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The John David

Battle San Fierro [Completed + Trailer]

Full MP Released + Favorite Characters  

15 members have voted

  1. 1. Who's your favorite characters in this story

    • Grekov Mateo - 2nd person shooter
      8
    • Sagara Mateo - Leader of SHBZ
      2
    • Utopia Simile - Grekov's best partner
      0
    • Yhangi Mangu - Leader of Russians
      0
    • Samuel Mangu - Assistant for Yhangi
      1
    • Timonaty illam - Right-Hand of the Russians
      1
    • Ember Smith - Spy in San Fierro
      1


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DoggoIsGay

in trailer why is Grekov is running like the Naruto?

sh*t!

Anyways can't wait

Ready for hype!

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The John David

Once again, guys. Thank you for your supporting, i will release this MP as soon as possible :) Because i have too many bugs to fix my game, but don't worry. I will be faster :)

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The John David

in trailer why is Grekov is running like the Naruto?

Actually, i used the animation ped into spec ops anim. To make the ped runs faster than player

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Kiddoassasin

Thanks, guys, i'm working hard for this MP. Stay tuned :)

Nice Topic :santa:

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The John David

 

Thanks, guys, i'm working hard for this MP. Stay tuned :)

Nice Topic :santa:

 

Thanks, stay tuned, please vote in the polls ;)

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Kiddoassasin

I've voted Grekov Mateo because he is the main character of this MP :lol:

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The John David

I've voted Grekov Mateo because he is the main character of this MP :lol:

Well, good, same with me, i vote to him.

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The John David

[News]: (80%). It's almost completed, guys, please support this topic again. Stay Tuned.

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The John David

[Another News]: The Mission Pack will released today at 3:00PM, it's been a long time. :)

Edited by Jhandave

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Grand_Dyom

[Another News]: The Mission Pack will released today at 3:00PM, it's been a long time. :)

I have a question.Time in you country or what :/ ?

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The John David

 

[Another News]: The Mission Pack will released today at 3:00PM, it's been a long time. :)

I have a question.Time in you country or what :/ ?

 

You mean my time zone :/

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Grand_Dyom

 

 

[Another News]: The Mission Pack will released today at 3:00PM, it's been a long time. :)

I have a question.Time in you country or what :/ ?

 

You mean my time zone :/

 

Yes :D

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The John David

 

 

 

[Another News]: The Mission Pack will released today at 3:00PM, it's been a long time. :)

I have a question.Time in you country or what :/ ?

 

You mean my time zone :/

 

Yes :D

 

Here: (GMT + 8:00 hours) Hong Kong, Perth, Singapore, Taipei

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The John David

[News]: Full MP has now released. Check it out. This is my final project to do, guys, i'll be coming back after christmas day! I hope you enjoy this MP! :)

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DoggoIsGay

I'' play your mission pack, so 5/5

 

So, who is Emma Smith?

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The John David

I'' play your mission pack, so 5/5

 

So, who is Emma Smith?

This shows everywhere when you played the mission, or play the mission "Final Moments" after timonaty's death, then you see him to the cutscenes, he's a spy, man, he doesn't recommended to the story, just a watcher, you will see the next season of it.

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O SHIT WADDAP?

Hi Jhandave.

In the third mission, where do we have to go in beginning? description says 'Kill all enemies and make your way through Parking' or something like that.

 

I'd killed all russians, and i can see that there is a chopper on the roof of parking area. but i can't do anything.

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DoggoIsGay

 

I'' play your mission pack, so 5/5

 

So, who is Emma Smith?

This shows everywhere when you played the mission, or play the mission "Final Moments" after timonaty's death, then you see him to the cutscenes, he's a spy, man, he doesn't recommended to the story, just a watcher, you will see the next season of it.

 

Shows me the picture!

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The John David

Hi Jhandave.

In the third mission, where do we have to go in beginning? description says 'Kill all enemies and make your way through Parking' or something like that.

 

I'd killed all russians, and i can see that there is a chopper on the roof of parking area. but i can't do anything.

Enter inside the parking lot, you'll see Timonaty illam is inside of it. Then pursue him ;)

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The John David

 

 

I'' play your mission pack, so 5/5

 

So, who is Emma Smith?

This shows everywhere when you played the mission, or play the mission "Final Moments" after timonaty's death, then you see him to the cutscenes, he's a spy, man, he doesn't recommended to the story, just a watcher, you will see the next season of it.

 

Shows me the picture!

 

Man! Don't you understand what i'm saying, play the mission called "Final Moments" finished it, when you're outside of the building, in cutscenes you'll see him on rooftop watching those two.

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DoggoIsGay

 

 

 

I'' play your mission pack, so 5/5

 

So, who is Emma Smith?

This shows everywhere when you played the mission, or play the mission "Final Moments" after timonaty's death, then you see him to the cutscenes, he's a spy, man, he doesn't recommended to the story, just a watcher, you will see the next season of it.

 

Shows me the picture!

 

Man! Don't you understand what i'm saying, play the mission called "Final Moments" finished it, when you're outside of the building, in cutscenes you'll see him on rooftop watching those two.

 

Yeah, and show the PICTURES!

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The John David

 

 

 

 

I'' play your mission pack, so 5/5

 

So, who is Emma Smith?

This shows everywhere when you played the mission, or play the mission "Final Moments" after timonaty's death, then you see him to the cutscenes, he's a spy, man, he doesn't recommended to the story, just a watcher, you will see the next season of it.

 

Shows me the picture!

 

Man! Don't you understand what i'm saying, play the mission called "Final Moments" finished it, when you're outside of the building, in cutscenes you'll see him on rooftop watching those two.

 

Yeah, and show the PICTURES!

 

Okay, FINE!!!

Here: p50qslw.jpg

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Springfield

What a great and awesome mission pack you made :) Good Luck on your next

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The John David

What a great and awesome mission pack you made :) Good Luck on your next

Thanks, man, i'm taking a long break first before i do the next season of it ;)

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DoggoIsGay

 

 

 

 

 

I'' play your mission pack, so 5/5

 

So, who is Emma Smith?

This shows everywhere when you played the mission, or play the mission "Final Moments" after timonaty's death, then you see him to the cutscenes, he's a spy, man, he doesn't recommended to the story, just a watcher, you will see the next season of it.

 

Shows me the picture!

 

Man! Don't you understand what i'm saying, play the mission called "Final Moments" finished it, when you're outside of the building, in cutscenes you'll see him on rooftop watching those two.

 

Yeah, and show the PICTURES!

 

Okay, FINE!!!

Here: p50qslw.jpg

 

I said the face

I seen that SCENE!

 

Put in my private message

Pls, i won't send it!

Pls, i promise you

PLS!

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Heisenberg_GR
Alright, here is my review for it:


"Writing" - Good - For some reason I'm good to reading English but not too good on writing. I found many grammar mistakes but overall is good enough.


"Presentation" - Decent - It seems randomly. Anyway, good choice of Actors but the names aren't fits with the characters (Yhangi Magnu? It sounds like Asian name. What about Vladimir Osclov for Russian). Next time focus more on the story and bring us more new ideas and missions.


"Length" - Decent - The most of the missions took me 4-5 minutes to complete.


"Difficulty"- Easy, Medium - Some of the missions are too easy for me but there is no challenge.


"Variety" - Very Good - You did good work here. Enough pickups like Armor & Health, many Objects (I like the war theme that you did with fires and smokes) and good cutscenes.



Overall I think it's a good and enjoyable Mission-Pack just be more focus on the Story and the name choosing of Actors next time. Your English are good enough so your only "big" problem that you must improve here is the Presentation. The Variety is really good and you have done great work. Make more challenging missions next time because it was easy for me. I will rate it: 6.9/10 - Good Job!

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The John David

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'' play your mission pack, so 5/5

 

So, who is Emma Smith?

This shows everywhere when you played the mission, or play the mission "Final Moments" after timonaty's death, then you see him to the cutscenes, he's a spy, man, he doesn't recommended to the story, just a watcher, you will see the next season of it.

 

Shows me the picture!

 

Man! Don't you understand what i'm saying, play the mission called "Final Moments" finished it, when you're outside of the building, in cutscenes you'll see him on rooftop watching those two.

 

Yeah, and show the PICTURES!

 

Okay, FINE!!!

Here: p50qslw.jpg

 

I said the face

I seen that SCENE!

 

Put in my private message

Pls, i won't send it!

Pls, i promise you

PLS!

 

Oh! His face that you want to see, it will be shown at the next season of it.

 

 

Alright, here is my review for it:
"Writing" - Good - For some reason I'm good to reading English but not too good on writing. I found many grammar mistakes but overall is good enough.
"Presentation" - Decent - It seems randomly. Anyway, good choice of Actors but the names aren't fits with the characters (Yhangi Magnu? It sounds like Asian name. What about Vladimir Osclov for Russian). Next time focus more on the story and bring us more new ideas and missions.
"Length" - Decent - The most of the missions took me 4-5 minutes to complete.
"Difficulty"- Easy, Medium - Some of the missions are too easy for me but there is no challenge.
"Variety" - Very Good - You did good work here. Enough pickups like Armor & Health, many Objects (I like the war theme that you did with fires and smokes) and good cutscenes.
Overall I think it's a good and enjoyable Mission-Pack just be more focus on the Story and the name choosing of Actors next time. Your English are good enough so your only "big" problem that you must improve here is the Presentation. The Variety is really good and you have done great work. Make more challenging missions next time because it was easy for me. I will rate it: 6.9/10 - Good Job!

 

Thanks for the review, bro. I'll try my best next time.

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The John David

[News]: Download link has moved on GTAGarage.com, because the DYOM Site is Dead

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DoggoIsGay

Jhan Dave, you forgot to change the Emma Smith to Ember Smith in poll votes!

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The John David

Jhan Dave, you forgot to change the Emma Smith to Ember Smith in poll votes!

There! ;)

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