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I awake in the middle of the night

When the people sleep and dream

I can only reflect on what was and what it means

Why I feel like I’ve failed myself

Worked hard, dropped out – now I’m hating myself

But I’m saving myself for something else much greater

It’ll take multiple shots to stop and drop my behaviour

The school of hard knock lifestyle always craves the

Struggle to the top; then complacency is major.

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Very nicely written indeed. It describes the struggle of life with simplicity. I can relate my life with it. Although I believe I don't understand second last line that neatly.

 

Otherwise very good effort. :^:

 

But are their always solutions to struggle? Do all who struggle positively achieve their ambitions? I think you could also have added a sadder ending.

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