Zhong Xina Posted December 12, 2017 Share Posted December 12, 2017 Yeah, well. Sounds great! Gotta try it ASAP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted December 12, 2017 Author Share Posted December 12, 2017 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeanAlgerian Posted December 12, 2017 Share Posted December 12, 2017 Am in Chapter 1? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted December 13, 2017 Author Share Posted December 13, 2017 Yes You are! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TQR Posted December 23, 2017 Share Posted December 23, 2017 Can you also add me in this MP? I would be grateful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted December 24, 2017 Author Share Posted December 24, 2017 Ok , I will add you in V3 , what will be your name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TQR Posted December 24, 2017 Share Posted December 24, 2017 Ok , I will add you in V3 , what will be your name TQR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted December 25, 2017 Author Share Posted December 25, 2017 Agent TQR TQR 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aftab Posted December 28, 2017 Share Posted December 28, 2017 Woah, I look odd. I don't know how I missed this mp. Gonna play it rn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted December 29, 2017 Author Share Posted December 29, 2017 Haha You will love this, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TQR Posted December 29, 2017 Share Posted December 29, 2017 am i yet added? xd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted December 29, 2017 Author Share Posted December 29, 2017 Yes ,You have added to V3...... just wait , minimum 2 months ,lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TQR Posted December 29, 2017 Share Posted December 29, 2017 okey i cant wait to see myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted December 30, 2017 Author Share Posted December 30, 2017 Yeah, I will work again on V2 in February 2018 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Opcode Posted January 13, 2018 Share Posted January 13, 2018 Following are the things I am going to focus. All rating are accounted for your mission pack. Grammar Spelling Mistake Plot Cutscenes Object&Pickup Length Difficulty Presentation Indications: Horrible Could be Good Decent Good Very Good Excellent Grammar - (Grammar also include punctuation. You have to put some serious amount of time on your grammar. Not as a hater but actually I saw many errors during playing mission also Punctuation need some more attention first after Grammar. Vast number of mistakes in Punctation was caught. Maybe it is because you were new in the community at that time or you need to face some improvements) Spelling Mistakes - (There were many spelling mistakes like "safly" etc but it was good. I saw many fixes of spellings in missions but still, I was watching the existence so this obtains yellow colour) Plot - (Good I mean really. That was a good idea making something unique which contains Real life Designers but their roles were not impressive. I was expecting something better from them according to their skills IRL) Cutscenes - (Cutscenes placements and their movements were good especially when there was a meeting in the office. Rotations were good. I am impressed with the cutscenes but still, I need more impressment) Object&Pickup Placements - (Seriously, the objects placements were not good. They were like half of their corner was through the other near object like there is no collision in them + inappropriate objects for mission and that cue ball on the actor's head was really unrealistic) Length - (Too short mission but long distance checkpoints were making the missions longer + I was not able to read and understand the cutscenes as they were concluding soo fast. Please avoid from the short cutscenes as they disturb many designers) Difficulty - (Difficulty was very easy. Easy enemies + given a hunter to kill 250 health people) Presentation - (I was going to give it a yellow but when I deleted the colourful hud and fonts then they were looking good. Using green in the colourful text with white in a right position was good but presenting your name in a very colourful way was a new member just joined the community. I want you to keep it up) + there were some things like putting a cage for jumping from the top was really unrealistic and too many enemies in first mission was really absurd. Punctuation was bad and too much capital letter. +OVERALL - 6\10 Try to improve on mentioned mistakes and weakness and you will be awesome! Yasir_RFL 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted January 13, 2018 Author Share Posted January 13, 2018 (edited) Well,I am crying lil but in happiness.Thanks for the review,I will try my best to become good in grammars and spelling and for the cue ball, I was trying to make it like an apple.So,Aftab could be able to do practice with his sniper. Thank you again and sorry for what I said to you. You are actually awesome in reviewing. I hope you will progress here too. EDIT:I have done here mistakes,too. Edited January 13, 2018 by YasirRFL King Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos17 Posted January 14, 2018 Share Posted January 14, 2018 (edited) Hey, nice mp add me also if possible(@Chaos) as a villian. Edited January 14, 2018 by Chaos17 Yasir_RFL 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted January 14, 2018 Author Share Posted January 14, 2018 Alright! First time some one wants a different role. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeanAlgerian Posted January 14, 2018 Share Posted January 14, 2018 Too many spam on the topic!Finish off 02 thing please.Also am gonna give you the review soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasir_RFL Posted January 14, 2018 Author Share Posted January 14, 2018 Alright thanks for telling me! SeanAlgerian 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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