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The John David

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1999, on the first day of June. An attack on town was occured by the first day of June, led by Spetsnaz, special forces units of russia, taken over Los Santos and preparing to launch a surprise attack, People have overrun the whole town of Los Santos, a riot has happened. On the Natick Army Soldiers Systems Center (NASSC). a soldier, Carlisle Kenny, was one of the best soldier of NASSC. He was a best men and has a high accuracy that can perform tactical combat skills. And his friend, Jeffry Billy. One of Carlisle's partner. A commander of the NASSC, Lamont Tatton, ordered Carlisle Kenny and Jeffry Billy to infiltrate Los Santos and find out what's goin on to the town. Get all the information from the Spetsnaz Russia and transport it from Lamont Tatton.


Leader of Spetsnaz russia, Martin Denis. He's planning to create his project "Spiridus" A monster jet fighter that can destroy a whole city, causing an apocalypse to all town. Martin Denis right-hand, Yefrem Grigory. A mafia russia joined for Martin and has a very skilled tactical combat.


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One of NASSC's best soldier and have a tactical combat skills


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Spetsnaz's Russia Leader, attacked Los Santos on first day of June


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Full MP + DLC Available - Download Here

Initial Release Date - May 3, 2017

DLC Release Date - May 8, 2017


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So, all my school studies are finished now. Now the progress of the MP will be faster than before. Actually I need some free time that I need to rest and do something important stuffs at home.

 



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Jhan Dave; for creating a new MP

Dutchy3010 and PatrickW; for DYOM

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Battle of Los Santos? That's great but, the name of characters are bit more.. weird, just saying.

 

That I said, you might need to look up for a new name, google will do ;)

 

Nevertheless, this looks awesome as in my opinion. It's seems to not connected to the previous MP which is Battle of San Fierro, anyway great. Good luck on this.

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Battle of Los Santos? That's great but, the name of characters are bit more.. weird, just saying.

 

That I said, you might need to look up for a new name, google will do ;)

 

Nevertheless, this looks awesome as in my opinion. It's seems to not connected to the previous MP which is Battle of San Fierro, anyway great. Good luck on this.

It's not connected on the BSF anymore, I'm done for that series. Grekov's old now and alone.

I know the names are a little bit weird, I use the name site to get the character names.

 

Anyway, thanks for the hype :D

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News: 9% Completed Pack. Demo will release tomorrow or another day, if i organize my time here.

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I'm gonna review this demo, wait for the edit with the review.

And here is the review:

Writting: Not the best, but not the worst. You had common writting mistakes, but that won't ruin gameplay after all. Just improve a bit.

Gameplay: The training and the attack we're very good designed! Trust me, with such a good designer like you, this mission pack will become a success after all.

Presentation: Russia attacks Los Santos and you are a skilled soldier. According to the story you also gather some friends and fight the so called Spetsnaz's high ranks. The training wasn't that good, it is a bit too hard (and by that i mean the bottle one, 10 seconds isn't enough for some people with slow reflections) and also lack of realism (why are you killing FBI officers after all? Why not some dummy targets?). The first mission is the Russians that attack Los Santos. According to the story Russia wins, but in reality USA will win all the times. But this is GTA after all! Also, i might be wrong right now because if the Spetsnaz existed in real life Russia might win. A nice idea for the airplanes but very outdated (1939 airplanes here, but reworked and used for acrobatics), the skins of the enemy wasn't the best, very weird but if that's what you think about how really they should look, i might be wrong. The smoke effect doesn't really have effect on their leader, he appears out of nowhere. After all, good idea and not a common one.

Difficulty: Try to tweak the difficulty in the training. 10 seconds is just not enough. 15 seconds might be better. And yes, you should have a average difficulty in all missions. - Hard.

Realism: As i said on the presentation. Russia attacking USA (i might be really wrong here), the FBI officers, outdated Airplanes, (i might be also wrong), enemy skins and the effect. You really should work on that.

 

After all, you got a 3.5/5. Try to work on difficulty, realism and writting, even if your designing skills are very good.

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The John David

Hi designers. Sorry for been holding this MP so long. Been busy for my school activities and learning to scripts for L4D2. So this time. I will continuing this MP as soon as possible. :D

 

 

I've lost my files for making a MP for this at the start of the March, because my pc's been upgraded to gaming and supporting softwares.

 


I'm gonna review this demo, wait for the edit with the review.

And here is the review:

Writting: Not the best, but not the worst. You had common writting mistakes, but that won't ruin gameplay after all. Just improve a bit.

Gameplay: The training and the attack we're very good designed! Trust me, with such a good designer like you, this mission pack will become a success after all.

Presentation: Russia attacks Los Santos and you are a skilled soldier. According to the story you also gather some friends and fight the so called Spetsnaz's high ranks. The training wasn't that good, it is a bit too hard (and by that i mean the bottle one, 10 seconds isn't enough for some people with slow reflections) and also lack of realism (why are you killing FBI officers after all? Why not some dummy targets?). The first mission is the Russians that attack Los Santos. According to the story Russia wins, but in reality USA will win all the times. But this is GTA after all! Also, i might be wrong right now because if the Spetsnaz existed in real life Russia might win. A nice idea for the airplanes but very outdated (1939 airplanes here, but reworked and used for acrobatics), the skins of the enemy wasn't the best, very weird but if that's what you think about how really they should look, i might be wrong. The smoke effect doesn't really have effect on their leader, he appears out of nowhere. After all, good idea and not a common one.

Difficulty: Try to tweak the difficulty in the training. 10 seconds is just not enough. 15 seconds might be better. And yes, you should have a average difficulty in all missions. - Hard.

Realism: As i said on the presentation. Russia attacking USA (i might be really wrong here), the FBI officers, outdated Airplanes, (i might be also wrong), enemy skins and the effect. You really should work on that.

 

After all, you got a 3.5/5. Try to work on difficulty, realism and writting, even if your designing skills are very good.

Thanks for the review, QED, I'll try harder this next time.

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Hi designers. Sorry for been holding this MP so long. Been busy for my school activities and learning to scripts for L4D2. So this time. I will continuing this MP as soon as possible. :D

 

 

I've lost my files for making a MP for this at the start of the March, because my pc's been upgraded to gaming and supporting softwares.

 

I'm gonna review this demo, wait for the edit with the review.

And here is the review:

Writting: Not the best, but not the worst. You had common writting mistakes, but that won't ruin gameplay after all. Just improve a bit.

Gameplay: The training and the attack we're very good designed! Trust me, with such a good designer like you, this mission pack will become a success after all.

Presentation: Russia attacks Los Santos and you are a skilled soldier. According to the story you also gather some friends and fight the so called Spetsnaz's high ranks. The training wasn't that good, it is a bit too hard (and by that i mean the bottle one, 10 seconds isn't enough for some people with slow reflections) and also lack of realism (why are you killing FBI officers after all? Why not some dummy targets?). The first mission is the Russians that attack Los Santos. According to the story Russia wins, but in reality USA will win all the times. But this is GTA after all! Also, i might be wrong right now because if the Spetsnaz existed in real life Russia might win. A nice idea for the airplanes but very outdated (1939 airplanes here, but reworked and used for acrobatics), the skins of the enemy wasn't the best, very weird but if that's what you think about how really they should look, i might be wrong. The smoke effect doesn't really have effect on their leader, he appears out of nowhere. After all, good idea and not a common one.

Difficulty: Try to tweak the difficulty in the training. 10 seconds is just not enough. 15 seconds might be better. And yes, you should have a average difficulty in all missions. - Hard.

Realism: As i said on the presentation. Russia attacking USA (i might be really wrong here), the FBI officers, outdated Airplanes, (i might be also wrong), enemy skins and the effect. You really should work on that.

 

After all, you got a 3.5/5. Try to work on difficulty, realism and writting, even if your designing skills are very good.

Thanks for the review, QED, I'll try harder this next time.

You did good. Just work a little on these i said :)

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Logo changed to new one.

28% Completed...

 

Back to work.

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I love this MP, it hsve the awesomest battle because Jhan Dave is designing it!

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I love this MP, it hsve the awesomest battle because Jhan Dave is designing it!

Thanks :D

 

Added "Agent Kenny's Skin" for mod.

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Hey, goodluck for MP, Jhan. I am GYAWater7 btw :D.

Why you've create another GTAFORUMS Accout. You have an official account, GYAWater7?

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Hey, goodluck for MP, Jhan. I am GYAWater7 btw :D.

Why you've create another GTAFORUMS Accout. You have an official account, GYAWater7?Cuz I lost my previous accounts password.
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Mission Pack will be paused for a while, due to the DYOM Site and some important stuffs to do.

Sorry for inconvience.

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Mission Pack will be paused for a while, due to the DYOM Site and some important stuffs to do.

Sorry for inconvience.

 

Ahhh... man. I thought BLS will be released sooner. :dontgetit: But don't worry I'll wait for it! :lol:

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Mission Pack will be paused for a while, due to the DYOM Site and some important stuffs to do.

Sorry for inconvience.

Ahhh... man. I thought BLS will be released sooner. :dontgetit: But don't worry I'll wait for it! :lol:

Don't worry bro. This may paused for a while because for the site and some duties at home. Will be progress after everything is all done and fixed.

Sometimes without the site getting fixed by the admin. I will be also progress and upload it to the mediafire.

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Yeah? So now. I've finished many things at home. Now it's time to open the progress for this MP and continue designing for it. Still, I have the Saved DYOM files. Changed the release date

 

Release Date: May 10, 2017

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Yeah? So now. I've finished many things at home. Now it's time to open the progress for this MP and continue designing for it. Still, I have the Saved DYOM files. Changed the release date

 

Release Date: May 10, 2017

I'll be waiting for it, bro! ;)
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I've a question: Does BLS have 8 missions or more?

Not so sure about it. And yea? Sometimes it may contain 8 missions or more. Because the other mission is likely some additional story for it. But any of my MP contains them all 8 missions or more.
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Battle of Los Santos? That's great but, the name of characters are bit more.. weird, just saying.

 

That I said, you might need to look up for a new name, google will do ;)

 

Nevertheless, this looks awesome as in my opinion. It's seems to not connected to the previous MP which is Battle of San Fierro, anyway great. Good luck on this.

 

Yeah, Noticed it, he used only first names to name the characters, You must choose between first and last name bro

Good luck

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Battle of Los Santos? That's great but, the name of characters are bit more.. weird, just saying.

 

That I said, you might need to look up for a new name, google will do ;)

 

Nevertheless, this looks awesome as in my opinion. It's seems to not connected to the previous MP which is Battle of San Fierro, anyway great. Good luck on this.

 

Yeah, Noticed it, he used only first names to name the characters, You must choose between first and last name bro

Good luck

 

Thanks, Next. I should try to use the names properly next time

 

Trailer been Reuploaded due to loss password of my channel :D

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Wow Jhan i like the demo

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But in 2nd demo how you make 3 planes fly perfectly ?

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Wow Jhan i like the demo

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But in 2nd demo how you make 3 planes fly perfectly ?

I use the objects, then add a plane, then place it above to the object + the actor, it'll make the plane fly without taking-off.

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Wow Jhan i like the demo

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But in 2nd demo how you make 3 planes fly perfectly ?

This is "Jhan Dave"! The professional designer, what do you expect from him except awesome missions pack? Huh?

So, the planes are just easy for him to design. stay tuned to see the whole MP! :D

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