vengeancehawk Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 (edited) VENGEANCEHAWK presents SEASON TWO HAS BEEN RELEASED In Pizza Boy, you are not a super-soldier. You don't jump out of planes to kill Russians on a cargo ship and the world isn't ending anytime soon. You have one simple job: Deliver pizzas. Now despite what I just said, your job is never really that simple. Along the way, you will find the oddest bunch in all of San Andreas, get in fights with men dressed as chickens, race scooters, and fall in love. CHARACTERS This mission series won't particularly be known for it's super diverse characters as there is only one pizza worker in the entire state. Jim (Ted)While all his friends were busy fighting Russians, or on the run from the US military, Jim was delivering pizzas. It wasn't the most glamorous life, but it was his life. Jim was born and raised in Los Santos and joined the Well Stacked branch in 2009. Since then, he has proved himself as the most valuable member across the state. Early 20s. Witpro gave him his new name of Ted in Season 2.NeilJim's co-worker. While not the sharpest tool in the shed, his work ethic is nearly unmatched. 19 years old Annika Jim's love interest in Season 2. Annika's Dad Father of Annika who doesn't care for Jim/Ted in the slightest. MISSIONS SEASON ONE First Delivery (Redux)--Remastered edition of the series' first mission Employee Poaching--Neil has been persuaded to leave Well Stacked and join Cluckin Bell. Teach the manager a lesson and get Neil back! In Three Minutes or Less--Race Neil around town and deliver your pizzas in East LS faster than him. Workplace Violence--VITAL MISSION SPOILERS DON'T CLICK IF YOU DON'T TO BE SPOILED!!! A local gang member thought it would be funny to torch your fellow employees. This mission sets up the next few missions A Change of Pace--SPOILERS RELATED TO PREVIOUS MISSION!!! After being the only witness left alive, the government puts Jim into Witness Protection Lazy Sunday--Enjoy your day off! Hangover from Hell--A night of drinking has left you hallucinating... SEASON TWO Love in the Workplace Part 1-- Jim meets a lovely woman while working the register. Love in the Workplace Part 2--After catching Jim and Annika in the act, Annika's dad (who happens to be the manager) attacks Jim at work and fires him afterwards. Paper Chaser--Jim/Ted fills out his application and before he can turn it in, a biker bumps into him sending the application flying. Ted must quickly chase them down across Las Venturas. The Waiting Game-- While waiting for a callback, a figure from Ted's past makes an appearance. He is forced to make a haunting decision. DOWNLOADS DYOM--http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/41496 Edited April 2, 2016 by vengeancehawk Crainstorm20, DoggoIsGay, dyomek and 1 other 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curtis Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 sounds good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 Something unique at last. Curtis 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dyomek Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 Really nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huzaifa khan Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 It's time for eating pizza I think you really like pizza, if I'm not wrong btw, best of luck for this unique project Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Dyom Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 Pizza really.I like pizza.Nice goodluck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 20, 2015 Author Share Posted December 20, 2015 To those who have downloaded and played it, any notes for me? I know mission 1 has issues but like I said I was a noob back then lol. The next next mission is ready for upload, but I think I'm gonna finish this 8 mission set before releasing it as v1.0. I also plan on remastering the first mission similar to codename Zulu. All of this will for sure be finished by the end of the week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/\rdooZ Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 To those who have downloaded and played it, any notes for me? I know mission 1 has issues but like I said I was a noob back then lol. The next next mission is ready for upload, but I think I'm gonna finish this 8 mission set before releasing it as v1.0. I also plan on remastering the first mission similar to codename Zulu. All of this will for sure be finished by the end of the week. Busy schedule for me,but I will make sure I check this in the next few days and drop a review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 20, 2015 Author Share Posted December 20, 2015 (edited) I have finished Season One, Part One of this series. The first seven missions are now available as one .rar file, here: -SNIPPED- Check OP Edited December 21, 2015 by potus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slimeball supreme Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 This is the best deeyohm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 21, 2015 Author Share Posted December 21, 2015 I have fixed the first mission to make it a more quality mission. The updated .rar will include this file instead of the original mission. However, if you want to play the original mission, it will still be available on my DYOM page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The John David Posted December 21, 2015 Share Posted December 21, 2015 Looks nice, man, should i play this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 21, 2015 Author Share Posted December 21, 2015 (edited) Looks nice, man, should i play this I think you should, but that's just me Edited December 21, 2015 by potus The John David 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghettospaghetti Posted December 21, 2015 Share Posted December 21, 2015 Wow. Finally somethin' original eh? this looks dope, son. I'm gonna play this! text review will be out for it, once I've played some of it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghettospaghetti Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 So, just played season 1, and all I gotta' say is:AWESOME sh*t!! I mean, damn, it was so fun/funny/entertaining as f*ck, I enjoyed every piece of it. Can't wait for season 2 man! great job! you did an excellent job! Every mission had you on the edge of your seat, wanting to find out what happened next! just plain brilliant! I found absolutely no flaws in this "Pizza Boy" season 1. Sure, there was a few grammar mistakes, but, that can be overlooked. And, is it just me, or are you and me some of the few handful of American DYOM designers? LOL I dunno. Just seems like that. Once again, great job! I also loved all the references. Like, the home alone 2 reference, and the reference to the 2nd mission of SA when CJ and Ryder rob the Pizza place. XD Honestly, and I don't/couldn't doubt myself, when I give Pizza Boy season 1, .....A 10/10. Brilliant job man! I just can't wait for season 2! vengeancehawk 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 22, 2015 Author Share Posted December 22, 2015 Thanks @GangstaZilla203 for you review! It's really awesome to think I made a mission pack that well. Good thing is I had as much fun making it. Now, unfortunately, as most of you probably know there is a glitch with the DYOM website. If you click the link in the OP, it takes you to some odd site. So until then, I will put an annotation about that next to the link. In the meantime, I will wait for GTAGarage to upload. Thanks for playing! ghettospaghetti 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crainstorm20 Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 Hi Hawk. So the website has a glitch?Thats why it gets you to main page? So when is the Download ready , i really want to check it out. After all it has an interesting concept based around a simple person(not some kind of Gangster,Cop,Soldier). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 22, 2015 Author Share Posted December 22, 2015 Hi Hawk. So the website has a glitch?Thats why it gets you to main page? So when is the Download ready , i really want to check it out. After all it has an interesting concept based around a simple person(not some kind of Gangster,Cop,Soldier). I'm currently working on part 2, so when I'm done with this mission, I will find an alternative place to upload it considering GTAgarage is gonna take a week or so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crainstorm20 Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 Wouldnt it be easier with Mediafire,Dropbox Hint:Its easy and fast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghettospaghetti Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 Thanks @GangstaZilla203 for you review! It's really awesome to think I made a mission pack that well. Good thing is I had as much fun making it. Now, unfortunately, as most of you probably know there is a glitch with the DYOM website. If you click the link in the OP, it takes you to some odd site. So until then, I will put an annotation about that next to the link. In the meantime, I will wait for GTAGarage to upload. Thanks for playing! You're 100% welcome! Keep up the amazing work dude! And you really got me. Because usually I'm into criminal/mobster/gangsta DYOM packs, but this one wasn't criminal related whatsoever, and you managed to grab my attention. And this was without a doubt, worth the time playing. Absolutely no waste of time. It wasn't criminal related at all, and it is one of the best DYOM packs that I have EVER played so far. I was just so shocked how great this was! a solid 10/10 without ANY doubts. When season 2 comes out, you know I'll be the first to play and give my review of it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghettospaghetti Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 This MP is so good, that, once it's finished, not only will it get a text review, but, a video review as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 22, 2015 Author Share Posted December 22, 2015 (edited) Thanks @GangstaZilla203 for you review! It's really awesome to think I made a mission pack that well. Good thing is I had as much fun making it. Now, unfortunately, as most of you probably know there is a glitch with the DYOM website. If you click the link in the OP, it takes you to some odd site. So until then, I will put an annotation about that next to the link. In the meantime, I will wait for GTAGarage to upload. Thanks for playing! You're 100% welcome! Keep up the amazing work dude! And you really got me. Because usually I'm into criminal/mobster/gangsta DYOM packs, but this one wasn't criminal related whatsoever, and you managed to grab my attention. And this was without a doubt, worth the time playing. Absolutely no waste of time. It wasn't criminal related at all, and it is one of the best DYOM packs that I have EVER played so far. I was just so shocked how great this was! a solid 10/10 without ANY doubts. When season 2 comes out, you know I'll be the first to play and give my review of it! Wow. There was a 2 year gap between mission 1 and mission 2. Now I regret waiting that long, lol. So where would you rank it on an all-time list? (Too much DYOM makes me press shift+3 for question mark lol) EDIT: ADDED DROPBOX LINK TO ORIGINAL POST Edited December 22, 2015 by vengeancehawk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghettospaghetti Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 Thanks @GangstaZilla203 for you review! It's really awesome to think I made a mission pack that well. Good thing is I had as much fun making it. Now, unfortunately, as most of you probably know there is a glitch with the DYOM website. If you click the link in the OP, it takes you to some odd site. So until then, I will put an annotation about that next to the link. In the meantime, I will wait for GTAGarage to upload. Thanks for playing! You're 100% welcome! Keep up the amazing work dude! And you really got me. Because usually I'm into criminal/mobster/gangsta DYOM packs, but this one wasn't criminal related whatsoever, and you managed to grab my attention. And this was without a doubt, worth the time playing. Absolutely no waste of time. It wasn't criminal related at all, and it is one of the best DYOM packs that I have EVER played so far. I was just so shocked how great this was! a solid 10/10 without ANY doubts. When season 2 comes out, you know I'll be the first to play and give my review of it! Wow. There was a 2 year gap between mission 1 and mission 2. Now I regret waiting that long, lol. So where would you rank it on an all-time list? (Too much DYOM makes me press shift+3 for question mark lol) EDIT: ADDED DROPBOX LINK TO ORIGINAL POST Lol. And I don't really know. All I gotta' say, is it's one of my favorites, and definitely deserving of the 10/10 rating. Pizza Boy doesn't just deserve a video review, it NEEDS a video review! vengeancehawk 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyThOn #TakeItEasy Posted December 23, 2015 Share Posted December 23, 2015 THIS WILL BE A TASTY MISSION PACK!!! Grand_Dyom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 23, 2015 Author Share Posted December 23, 2015 (edited) Update: The first two missions of S1P2 have been completed. My progress is being slowed down by me designing entire missions for hours, and they come out buggy or not fun so I scrap them. There's only 9 missions total, and I have already scrapped 2 lol. BTW, expect information/screenshots for Part 2 today... Edited December 23, 2015 by vengeancehawk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted December 23, 2015 Author Share Posted December 23, 2015 Double post but...just thought I'd leave some screenshots of Part 2 here Not really spoilers, just an image train Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoggoIsGay Posted December 24, 2015 Share Posted December 24, 2015 Awesome mission pack 5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crainstorm20 Posted December 25, 2015 Share Posted December 25, 2015 Hawk can you make season 2 better? Cons: -I mean there is barely any action , but still the concept is cool. -Another thing in season 1, I could barrely make a difference between the Characters( maybe you can try to give them different skins??). -Missions seem too easy and mostly cutscenes(cant you add diversity and gunfights?). -Missions are too short. Add more objectives ( dont be lazy). I add over 20 objectives or even over 30 per mission! -Can you remake some missions after a while and update the first season(I didnt like the race mission and the last mission). Pros: -Cool concept. -CJ comes and kills your ally XD. -Good cutscenes.. maybe add more static ones????? -It has potential! It needs longer missions and far more harder! Btw these are my suggestions... but still cool missions I might help you(I am beginner , but I have lots of ideas for missions) and maybe I can implement some mechanics(or cool things). P.S: Dont think its an insult, think its an advice, bro.... Keep up ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vengeancehawk Posted March 21, 2016 Author Share Posted March 21, 2016 I know it seems like this mission pack is dead but I just want to say I've finished 4 missions. 3 for sure will appear in Season 1, Part 2 and the other one is kind of a non-canon for fun mission that needs more polish. No definite release yet. It's more or less when I feel like making a mission or two I will but unfortunately there's usually a month or two gap between that time. Hope there's still some enthusiasm for Pizza Boy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PresidentShark Posted March 21, 2016 Share Posted March 21, 2016 (edited) Unique.. Finally.. Please dont screw it up EDIT: Saw that you've released it, will try when I come home Edited March 21, 2016 by PresidentShark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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