Build Up Your San Andreas Gang II

[Satourn]

eh I guess I'll give it a try

sign me up for Grove Street at Playa del Seville

[Curtis]

Wow, reviving this project was a good idea. It woke up alot of people, especially veterans.

By the way, Will you add the Journey to the market? Once i get enough money, I want to make a breaking-bad esque scenario.

 

EDIT: Mission two.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41829

Edited April 12, 2016 by Bender

[Hdxt_Hardluck]

Will try to make the missions ASAP, such a good idea reviving such projects.

[General Scrotum]

mister busta: $49 added to the Russian Mafia gang bank account and 5 (4.9 + 0.1 = 5) members added to the usable RM members.

 

Restriction: Not respected (use of the Leviathan by a Russian Mafia member) - $0 bonus

Difficulty: Cutscene only - $0

Variety: 13 different things (8 actors, 4 objects, helicopter) - $8

Length: 1:29'18 - $1

Writing: Text coloring the names, use of Russian words and no mistakes spotted at all - $20

Presentation: Presenting the characters and their specialties, excellent camera angles, you can 'feel' the Russian Mafia seriousness through the course of the dialogues or when the high ranked member arrives by helicopter - $20

 

mister busta: Due to being the first member to design a mission for the Russian Mafia, you are now the ''leader'' and have the the final word on purchases, etc.

 

 

FES04: $68 added to the Bikers gang bank account and 7 (6.8 + 0.2 = 7) members added to the usable B members.

 

Difficulty: You can either use the Burrito to run over the cops or use your baseball bat, take the 9mm dropped from the cop and shoot the rest. Either ways, it's very easy - $1

Restriction: Respected - $5 bonus

Length: 4:50'36 - $10

Writing: Text coloring the names, use of 'those' instead of 'these' at some moments and one time the use of 'i' instead of 'I' - $15

Variety: 24 different things (5 actors, 3 vehicles, 4 weapons and 12 objects) - $17

Presentation: Excellent use of camera angles, presentation of the property (GTA style), adding objects and bikers inside the bar to make it less boring and empty, using the corrupt cop concept to get us involved in a small 'introductory' fight - $20

 

FES04: Due to being the first member to design a mission for the Bikers, you are now the ''leader'' and have the the final word on purchases, etc.

 

 

PresidentShark: Added to the Da Nang Boys at the Easter Basin Docks.

 

SatournFan: Added to the Orange Grove Families at Playa del Seville.

 

 

Bender: $78 added to the Varrios Los Aztecas gang bank account and 8 (7.8 + 0.2 = 8) members added to the usable VLA members.

 

Difficulty: You can very easily just one shot (headshot) the four enemies - $1

Restriction: Respected - $5 bonus

Length: 6:25'71 - $16

Writing: Text coloring the names, use of Spanish words, still one or two 'i' instead of 'I' and one 'And' instead of 'and' in the middle of a sentence - $18

Variety: 27 different things (20 actors, 3 vehicles, 1 object, 2 weapons and one pickup) - $19

Presentation: Still with the unknown boss, same kind of meeting as in the previous mission, adding the five extra members earned from the last mission and spreading them around and having do their own things, main gang spreading around to do their stuff to prepare for the grocery shop robbery, interesting use of pickups to have us investigate the grocery shop, a little bit of non-realism if you headshot all four enemies because one is brought back to life in the cutscene after the fight and flees on the bycicle - $19

 

Bender: $1 added to the Varrios Los Aztecas gang bank account for the following reason: forgetting to add the two vehicles to the variety's rate criteria of the first mission.

 

Bender: Thanks for reminding me about the Journey which was missing. If anybody wishes to buy it, do the following on the first page: CTRL + F Journey

Edited April 13, 2016 by Pledge of Chaos

[General Scrotum]

On my part, I joined the San Fierro Triads at the Four Dragons Casino in Las Venturas. The Las Venturas Triads

 

 

And with that... those interested to become BUYSAG Contributors (in this case, raters) should play and rate my mission (using the same format I use). When you are done, send it to me by PM. If you are accepted as the new rater, you will be allowed to post your rate and future rates in the topic.

Edited April 13, 2016 by Pledge of Chaos

[Hdxt_Hardluck]

Alright, i'll take the Russain Mafia.

Location: Vinewood safe house

[General Scrotum]

HardluckStyle: Added you to the Russian Mafia at the Vinewood Safehouse.

 

Russian Mafia: The Russian Mafia is now full. The only way to join is if the leader (in this case - mister busta) accepts to buy another property.

 

Theme of the Week #1 - Teaser: Three options, one decision.

[O SHIT WADDAP?]

Mission 2 is out.

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41837

[General Scrotum]

FES04: $91 added to the Bikers gang bank account and 9 (9.1 - 0.1 = 9) members added to the usable B members.

 

Restriction: Respected - $5 bonus

Writing: One 'i' instead of 'I', some capitalised letters that shouldn't be, some funny sounding sentences, other than that it's fine - $15

Variety: 23 different things (6 actors, 3 vehicles, 11 objects, 3 weapons) - $16

Length: 6:17'00 - $16

Presentation: Objects used to make the bar more lively, same for the 'inventory area'. Have to shoot the back door to get inside the Sheriff's house (behind the door is a window..?). The house's interior looks too big if we judged the building's exterior. Excellent cutscenes. Small timer to find the cop before he is arrested. - $19

Difficulty: Killing the cop is easy but finding him in that small amount of time? That could be hard for some. Thus: medium - $20

[O SHIT WADDAP?]

Thanks for the review, about the House and the things i did on it was only because of San Andreas's map and its buildings. also i tried to co-op with the interiors, but that was the only one i found the most suitable to that one. i know it is unrealistic, but limitations.

 

Apart from that, i wanted to ask you a question - If my mission is mentioning that my gang had just robbed 50,000 dollers from a store or whatever, will it actually be counted in game's account? i know the answer shall be a NO, but don't you think it will create falseness?

[General Scrotum]

It's best not to mention any amount of money you do not have in your missions.

[/\rdooZ]

Another thing,are you able to get cars/weapons from certain missions you design?
Basically stealing gun crates/cars etc?
There should be a limit because we are supposed to use our money somewhere,but I doubt gangsters only purchase stuff.

Edited April 13, 2016 by /\rdooZ

[General Scrotum]

Currently, the only way to get vehicles, weapons, etc. from your missions are if they are rewards from the Theme of the Week.

[Curtis]

you could buy something here and in the missions the gangster would "steal" it.

only the theme of the week can gain you more than just money and members.

[PresidentShark]

Mission one: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41840

[General Scrotum]

PresidentShark: $53 added to the Da Nang Boys gang bank account and 5 (5.3 - 0.3 = 5) members added to the usable DNB members.

 

Restriction: Respected - $5 bonus

Difficulty: Walk to the car and drive around the base: very easy - $1

Variety: 10 different things (7 actors, 2 vehicles, 1 objects) - $6

Writing: 'basin' instead of 'Basin' (area name), 'wont' instead of 'won't', 'nescessary' instead of 'necessary', and a few other mistakes - $10

Length: 5:01'46 - $11

Presentation: Presenting the drug dealer and mechanic, beginning gives the feeling one (or two the of them) has (have) immigrated to San Andreas (don't know if that it that is the case but I liked it), presentation of the base, excellent cutscenes, and there is a plan already set and decided for the future of the gang - $20

 

PresidentShark: Due to being the first member to design a mission for the Da Nang Boys, you are now the ''leader'' and have the final word on future purchases, etc.

[Mister Busta]

Oh, I forgot about the heli in the cutscene. Sorry my bad. Won't do that again next time

 

I want to buy 2 9mm's.

Edited April 14, 2016 by mister busta

[General Scrotum]

mister busta: Added two 9mm's to your gang's weaponry. New gang bank account: $289.

[Mister Busta]

Here's my second mission:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41853

[Curtis]

New Mission.

Chump Change

[General Scrotum]

mister busta: $71 added to the Russian Mafia gang bank account and 7 (7.1 - 0.1 = 7) members added to the usable RM members.

 

Restriction: Respected - $5 bonus

Difficulty: Can headshot enemies from a distance, even from close the enemies have difficulty hitting you, plane must not be destroyed - $3

Writing: Use of Russian words, sometimes I lost the sense of the sentences because of how they were written (when presenting the roles of the gang), spelling mistakes (i.e. you can either write ''the Brigadiers are'' or ''The Brigadier is'' - not ''The Brigadiers is'') - $7

Length: 6:18'61 - $16

Variety: 35 different things (18 actors, 8 vehicles, 4 objects, 3 weapons - may have miscounted, and 2 pickups) - $20

Presentation: Adding some members to make the base more lively, learning more from the protagonists' father when he says he doesn't want to be useless like his father, excellent cutscenes (angles, etc.), excellent placement of objects, vehicles and actors at the hostage location - $20

 

 

Bender: $86 added to the Varrios Los Aztecas gang bank account and 9 (8.6 + 0.4 = 9) members added to the usable VLA members.

 

Restriction: Respected - $5 bonus

Difficulty: Enemies in the grocery shop are very easy to kill, the cops on bikes, in their police cars, on foot and at the roadblock are easy to deal with too, if you don't pay attention to the 'ghost' cop cars the vehicle may end up sustaining serious damage - $8

Variety: 25 different things (15 actors, 5 vehicles, 4 objects, 1 weapon - may have miscounted) - $18

Length: 8:18'86 - $18

Presentation: Use of 'ghost' cop cars, car chase to escape from the police, the option to decide if the grocery shop's clerk lives or dies, adding members and objects at the base to make it more lively, pointing gun at the clerk (although it doesn't change anything if you don't), actor with the Cesar skin can die in the shop but will magically revive and get in the escape vehicle, police officers spawn out of nowhere in front of us and then respawn in their cars to chase us - $18

Writing: Use of Spanish words, one time I saw another 'i' instead of a capitalized 'I', other than that I don't think I saw other mistakes - $19

Edited April 14, 2016 by Pledge of Chaos

[General Scrotum]

Buying 100 pills of Ecstasy for $500 in Ecstasy? Buying!

 

$500 removed from the San Fierro Triads gang bank account and 100 Pills of Ecstasy added to the drugs inventory.

[ghettospaghetti]

Okay, I want to join the Ballas. The location I want is Glen Park.

[General Scrotum]

GangstaZilla203: Added to the Ballas at Glen Park.

 

 

Theme of the Week #1 - Teaser: ''Starter Pack''.

Edited April 15, 2016 by Pledge of Chaos

[General Scrotum]

Theme of the Week

April 18 to April 25

The unknown corporation that has monopoly over the weapons and transportation industries is currently transporting three different shipments: one is a vehicles shipment, another one is a weapons shipment and the last one is a mix of the two plus an unknown amount of money.

Each members can decide which shipment they want to raid: vehicles (#1), weapons (#2) or mix and money (#3). Once you decided, you must design a mission in which you raid whichever shipment you choose. NOTE that you are not allowed to show the vehicles, weapons and/or money looted from this raid - this will have to wait until the next mission.

Participants who decide to raid a vehicles shipment will have to choose three different vehicles (under $700) they would like to get from the assault. When your mission is designed, you must assign a number to the vehicles (i.e. Sultan - #1 / Greenwood #2 / BMX #3). A random number generator will be used by the BUYSAG Staff to decide which vehicle you will get. It will be a best of 7 (first of the three come out four times). Whichever the case, you will earn three vehicles of the same type (i..e Sultan - #1 came out four times, you will earn three Sultans).

The same concept applies to participants who wish to raid the weapons shipment. The three weapons must be under $300.

Participants who wish to raid the third shipment (one vehicle, one weapon and a mix of money) will have to choose three vehicles (under $700) and three weapons (under $300). (Same concept applies for the number generator.) The only difference is: you will only receive one vehicle and one weapon (of the types that come out). As for the money, the total value of the two other vehicles will be added together and divided by two. The same applies for the two other weapons. The both divided values will be added together thus giving you your amount of money stolen during the raid of this shipment.

Note that the vehicles and weapons stolen during these raids will see their prices increased by 50% for a month and availability will decrease by how many were stolen.

[Curtis]

This is good, i like this.
I'll choose the weapons raid, expect a mission in a minimum of 10 hours.

1: SMG

2: Shotgun

3: Desert Eagle.

Edit: Here's the mission.

Game of Chances

Also, i answered your question on your DYOM profile, mister busta. Although i'd notice it faster if you'd had contacted me on GTAF.

Edited April 18, 2016 by Bender

[O SHIT WADDAP?]

I'll chose 3rd option.

 

Weapons.

- Shotgun

- SMG

- Desert eagle

 

Vehicles

- Patriot

- Sultan

- Phoenix

 

Link - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41914

[QED]

I'd like to join the San Fierro Rifa, on Pleasure Dolmes Club!

Edited April 20, 2016 by QED

[General Scrotum]

Bender: $78 added to the Varrios Los Aztecas gang bank account and 8 (7.8 + 0.2 = 8) members added to the usable VLA members.

 

Restriction: Respected - $5 bonus

Difficulty: Killing the guards is very easy but chasing the vehicle, having it stop and killing the driver could be hard for a few - $5

Variety: 17 different things (4 actors, 6 weapons, 2 vehicles, 5 objects, 2 pickups) - $12

Writing: Again one 'i' instead of 'I', 'rodeo hotel' instead of 'Rodeo Hotel', text coloring - $16

Presentation: La Bala going to his boss to inform him of the weapons shipment and the discussion while going to the location adds more to the mission, placement of objects and guards to make the underground parking less boring, segment where you have to look for the vehicle and then another one in which you have to chase it, excellent cutscenes, etc. - $20

Length: 14:02'33 - $20

 

Bender: Theme of the Week rewards: Shotgun (x3)

 

 

FES04: $74 added to the Bikers gang bank account and 7 (7.4 - 0.4 = 7) members added to the usable B members.

 

Difficulty: Very easy to kill the only two enemies - $1

Restriction: Respected - $5 bonus

Writing: Spotted mistakes (i.e. 'i' instead of 'I', etc.) - $13

Length: 7:32'11 - $16

Presentation: Objects placed in and out the bar to make the place more lively, military drills near the shipment ambush point, objects placement at the military drills, placement of objects and vehicles at the ambush point, excellent cutscenes, surprised the military didn't intervene when we ambushed the shipment since they were really close by - $19

Variety: Too many different things to count - $20

 

FES04: Theme of the Week rewards: Desert Eagle (x1), Patriot (x1), $853.

 

FES04: For your next missions, I request you to upload a separate file with only the DYOM0.dat file (no soundtrack file or archive .zip / .winrar file) so I can actually be able to have the right count of different actors, vehicles, objects, pickups, and weapons.

 

 

QED: Added to the San Fierro Rifa at the Pleasures Dome.

 

 

Weapons Market:

 

-Shotgun availability: 30 -­> 27

-Desert Eagle availability: 30 -> 29

 

-Shotgun: price increased to $315

-Desert Eagle: price increased to $450

 

 

Transportation Market:

 

-Patriot availability: 30 -> 29

 

-Patriot: price increased to $975

Edited April 22, 2016 by Pledge of Chaos

[Mister Busta]

So I can't choose shotgun and desert eagle now? I almost finish my mission.

 

Edit=One more question. Can I use Italian Mafia skins as the "opposite Russian Mafia"?

Edited April 22, 2016 by mister busta