Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 5, 2016 (edited) I proudly presents you my first ever racing Mission pack. Specially design for Dyom Contest #8. Download Bike models: Click here! January-2004, A middle class family of liberty city called "Lucas Family" arrive Las venturas. There are only 2 family members "Martin Lucas" and his mother "Adrian Lucas" and after the death of Martin's father they've nothing. Then martin decided that he find a job in San Andreas biggest city called las venturas. But when they arrive in las venturas, suddenly after 2 weeks his mother death because of illness. Now martin is alone and he has to face many challanges in this city of venturas. Martin has the only honor of bike riding, In liberty city, he won many bike races, and also won many gold medals. But because of his family facing hard days in past, he sold his bike and everything for money. And now Martin Lucas have nothing left, because of that he's alone, so now his survival in this city, is a big challange. More story coming soon in the missions. So stay tune... "The Road Blasters" The crew of Martin Lucas. The protagonist of the story. "The FCR Hunters" The enemy rivals of Martin Lucas crew. And the best racing crew of San Andreas. "The Northwood Bikers" The Desert boys from Las Payasadas. And the most high ranked crew of Venturas. And all time champions. More Crews Added Soon... Life Changing Moments... The College Rivals + SD File The Night pursuit Be A Professional Begining Of New ERA... Later... Later... All credit goes to Dyom Admins Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for this awesome Mod. Graven for logo. ProDX34 who's racing missions, really inspired me alot. My friends who support me everytime. Specially Grand_Dyom and HardluckStyle. who support me everytime. And everyone who play my missions. Edited January 27, 2016 by Huzaifa khan 11 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
O SHIT WADDAP? 276 Posted January 5, 2016 Yo bro i haven't played yo missions from long time, damn i don't know why, anyway release it soon as possible cuz i'll play it fo'sure! 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 5, 2016 Yo bro i haven't played yo missions from long time, damn i don't know why, anyway release it soon as possible cuz i'll play it fo'sure! Thanks Dhiman. I upload my mission ASAP. Stay tune Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Grand_Dyom 173 Posted January 5, 2016 Goodluck bro.Waiting for this P.S Really,me? 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hdxt_Hardluck 1,342 Posted January 5, 2016 Thanks for the credits anyways the plot looks original and unique, and you've been probably 2 years designing, i'll expect this to be the best of all of you're project you've done before, waiting i'll review it whne it's done 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 5, 2016 Thanks for the credits anyways the plot looks original and unique, and you've been probably 2 years designing, i'll expect this to be the best of all of you're project you've done before, waiting i'll review it whne it's done Thanks bro for your respect. And yes, you guys really motivated me. Every time. Btw, I try my best to upload first mission tomorrow. Stay tune... Goodluck bro.Waiting for this P.S Really,me? Yes, you. The guy who gave me inspiration with his feedbacks every time Stay tune bro. 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AnDReJ98 1,564 Posted January 6, 2016 I'll try this out once you release the first mission(s). Looks like we are going to have a lot of MPs for DYOM contest #8! 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 6, 2016 (edited) Updates: Intro has been released: Life Changing Moments... Edited January 6, 2016 by Huzaifa khan 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AnDReJ98 1,564 Posted January 6, 2016 Haven't played any of your missions in a while, and i can easily say how much you improved your work! For an introduction, there's nothing much to say about gameplay so i'll go with the story and presentation. Presentation is great, animations and cutscene fit perfectly, especially that landing airplane cutscene! Language is also better than the last time and this is my first time to see someone included the full name in cutscene, even though it was only for a first few. The only con regarding presentation is while characters are talking (dialogues), you shouldn't use moving cutscene that much, use static ones. It fits better than the moving cutscene, and i surely don't want camera to go all over around while i'm reading text. Anyway, the rest is pretty good. Can't wait to see what type of the gameplay awaits us. This surely changed protagonist's feelings, i mean having to lose father and mother in a short period is something very big. I won't give a rating yet since this is only the first mission, i'll wait for the rest. Good luck! 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 6, 2016 Haven't played any of your missions in a while, and i can easily say how much you improved your work! For an introduction, there's nothing much to say about gameplay so i'll go with the story and presentation. Presentation is great, animations and cutscene fit perfectly, especially that landing airplane cutscene! Language is also better than the last time and this is my first time to see someone included the full name in cutscene, even though it was only for a first few. The only con regarding presentation is while characters are talking (dialogues), you shouldn't use moving cutscene that much, use static ones. It fits better than the moving cutscene, and i surely don't want camera to go all over around while i'm reading text. Anyway, the rest is pretty good. Can't wait to see what type of the gameplay awaits us. This surely changed protagonist's feelings, i mean having to lose father and mother in a short period is something very big. I won't give a rating yet since this is only the first mission, i'll wait for the rest. Good luck! Wow! Thanks alot, A98 for your long review man. I really respect you bro, And your opinion also. I try to avoid using unless smooth cutsene next time. Stay tune 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 8, 2016 (edited) Updates:First Mission has been released: The College RivalsDownload SD music file: http://www.4shared.com/rar/q7QblKsPce/SD_file__1_.html Edited January 8, 2016 by Huzaifa khan 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The John David 658 Posted January 8, 2016 Updates: First Mission has been released: The College Rivals Gonna try this, bro! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 8, 2016 Don't forget to download SD: http://www.4shared.com/rar/q7QblKsPce/SD_file__1_.html 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 8, 2016 Topic updated. Screen shots and links added. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
XxGrovexX 100 Posted January 8, 2016 Wow! What a enjoyabe mission that was ? Everything is very unique. Specially music made A real action mission. Looking forward for more 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 8, 2016 Wow! What a enjoyabe mission that was ? Everything is very unique. Specially music made A real action mission. Looking forward for more Glad you liked. And thanks for your respect Stay tune for more. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 11, 2016 Latest Updates: Download Bike models: Click here! And stay tune for third mission. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hdxt_Hardluck 1,342 Posted January 11, 2016 (edited) Updates: First Mission has been released: The College Rivals Gonna try this, bro! I haven't see this *gotta try it now*. EDIT: Mission was pretty simple but nice. i think you should make the routpoint much larger i meant the destination is too easy to reach it. next time try to improve the race. rate is 4/5. Edited January 11, 2016 by HardluckStyle 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 11, 2016 (edited) Updates: First Mission has been released: The College Rivals Gonna try this, bro! I haven't see this *gotta try it now*.EDIT: Mission was pretty simple but nice. i think you should make the routpoint much larger i meant the destination is too easy to reach it. next time try to improve the race. rate is 4/5.It was just a challenging short race. Don't worry bro. You see in my next missions a complete thriller with action. Just stay tune for more. And thanks for your great feedback Btw, did you download SD of this mission ? Edited January 11, 2016 by Huzaifa khan 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hdxt_Hardluck 1,342 Posted January 11, 2016 Updates: First Mission has been released: The College Rivals Gonna try this, bro! I haven't see this *gotta try it now*.EDIT: Mission was pretty simple but nice. i think you should make the routpoint much larger i meant the destination is too easy to reach it. next time try to improve the race. rate is 4/5. It was just a challenging short race. Don't worry bro. You see in my next missions a complete thriller with action. Just stay tune for more. And thanks for your great feedback Btw, did you download SD of this mission ? Ofcours. well obviously. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 12, 2016 (edited) Latest Updates: Second Mission has been released: The Night pursuit Edited January 12, 2016 by Huzaifa khan Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 13, 2016 Topic updated. Screen shots and links added. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PyThOn #TakeItEasy 333 Posted January 15, 2016 Nice missions, goodluck for this MP, and hoping for one of the great MPs.... 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 16, 2016 Nice missions, goodluck for this MP, and hoping for one of the great MPs.... Thank alot, nigga! Third mission is on their way and upload soon... 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 18, 2016 (edited) Latest Updates: Third mission has been released: Be A Professional Your every feedback will be appreciated Edited January 18, 2016 by Huzaifa khan 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Sparrow 22 Posted January 18, 2016 thank god something related with bikes well anyway i like it very much created more {m} for more fun!! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hdxt_Hardluck 1,342 Posted January 18, 2016 (edited) Latest Updates: Third mission has been released: Be A Professional Your every feedback will be appreciated Alright i have play this just now i notice few grammars mistakes you sometimes u forget too bettwen the words but at least they're readable unlike others. the most part i like it was time attack feature used in the race i have fun beating the NWB record. very good variety it's decent we see lot of cutscenes objects etc... approval rat (my opinion) 7/10 keep it up Edited January 18, 2016 by HardluckStyle 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 18, 2016 Latest Updates: Third mission has been released: Be A Professional Your every feedback will be appreciated Alright i have play this just now i notice few grammars mistakes you sometimes u forget too bettwen the words but at least they're readable unlike others. the most part i like it was time attack feature used in the race i have fun beating the NWB record. very good variety it's decent we see lot of cutscenes objects etc... approval rat (my opinion) 7/10 keep it up Thanks alot pal, for quick review I try to control my mistakes 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Huzaifa khan 1,840 Posted January 21, 2016 Fourth mission coming tomorrow. 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Springfield 702 Posted January 21, 2016 How just i forgot this surly play this 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
