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The John David

[MP] Battle San Fierro 3 - Completed + DLC

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Here's my review all of the missions for Grekov:

 

[For guests and users, do not open this review unless you played the missions]

 

 

 

Here are the missions to review:

 

Trip on San Fierro

(Writing) = Good

-I had no problems when it comes to understanding, I can say it's understandable. But there some grammar mistakes, such as capitalizations and punctuation "?".

(Presentation) = Very Good

-After the war, Grekov glad the war is over. Peter told Grekov to go the SF for the trip, everything seems fine but not at all..

-The cutsenes are placed accurately and focuses also the props, such as weapons, objects, etc.

(Length) = Excellent

-It has combined with cutsenes and gameplay. For example, after the cutsene at the beginning, it gives the user to drive to the SF then cutsenes shows up.

(Difficulty) = Very Easy

-Since it is the beginning of the mission pack, nothing else but cutsenes and driving.

(Variety) = Good

-At the pre-ending of the mission, I did see some 4 raiding boats against the Easter Basin Base which is amusing.

-When killing the mechanic on the base, no soldiers at the base alerted? Did enemy soldiers wiped them out already?

 

 

The Lies

(Writing) = Good

-The writings are still understandable, but there is still punctuations mistakes such as "Ember: C'mon, Follow me, I know a shortcut here?".

(Presentation) = Very Good

-Grekov and Ember arrived in San Fierro. At the City Hall, the new president mayor of SF arrived at the City Hall. But seeing the blood of the mayor, was a foreshadow of the invasion.

-The people and paparazzo are placed accurately, making the presentation to be very good including the cutsenes. But I find something here that the convoy of mayor has only one police protection? Probably the number of actors were too much.

(Length) = Very Good

-It has mixed gameplay to play with: cutscenes, stealth and escape can be found with.

(Difficulty) = Medium

-Stealth was an easy ones, but escaping from the shore was bit challenging. Also includes that Ember using the machine gun can be fall off from the boat.

(Variety) = Very Good

-During following Ember through streets, I can find some damaged cars and burning buildings which enhancing the gameplay perspective. Don't forget the soundtracks too.

 

Agents

(Writing) = Good

-Understandable yet the punctuations mistakes still present the "?". It seems a purpose for this.

(Presentation) = Excellent

-Invasion has begun in SF, Peter told Grekov to eliminate the enemies in Easter Basin using the Hunter gunship.

-Cutscenes and props were still perfect to be judged. Taking out the enemies in the Easter Basin was good, but Markov, the antagonist, successfully taken down Grekov's helicopter and crashed to the sea. I find this very excellent effort for this!

(Length) = Very Good

-Traveling to Eastern Basin then eliminating the hostiles on it, but also there are enemies need to be eliminated through the aircraft carrier.

(Difficulty) = Hard

-Seems easy for me using the Hunter gunship, but eliminating the incoming enemies to Grekov's crash site quite hard for me, but considered as challenging for me.

(Variety) = Very Good

-Takedown of Grekov's helicopter was excellent, but inside the aircraft carrier while out the hostiles have less objects were presented.

 

The Wildest Enemies

(Writing) = Good

-Still understandable, yet the punctuation mistakes "?" still present but it is less.

(Presentation) = Excellent

-After taking out the enemies in aircraft carrier, Grekov confronted the another antagonist of the Red Section is Gabriel.

-The name of Gabriel San Diego is quite weird for me, somehow it is originated of it's name from Philippines or Mexico or maybe Spain. Gabriel Pentrekov is an good example for Russian name.

(Length) = Excellent

-While doing Ember's perspective, it needs to eliminate all roaming Red Section soldiers around the streets of SF, especially near to Doherty. Later, Ember needs to meet Grekov at the Easter Basin, then cutscenes will show.

(Difficulty) = Medium

-Going through the streets filled with enemy soldiers is easy enough, but being un-aware state can snipe the player where they expect it. Experienced players can handle this.

(Variety) = Good

-I can see less props to be seen during gunfight, but there are only few soldiers placed in the streets. Still acceptable for a gameplay perspective.

 

Reprisal: Pt-1

(Writing) = Good

-Good enough, no problems to be understand of it. Punctuations likes "?" mistakes is quite common.

(Presentation) = Very Good

-After Ember's dad, Peter, was killed in the arrival in SF. Ember take revenge to eliminate the leader of Red Section and to seize victory with support from Grekov.

-After eliminating all enemies inside the Easter Basin, Grekov and Ember then confronted Tryfon Vastillios, Markov's best agent. Seems humorous enough with the name of Tryfon Vastillios not being in Russian named.

(Length) = Very Good

-This mission is to eliminate the Red Section soldiers in exterior of Eastern Basin, then confronting Tryfon. Killing Tryfon fell down Grekov from the edge to the water.

(Difficulty) = Medium

-Killing Tryfon and his soldiers wasn't hard, just think wise and don't rush during gunfight.

(Variety) = Good

-Good placement of soldiers and have various tactics, the fence were placed inside the base is good for preventing AI Ember from falling off.

 

Reprisal: Pt-2

(Writing) = Good

-It is understandable, but there are words that are little confusing such as "Intercept" mistaken as killing eliminating the objective

(Presentation) = Very Good

-After killing Tryfon, now they must find the leader of Red Section to be eliminated, to won the victory to SF. But they are separated and find a way to do this.

-Confrontation and killing Ghost.. was bad enough, since he let go Ember for killing him, Ghost had no choice but to kill Grekov for threating him. Also, confrontation of Markov is an beginning to end the invasion.

(Length) = Excellent

-Grekov must get in touch with Ember in the roof, by eliminating all the hostiles in Grekov's presence. Then confronting the Ghost too. At Ember's perspective, he needs to take that Gabriel's chopper from arriving.

(Difficulty) = Hard

-Those soldiers inside the base were quite accurate enough in there position, with a even of 75% accuracy of them. Being exposed and soldier alerted will bring player's doom. Also, killing Gabriel is required the user to think faster because of time is running out which is pressuring the user (including me).

(Variety) = Very Good

-Placement of soldiers are accurate to be placed. Also, I find kicking out the gate is one of a feature in this mission, I find it good effort for a variety.

-Taking out a chopper and it's crash was very amusing.

(Glitch): Sometimes, when taking out Gabriel's chopper objective, it explodes almost instantly and immediately jump to the other objective.

 

Reprisal: Pt-3

(Writing) = Good

-The expression of the actors was showed in this mission, such as well-spoken profanity revenge.

(Presentation) = Very Good

-The elimination of Markov was began, Grekov has achieved victory. Everything seems over, but Ember said it was not.

-After seeing dying hands of Ghost, Ember was felt bad and later grew anger. Ghost told Ember to kill Grekov, was an bad part for me. Like Ember betrayed Grekov or skeptically Grekov betrayed Ember. Killing Ember was little bad for me (as my opinion), I was thinking about injuring him and learn the lesson.

(Length) = Very Good

This mission last 5-10 minutes, it combined of variety cutscenes, gameplay and so on, until the end.

(Difficulty) = Medium

-There's nothing wrong to face the challenging ones, because AI Markov has limited range so users can kill him quite easy enough. Killing Ember wasn't that hard.

(Variety) = Very Good

-There few boxes useful for covering the player (although this wasn't appeared in previous part) to kill Markov. I can see also few props were used also from previous part.

 

Invasion Stops

(Writing) = Very Good

-The writings are good and understandable, I can detect minimal grammar mistakes during cutscenes.

(Presentation) = Good

-After the defeat of Red Section, the SF finally and again rebuild from menacing war. Few years later, Grekov visits Ember's grave and wishes have a peaceful farewell.

(Length) = Decent

-Since it was an ending of the series, only cutscenes were presented to this mission.

(Difficulty) = Very Easy

-Cutscenes only is presented.

(Variety) = Very Good

-The cutscenes placement are very well placed in the presentation, including the sequence of U.S Soldiers re-taking the SF scenes.

 

 

 

This is my first review I've ever made for the mission-pack, ever. ;)

 

The author of this mission-pack, is improving with skills than the previous ones. Yet again, I've enjoyed the missions for Grekov with remarkable effort and skills. Anyways, good very work, sir! :D:cookie::cookie::cookie:

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The John David

Here's my review all of the missions for Grekov:

 

[For guests and users, do not open this review unless you played the missions]

 

 

 

Here are the missions to review:

 

Trip on San Fierro

(Writing) = Good

-I had no problems when it comes to understanding, I can say it's understandable. But there some grammar mistakes, such as capitalizations and punctuation "?".

(Presentation) = Very Good

-After the war, Grekov glad the war is over. Peter told Grekov to go the SF for the trip, everything seems fine but not at all..

-The cutsenes are placed accurately and focuses also the props, such as weapons, objects, etc.

(Length) = Excellent

-It has combined with cutsenes and gameplay. For example, after the cutsene at the beginning, it gives the user to drive to the SF then cutsenes shows up.

(Difficulty) = Very Easy

-Since it is the beginning of the mission pack, nothing else but cutsenes and driving.

(Variety) = Good

-At the pre-ending of the mission, I did see some 4 raiding boats against the Easter Basin Base which is amusing.

-When killing the mechanic on the base, no soldiers at the base alerted? Did enemy soldiers wiped them out already?

 

 

The Lies

(Writing) = Good

-The writings are still understandable, but there is still punctuations mistakes such as "Ember: C'mon, Follow me, I know a shortcut here?".

(Presentation) = Very Good

-Grekov and Ember arrived in San Fierro. At the City Hall, the new president mayor of SF arrived at the City Hall. But seeing the blood of the mayor, was a foreshadow of the invasion.

-The people and paparazzo are placed accurately, making the presentation to be very good including the cutsenes. But I find something here that the convoy of mayor has only one police protection? Probably the number of actors were too much.

(Length) = Very Good

-It has mixed gameplay to play with: cutscenes, stealth and escape can be found with.

(Difficulty) = Medium

-Stealth was an easy ones, but escaping from the shore was bit challenging. Also includes that Ember using the machine gun can be fall off from the boat.

(Variety) = Very Good

-During following Ember through streets, I can find some damaged cars and burning buildings which enhancing the gameplay perspective. Don't forget the soundtracks too.

 

Agents

(Writing) = Good

-Understandable yet the punctuations mistakes still present the "?". It seems a purpose for this.

(Presentation) = Excellent

-Invasion has begun in SF, Peter told Grekov to eliminate the enemies in Easter Basin using the Hunter gunship.

-Cutscenes and props were still perfect to be judged. Taking out the enemies in the Easter Basin was good, but Markov, the antagonist, successfully taken down Grekov's helicopter and crashed to the sea. I find this very excellent effort for this!

(Length) = Very Good

-Traveling to Eastern Basin then eliminating the hostiles on it, but also there are enemies need to be eliminated through the aircraft carrier.

(Difficulty) = Hard

-Seems easy for me using the Hunter gunship, but eliminating the incoming enemies to Grekov's crash site quite hard for me, but considered as challenging for me.

(Variety) = Very Good

-Takedown of Grekov's helicopter was excellent, but inside the aircraft carrier while out the hostiles have less objects were presented.

 

The Wildest Enemies

(Writing) = Good

-Still understandable, yet the punctuation mistakes "?" still present but it is less.

(Presentation) = Excellent

-After taking out the enemies in aircraft carrier, Grekov confronted the another antagonist of the Red Section is Gabriel.

-The name of Gabriel San Diego is quite weird for me, somehow it is originated of it's name from Philippines or Mexico or maybe Spain. Gabriel Pentrekov is an good example for Russian name.

(Length) = Excellent

-While doing Ember's perspective, it needs to eliminate all roaming Red Section soldiers around the streets of SF, especially near to Doherty. Later, Ember needs to meet Grekov at the Easter Basin, then cutscenes will show.

(Difficulty) = Medium

-Going through the streets filled with enemy soldiers is easy enough, but being un-aware state can snipe the player where they expect it. Experienced players can handle this.

(Variety) = Good

-I can see less props to be seen during gunfight, but there are only few soldiers placed in the streets. Still acceptable for a gameplay perspective.

 

Reprisal: Pt-1

(Writing) = Good

-Good enough, no problems to be understand of it. Punctuations likes "?" mistakes is quite common.

(Presentation) = Very Good

-After Ember's dad, Peter, was killed in the arrival in SF. Ember take revenge to eliminate the leader of Red Section and to seize victory with support from Grekov.

-After eliminating all enemies inside the Easter Basin, Grekov and Ember then confronted Tryfon Vastillios, Markov's best agent. Seems humorous enough with the name of Tryfon Vastillios not being in Russian named.

(Length) = Very Good

-This mission is to eliminate the Red Section soldiers in exterior of Eastern Basin, then confronting Tryfon. Killing Tryfon fell down Grekov from the edge to the water.

(Difficulty) = Medium

-Killing Tryfon and his soldiers wasn't hard, just think wise and don't rush during gunfight.

(Variety) = Good

-Good placement of soldiers and have various tactics, the fence were placed inside the base is good for preventing AI Ember from falling off.

 

Reprisal: Pt-2

(Writing) = Good

-It is understandable, but there are words that are little confusing such as "Intercept" mistaken as killing eliminating the objective

(Presentation) = Very Good

-After killing Tryfon, now they must find the leader of Red Section to be eliminated, to won the victory to SF. But they are separated and find a way to do this.

-Confrontation and killing Ghost.. was bad enough, since he let go Ember for killing him, Ghost had no choice but to kill Grekov for threating him. Also, confrontation of Markov is an beginning to end the invasion.

(Length) = Excellent

-Grekov must get in touch with Ember in the roof, by eliminating all the hostiles in Grekov's presence. Then confronting the Ghost too. At Ember's perspective, he needs to take that Gabriel's chopper from arriving.

(Difficulty) = Hard

-Those soldiers inside the base were quite accurate enough in there position, with a even of 75% accuracy of them. Being exposed and soldier alerted will bring player's doom. Also, killing Gabriel is required the user to think faster because of time is running out which is pressuring the user (including me).

(Variety) = Very Good

-Placement of soldiers are accurate to be placed. Also, I find kicking out the gate is one of a feature in this mission, I find it good effort for a variety.

-Taking out a chopper and it's crash was very amusing.

(Glitch): Sometimes, when taking out Gabriel's chopper objective, it explodes almost instantly and immediately jump to the other objective.

 

Reprisal: Pt-3

(Writing) = Good

-The expression of the actors was showed in this mission, such as well-spoken profanity revenge.

(Presentation) = Very Good

-The elimination of Markov was began, Grekov has achieved victory. Everything seems over, but Ember said it was not.

-After seeing dying hands of Ghost, Ember was felt bad and later grew anger. Ghost told Ember to kill Grekov, was an bad part for me. Like Ember betrayed Grekov or skeptically Grekov betrayed Ember. Killing Ember was little bad for me (as my opinion), I was thinking about injuring him and learn the lesson.

(Length) = Very Good

This mission last 5-10 minutes, it combined of variety cutscenes, gameplay and so on, until the end.

(Difficulty) = Medium

-There's nothing wrong to face the challenging ones, because AI Markov has limited range so users can kill him quite easy enough. Killing Ember wasn't that hard.

(Variety) = Very Good

-There few boxes useful for covering the player (although this wasn't appeared in previous part) to kill Markov. I can see also few props were used also from previous part.

 

Invasion Stops

(Writing) = Very Good

-The writings are good and understandable, I can detect minimal grammar mistakes during cutscenes.

(Presentation) = Good

-After the defeat of Red Section, the SF finally and again rebuild from menacing war. Few years later, Grekov visits Ember's grave and wishes have a peaceful farewell.

(Length) = Decent

-Since it was an ending of the series, only cutscenes were presented to this mission.

(Difficulty) = Very Easy

-Cutscenes only is presented.

(Variety) = Very Good

-The cutscenes placement are very well placed in the presentation, including the sequence of U.S Soldiers re-taking the SF scenes.

 

 

 

This is my first review I've ever made for the mission-pack, ever. ;)

 

The author of this mission-pack, is improving with skills than the previous ones. Yet again, I've enjoyed the missions for Grekov with remarkable effort and skills. Anyways, good very work, sir! :D:cookie::cookie::cookie:

Thank you for your feedback and review about this MP. I'll try better next time :D

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I Played the first two missions and I agree with everything GOTH said about the second mission. Seeing only a single cop to serve as the protection for the President seemed kinda odd, although you did a good job on placement of peds outside the town hall. Loved the blood splattering part when the President got shot. I gotta appreciate some of the cutscenes in the second mission, they were refreshing.

 

My major qualm with your first mission is the Long drive. Jeez, you gotta drop 'em in your missions. Making a mission with only the Long drives won't be a any good. Hope you keep this mind when you make missions in future. And, excuse me for not using the spoiler tags.

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I Played the first two missions and I agree with everything GOTH said about the second mission. Seeing only a single cop to serve as the protection for the President seemed kinda odd, although you did a good job on placement of peds outside the town hall. Loved the blood splattering part when the President got shot. I gotta appreciate some of the cutscenes in the second mission, they were refreshing.

 

My major qualm with your first mission is the Long drive. Jeez, you gotta drop 'em in your missions. Making a mission with only the Long drives won't be a any good. Hope you keep this mind when you make missions in future. And, excuse me for not using the spoiler tags.

Thank you so much, Shiva.

Actually, my plan in the first mission is to cut off driving for too long while testing for it, but it crashed to me while editing it, can't fix it, cause it crash two times. All of my ideas was miss out, cause of my school studies, or any work to do at house. No offense, but it is important in my life :D

I'll do my best next time. I'll keep it mind.

 

 

About you're saying on the second mission is only a single cop protecting the president, I didn't realize about that.

 

 

Once again, thanks, I appreciated it :D

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The John David

Full Series + DLC has now finally completed! At long last!

That's all of them :D

 

Good Luck!

Like my work plzzzzz... lol :p

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ToxedoFireZ

I played your MP, and i like it, good Cutscene and all,

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The John David

I played your MP, and i like it, good Cutscene and all,

Thanks :)

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.GreenGoo

Great MP man, it's the best! Action, and more of them in it! :)

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Davey,You have my support

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Awsome Work

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