ElPatron036 Posted November 4, 2016 Share Posted November 4, 2016 None of this is actually true, i had to put this so NO Immature Spoiled Asuka fanbrats (No, i don't hate Asuka) would be like "WHAT?! ASUKA WOULD NEVER DATE MIGUEL!" Alright, so they got killed because Miguel betrayed Catalina for telling the information to Asuka, here is how it was in MY WAY. [Asuka hits Miguel with her torture stick] Asuka: Are you going to tell me it? Or do you want more pain? Miguel: You keep hitting me with that thing, while i was trying to give you the information! [suddenly the trio are silent and thinking] Maria: I think he is right friend, speak up Miggie! Miguel: Alright, i wasn't the one who killed your brother, it was some other Cartel Assassin who smugged him, we never had fights, and now the Cartel Information, look, Catalina is a spoiled bitch, she treats me like sh*t, so I wanted to leave her, but she forces me to stay, they live in a Mansion in Shoreside Vale, which used to be occupied to Donald Love, who is missing actually. Maria: I saw the situation about your brother too, It wasn't that guy. Asuka: Hey Miguel, i know a way you can forgive me. Miguel: What? Asuka: How about we are having some coffee? Maria: Aww! So cute! Asuka: Maria, you may leave. [Then the screen zooms out so people won't see Asuka and Miguel having sex] Asuka: OH YEESS! YESSSS! YEEEEEESSSSSSS! Then the Screen Fades black [The next day at the Construction Site] Miguel: That was a crazy night [They both kiss and Catalina shows up] [Catalina gets shocked, and they know they are dating, which angered Catalina] Catalina: You SNITCH!!!! [Catalina grabs the Torture Stick and stabs Miguel with it] Miguel: AAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! [Miguel falls on the ground closing his eyes] Asuka: YOU MOTHERf*ckER! [Asuka runs to Catalina but Catalina pulls her gun and shoots Asuka] Catalina: Never mess with Catalina! [Catalina walks away] THE END Leave your comments. MeeMeeCandy777 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Dollars Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Here's my version [Asuka hits Miguel with her torture stick] Asuka: Are you going to tell me it? Or do you want more pain? Miguel: You keep hitting me with that thing, while i was trying to give you the information! [suddenly the trio are silent and thinking] Maria: I think he is right friend, speak up Miggie! [suddenly three cartel cruisers show up and cartel members come up the lift] cartel member 1: You want the chainsaw gringo? cartel member 2: It's no problem to kill you cartel member 3: You want the chainsaw gringo? Catalina: Asuka, WHAT ARE THOOOOSE! [Catalina points at Asuka's gigantic shoes] [Asuka dies of embarrassment] [Catalina looks at miguel] Catalina: Sorry babe. I'm an ambitious girl [Catalina impales Miguel with a pole] Catalina: and you're just small time. [cartel member 2 looks at Maria] cartel member 2: you're gonna be sorry [cartel throw Maria into a cruiser and drive away really fast hitting a bobcat on the way out] cartel member 1: Watch the wheels, gringo! bobcat driver: YOUNG MAN H-G, Platybus, thegtaman. and 4 others 6 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helegad Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Awful, awful, awful. Sunglasses and H-G 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElPatron036 Posted November 6, 2016 Author Share Posted November 6, 2016 Here's my version [Asuka hits Miguel with her torture stick] Asuka: Are you going to tell me it? Or do you want more pain? Miguel: You keep hitting me with that thing, while i was trying to give you the information! [suddenly the trio are silent and thinking] Maria: I think he is right friend, speak up Miggie! [suddenly three cartel cruisers show up and cartel members come up the lift] cartel member 1: You want the chainsaw gringo? cartel member 2: It's no problem to kill you cartel member 3: You want the chainsaw gringo? Catalina: Asuka, WHAT ARE THOOOOSE! [Catalina points at Asuka's gigantic shoes] [Asuka dies of embarrassment] [Catalina looks at miguel] Catalina: Sorry babe. I'm an ambitious girl [Catalina impales Miguel with a pole] Catalina: and you're just small time. [cartel member 2 looks at Maria] cartel member 2: you're gonna be sorry [cartel throw Maria into a cruiser and drive away really fast hitting a bobcat on the way out] cartel member 1: Watch the wheels, gringo! bobcat driver: YOUNG MAN Your version is good too ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legomanarthur Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 Here's my version [Asuka hits Miguel with her torture stick] Asuka: Are you going to tell me it? Or do you want more pain? Miguel: You keep hitting me with that thing, while i was trying to give you the information! [suddenly the trio are silent and thinking] Maria: I think he is right friend, speak up Miggie! [suddenly three cartel cruisers show up and cartel members come up the lift] cartel member 1: You want the chainsaw gringo? cartel member 2: It's no problem to kill you cartel member 3: You want the chainsaw gringo? Catalina: Asuka, WHAT ARE THOOOOSE! [Catalina points at Asuka's gigantic shoes] [Asuka dies of embarrassment] [Catalina looks at miguel] Catalina: Sorry babe. I'm an ambitious girl [Catalina impales Miguel with a pole] Catalina: and you're just small time. [cartel member 2 looks at Maria] cartel member 2: you're gonna be sorry [cartel throw Maria into a cruiser and drive away really fast hitting a bobcat on the way out] cartel member 1: Watch the wheels, gringo! bobcat driver: YOUNG MAN Definitely this. H-G 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stef_92 Posted November 6, 2016 Share Posted November 6, 2016 @Doctor Dollars, your story is an Oscar winner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElPatron036 Posted November 8, 2016 Author Share Posted November 8, 2016 We'll both the stories are going well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neon-Noir 198X Posted November 12, 2016 Share Posted November 12, 2016 It happened. We've resorted to fan-fiction. Great. Sunglasses and H-G 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunglasses Posted November 26, 2016 Share Posted November 26, 2016 We've come so far. H-G 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Th3MaN1 Posted December 1, 2016 Share Posted December 1, 2016 I'm sorry but MeeMeeCandy777, Helegad and H-G 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwoNumber9s Posted December 14, 2016 Share Posted December 14, 2016 The cringe is real H-G, MeeMeeCandy777 and thegtaman. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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