ElPatron036 33 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Plot: Salvatore asks Toni to pick up Kenji Kasen, as his sister Asuka completely forgot him. For: Salvatore Leone Unlocked by: Cash in Kazuki's Chips Location: Shoreside Vale Police Station, Francis International Airport. Target: Yardies trying to kill Toni and Kenji [Toni walks to a Window at Salvatore's Cell] Salvatore: Toni! I'm f*cking dead! Toni: What the f*ck is going on actually? Salvatore: Some Yakuza Sister named Asuka or some sh*t wants me to save her brother! Toni: Nah, f*ck Yakuza's. Salvatore: Toni! I didn't made you a made man for nothing! I need you! You're my only hope! Toni: Fine! For my reputation! Salvatore: You better need that bike! Get on the bike [Then Toni jumps on the PCJ-600] Go pick up the forgotten Yakuza at Francis Int. Airport [Then Toni drives to the Airport] [After Toni reached, he is leaning on the bike, waiting for Kenji] [Toni sees Claude and Catalina kissing] Catalina: More! MORE! MOOORE! [That disgusted Toni] [Kenji shows up as he leans to the bike too, watching the couple] Kenji: Nice couple, aint they? [Toni gets shocked] Toni: WAAAH! sh*t! [Kenji bursts in laughing] Toni: You better shut the f*ck up before i rip your nuts off. Kenji: Heh, Salvatore sent you here, right? Toni: Yeah, because your sister threatened him. Kenji: Asuka? She has anger issues. [suddenly two Yardies are watching Toni and Kenji talking] Yardie#1: Ey! Watch! Da Leone is allying with Da Yardie! Yardie#2: That Bumbaclot! Let's bloodclot those 2 pussyholes [Yardie#2 calls for back up] Yardie#2: Ey! We need backup! Leones are becoming bumbaclots! We planned to bloodclot them![Then 4 Yardies shows up while 2 Yardies are driving the PCJ-600] Yardie#3: Let's bloodclot those assholes! Kenji: Toni! I drive! You'll handle these dōkō-kai![suddenly Kenji and Toni are getting on their PCJ-600 while the Yardies are shooting on them but they survive] [The cutscene ends as a drive-by started with Toni shooting and Kenji driving] Kill those backstabbing f*ckers who caught you allying with Kenji! [Then the Yardies are chasing Toni and Kenji by driving on their PCJ-600's and the passengers are shooting on them] [At a part, Kenji sees a ramp and drives to it] Kenji: Let's take the ramp! Toni: Carefully! [Then Kenji and Toni jumps to a ramp as they are screaming and the short cutscene is slow motion] Toni and Kenji: OOOH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!!! [Then the bike with Toni and Kenji on it lands on a road, back to the Drive-by] Toni: What the hell was that? Kenji: A Shortcut! [Toni keeps on shooting the Yardies while Kenji is driving the bike] Toni: I think we lost them! Kenji: Yeah! [The bike with Kenji and Toni on it accidentaly jumps on another ramp] Toni: KEENJIIII! YOU BLIND f*ck!' [Then the bike destroys, but Toni and Kenji survived as they see another pair of Yardies] Finish these traitors! [Then Toni and Kenji kills the Yardies trying to kill them] Toni: Ugh! This time i drive! [Then Toni and Kenji jumps on another PCJ-600, switching places where Toni is driving and Kenji shooting] Go to Asuka's Condo [Toni drives to Asuka's Condo in Newport while Kenji is shooting the Yardies] [After they reached the Condo] Toni: Hey you! I got your brother! Asuka: Alright! [Kenji jumps off the bike and he and Asuka walks into the Condo] Mission Passed Jimmy and Chase2002 2 Link to post Share on other sites
Ivan1997GTA 1,864 Posted November 21, 2016 Share Posted November 21, 2016 (edited) Eh, I wouldn't say the mission was bad, but it could be a little better. Here's my ending for the mission.Toni: OK, Asuka, I got your brother Kenji.Asuka: Good.(Kenji pulls out a gun)Toni: Hey, what the f*ck?Kenji: I know what you did, you Leone bastard!Toni: You mean I killed your brother Kazuki and his wife, Toshiko?Kenji: Correct!Toni: But... she ordered me to kill him, and once I came back and told the news, she jumped off her apartment into the street and landed on some bypassers car, dying.Asuka: She must have felt guilty about killing Kazuki. After all, she probably couldn't take the idea of being the leader of Yakuza.Toni: Yeah, I guess so.Kenji: For now, I'm taking over Kazuki's dead business. And with the Sindaccos long gone, I could open up a new casino in my name! Not to mention, we have less competition!Asuka: As for you, Toni Cipriani...Toni: Wait, how'd you know my name?Asuka: It doesn't matter. From now on, the Yakuza and Leones are no longer on friendly terms. After what you've done, you're a marked man on Yakuza territory. Now, get the hell out of here and don't come back. Ever. Otherwise, you're a dead man. Edited June 29, 2017 by Ivan1997GTA Osric and Jeansowaty 2 Link to post Share on other sites
ElPatron036 33 Posted November 21, 2016 Author Share Posted November 21, 2016 (edited) Eh, I wouldn't say the mission was bad, but it could be a little better. Here's my ending for the mission. Toni: OK, Asuka, I got your brother Kenji. Asuka: Good. (Kenji pulls out a gun) Toni: Hey, what the f*ck? Kenji: I know what you did, you Leone bastard! Toni: You mean I killed your brother Kazuki and her wife, Toshiko? Kenji: Correct! Toni: But... she ordered me to kill him, and once I came back and told the news, she jumped off her apartment into the street and landed on some bypassers car, dying. Asuka: She must have felt guilty about killing Kazuki. After all, she probably couldn't take the idea of being the leader of Yakuza. Toni: Yeah, I guess so. Kenji: For now, I'm taking over Kazuki's dead business. And with the Sindaccos long gone, I could open up a new casino in my name! Not to mention, we have less competition! Asuka: As for you, Toni Cipriani... Toni: Wait, how'd you know my name? Asuka: It doesn't matter. From now on, the Yakuza and Leones are no longer on friendly terms. After what you've done, you're a marked man on Yakuza territory. Now, get the hell out of here and don't come back. Ever. Otherwise, you're a dead man. Good one. Edited November 21, 2016 by ElPatron036 EsperantoGTA3 1 Link to post Share on other sites
ElPatron036 33 Posted November 23, 2016 Author Share Posted November 23, 2016 Unlocked by: Grove Street is No More [Toni walks in Asuka's Condo, even though she is absent in the mission] [Cutscene starts with Luigi Goterelli and Kenji Kasen talking] Kenji: So after Toshiko wanted Toni to kill my brother Kazuki, Me and my sister honestly understands. Luigi: Shut your mouth Kenji I already heard the news, and I never saw anybody who doesn't avenge his brother's death. [Toni walks in] Luigi: Aaaaand who the f*ck are you? [As he looks at Toni] Kenji: That's Toni Cipriani, Salvatore's Favorite Member of the Leones! He killed my brother because the wife of the brother forced him to do so Toni: Why won't that prick Introduce to me? Kenji: Ah! Toni! Look! This is Luigi Goterelli! He is a Leone too, he has a business in Portland which is named Luigi's Sex Club, which has some of the hottest girls, but the Sindacco's used to hang around in that place, but finally the Leone's are safe with their guru's! Luigi: I never knew you we're Salvatore's Favorite, 'Toni', I've never saw someone skinny. Toni: Why does everyone say that everytime?! Kenji: Please show some respect to a friend, look, do some sh*t like err... grabbing me a Casino just like the one around that the Yardies has. Luigi: I ain't killing no Yardie! Toni: We'll Luigi! They tried to kill us! [Luigi and Toni walks out of the Condo as the Cutscene ends] Go to the Torrington Casino [They grab a car and Toni and Luigi goes to the Casino in Torrington] While they are talking at the Road Luigi: Sooo.... How's life? Toni: Don't be shy! The Yardies just snitched us! Luigi: I remember that Toni. [After the Converstation, they reach the Casino which has plenty of Yardies] Yardie#1: Tha Yakuza doesn't need this anymore, nah? Yardie#2: We gotta Casino? Aight? Yardie#1: Hey! It's that bumbaclot who snitched us with the Yakuza! And that sh*t Luigi Goterelli! [They start shooting at Toni and Luigi as they Hide] Don't let any of them alive! [Then they are fighting a way into the casino by killing the guarding Yardies and they enter the Casino] Finish the pair! [Then they kill the remaining Yardies in the Casino] [After they Finish everyone, they are having a Conversation as a Cutscene starts] Luigi: Salvatore was right about you! I owe you! Now let's get the hell out of here before the Yakuza thinks we are taking over the Casino [Then they leave the Casino] Kenji: You guys did well! Let me clean the Casino! [Kenji enters the Casino] Mission Passed Link to post Share on other sites
LCLegend 596 Posted November 24, 2016 Share Posted November 24, 2016 I like the fact that at least Luigi was brought in. But if Luigi was a Leone also, wouldn't Sal introduce him to Toni? Link to post Share on other sites
ElPatron036 33 Posted November 26, 2016 Author Share Posted November 26, 2016 (edited) So there is some Japanese Doll Dressing Game, named Kisekae, and I made some GTA Liberty City Stories Characters! I will show you the Images! That was my Masterpiece! I think I might create more! Edited November 27, 2016 by ElPatron036 Osric 1 Link to post Share on other sites
ElPatron036 33 Posted November 27, 2016 Author Share Posted November 27, 2016 The characters I made using Kisekae from the post above: -Toni -Roger C. Hole -Kazuki Kasen -Donald Love -Leon McAffrey -Ray Machowski -Salvatore Leone -Vincenzo Cilli -JD O'Toole Link to post Share on other sites
universetwisters 34,724 Posted November 27, 2016 Share Posted November 27, 2016 Why does JD look like a soccer mom? [...] 1 Link to post Share on other sites
ElPatron036 33 Posted November 27, 2016 Author Share Posted November 27, 2016 Why does JD look like a soccer mom? Unfortunately, you can't make a Character Bald (I know he has Side Hair) and let your character have beards in Kisekae as you only can make Females on there (But there is a trick to make a Male Person) And I am trying to make the Shoes of JD Accurate Link to post Share on other sites
ElPatron036 33 Posted December 3, 2016 Author Share Posted December 3, 2016 NAME: Riots Unlocked by: 2 Rasta 4 Casinos [Toni enters Asuka's Condo seeing Asuka, Love, Kenji, McAffrey, Machowski and Luigi watching the Liberty News] Luigi: Toni! Toni! You gotta see this sh*t! Toni: What? Liberty News Reporter: Since Miles O'Donovan creates a shutdown to all Gang Groups due to the wipeout of the Sindaccos, they are beginning to go crazy! And we will talk to the Don of the Sicilian Mafia! Massimo Torini! [The reporter hands the Microphone to Massimo Torini] Massimo: Questa è un'ottima notizia! They deserve to riot! Even the Leone's! But luckily the Sindaccos weren't involved here at all as the leader Paulie Sindacco died. Toni: Holy f*cking sh*t! They're gonna Assassinate the Mayor! Even the Forelli's! Ray: Toni, come with me, we gotta stop this sh*t! Were gonna calm these f*cks down! Together Asuka: Me and McAffrey are partnering for this! Donald Love: I will hide somewhere like a pussy! Luigi: Then me and Kenji are left over! Nah, we are gonna calm the rest down! [McAffrey, Asuka, Kenji, Love and Luigi are leaving the Condo to handle with the Gangs and Mafia's as Toni and Machowski are left over] Ray: Let's take my ride! We don't want to get through that dangerous sh*t without a ride! Get in Machowski's bulletproof car [Then Toni and Machowski enters a Yellow Bulletproof Patriot] Drive to the City Hall to protect O'Donovan [During the Ride, all gang members are constantly fighting each other with all random gang members] [They'll reach the City Hall] Don't let any gang members inside to assassinate O'Donovan! [Then Machowski and Toni are shooting to random members from Hoods, Yardies, Forellis, Triads, Yakuza, Colombian Cartel, Diablos, Bikers and Avenging Angels even though the Avenging angels are fighting crimes to protect O'Donovan from being assassinated] [After that, some Leone Members are running to the City Hall and they suddenly stop running] Leone#1: Huh? Toni? What are you doing here? Toni: We are gonna speak with Mr. O'Donovan soon that this is a bad idea! I do not want to whack any of you! Leone#2: Alright! Let's go inside! [Then Machowski, Toni and the Leone's are going inside, seeing O'Donovan hiding!] Miles: PLEASE! Go away! Toni: Mayor! This was a bad idea! Everyone is angry at you! They hate you! You don't want to be assassinated right? Miles: Wait a minute? They're angry at me? Ray: They do! They are ruining the whole city! Miles: sh*t! I shouldn't never done that! I will make a speech! [screen fades black and fades back again as O'Donovan is making a Speech] Miles: I officially will cancel the shutdown of the Gangs and Mafias! The Sindaccos were piece of sh*t anyways! They were causing trouble in this whole city! [Then screen fades to Massimo Torini hitting the TV with a Baseball Bat] Massimo: NOOOOOOOO! Pezzo di merda Miles! Mission Passed Link to post Share on other sites
DragonpokeZ 371 Posted January 30, 2017 Share Posted January 30, 2017 All these fanfics where the Leones ally with the Yakuza are getting annoying. Don't y'all get that if the Yakuza don't hate the Leone, Claude would've died during 'Last Wishes' in III's storyline? Because then Asuka wouldn't be f*cking with Maria since she is Salvatore's wife and Asuka wouldn't want no friction over a woman, therefore Maria would have no way to save Claude other than her making an over-the-top dramatic reaction when Claude is about to get in the car and then Claude shooting Salvatore and many other Leones on his way out to escape Portland, which would then leave him stranded in Staunton Island with the two main gangs as his enemies (remember: the Colombians hate him and the Yakuzas are allied with the Leones so they won't exactly approve of Claude killing the Leone boss and X number of goons/made men). Like the only possibility would be a Claude-Yardies alliance or something, but then again the Yardies ain't that powerful and during Kingdom Come we see how they can easily be manipulated by the Colombians, so yeah. It would give us III's ending situation like a third through the storyline TL;DR Don't make fanfics where the Leones and Yakuza are allied, since if that were to happen Claude would be f*cked and so would III's storyline (well unless Claude was never betrayed by the Leones... which I find unlikely) Jeansowaty 1 Link to post Share on other sites
ElPatron036 33 Posted January 30, 2017 Author Share Posted January 30, 2017 All these fanfics where the Leones ally with the Yakuza are getting annoying. Don't y'all get that if the Yakuza don't hate the Leone, Claude would've died during 'Last Wishes' in III's storyline? Because then Asuka wouldn't be f*cking with Maria since she is Salvatore's wife and Asuka wouldn't want no friction over a woman, therefore Maria would have no way to save Claude other than her making an over-the-top dramatic reaction when Claude is about to get in the car and then Claude shooting Salvatore and many other Leones on his way out to escape Portland, which would then leave him stranded in Staunton Island with the two main gangs as his enemies (remember: the Colombians hate him and the Yakuzas are allied with the Leones so they won't exactly approve of Claude killing the Leone boss and X number of goons/made men). Like the only possibility would be a Claude-Yardies alliance or something, but then again the Yardies ain't that powerful and during Kingdom Come we see how they can easily be manipulated by the Colombians, so yeah. It would give us III's ending situation like a third through the storyline TL;DR Don't make fanfics where the Leones and Yakuza are allied, since if that were to happen Claude would be f*cked and so would III's storyline (well unless Claude was never betrayed by the Leones... which I find unlikely) I know it's getting annoying, but they aren't even a Yakuza yet! And okay! I will stop! Link to post Share on other sites
ElPatron036 33 Posted January 30, 2017 Author Share Posted January 30, 2017 You may stick to this one... Name: Ready for the Trickshots Unlocked by: Riots [Toni enters Kenji's Casino] Kenji: Toni! There you are! I got some last jobs for you to become our friend! Right? Toni: I understand! My boss is still inside! Kenji: I will take care of your boss! But you have to do me a favor! Toni: What? Kenji: The Yardies! They are gonna blow up the Casino! They have a van with a bomb, get it to me to safe my Casino! Toni: On my way! Go to the Parking Lot [Then Toni gets a car and drives to the parking lot in Rockford and Toni gets a phone call from Joey when he gets there] [Toni picks up] Toni: Hello? Joey: Hey it's me! The son of your father! The Yakuza tries to kill you! They will bomb the ride! Get the hell out of there! It's a trap! Get away from the car as it is about to explode! [The car explodes] [Then 2 Yakuza Members come] Yakuza Member#1: What! How could've he survived that? Yakuza Member#2: It doesn't matter, waste him! [Then a few of the Yakuza Members come] Waste the group of Yakuzas! [Then Toni kills the Yakuzas trying to kill Toni] [Toni grabs his phone and calls Kenji Kasen] Toni: Are you serious? ARE YOU f*ckING SERIOUS?! Kenji: WHAT?! How the hell can you still be alive! Toni: I thought you and Asuka is fine with the death of your brother! Kenji: We lied to you bastard! You're dead! A marked man! f*ckED! Toni: We'll! You can forget this job! I don't need your sh*t anymore! [Toni hangs up] Go to the casino but watch out! If one of the Yakuza Members spot you! They will attack you! [Then Toni drives to the Casino] Go in the casino and DESTROY it to teach Kenji Kasen a lesson. [Toni gets inside the Casino] Destroy the stuff to teach Kenji not to mess with you! [Toni destroys the Casino, and shooting the Yakuzas trying to stop Toni, after he done that, he exits the Casino] Mission Passed' [Toni gets a phone call from Asuka] Toni: Hello? Asuka: You piece of sh*t! Motherf*cking dickhead! Toni: It's YOUR brother! He tried to kill me! Asuka: I don't care! You're NOW a real marked man in the Yakuza turf! You asshole! Toni: We'll! It's nice to speak with you bitch! But I have to do more jobs from other people. Asuka: IF I GET YOU! I WILL... [Toni hangs up] Jeansowaty 1 Link to post Share on other sites
DragonpokeZ 371 Posted January 31, 2017 Share Posted January 31, 2017 Well okay I guess THAT would create congruence with the storylines. See, it's not about the fanfics or the concepts behind them bad, it's just that I can't stand when the fanfics would severely affect other timelines. Like say you made a fanfic where CJ travels in time to help Franklin rescue Michael from Trevor who has gone psychotic from his meth abuse and thinks Michael was plotting against him, and then CJ and Franklin manage to waste Trevor. And now say this mission was one of the last ones in the game but prior to the last mission. Now, the concept is good, but it just f*cks around with the timeline too much. That's not something I personally like Jeansowaty 1 Link to post Share on other sites
