Acehilm Posted October 2, 2016 Share Posted October 2, 2016 I awake in the middle of the night When the people sleep and dream I can only reflect on what was and what it means Why I feel like I’ve failed myself Worked hard, dropped out – now I’m hating myself But I’m saving myself for something else much greater It’ll take multiple shots to stop and drop my behaviour The school of hard knock lifestyle always craves the Struggle to the top; then complacency is major. LiniArc 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiniArc Posted October 9, 2016 Share Posted October 9, 2016 (edited) Very nicely written indeed. It describes the struggle of life with simplicity. I can relate my life with it. Although I believe I don't understand second last line that neatly. Otherwise very good effort. But are their always solutions to struggle? Do all who struggle positively achieve their ambitions? I think you could also have added a sadder ending. Edited October 9, 2016 by Black Metal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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