-Ronnie- Posted April 3, 2016 Share Posted April 3, 2016 (edited) Because everything is Just Business... Unfinished Business is a small mission-pack of nine missions. You'll take the role of Ronnie Freeman who tries to track down and revenge his associates who stole his money.This MP almost has everything: action-adventure, stealth and fairly boss fights.Also i included music tracks to make the atmposphere more interesting. Ronnie Freeman and his associates storms the bank in Los Santos to rob the vault.When they reached the vault Ronnie is betrayed by his associates and fights his way out of the bank but Police arrives and he gets busted.He spends some hours in Los Santos prison and then somebody unknown pays for his freedom in exchange for a favor. Chapter 1: 1. Intro : The Heist 2. Paid Freedom 3. Prison Break 4. Business is just business 5. Last Task Chapter 2: 1. Hunting the hunted 2. My friend's enemy is my enemy 3. Betrayer 4. The Other Side of the Coin Download Download sounds Reviews: JhanDave's Review: overall 4.1/5 or 81/100 Ronnie Freeman: The Protagonist.After the heist in Los Santos bank to rob the vault Ronnie is betrayed by his associates and police arrived and cought him.Now he is determined to find those who stole his money and take revenge. Kelly Thomas: Ronnie meets Kelly in Alhambra Club and they have fun together.In general her role is minor in the story and she appears in few missions only. Achilles Ronson: The guy who paid for the release of Ronnie.Upon releasing Ronnie from prison wants him to do some jobs for him and he will help him take revenge. Mike Garcia: Achilles wants Ronnie to sneak to the prison and free his friend Mike however they got spotted and managed to escape from police to a hideout. Officer Mark Jones: Jones interrogates Ronnie to learn about the heist and his associates.Ronnie does not talk at all and he takes him back to prison. Johnny Smith: He was a best friend of Ronnie until the heist in the bank.Johnny was always a selfish person and he managed to cooperate with Brad and Jack to use the help of Ronnie to get the money and then betray him.Antagonist later in the story. Brad Noel: Antagonist later in the story.One of the members who were part of the heist. Jack Williams: Antagonist later in the story.One of the members who were part of the heist. Security Men: The security men owed by Achilles can be found in various missions and locations such as the Alhambra Club.They are armed with 9mms, Uzis, Tec9s and MP5s Edited April 28, 2016 by -Ronnie- Heisenberg_GR and The John David 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heisenberg_GR Posted April 3, 2016 Share Posted April 3, 2016 Nice, can't wait to play. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ronnie- Posted April 3, 2016 Author Share Posted April 3, 2016 Nice, can't wait to play. Good luck! Thanks, Heisen stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeV3n Posted April 3, 2016 Share Posted April 3, 2016 The protagonist is named after you? xD! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ronnie- Posted April 3, 2016 Author Share Posted April 3, 2016 The protagonist is named after you? xD! Lol yeah i always wanted to do that KeV3n 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PresidentShark Posted April 3, 2016 Share Posted April 3, 2016 In what timeframe do you think the last mission will be finished? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ronnie- Posted April 3, 2016 Author Share Posted April 3, 2016 In what timeframe do you think the last mission will be finished? Tomorrow. thanks for asking by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ronnie- Posted April 4, 2016 Author Share Posted April 4, 2016 Unfinished Business released! download the sounds too for better atmposhere. Play, and don't forget to give feedback means a lot to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The John David Posted April 16, 2016 Share Posted April 16, 2016 (edited) Hey Ronnie, i played your "Unfinished Business" now. Here's my review: Presentation: Nice work, seriously, i love heist, joke . Really good Environment: Wow! All your placements of your actors, cars, etc, are perfect Length: Each chapter per mission, it takes me 13-15 minutes to finish it, but excellent work Spelling and Grammars: I don't have a problem at your english language, but your missing something, your punctuation marks. Genres: Great work, you did good such as shooting, heist, assasin, etc. Difficulty: Everything's normal for me, but in for assasining Johnny Smith, it was hard for me to play, there's too many guards Overall: (4.2/5) Percentage: (81%) Very Good Edited April 16, 2016 by Jhandave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ronnie- Posted April 16, 2016 Author Share Posted April 16, 2016 Hey Ronnie, i played your "Unfinished Business" now. Here's my review: Presentation: Nice work, seriously, i love heist, joke . Really good Environment: Wow! All your placements of your actors, cars, etc, are perfect Length: Each chapter per mission, it takes me 13-15 minutes to finish it, but excellent work Spelling and Grammars: I don't have a problem at your english language, but your missing something, your punctuation marks. Genres: Great work, you did good such as shooting, heist, assasin, etc. Difficulty: Everything's normal for me, but in for assasining Johnny Smith, it was hard for me to play, there's too many guards Overall: (4.2/5) Percentage: (81%) Very Good Thanks for the review Jhan Dave The John David 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The John David Posted April 17, 2016 Share Posted April 17, 2016 Ronnie, I got one question for this MP. In the ending of the mission, why Archilles died before the object fall down to him. When i see it, it makes me funny , you should need to put the cutscene in the moving object before the actor -Ronnie- 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ronnie- Posted April 17, 2016 Author Share Posted April 17, 2016 Ronnie, I got one question for this MP. In the ending of the mission, why Archilles died before the object fall down to him. When i see it, it makes me funny , you should need to put the cutscene in the moving object before the actor yeah. Unfortunately i couldn't make this with a different way. The John David 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senator Posted April 17, 2016 Share Posted April 17, 2016 Cool mission, bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ronnie- Posted April 18, 2016 Author Share Posted April 18, 2016 Cool mission, bro. Thanks for playing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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