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Yasir_RFL

The real heroes are the Army Man

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Cptmyname

Yeah, well. Sounds great! Gotta try it ASAP.

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Yasir_RFL

Thanks!

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Nuddle King

Am in Chapter 1?

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Yasir_RFL

Yes You are!

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TQR12345

Can you also add me in this MP? I would be grateful.

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Yasir_RFL

Ok , I will add you in V3 , what will be your name

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TQR12345

Ok , I will add you in V3 , what will be your name

TQR

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Yasir_RFL
Agent TQR

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Aftab

Woah, I look odd. I don't know how I missed this mp. Gonna play it rn

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Yasir_RFL

Haha You will love this,

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TQR12345

am i yet added? xd

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Yasir_RFL

Yes ,You have added to V3...... just wait , minimum 2 months ,lol.

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TQR12345

okey i cant wait to see myself

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Yasir_RFL

Yeah, I will work again on V2 in February 2018

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Opcode

Following are the things I am going to focus. All rating are accounted for your mission pack.

 

  • Grammar
  • Spelling Mistake
  • Plot
  • Cutscenes
  • Object&Pickup
  • Length
  • Difficulty
  • Presentation

Indications:

 

Horrible

Could be Good

Decent

Good

Very Good

Excellent

 

 

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Grammar - (Grammar also include punctuation. You have to put some serious amount of time on your grammar. Not as a hater but actually I saw many errors during playing mission also Punctuation need some more attention first after Grammar. Vast number of mistakes in Punctation was caught. Maybe it is because you were new in the community at that time or you need to face some improvements)

 

Spelling Mistakes - (There were many spelling mistakes like "safly" etc but it was good. I saw many fixes of spellings in missions but still, I was watching the existence so this obtains yellow colour)

 

Plot - (Good I mean really. That was a good idea making something unique which contains Real life Designers but their roles were not impressive. I was expecting something better from them according to their skills IRL)

 

Cutscenes - (Cutscenes placements and their movements were good especially when there was a meeting in the office. Rotations were good. I am impressed with the cutscenes but still, I need more impressment)

 

Object&Pickup Placements - (Seriously, the objects placements were not good. They were like half of their corner was through the other near object like there is no collision in them + inappropriate objects for mission and that cue ball on the actor's head was really unrealistic)

 

Length - (Too short mission but long distance checkpoints were making the missions longer + I was not able to read and understand the cutscenes as they were concluding soo fast. Please avoid from the short cutscenes as they disturb many designers)

 

Difficulty - (Difficulty was very easy. Easy enemies + given a hunter to kill 250 health people)

 

Presentation - (I was going to give it a yellow but when I deleted the colourful hud and fonts then they were looking good. Using green in the colourful text with white in a right position was good but presenting your name in a very colourful way was a new member just joined the community. I want you to keep it up)

 

+ there were some things like putting a cage for jumping from the top was really unrealistic and too many enemies in first mission was really absurd. Punctuation was bad and too much capital letter.

 

+OVERALL - 6\10

 

Try to improve on mentioned mistakes and weakness and you will be awesome!

 

 

 

 

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Yasir_RFL

Well,I am crying lil but in happiness.Thanks for the review,I will try my best to become good in grammars and spelling and for the cue ball, I was trying to make it like an apple.So,Aftab could be able to do practice with his sniper. Thank you again and sorry for what I said to you. You are actually awesome in reviewing. I hope you will progress here too. :D

 

EDIT:I have done here mistakes,too. :p

Edited by YasirRFL King

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Chaos17
Hey, nice mp add me also if possible(@Chaos) as a villian. Edited by Chaos17

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Yasir_RFL

Alright! First time some one wants a different role.

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Nuddle King

Too many spam on the topic!Finish off 02 thing please.Also am gonna give you the review soon.

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Yasir_RFL

Alright thanks for telling me!

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