Stories

[Hotring887]

Hi I am also starting stories like Mini-Gun is doing.  I will try to do them as often as i can. Tell me if you like them. Thanx for giving me and idea Mini-Gun i will put you on my respect list for this. A chapter a day.

 

Vercetti Estate 1987

 

On a humid Saturday morning, Avery Carrington comes to Tommy’s mansion. Avery walks in and sits down in the T.V room where Tommy is admiring his newly won Hotring Derby trophy. Tommy then asks “ Well Avery what brings you here today?” Avery Replies “ Well you know that office complex we destroyed last year is under construction again. They are going to make a new complex, which will be much bigger than before. I drove by to take a look and there’s security guards galore.” Tommy then looks at Avery closely and says, “Well I an see that this will be no easy task.” Tommy then hands Avery a cigar and thinks hard about the problem at hand. He then says, “I have an idea. I can go get a friend of mine and we will storm the place late at night. We will take out the security, then plant bombs around the facility.” Avery then replies, “ That’s brilliant. But can your friend handle this job?” Tommy then says “ O you betcha. His name’s Phil Cassidy. He lost his arm awhile back but he has still has the skills to complete the job. He also has a wide stock of weapons and explosives,” Avery then says “ Well I guess we have ourselves a deal. But how much will this cost” Tommy then holds his hand up to his chin and says “ 50k should do it.” Avery then says, “ Well if his will get rid of the building then you have yourselves a deal.” Tommy then says “ H on a minute while I call Phil.” Tommy then takes out his cell phone and calls Phil. Phil answers the phone drunken and unaware who he is speaking to. Tommy then says “ Phil it’s me Tommy.” Phil replies “ Tommy? Oh hey Tommy what’s happening?” Tommy then says “ Well I have a job for you and me. I got a friend who needs a building demolished. But there is some strong security in the way. I thought of a plan. You and me storm the place and place explosives in certain points of the building. Since you’re the only guy that has the skills and the weaponry for the job I thought you would be interested?” Phil replies, “ Well let me think, Hell Yeah! I haven’t had any fun since I lost my arm.” Tommy then says “ Well that’s great! Lets say tomorrow night at 11:0?” Phil says “ Well that’s good for me.” Tommy then says, “ Ok then that’s good. I will be over in a few hours to select our weapons for the job.” Phil then says “ Ok I will be here waiting I’ll see you until then” Tommy then says “ Ok Phil I’ll be over soon bye”. Tommy then hangs up his phone and slips it into his pocket. Tommy then says to Avery “ Well Avery it’s a done deal I will go over to Phil’s in awhile and select our weaponry.” Avery then says happily “ Well that’s good to hear. I will be looking forward to seeing that building gone. Well I must be going. I feel like getting something to eat.” Tommy then stands up before Avery and says well since its lunchtime lets go to Well Stacked Pizza. I go there often.” Avery then replies, “ Ok sounds good. My limo driver is waiting outside. Lets go”. Tommy and Avery then go outside and get into his black limo.

 

More chapter's to come.

 

 

[Hotring887]

Phil’s Warehouse

 

After having lunch with Avery, Tommy heads over to Phil’s warehouse. Phil is awaiting him in his warehouse of old and newly acquired weapons. Phil picks out the c4 explosives. Tommy selects two m16s a colt python, a colt 45 pistol, and two smoke grenades for emergency use. Phil then approves of his selection and takes the weapons out and closes the warehouse doors, Tommy then takes one of the m16’s, the colt python and a smoke grenade and puts them into the trunk of his Sentinel XS. Phil then takes the remaining weapons and puts them in the backseat of his Patriot. Tommy then say’s “ Well Phil I guess we are all set for the job.” Phil then nods his head and says “ Yeah but one more thing” Phil then goes into his trailer and brings out two bulletproof vests. He then says, “ You might need this. I was saving these for a special occasion.” Tommy then says, “ Ok thanks. I will need these. I have to go now I will se you tomorrow night at 11:00.” Phil then nods his head and goes back into his trailer. Tommy then gets into his Sentinel and heads toward his mansion.

 

More to come.

[Hotring887]

Across the street from the Construction Site, next day.

 

Tommy pulls up into the alley near the deserted Spand Express. Phil is waiting in his Patriot. They then slap on there bullet proof vests, put there side arms away and smoke bombs away, and hold there m16’s in hand. They then sneak around back and approach the rear door. They then realize there are two armed security guards guarding the door. They then sneak a little closer but the guards spot them. They then open fire on the two guards killing them with the bruttle m16’s. All the firing alerted three more guards, which approached with Chrome Shotgun’s. They shot all three of them in an instant before they could let off a shot. Phil then signaled them to move in. When they moved in Phil started placing a bomb in the corner and said loudly “ Cover me!” Two more guards came from the stairwell above with colt 45’s. They got of a few shots before one was shot in the leg and the other got scared and ran out the door. But the couldn’t leave any witnesses so Tommy then went out the door and shot the man in the back, The man shot in the leg was hustling to get up but Phil seized the opportunity and shot him with his colt 45. They then headed to the second floor and placed a bomb with no threats of guards. The third floor was somewhat different. There were three guards in a huddle that were blocking the way to the next floor. Phil then tossed a smoke grenade into the middle if their huddle. They then sprang from the huddle and were killed by the smoke inhalation. They then placed another bomb. Phil then said “ Ok that’s it just one more to go.” When they headed up to the next floor they discovered two Security guards with sub-machine guns. Tommy unloaded his m16 clip into one man while the other got Phil with a shot in the shoulder. Phil then retaliated by shooting him to death with his m16. They then placed the bomb and hustled for the back door on the first floor. They made it out and went to there cars. Phil then detonated the bombs with his remote detonators. They then drove of to Tommy’s mansion. When they arrived they went Tommy’s office. Phil held a rag to is shoulder to stop the bleeding Tommy then said “ Hey your not dripping on my floor, I’ll take you too that army surgeon I took you to. Then we can talk tomorrow.”

[The-Jackal]

The guards died of smoke inhalation?!? LMAO!! haha, good stuff hotring, keep it up, I am sure there is more...

[Hotring887]

Thanks Jackal, yes there is more i put a chapter a day. Will be another one tomorrow

[dizzy_gopher]

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[Hotring887]

Here you go. Not the most exciting one.

 

Vercetti Estate, next day.

 

Avery pulls up in his long black limo carry two black suitcases. Avery comes in the T.V room where Tommy is eating a pizza and drinking alcohol. Tommy then notices Avery and sets down his pizza and beer and says “ Well hello Avery so do you like how we did?” Avery replies, “ You’re darn tootin! You guys destroyed that building three times as better as the other one.” Then Phil pulls up in his Patriot and walks up to the front door. The guards haven’t seen him before so they have to consult Tommy. Tommy lets Phil in and leads him to the T.V room. Tommy hands Phil a drink and tells him “ Well Phil meet Avery Carrington, we destroyed his problem last night.” Avery then says “ Well nice to meet you.” They then tell Avery how they demolished the building and demolished the guards. Avery then says “ Well I have to applaud your work gentleman.” Tommy then says “ Thank you Avery.” Tommy then says “ Now about our money deal. I get half and Phil gets the other half.” Phil then says, “ Ok sounds good to me. I will by me some new weaponry with this cash.” Tommy then smiles at Phil and says “ Ok Phil you go and buy more weapons.” Avery then says, “ Well gentleman here is your money. I must be going now I have some business to attend to.” Tommy and Phil then say goodbye. Tommy then hands Phil one of the suitcases and says, “ Well here’s your cash. I think that will buy a lot of weapons.” Phil then replies, “ It sure will WOW! Look at all that green.” Phil then says “ Well Tommy I have to go also. I’m going to go buy some new weapons at Ammunation and fire some rounds at the shooting range. Would you like to tag along Tommy?” Tommy then nods his head and they both go get in Tommy’s Sentinel XS. They arrive at the range and fire some rounds with there 45’s. When there done they leave and go back to Tommy’s mansion. Phil then gets into his Patriot, salute’s Tommy, and leave’s. Tommy then yawns and goes into the T.V. room for a nap.

[Hotring887]

Posting this early. Hope you enjoy it.

 

Vercetti Estate, later that day.

 

Tommy wakes up and turns on the T.V. He then looks at the news channel and notices the report of the building being demolished. He then smiles as they name the causalities. He then laughs when they show a view from a helicopter of nothing but shambles and wreckage. He then turns off the T.V., walks up the stairs, and into his office. He sits in his chair and gazes at the ocean through his giant window. He then receives a phone call from Colonel Cortez. Colonel says “ Hello Tommy it’s Colonel Cortez.” Tommy then says “ Colonel it’s nice to here from you again. What can I do for you?” Colonel then says “ Well I am coming back to the marina on my yacht but I know the damn French will be awaiting my arrival. I was wandering if you could help me out somehow.” Tommy then says “ Well sure Colonel anything for you.” Colonel then says “ Really well thank you Tommy. You are a very big business proposition. Now how will you be doing this?” Tommy then says “ Well I can get a gun and attack them at the marina before you get there. So there will be no trouble for you and your crew.” Colonel then says “ Thank you Tommy I will pay you well fore this.” Tommy then says “ Ok sure when are you coming back?” Colonel says tomorrow morning at 8:00.” Tommy then thinks and says “ Sure I am open. I will be awaiting your arrival at 8:00 tomorrow.” Colonel then says “ Ok thank you Tommy and good luck now I must be going.” Tommy then replies “ Ok Colonel see you later.” Tommy then hangs up his cell phone and continues to gaze out his window.

[Chosen 1]

This was very good but I thought I would give a little critisism!

Just because tommy is a very "hands on guy" you could have  came up with a better idea on how to protect Cortez.    Oh and I'm not being mean when i say this but, what grade are you in, because you write like my son and heas in grade 4  I'm not being mean, it's a very good pieace of writing No offense taken hopefully!

[Hotring887]

I know i re read it and realized it isn't the best chapter. im in 8th grade by the way. They will get better i promise. Sry for my writing.

[Chosen 1]

O it's still very good, Me myself am not good ant writing, my son is fluent in english, and few other languages, he usually is the one writing what I want because I spell poorly. The english dictionary is my best friend!

[Hotring887]

Here is the next chapter guys. Enjoy.

 

The Marina, next morning. Chapter 6

 

Tommy pulls up into the underground car park with his Sentinel. He looks out and spots three cars with four men in each waiting by the entrances and middle section of the Marina. He then takes out his M60 (a powerful gun used by helicopter’s and boat’s) and aims carefully at one of them. He caps the first carload without hesitation. But the next four men come toward him with spas shotguns in hand. He takes out two but the other two have him pinned down behind the wall. Then he rolls out quick and shoots them down. The next carload decides to get into two Speeders and race toward the Colonel’s boat. Tommy has no other choice but to follow them with another Speeder. He gets up close to one boat and fills the bottom up with lead so it will sink. He then shoots the two men inside. The other boat has already got a mile ahead of Tommy. He races up to him but he had already got to the Colonel’s boat. So Tommy races up to he boat which holds the to men. He lets off a shot to kill one of them but the other climbs aboard the ship. Luckily the Colonel’s crew was awaiting any on coming unwanted attention. They then punch the man down and hold him at bay until Tommy gets here. The Colonel steps out and greats Tommy while his crew are holding the French man down. Tommy then asks the man “ Why are you attacking the Colonel!?” The man has very small English words to spit out, “ We were just following orders.” Tommy then says, “ Who is ordering you guys to attack him” The man can barely talk when he says, “ Pierre sent us.” Tommy then says “ Pierre? Who the hell is that?” The man says, “ He’s the man that you almost killed last year.” Tommy then says “ Who? I have killed a lot of people” The man then says, “ He was the courier who had the chips. You almost killed him but he lived. Now he is out for you and the colonel.” The Colonel then says, “ Well he won’t be a threat to us. He can handle anyone.” Tommy then nods and says “ He will let you go, but you must tell this Pierre that he should watch his back from now on.” They then throw the man of board onto the speeder he stole. The man then speeds off into another direction. Colonel then thanks Tommy for his assistance and leads him down stairs. Colonel then hands him a suitcase of 20 thousand and says, “ Well here is your payment for a job well done. Now I must you must be going. O and how is Mercedes doing?” Tommy then smiles and says, “ Thank you Colonel and Mercedes is doing very well. In fact she is in the movie business now.” The Colonel then says “ Really what kind of movies?” Tommy then laughs and says “ Well uuuummmm… Comedy movies. She is doing fine.” The Colonel then smiles and says “ Well that’s very good news to here Tommy, I thank you again. Now off you go.” Tommy then gets into the Speeder he stole and speeds off to his boat yard. Tommy arrives and changes from his Speeder to his Squallo. He then speeds to his mansion.

[Hotring887]

In the water, heading toward mansion. Chapter 7

 

Tommy is cruising along but runs into a blockade of three boats blocking his path. There is a Speeder, a Reefer, and a Patriot blocking him from his mansion. He then pulls out his M60 and opens fire on there boats. The Reefer and the men on it are destroyed. The Patriot starts firing back with snipers on board. Tommy then blows the Speeder up along with the men on it. The Patriot won’t go quietly. They fill Tommy’s boat seats full of holes. But Tommy keeps firing and eventually sinks the Patriot. He then speeds to where the boat sank and runs right over the two men slicing them up. Tommy then keeps heading toward his luxurious mansion. He docks it and steps off. He then heads up into his mansion and into his office to put his money in his safe. He then thinks he needs a change of clothes, so he changes into his Casual wear from Gash. He then call’s Colonel to tell him that he got ambushed. The Colonel then says “ Well that does it. Tommy we have got to get rid of this Pierre and his men. I have found out that he lives in a hotel a few blocks from yours. It’s called he Deacon Hotel.” Then Tommy says “ Colonel I was also thinking of rubbing out Pierre. I will go tonight and kill him.” The Colonel then says “ Ok Tommy but it will be hard since he will have the French guarding him.” Tommy then says “ Don’t worry I have the fire power to deal with this.” The Colonel then says “ Ok Tommy I must go. I wish you good luck.” Tommy then says “ Ok I will see you you later.” Tommy then hangs up the phone, grabs his python, his Mp5 machine gun, and gets into his Infernus. He then starts to head over to the Deacon.

[Chosen 1]

 

It has gotten better, It is good!

[Hotring887]

thanx. the next chapter is good i think. i dont remember.

[[ZERO]]

LMAO! These are all hilarious. Keep 'em coming.

[Hotring887]

Hope you guys like this one. You will probably want to know what happens next.

 

Deacon Hotel, later that night. Chapter 8

 

Tommy arrives to notice that there are two black Washington’s and an admiral waiting outside. Tommy then heads around back to the fire escape. He climbs up and spots two men directly above him. So Tommy doesn’t hesitate and blasts the two men full of holes. Tommy is showered with blood. He then moves up and climbs through a window. He then sees two men guarding a door. “It’s most likely Pierre’s” room Tommy says to himself. Tommy then shoots the first man while the other pulls out a colt python. Tommy then pulls out his colt python and fires around the corner at the French man. He hits him point blank in the chest killing him instantly. Tommy then kicks in the door to see Pierre sprinting to get out the door but Tommy fire’s a shot at the window and Pierre freezes in his tracks. Tommy then punches him onto the bed and points his python at his head. He then asks Pierre “ So what the hell do you want out of all this?” Pierre then responds, “ I want you and the Colonel dead. Then I can take over all your businesses. I would be rich as can be!? Tommy then stares at Pierre and says, “ So that’s what you are trying to do? Well I’m going to kill you first!” Before Tommy could let of a shot the police burst through the door saying, “FREEZE!!!” Tommy dropped his weapons and put his hands behind his head. The police took Tommy and Pierre away to the station.

[DA_LAD]

kool stories

[Hotring887]

thanx DA_LAD here is the next chapter. hope you guys like it.

 

The Washington Beach Police Station, next morning. Chapter 9

 

Tommy was irate in his cell. He couldn’t get a hold of himself. Then he heard the Chief Don Anderson talking to one of his officers about Tommy. He said “ Well we got a drug dealer and a murderer right on our hands. We will interrogate him in 5 min.” Then the officer and the chief walked away. Then Tommy heard someone come in. Thinking it was an officer he didn’t look up. But it was Cam Jones. Cam then says in a low voice “ Tommy it’s me Cam.” Tommy then says “ Cam? What are you doing here?” Cam then says, “ I heard on the radio you got caught. I am here to bust you out. Hold on a minute while I pick this lock.” Cam than pulls out his set of fine new lock picks he gained when they robbed a bank awhile back. He then picks the lock in a minute’s time. They then go out of the jail cells and to the desk outside of the cells. Tommy then grabs his gear and heads through the hall. A few officers noticed them but they were quickly killed. Now the whole police station was alert. Tommy and Cam ran outside and hot-wired a police cruiser. They then had two police cruisers on their tail. Tommy managed to swerve before smashing into a wall, but the officer didn’t manage that turn. The other car did and was chasing down Tommy and Cam. They were heading for Starfish Island when they saw a roadblock up ahead. They couldn’t get onto Starfish Island because of the blockade. They then saw a man driving a Bobcat. So they went over, tossed the man out and headed for the roadblock. The officers moved and the Bobcat smashed right into the two police cruisers flipping the cars out if the way. Now Tommy had a clear path to his mansion. They pulled in drove to the garage. The police hadn’t seen them go into the mansion so they were safe. Cam and Tommy then got out quickly and headed for the front doors. Two guards then guarded the door from anyone else entering. Tommy then said “ Thanks Cam I owe you one.” Cam then says “ No you did the same thing for me.” They then go to his office to rest and talk. Tommy then says “ Sh*t! I didn’t get Pierre yet. He is still at the station.” Cam then says “ Well at least you alive.” Tommy then says, “ Well if he ever gets out I will kill him” Cam then says “ Sounds good. I have to go I’ll take a taxi home.” Tommy then says good-bye and heads up to his office to sleep for a while.

[[ZERO]]

 Hehe. These stories are awesome and funny. Keep them coming mate.

[Hotring887]

thanx. the next chapter is a good one. Will be out tomorrow morning. So when you get back from school, read it.

[DICKWAD 1]

Wow Hotring those are great stories keep up the good work!  I hope you write more soon.  Keep up the good work.

[namida]

you know whats kool,i dont got school SPRING BREAK!!!!

[Hotring887]

namida that doesnt have to do with anything we are talking about. here the next chapter guys.

 

Vercetti Estate, one week later. Chapter 10

 

Tommy is sitting in his office chair smoking a cigar and staring at the Candy Suxxx picture on his wall. Then Cam walks in and says “ Hey Tommy I have found out that that Pierre guy you were wanting to rub out is going to be released today” Tommy then stands up and smiles. He then says, “ Well, Well, Well now is the chance to get that bastard back. I have a brilliant scheme to kill him. First you dress up like a cab driver and drive a cab to the police station. You pick him up, lock the doors, and take him back here. Then we can kill him silently and dispose of his body in the water out back.” Cam then says, “ That would work but we don’t have a cab or cab clothes.” Tommy then says “ Don’t worry I own Kaufman Kabs, so I can get a cab and clothes there.” Cam then says “ Well ok I’ll do it.” Tommy then pats Cam on the back and leads him to his Sentinel. They then head over to Kaufman Kabs, get a cab, and drive to the Washington Beach Police Station.  Tommy heads toward his mansion to await Pierre and Cam. Cam pulls up to the Washington Beach Police Station and waits for the slimy Pierre. Pierre steps into the cab and says “ Take me to the Deacon Hotel” Cam ignore Pierre and locks the doors. Cam can here Pierre trying to open the doors the whole way to Tommy’s mansion. When they arrive Cam unlocks the doors and Tommy pulls Pierre out. Tommy then starts beating Pierre with his bare hands. They then bring him around back where they find the Colonel awaiting them. Tommy called the Colonel earlier to tell him about their brilliant plan. The Colonel then watched them beat Pierre up then begin to tie giant cinder blocks to Pierre’s feet. The Colonel then said good-bye and had the honors of pushing Pierre into the water. The Colonel then said “ Well that gets rid of him and the French from ever attacking me or you again Tommy.” Tommy then says “ Yeah enough of that rat. Now let’s all go inside and have some pizza and beer, my treat.” Cam and the Colonel agree and follow Tommy inside.

[BenMillard]

The odd new paragraph wouldn't kill you, makes them hard to read otherwise.

Paragraphs lend to the clarity of your work, in fact, as my english teacher would say:

"A story without paragraphs is a bird without wings."

She smoked a lot of pot, talked a lot of nonsense and generally was a good laugh.

 

The moral of this story?  New lines just make it all much easier to follow what the writer is saying.

[Hotring887]

i have changed them but i wrote a bunch before i did so it will appear for in this  chapter. here ya go.

 

Vercetti Estate, two weeks later Chapter 11

 

Two weeks later Tommy was watching the news once again and saw that four armed men went into The El Banko Corrupto Bank, killed everyone inside, and made of with 200 k. Tommy was then thinking to himself those men actually killed everyone inside when we didn’t. Then Tommy called over to Phil’s.

“Hey Phil you remember when we robbed that bank right?” asked Tommy.

Phil then replied “ Yeah I remember why?”

“ Well I just saw on the news that four guys robbed it but they slaughtered everyone.” Said Tommy.

Phil then said “Yeah so what we killed some SWAT guys.”

Tommy then says, “ Yeah but I think they are trying to show us up. I think they think they are better than us.”

Phil then says, “I see your point Tommy. I think we should show them up, but not by robbing a bank by having a brawl.”

“ Sounds like a good idea Phil. Just a gun fight to the death.” said Tommy.

Phil then said “ Yeah but they have four guys where are we going to get two more people?”

“ Well let me think Cam could help out but we would need to teach him stuff about guns. Then I could get one of my best bodyguards.” Said Tommy.

Phil then said, “ Ok where will we hold our battle?”

Tommy then paused and thought of a place to hold the bloody dispute.

Tommy then said “ Well we could hold it at the Haitian drug factory I blew up last year.”

Phil then says, “ Well sounds like a good place. I have the weapons for the job.”

Tommy then said, “ Now all we have to do is find out who these men are. I know who can dig up the dirt on these men also. I have to go Phil I will talk to you later.” Tommy then hangs up the phone and heads over to the Malibu to find Kent Paul. Tommy arrives in his Sentinel and is greeted by his guards. He then asks them if Kent Paul is in.

One of the guards said, “ O you mean that dumb English guy, yeah he’s in. He never has any luck with the woman.” Tommy then thanks the guard and heads into the club. The club (like always) is full of the young people of Vice City. Most of them come to dance but others come to have a few drinks. Tommy then spots Kent at the bar trying to pick up on a girl. Tommy then walks up to Kent.

Kent then says, “ Oh it’s you. Move along honey I have business to attend to. Now what can I do for you Tommy.”

Tommy then says “Well Kent four guys robbed a bank earlier, and I want to know who did it.”

“ Well I can tell you who did it but I need some cash.” Tommy then gives Kent 2000 bucks and waits for him too count all the money.

“Well now that’s over lets get down to business. All four men are Haitian. They all live in the rundown neighborhood of Little Haiti.” Said Kent.

“Now me and some friends are going to have a gun fight with them. Tell them if they are man enough to come.”  Said Tommy.

Kent then says “ Ok I will tell them now where is this battle going down?”

“ The old Haitian drug factory. It’s on their turf so no one else but them.” Said Tommy.

Kent then asks, “ When is it going down?”

Tommy then says “ Well tomorrow at 9:00. Kent then nods his head, heads out, gets in a taxi, and heads towards Little Haiti. Tommy then goes up stairs and calls Phil.

Tommy then says “ Phil meet me at my mansion tomorrow at 8:00, o and tell Cam to come to my mansion immediately.” Tommy then hangs up the phone. He then heads out and gets in his Sentinel, heading for his estate. Tommy arrives and sees Cam awaiting him at bottom of the stairs. Tommy then leads Phil up to his office to allow him to read his gun manuals on his desk. He then takes Cam down to Ammunation to practice his aim. They arrive and begin shooting with a 45, then an m16, then a sub machine gun. Tommy is amazed to see that Phil who does not usually fire a gun shooting so well. Phil then explained that he learned from his father how to shoot, but he didn’t usually fire a gun. Tommy then took Phil back to his house then back to his mansion. Everything was set out for the battle. Phil had the guns and experience, Cam had experience, and Tommy and “Z” had experience. Tommy then went into his T.V. room and fell asleep.

[Hotring887]

here's the next chapter.

 

Old Haitian Drug Factory, the next night. Chapter 12

 

The four Haitians were already there obviously because they lived near there. Cam and Phil pulled up and awaited Tommy and Z. They arrived five min later. Phil then went to Patriot and handed a colt 45, a chrome shotgun, and an Uzi. The men then look intimidated because they only have a colt 45 and a Tec 9 machine gun. They then get ready for the battle. After five min Tommy says the old 3-2-1 and GO!! Each side started bursting out with gunfire. The first person too cease is a Haitian shot in the forehead. He stood right in the crossfire. The next was another Haitian who was hit five times in the chest and once in the shoulder. While the second Haitian died, Z was firing at the two remaining Haitians when one of them shot him in the back paralyzing him. Tommy then noticed Z down and took out his chrome shotgun, snuck up behind one of the Haitians and blasted his head off literally. All that was left was a headless body. The last remaining Haitian tried to make a break for it and headed for the gates. But he was shot once in the leg by Tommy and then in the head by Cam. When they finished off them they went and checked on Z, but he had died of blood loss. They then looked at each other in amazement that only one of them died. They then packed up and headed for Well Stacked Pizza in downtown. They then talked over their battle they had won.

Tommy then said, “ You know now we should find their cash. I would imagine they have it at their house.”

Cam then said “ Well since we have nothing else to do let’s do that after we are finished.”

Phil and Tommy both agreed and finished their pizza quickly. They then headed over to their home. When they got there they were cautious and pulled out there Uzi’s. Tommy peeked in the window and spotted two men watching T.V with they’re backs turned towards Tommy. Tommy then motioned Phil to come over and Cam to get in the car. Tommy and Phil then killed the men with gunshots to the head, making them fall out of their chairs. They then broke the door down and spotted a briefcase on the table. They took it and got in the car quickly. Every Haitian who heard the shots was chasing Tommy and the gang. They fill the Sentinel full of lead while Phil on the other hand was firing left and right at oncoming Haitians. Then a Haitian car pulled out of an alley and rammed Tommy’s Sentinel. The Voodoo tipped Tommy and Cam over twice. Phil then hit the brakes and yelled for Tommy and Cam to get in. Tommy had the money in hand. They then raced towards Tommy’s mansion. But the Voodoo kept ramming Phil’s Patriot, but Phil pushed the Voodoo to the right heading toward a wall. The Voodoo tried to take a left but he couldn’t and before he could hit the brakes he was sent into a wall at 50 mph. Tommy and Cam laughed as they watched the car burst into flames. Phil kept his eyes out for any more surprises. They then made it to Tommy’s estate without anymore unwanted attention. They then parked Phil’s car in the garage with the police car from an earlier time. They then rushed up to Tommy’s office with the briefcase in hand. After that Tommy gave 66,666 dollars to Cam and Phil. Tommy put his share in his safe. They then smiled at there accomplishment.

Tommy the said “ Thanks Phil we were almost done for back there.”

Phil then said “ Well its no problem. You would have done it for me.”

“ Well no more taxi’s for me I am buying a Cheetah now.” Said Cam

Tommy then smiled and said, “ Yeah I wrecked my Sentinel, I think I will by myself a nice new Phoenix.”

Phil then said “ Yeah I am going to need to fix up my Patriot a little.”

Cam and Phil then said they must be going and headed for there homes. Tommy then fell asleep in his office.

[Chosen 1]

There getting better, much better! Keep it up

[Hotring887]

There getting better, much better! Keep it up

thanx Chosen 1. I believe the next chapter is a good one. sry i forget.