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The John David

Battle San Fierro [Completed + Trailer]

Full MP Released + Favorite Characters  

15 members have voted

  1. 1. Who's your favorite characters in this story

    • Grekov Mateo - 2nd person shooter
      8
    • Sagara Mateo - Leader of SHBZ
      2
    • Utopia Simile - Grekov's best partner
      0
    • Yhangi Mangu - Leader of Russians
      0
    • Samuel Mangu - Assistant for Yhangi
      1
    • Timonaty illam - Right-Hand of the Russians
      1
    • Ember Smith - Spy in San Fierro
      1


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DoggoIsGay

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General Scrotum

So I ended up playing this mission pack.

 

 

Here are the main things I noticed:

 

-Missions are too easy, basically no challenge except for one part in the first gameplay mission.

-The writing really needs improvement.

-There was a nice use of objects in one or two missions to represent the chaos caused by this invasion.

-The mission pack was too quick in my opinion, it felt more like the final chapter of a big mission pack.

-Designing mistakes such as not hiding a body or an item appearing out of nowhere.

-Some story incoherence.

-Etc.

 

A final score for this mission pack would be a 4 out of 10.

 

 

I also ended up recording my playthrough and giving my opinions on the mission pack:

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xS4ZdMxkcJk

Edited by Pledge of Chaos
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The John David

So I ended up playing this mission pack.

 

 

Here are the main things I noticed:

 

-Missions are too easy, basically no challenge except for one part in the first gameplay mission.

-The writing really needs improvement.

-There was a nice use of objects in one or two missions to represent the chaos caused by this invasion.

-The mission pack was too quick in my opinion, it felt more like the final chapter of a big mission pack.

-Designing mistakes such as not hiding a body or an item appearing out of nowhere.

-Some story incoherence.

-Etc.

 

A final score for this mission pack would be a 4 out of 10.

 

 

I also ended up recording my playthrough and giving my opinions on the mission pack:

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xS4ZdMxkcJk

Thanks, Plegde, I'll try to improve my designing soon. Right now, my skills is still incoherent.

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ceepzki

to be honest i think this mission is honestly 6 / 10 forget that guy (The writing really needs improvement) (but remember this is just a game not a professional movie in my opinion i think u did great with this mission takes lot of work to do what u do people need to understand / appreciate hard work the designers put in not just look at the gamplay only... think u did great job on this bro :r*::r*::r*: :panic:6 / 10 :panic: anyways here is my trailer

 

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Roxie

How u Upload A Video
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BY THE WAY
NICE MP

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GYAWater7

How u Upload A Video

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BY THE WAY

NICE MP

On what? Youtube?

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ceepzki

How u Upload A Video

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BY THE WAY

NICE MP

google is your friend..

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Aftab

I've played BSF3 today. And that was exceptional!

- The story was very nice.

- Difficulity was acceptable. Not much easy, not much hard.

- The use of animations and gameplay was excellent.

And after playing the third part, I'll surely play both previous parts. But one thing really disappointed me. Ember become so furious to kill his best friend? Ok. Let's hope there will be another part of it.

:) Overall work was excellent...

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Aflien

I took some time to play this MP.

 

Here is my HONEST review:

 

Dude, there so much you need to work on.

 

Language.

Your English is not best. Work on it, it will help you everywhere in life, not just DYOM.

I managed to understand what you were trying to say.

I noticed lot of ''?'' usage in sentences.

 

Story.

There are so many things that I didn't understand. Story is not presented well. Honestly for me, story is super weak and bland.

Characthers are not intresting.

Characther relations are not clarified

Reason russians exist in this MP is just so you can kill them, nothing else. They don't have agenda, plans or any kind of goal.

Too short.

There is no real objective, you just go around killing people that get in your way.

Names are wierd.

Russian named Yhangi? C'mon.

2 People against an army

Guy named Goverment? Really?

Whats the purpose of Goverment, and why did he get shot?

Long story short: You have to work better on the story.

 

Gameplay:

Not bad, Its challenging enough.

I don't like the use of Rocket launchers and miniguns. I find it a cheap way to make missions hard.

Missions where you start the 'invasion'. Long unnecessary walks up and down.

Good use of objects though.

Cutscenes are sometimes too fast.

Intro actor walk scenes are too long.

I see LOT of Call of Duty inspiration in this MP.

Good work on helicopter/plane path. I myself always have trouble working with them.

 

Long story short:

You have lot to learn.

Work on english and story. Gameplay is not that bad.

8 missions is too little to tell a good story.

I will not rate it in numbers, I find it unnecessary. So I'll say just this. Put more effort into your missions.

 

 

Also, I recorded my first time playing the MP with commentary. I dunno if I will be uploading it.

I'll think about it.

 

Cheers.

-Aflien

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Gangster_-Ƶ

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Now that's a review.

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The John David

I took some time to play this MP.

 

Here is my HONEST review:

 

Dude, there so much you need to work on.

 

Language.

Your English is not best. Work on it, it will help you everywhere in life, not just DYOM.

I managed to understand what you were trying to say.

I noticed lot of ''?'' usage in sentences.

 

Story.

There are so many things that I didn't understand. Story is not presented well. Honestly for me, story is super weak and bland.

Characthers are not intresting.

Characther relations are not clarified

Reason russians exist in this MP is just so you can kill them, nothing else. They don't have agenda, plans or any kind of goal.

Too short.

There is no real objective, you just go around killing people that get in your way.

Names are wierd.

Russian named Yhangi? C'mon.

2 People against an army

Guy named Goverment? Really?

Whats the purpose of Goverment, and why did he get shot?

Long story short: You have to work better on the story.

 

Gameplay:

Not bad, Its challenging enough.

I don't like the use of Rocket launchers and miniguns. I find it a cheap way to make missions hard.

Missions where you start the 'invasion'. Long unnecessary walks up and down.

Good use of objects though.

Cutscenes are sometimes too fast.

Intro actor walk scenes are too long.

I see LOT of Call of Duty inspiration in this MP.

Good work on helicopter/plane path. I myself always have trouble working with them.

 

Long story short:

You have lot to learn.

Work on english and story. Gameplay is not that bad.

8 missions is too little to tell a good story.

I will not rate it in numbers, I find it unnecessary. So I'll say just this. Put more effort into your missions.

 

 

Also, I recorded my first time playing the MP with commentary. I dunno if I will be uploading it.

I'll think about it.

 

Cheers.

-Aflien

Thanks for the review, Aflien. I'll remember those words you've said to me. Well, aside from you, if you're gonna make gameplay with commentary, or whatever it is, okay, it's free.

Once again, thanks, I'll do my best next time :D

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Roxie

Awsome Mission

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