JackDA Posted June 19, 2016 Share Posted June 19, 2016 (edited) Welcome to Vice City, where the palm trees and beaches are only there to distract you from the street gangs and drug dealing. Map: Main Character: Name: Juan Hilario Race: Cuban American Age: 28 Height: 6' 2" Place of Birth: Brighton, Vice City Vehicle: Albany Primo Friends: Name: Marcus Clarkson Race: African American Age: 26 Height: 5' 11" Place of Birth: Kelltown, Capital City Vehicle: Ocelot Jackal Name: Tacito Sandro Race: Cuban American Age: 34 Height: 6' 4" Place of Birth: East Town, Vice City Vehicle: Schyster Fusilade Storyline: Prologue: The prologue starts with Juan in a prison outfit, staring directly into the camera. As the camera slowly zooms out, the prison alarm rings, and he starts to run in the direction of the other prisoners. The police stand there with guns, and the camera shows one prisoner punching the cop and stealing the gun. Juan runs at a cop and tackles him to the ground, and repeatedly punches him and steals his gun. Objectives: - Shoot the cops and get out of the prison. - Steal a car. - Get away from the cops. - Drive to the hideout. Juan walks into a building, and is greeted with Tacito, standing right in front of Juan in the hallway. "Wow. You're back." said Tacito. "Yep. I made it out." mumbled Juan. "Well..." Tacito said awkwardly. "Welcome back, hermano. It's been a long time." "It has." Replied Juan. Tacito looks strangely at Juan, and says "Well... go and get some sleep. You look tired, eh?". Juan looks at the bed, and mumbles to himself "Thank God. A good bed." (This concept is not finished, so suggestions are very much appreciated) Edited June 19, 2016 by JackDA Ivan1997GTA, imdonenow, ClaudX and 2 others 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivan1997GTA Posted June 19, 2016 Share Posted June 19, 2016 So far, so good. Does this concept take place in the 80's, 90's, early 2000's or present day? JackDA 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackDA Posted June 19, 2016 Author Share Posted June 19, 2016 So far, so good. Does this concept take place in the 80's, 90's, early 2000's or present day? It will take place in the present day because even though I would prefer for it to take place in the 80's, I would like to feature some characters from the HD Universe and have some relationship with the HD universe, instead of being pretty much a completely seperate game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Posted June 19, 2016 Share Posted June 19, 2016 (edited) Please, let me help you with the rest of the design Tell me about the texts you need for the headers. Edited June 19, 2016 by Mariø JackDA 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeySlickThatsMe Posted June 19, 2016 Share Posted June 19, 2016 w8.... marcus anthony? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CheesepuffScott Posted June 19, 2016 Share Posted June 19, 2016 Looks good, @JackDA! I needa complete my USA map and I'll do a story lol JackDA 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackDA Posted June 19, 2016 Author Share Posted June 19, 2016 Mission 1: A New Beginning This mission starts in Tacito's house, where Tacito is sitting. "Hey. Do you have any money?" asked Tacito. "No" replied Juan. "Well, My friend Marcus has asked me to steal some cars from a dealership." Exclaimed Tacito. "Look. I don't want to go back to prison. I just got out." Juan said angrily. "But we need the money. I can barely pay the rent for this place. What else are we supposed to do?" asked Tacito. "Look. If I get locked up for this, i'm going to find you. I'm serious." Juan said, ruthlessly. "You won't get locked up. Now lets go." Objectives: -Drive to the dealership. "You alright?" asked Tacito. "You seem kinda spooked". Juan replies "Look. I can take care of myself. I just got out of prison, of course i'm gonna seem edgey." "I'm just worried about you, bro." replied Tacito. "So, what are the cars we are going to get?" asked Juan, looking at Tacito. "A F620. Really cool car. Marcus says we can get some real good dough if we get it to him." Exclaims Tacito. "How much? And who is this Marcus guy?" Juan asks, suspiciously to Tacito. "You don't remember Marcus? Jamal's younger brother?" asks Tacito. "Oh yeah. The guy who works at that chop shop?" says Juan. "Yeah, that's the guy.", Says Tacito. They share a long, awkward silence, until Juan asks again "How much are we getting?". Tacito replies with "I don't know the exact number, bro. But I do know me are getting a lot." "Alright. That's good." replies Juan. Objectives: -Walk up to the dealership. -Kill the guards. "What the hell! The car is not here, bro!" shouts Juan. "Oh, sh*t!" Screams Tacito. -Get away from the guards. -Drive back home. "What the f*ck was that man!" Shouts Juan. "Ay, that wasn't me who set that up. It was Marcus. Hey, i'll call him." Replies Tacito, looking stressed. -Enter the house. "Hey. I'm sorry about that man. Marcus is gonna get a lot of sh*t for this, man." says Tacito. "Hey. Don't put my life on the line for nothing next time, yeah? DaniLekBom and CheesepuffScott 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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