Operation Black

[VippersBoys(VB)]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cavan Aaron a gangster with mysterious past,Kills others for many.He meets Lisan Domingo,while she's doing fitness training and instantly falls in love with her.Even though their first meeting leads Lisan Domingo to think negatively about Cavan Aaron,she later begins to reciprocate his feelings.However Emmet Alan a selfish and perverted Inspector, lusts after Lisan Domingo and tells her to marry him with the threat that he would rape Arsenio Dana. If she decides to go against his decision. Emmett Alan is tipped off about Cavan Aaron's existence by Lisan Domingo's landlord. Emmett Alan tries to threaten Cavan Aaron but ends up getting frightened of Cavan Aaron after getting outsmarted by Cavan Aaron .

Glenn Clive, An international don, arrives in India for an assassination and hires Cavan Aaron. Two gangs, Palmer Celso and Glenn Clive's, fight for the biggest part of Mumbai. Due to this, Commissioner Oscar Grover decides to make Santos free of crime. He arrests Glenn Clive, who makes various attempts to contact Cavan Aaron, however, in vain. Oscar Grover is blackmailed to release Glenn Clive, after his men release an explicit video of his daughter online after kidnapping her. Under the influence of drugs, his daughter reveals a mission that involves an IPS officer, Cavan Aaron(Hidden police officer).Since Cavan Aaron(Hidden police officer)identity is difficult to decipher, Glenn Clive holds his father, Tyson Aaron captive. Tyson Aaron proudly tells him about his son, without revealing his true identity. Glenn Clive mistakes Leandro Tyron, Cavan Aaron's adopted brother, for Cavan Aaron and kills him. Glenn Clive realises his mistake and pressures Tyson Aaron to reveal Cavan Aaron's identity. Tyson Aaron is murdered by Glenn Clive after he refuses to tell him. His son, Cavan Aaron(Hidden police officer), who is revealed to be Cavan Aaron, arrives at the place of his father's death. Cavan Aaron is infuriated and decides to avenge the deaths of his father and brother. Through threatening Emmet Alan, he locates Glenn Clive. After an intense combat, Cavan Aaron finally manages to kill Glenn Clive and his co-conspirator Emmett Alan.

1. Cavan Aaron

2. Lisan Domingo

3. Glenn Clive

4. Emmett Alan

5. Tyson Aaron

6. Oscar Grover

7. Trey Garret

8. Joseph Cary

9. Davin Clyde

10. Palmer Celso

11. Arsenio Dana

Operation:Black | A Gangster Mission 1 Completed

Operation:Black | Be In Love Mission 2 Completed

Operation:Black | Dirty Police

Operation:Black | Police Rape

Operation:Black | A international don

Operation:Black | Two Gangs war

Operation:Black | Police Bravery

Operation:Black | Arrest international don

Operation:Black | Blackmail Police

Operation:Black | IPS Officer

Operation:Black | Death of Father and brother

Operation:Black | Against Gangster's

Operation:Black | Revenge [Final Part]

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Writer: VippersBoys:(VB)

Designer: VippersBoys:(VB)

Thanks to : Dutchy and Patrick

support me in dyom world and gta fourms.

I am not good i logo making i while edited the header soon.

Thanks to all

Edited June 16, 2017 by VippersBoys(VB)

[The Thug Life Cat]

Idc about your topic's presentation, but I like to see your mission's presentation

I edit always

Edited June 13, 2017 by The Thug Life Cat

[M.B. Kovas]

Sorry to say this, but this is a very poor attempt. The mission pack's name doesn't really connect to the story afterall, and besides - in the story section you pretty much spoiled all of your plot. Why should I even play it now, if you spoiled everything? The headers are way too big and the background could have been transparent too. Same can be said about the character pictures - those are straight copied from SA-MP Skin ID's page. I haven't seen how you design missions yet, but as of this topic, I'm disappointed. You need to put in more effort.

[The Thug Life Cat]

Sorry to say this, but this is a very poor attempt. The mission pack's name doesn't really connect to the story afterall, and besides - in the story section you pretty much spoiled all of your plot. Why should I even play it now, if you spoiled everything? The headers are way too big and the background could have been transparent too. Same can be said about the character pictures - those are straight copied from SA-MP Skin ID's page. I haven't seen how you design missions yet, but as of this topic, I'm disappointed. You need to put in more effort.

You made me killed my dick

 

OT: I play yours dw

Edited June 13, 2017 by The Thug Life Cat

[VippersBoys(VB)]

Operation:Black A Gangster first mission is completed added to fourms and dyom site it is intro part hope you enjoy support me in dyom site and fourms.

Edited June 14, 2017 by VippersBoys(VB)

[M.B. Kovas]

Alright, I've played the first mission. Let me review it quick.

 

Since you call yourself a "Professional Designer", I am going to rate you accordingly. Honestly, this mission was short and boring. It starts with three guys in a basketball court thinking about a birthday party. First of all, why did the other two friends have knives, and the player didn't? Anyway, after the cutscene, you directed us to "Park your car there". First of all, maybe you should have directed the car's location? I assumed that it was the Premier parked on the basketball court behind them, but seriously though, it could have been any car in the city. So you drive to the club and park the car, then continue to get into the club. Then Cavin see's some Ballas in the club, and says "hey boys, here's some ballas. Let's kill them!", and kills them afterwards. I'm sorry. What the hell was that? Why would the guys randomly think about killing some people when they come to the club to party? Then you direct us to a checkpoint where a cutscene appears with Cavin saying something like "Oh boys, today was my birthday, but I really like to kill Ballas for some reason." This has came to a point where I don't want to play this MP anymore. I'm sorry, but you should put a lot more effort in designing. With such effortless and quick work you will get nowhere. Work on your story, gameplay design, details, presentation, logic.

 

Edited June 14, 2017 by Delaware

[VippersBoys(VB)]

Alright, I've played the first mission. Let me review it quick.

 

Since you call yourself a "Professional Designer", I am going to rate you accordingly. Honestly, this mission was short and boring. It starts with three guys in a basketball court thinking about a birthday party. First of all, why did the other two friends have knives, and the player didn't? Anyway, after the cutscene, you directed us to "Park your car there". First of all, maybe you should have directed the car's location? I assumed that it was the Premier parked on the basketball court behind them, but seriously though, it could have been any car in the city. So you drive to the club and park the car, then continue to get into the club. Then Cavin see's some Ballas in the club, and says "hey boys, here's some ballas. Let's kill them!", and kills them afterwards. I'm sorry. What the f*ck was that? Why would the guys randomly think about killing some people when they come to the club to party? Then you direct us to a checkpoint where a cutscene appears with Cavin saying something like "Oh boys, today was my birthday, but I really like to kill Ballas for some reason." This has came to a point where I don't want to play this MP anymore. I'm sorry, but you should put a lot more effort in designing. With such effortless and quick work you will get nowhere. Work on your story, gameplay design, details, presentation, logic.

 

Bro i have created this just has an intro ready the story i suit's with the story yes i no i have to add more gameplay design and details in it. i am going to add more and more gameplay design and details in the other missions i was using dyom from 2013 till 2014 then i start game design and now i am back after 3 or 4 years in dyom i was having great missions in my last account which i lost the account. here is the link:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/profile/6489

[M.B. Kovas]

I suggest you first finish your missions entirely and publish them when they're in their final stage, ready for gameplay. Look, design and present your MP the way you like. It's just my opinion.

Edited June 14, 2017 by Delaware

[VippersBoys(VB)]

I suggest you first finish your missions entirely and publish them when they're in their final stage, ready for gameplay. Look, design and present your MP the way you like. It's just my opinion.

Bro I am just planning about to make my missions more realistic. Thanks your reply I appreciate I am new a good designer I a going to get it more realistic

[VippersBoys(VB)]

Updated second mission released Operation:Black Be In Love