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Unfinished Business [MP]


-Ronnie-
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Because everything is Just Business...
Unfinished Business is a small mission-pack of nine missions. You'll take the role of Ronnie Freeman who tries to track down and revenge his associates who stole his money.This MP almost has everything: action-adventure, stealth and fairly boss fights.Also i included music tracks to make the atmposphere more interesting.
Ronnie Freeman and his associates storms the bank in Los Santos to rob the vault.When they reached the vault Ronnie is betrayed by his associates and fights his way out of the bank but Police arrives and he gets busted.He spends some hours in Los Santos prison and then somebody unknown pays for his freedom in exchange for a favor.
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Chapter 1:

1. Intro : The Heist
2. Paid Freedom
3. Prison Break
4. Business is just business
5. Last Task
Chapter 2:
1. Hunting the hunted
2. My friend's enemy is my enemy
3. Betrayer
4. The Other Side of the Coin
Reviews:
JhanDave's Review: overall 4.1/5 or 81/100
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Ronnie Freeman:
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The Protagonist.After the heist in Los Santos bank to rob the vault Ronnie is betrayed by his associates and police arrived and cought him.Now he is determined to find those who stole his money and take revenge.

 

Kelly Thomas:

 

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Ronnie meets Kelly in Alhambra Club and they have fun together.In general her role is minor in the story and she appears in few missions only.

 

Achilles Ronson:

 

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The guy who paid for the release of Ronnie.Upon releasing Ronnie from prison wants him to do some jobs for him and he will help him take revenge.
Mike Garcia:
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Achilles wants Ronnie to sneak to the prison and free his friend Mike however they got spotted and managed to escape from police to a hideout.
Officer Mark Jones:
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Jones interrogates Ronnie to learn about the heist and his associates.Ronnie does not talk at all and he takes him back to prison.
Johnny Smith:
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He was a best friend of Ronnie until the heist in the bank.Johnny was always a selfish person and he managed to cooperate with Brad and Jack to use the help of Ronnie to get the money and then betray him.Antagonist later in the story.
Brad Noel:
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Antagonist later in the story.One of the members who were part of the heist.
Jack Williams:
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Antagonist later in the story.One of the members who were part of the heist.
Security Men:
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The security men owed by Achilles can be found in various missions and locations such as the Alhambra Club.They are armed with 9mms, Uzis, Tec9s and MP5s
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Heisenberg_GR

Nice, can't wait to play. Good luck!

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Nice, can't wait to play. Good luck!

 

Thanks, Heisen stay tuned!

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The protagonist is named after you? xD!

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The protagonist is named after you? xD!

 

Lol yeah i always wanted to do that

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In what timeframe do you think the last mission will be finished? :santa:

 

Tomorrow. :) thanks for asking by the way

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Unfinished Business released! download the sounds too for better atmposhere.

 

Play, and don't forget to give feedback means a lot to me.

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The John David

Hey Ronnie, i played your "Unfinished Business" now. Here's my review:

 

Presentation: Nice work, seriously, i love heist, joke :p. Really good :^::^::^:

 

Environment: Wow! All your placements of your actors, cars, etc, are perfect ;)

 

Length: Each chapter per mission, it takes me 13-15 minutes to finish it, but excellent work :^::^::^:

 

Spelling and Grammars: I don't have a problem at your english language, but your missing something, your punctuation marks.

 

Genres: Great work, you did good such as shooting, heist, assasin, etc.

 

Difficulty: Everything's normal for me, but in for assasining Johnny Smith, it was hard for me to play, there's too many guards ;)

 

 

Overall: (4.2/5)

Percentage: (81%) Very Good

 

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Hey Ronnie, i played your "Unfinished Business" now. Here's my review:

 

Presentation: Nice work, seriously, i love heist, joke :p. Really good :^::^::^:

 

Environment: Wow! All your placements of your actors, cars, etc, are perfect ;)

 

Length: Each chapter per mission, it takes me 13-15 minutes to finish it, but excellent work :^::^::^:

 

Spelling and Grammars: I don't have a problem at your english language, but your missing something, your punctuation marks.

 

Genres: Great work, you did good such as shooting, heist, assasin, etc.

 

Difficulty: Everything's normal for me, but in for assasining Johnny Smith, it was hard for me to play, there's too many guards ;)

 

 

Overall: (4.2/5)

Percentage: (81%) Very Good

 

 

Thanks for the review Jhan Dave :)

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The John David

Ronnie, I got one question for this MP.

 

In the ending of the mission, why Archilles died before the object fall down to him. When i see it, it makes me funny :lol:, you should need to put the cutscene in the moving object before the actor ;)

 

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Ronnie, I got one question for this MP.

 

In the ending of the mission, why Archilles died before the object fall down to him. When i see it, it makes me funny :lol:, you should need to put the cutscene in the moving object before the actor ;)

 

 

:lol: yeah. Unfortunately i couldn't make this with a different way.

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