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Two powerful mafias Guardians and Winston Family start war.Winston's family attack first.But Guardians also attack.After that Drake die by Winston Family member,but his brother assasin killed Winston members.Oke,no spoiler.

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Drake And Frank

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Drake and Frank Jhordans.Two brothers,Drake is one of the boss Guardians mafia.Frank is assasin,who do job for money.They twin-brothers.Additional Information-Nobody know.

Berry Nilson

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Berry Nilson is black guy from ghetto street.Living somewhere.Have problems with Grove Gang.Now living in SF.Nobody care where he is.Additional Information:Berry Nilson is 18 year boy.Living in Los Santos.Somewhere in Idlewood-Ganton.Don't have anyone who care him,no family just two friends.Have big crime list.Nobody now know,where he is.

Leon Kolonski

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Polish powerful guy.Member of the Winston Family-Chef.His control security and others members.Nobody know who that guy.But his like guns and other sh*t.Additional information-No!

Brad and Ron Meyers

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Who remember,his know :3

P.S 100 missions Cancelled.

Arnold Muller

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German member of Winston Family.Arnold is a most old member of mafia.The BodyGuard of the Boss (Winston) and most respected in mafia.Additional Information-No just no! (I want to live)-Police

Luke Winston(Boss)

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Luke Winston.The brother of millioner Roman Winston.Luke choose bad way,like his father.When father die his

steel to be a leader.Additional Information-You crazy?

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Chapter 1

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/40036

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FunkyRJ(For making headers)
Keshav Dhiman(My idol)
Husnain(My friend who allways help me and offer me something).
Scray Chan(My friend).
Andrej(For guy who teach me making storyline in video).
Huzaifa(Also idol).

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Hdxt_Hardluck

Wow, i played the whole MP and it.

 

dispointed me :/ actually i didn't expect that much of progress, the whole missions about stealth kill nothing new or attractive, the grammars imporved a bit, that's all 3/5 , keep it up anyways...

 

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The John David

Another project to do, dude, should i'll try this when it's completed. Goodluck :^:

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Another project to do, dude, should i'll try this when it's completed. Goodluck :^:

Thanks Jhandave.

Nice MP.

Thank you.

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Huzaifa khan

Ok, here is my small review for your mission pack "Long Time".

*Pros:

1) I liked the assassination.

2) Really enjoy hard missions.

3) I like the atmosphere, where bullets flying everywhere.

4) Enjoy the Musics alot.

*Cons:

1) Variety would be better.

2) Some writing mistakes.

3) You should have to add health bar in your missions. Because you give heavy weapons to enemy.

BUT I LIKE THE WHOLE MP ALOT

Overall Rating: 5/4.3 :)
Very enjoyable MP. Keep it up! :^:

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General Scrotum

5 out of 4.3?

 

Damn - I think we found the best mission pack ever! :p

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Ok, here is my small review for your mission pack "Long Time".

 

*Pros:

 

1) I liked the assassination.

 

2) Really enjoy hard missions.

 

3) I like the atmosphere, where bullets flying everywhere.

 

4) Enjoy the Musics alot.

 

*Cons:

 

1) Variety would be better.

 

2) Some writing mistakes.

 

3) You should have to add health bar in your missions. Because you give heavy weapons to enemy.

 

BUT I LIKE THE WHOLE MP ALOT

 

Overall Rating: 5/4.3 :)

Very enjoyable MP. Keep it up! :^:

Thanks Huzaifa :D

5 out of 4.3?

 

Damn - I think we found the best mission pack ever! :p

What you mean?

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Ok, here is my small review for your mission pack "Long Time".

 

*Pros:

 

1) I liked the assassination.

 

2) Really enjoy hard missions.

 

3) I like the atmosphere, where bullets flying everywhere.

 

4) Enjoy the Musics alot.

 

*Cons:

 

1) Variety would be better.

 

2) Some writing mistakes.

 

3) You should have to add health bar in your missions. Because you give heavy weapons to enemy.

 

BUT I LIKE THE WHOLE MP ALOT

 

Overall Rating: 5/4.3 :)

Very enjoyable MP. Keep it up! :^:

Thanks Huzaifa :D

5 out of 4.3?

 

Damn - I think we found the best mission pack ever! :p

What you mean?

 

The rating 5 out of 4.3 isn't possible, Unless you're IGN

 

EDIT: I'll try this and give my feedback later, Looks cool

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Played your missions and here is my rate: 4/5 :^: but I want more improvements from you in ch: 2

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Ok, here is my small review for your mission pack "Long Time".

 

*Pros:

 

1) I liked the assassination.

 

2) Really enjoy hard missions.

 

3) I like the atmosphere, where bullets flying everywhere.

 

4) Enjoy the Musics alot.

 

*Cons:

 

1) Variety would be better.

 

2) Some writing mistakes.

 

3) You should have to add health bar in your missions. Because you give heavy weapons to enemy.

 

BUT I LIKE THE WHOLE MP ALOT

 

Overall Rating: 5/4.3 :)

Very enjoyable MP. Keep it up! :^:

Thanks Huzaifa :D

5 out of 4.3?

 

Damn - I think we found the best mission pack ever! :p

What you mean?

 

The rating 5 out of 4.3 isn't possible, Unless you're IGN

 

EDIT: I'll try this and give my feedback later, Looks cool

 

Haha! lol :D

P.S Thank you

Played your missions and here is my rate: 4/5

Wow! XxGroovexX thank you :D

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