actually enjoyable and to be honest, I didn't reach the bored and sleepy level of myself.

 

Difficulty: Hard

- The difficulty of the missions was hard but that's what I like about them! They are not too easy and fortunately, not too hard. In short, the missions were challenging. I like it!

 

Variety: Excellent

- The contents were terrific! Especially the scenes from the missions. Also, the animations were creative, I like that. You know how to make a scene a good one.

 

All in all, I would like to say thank you for this project and hopefully, I can play more of your projects soon and GOOD LUCK!

 

Voted for Hudson Dan's.

[Martin_Strada]

I think i changed my mind, Hudson Dan's is have best missions

[.GreenGoo]

Finally, I've finished it only by now since my everyday life is always busy. I've only played Hudson Dan's side and did not bother to play James Lucas' since I'm already fond of Hudson Dan's. It was excellent! To be honest, I enjoyed playing especially the storyline. There are some occurrences that are predictable but what surprised me is that most occurrences are unpredictable!

 

So, here's my review;

 

Since I'm too lazy to construct a paragraph, I'll just use AznKei's format.

 

Writing: Very Good

- The sentences and the words in the missions were properly constructed but there were some misused and misspelled words that have to be improved but all in all, it was very good.

 

Presentation: Very Good

- I like on how some scenes were creatively constructed. I like the creativity. But, the only thing I would say is that the cinematic experience can be improved in order to give the audiences a more lively scene.

 

Length: Excellent

- The length of the missions was great! The playing time are actually enjoyable and to be honest, I didn't reach the bored and sleepy level of myself.

 

Difficulty: Hard

- The difficulty of the missions was hard but that's what I like about them! They are not too easy and fortunately, not too hard. In short, the missions were challenging. I like it!

 

Variety: Excellent

- The contents were terrific! Especially the scenes from the missions. Also, the animations were creative, I like that. You know how to make a scene a good one.

 

All in all, I would like to say thank you for this project and hopefully, I can play more of your projects soon and GOOD LUCK!

 

Voted for Hudson Dan's.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it cause I promised you 2 months ago that this one will be interesting, thank you cause you motivated me from the beginning even you didn't thought wrong about me. I'm very thankful to you bro!

About James Lucas, you have to try it cause it'll blow your mind I put all my efforts on Lucas try it!

I think i changed my mind, Hudson Dan's is have best missions

I'm glad that you liked them both!

[Martin_Strada]

Here's my review about Bribed Blood Money.

 

 

''Writing'' - Very good: while I played this mission pack, the writing looks very good, and some words were misspelled. 4.55/5

''Presentation'' Excellent: all presentations were awesome made, I always love the scenes like explosions (slow motion), movable objects and ttt. 4.95/5

''Difficulty'' Hard: man, while I do a stealth mission seriously, someone seen me, I fell out of the chair, and my cover has been blown, I need restart about 9 TIMES!! 3.85/5

''Length'' Excellent: I played all missions, and I took 7-14 minutes to complete the first mission, some missions were decent like 3-4 minutes. 4.75/5

''Variety'' Good: I liked in Hudson Dan's campaign where I charge along with my squad fighting against dealers, Khalif's guard (don't remember) how are they called. 4.25/5

''Story/Plot'' Very Good: The plot of this mission pack, it looks interesting, the story of both campaigns were interesting made. 4.65/5

 

Overall Score: 82%

 

4.35/5

 

 

Create more mission like those ones and it would be great! This should be pinned in DYOM Journal, keep it up, next time!

 

Edited October 24, 2017 by Martin_Strada

[M.B. Kovas]

Here's my review about Bribed Blood Money.

 

 

''Writing'' - Very good: while I played this mission pack, the writing looks very good, and some words were misspelled. 4.55/5

''Presentation'' Excellent: all presentations were awesome made, I always love the scenes like explosions (slow motion), movable objects and ttt. 4.95/5

''Difficulty'' Hard: man, while I do a stealth mission seriously, someone seen me, I fell out of the chair, and my cover has been blown, I need restart about 9 TIMES!! 3.85/5

''Length'' Excellent: I played all missions, and I took 7-14 minutes to complete the first mission, some missions were decent like 3-4 minutes. 4.75/5

''Variety'' Good: I liked in Hudson Dan's campaign where I charge along with my squad fighting against dealers, Khalif's guard (don't remember) how are they called. 4.25/5

''Story/Plot'' Very Good: The plot of this mission pack, it looks interesting, the story of both campaigns were interesting made. 4.65/5

 

Overall Score: 8.2%

 

4.35/5

 

 

Create more mission like those ones and it would be great! This should be pinned in DYOM Journal, keep it up, next time!

 

 

82%, because the maximum is 100%. Just sayin'.